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1、,高考英语基础写作 复习系列,图表式作文写作指导,纵观近年来全国各地的高考试题及模拟试题，图表类作文是写作部分的常见题型之一，体裁多为议论文和说明文。 议论文通常要求考生通过分析图表中的数据，就图表中所反映的问题阐述自己的观点，并得出自己的结论（如04年北京卷及06年湖北卷）。 说明类作文要求考生通过图表所列举的变化对比及产品介绍等，对图表进行描述（如04年浙江卷）。,命题特点,图表式作文的几种形式:一是以表格形式，将统计的数据或被说明的事物直接用表格形式体现出来，即统计表。二是以图形形式：A 表示数据变化的曲线图； B 表示数据的大小或数量之间的差异的条形图；C 表示总体内部结构变化的扇形图
2、。,命题特点,Table,矩形的竖行和横行进行排列的表格,Line Graph,表示两组数的关系-通常为函数关系图,曲线图,Bar Chart / Graph,柱形图/条形图,Pie Chart,饼状图,请根据下列图表及文字说明用英语写一篇短文，内容应包括 高中生零花钱的主要来源、比例、差异及原因，并发表自己的观 点和看法。 要求：1.120-150词；2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行 文连贯。,写作例题,How was the passage organized ?,思路点拨,中美高中生零花钱的主要来源、比例、差 异,原因,发表自己的观点和看法,图表式作文写作分三步: 1.开门见山地点明
3、本图表所反映的主题； 2.分析数据间的主要差异及趋势,然后描写。 3.根据题目要求，确定是否进行归纳总结或发表评论。,技巧指导,受某英文报的委托，你最近对高中生的英语阅读兴趣做了一次调查。 请根据以下信息，用英语为该报写一篇100词左右的短文。短文的标题及 首句已为你写好。 调查内容：在新闻、故事、科普、学习方法四种英文文章中，学生最喜欢哪一种 调查范围：湖北省的10所中学 调查对象：高中生 调查人数：1000 调查方式：访谈 调查结果：（见下图） Reading Interests of Senior Middle School Students Recently, a survey has
4、 been done to find out the reading interests of senior middle school students._,高考再现（2006年湖北卷）,范文： Reading Interests of Senior Middle School Students Recently, a survey has been done to find out the reading interests of senior middle school students. In this sruvey, one thousand senior middle school
5、 students from ten schools in Hubei Province were interviewed.They were asked which they liked reading most among the four categories of English articles, news, tories, popular science articles and articles about learning methods. The survey shows that more than half of the students like to read new
6、s most. Twenty- sixpercent of the students say that English stories are their favorite. Only seven percent of the students are most interested in reading articles about learning methods. However,the number of students who enjoy reading popular science articles doubles that of those who prefer readin
7、g articles about learning methods.,开头常用套语,From the graph / chart above, we can see As is shown by the graph / in the chart, ,描写变化及总趋势特征、分析差异：数据说明常用套语:,在描写变化及总趋势特征时，可采用分类式或对比 式以支持主题，并阐明必要的理由。 1.There was a great increase /rise in 2.The number is times as much as that of.,原因说明常用套语:,The reason foris th
8、at 常用词汇有： 1.Firstly/ First of all/ 2.Secondly, Besides/ In addition/ 3.Finally/ Last but not least/, 4.This is because .,结尾常用套语,1. in my opinion/ Personally/ as far as Im concerned/ in short/ in brief/ in a word 2. Its clear/evident from the chart that 3. There is no doubt that attention must be pai
9、d,写作练笔（高中新课程专题复习与训练 P189）,下图反映了从上世纪90年代至今，中国大量耕地 流失的现象。请据此写一篇120-150词的英语短 文，描述这一情况，分析主要原因，并发表自己的 观点和看法。 注意：文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：acre：英亩,One possible version: As we can see from the picture, a luxurious building Takes up the farming land where the farmer can grow crops. No wonder the farmer sighs :
10、“There has already remained less and less land for us to make a living. Nowadays, with the improvement of the peoples living standard, more and more comfortable buildings are being built even in the countryside, taking up much good farming land. In some places, farmers cant feed themselves for lack
11、of farming land. Fortunately, our government has realized the serious problem, and some measures have been taken to stop them from happening again. As far as Im concerned, we should first make all of our people aware of the importance of the farming land. Then laws should be passed to punish those w
12、ho waste farming land illegally. Only in this way can we save more farming land to offer more food for our human beings in the future.,learn,of the teachers and my,progress,read and write,it hard to learn,hard work.,write letters in fluent English,found,had become,Welcome to China if you have time,s
13、how you around,语言素质 较好;基本功不差;语句仍有毛病；,progress,it,well,widened,roads,My hometown is becoming more and more,are,词汇有错误;卷面有涂改;得20分.,如何润色英语作文,肃清愚蠢语言错误 让句式多变起来 适当使用复杂句 巧妙使用连接成分 有选择地背诵经典句型,作文上光五招:,态度决定一切 如果将英文字母A到Z分别编上126的顺号（A=1，B=2，Z=26）， 那么，你将会发现以下的现象： Hard work = 98 Knowledge = 96 Love = 54 Luck = 47 Attitude =100。,态度决定一切,今日作业:,1.Polish your composition. 2.Finish doing 4 passages (p109-112). 3.Read two passages on p146.,