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1、PEP小学英语六年级下册各单元作文范例及点评My friend and I I have a good friend. His name is Jack. Jack is 12 years old now. Im 11. Hes older than me. Hes 150 cm tall. Im 148 cm. Hes taller and stronger. Hes 43 kg and Im 41 kg. Hes heavier. We like summer best. We like sports, too. On Saturday, we play ping-pong. On Sun
2、day, we play computer games. How happy we are!【要领点评】写法：这篇作文的题目是“我的朋友和我”。不能只描写朋友，也不能只叙述我。解决这个难点的关键是：找出两个人几方面的异同。可以通过常见的年龄、身高、体重、外貌、喜好等方面列举出每个人的具体实际情况，再进行比较，通过比较突出每个人物的特点。这样就把人物活灵活现的展现给读者了。时态：像此类题目的作文，运用一般现在时即可。句型：因为涉及两个人的比较，不要忘记使用比较级句型：A+be+比较级+than+B。注意：在列举两个人的“体貌、喜好”等方面情况时，应一边列举，一边比较。不要一味指出不同，还要列举相
3、同之处。 A Bad Cold Im not feeling well today. I think I have a bad cold. I have a headache. I have a fever. My nose hurts. My throat is sore. I have to take some medicine and stay in bed. My parents will take me to the hospital. What a bad cold!I hope I can be better soon. And I want to go to school【要领
4、点评】写法：这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙了得病、病的症状、服药及治疗的全过程。写出了小作者希望快点康复，好去上学的愿望。时态：这篇文章可以采用一般现在时来写。如果主语是第三人称单数，动词别忘加s。句型：要用feel 加形容词，和表示“患某种疾病“的用法have+表示的疾病的单词。注意：在表示疾病时，可以使用-ache,hurt 和sore。不要只用一个单词，以避免枯燥。要写出得病后的简单治疗及心情，不能只写得病的情况。表示吃药时，通过用take some medicine，不用eat。词汇量要控制在4060之间。My WeekendI had a busy weekend. On Saturda
5、y morning, I washed my clothes and went to a park. I did my homework and went fishing on Saturday afternoon. On Sunday morning, I cleaned my room and visited my grandparents. I played football and watched TV on Sunday afternoon. I was very tired,but I was very happy.【要领点评】写法：这篇习作是按时间顺序记叙了我的周末活动。时态：我
6、们采用一般过去时态比较合适。句型：主语+动词过去式+过去时间。My holidayI went to Beijing by plane on my holiday. Every day I had fun with my parents. We went to the park and went swimming. We saw elephants. And we ate good food. We also took many pictures. We will be back home tomorrow. I was very happy.【要领点评】写法：这篇习作是按照地点的顺序记叙假期
7、里的活动，记叙了假期里去北京做了哪些活动以及对活动的感受。时态：这篇文章可采用两种时态来写。由于本单元主要讲述的是一般过去时的用法，所以这里大部分我们采用一般过去时比较合适。句型：主语+动词过去式+其他主语+will+动词原形+其他注意：活动的相关表达法可采用旧知识和新知识相结合去写，但要注意动词过去式的变化规则。例：eat 的过去式为ate，为不规则变化。下面是最简单的作文了，同学们只要掌握方法就行。最主要的是开头结尾，内容用最简单的单词描述，以免失误。相信同学们一定在小升初中展现最靓丽的最骄傲的自己！加油！ Winter holidayI went to Beijing on my hol
8、iday for 3 days.On the first day,I went to a park and went fishing.On the second day,I climbed a mountain and took pictures.On the third day,I ate good food.I was very happy.Summer holidaySummer holiday is coming.It is a long holiday.I am going to Beijing for 3 days.On the first day,Iam going to a park.On the second day,I am going to climb a mountain and take many pictures.On the third day,I am going to eat good food.That will be fun!