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1、雅思英语 写作篇 PPT 编写：胡宇斌 CMA Training Centre 图表题 写作 W Skills RITING 温故知新 图表5种类型 表格 Table 线图(直线/曲线) Line graph 柱状图(条形图) Bar chart 饼图 Pie chart 流程图 Process diagram Learn the new while reviewing the old 表格 写作 W Skills RITING 第 二 讲 单击此处编辑母版标题样式 单击此处编辑母版副标题样式 *5 表格主体段写作要点 纵横比较,分类描写; 抓住特点,着眼区别; 量化对比,减除运算。 P224
2、 例题11 注意: 除法数字较大且悬殊，以倍数关系说明差 别（twice/triple/ three-fold/four times）； 减法数字较小且相差不大，以差值说明差 别。 单击此处编辑母版标题样式 单击此处编辑母版副标题样式 *6 表格主体段 第一句开头由此可见的表达法： According to the(图表名称), As shown in the, As can be seen from the， （We can see from thethat） It can be seen from thethat It is manifest/apparent/clear from the
3、that 第二句具体说来的表达法： To be more exact, = more exactly To be more precise, = more precisely To be more specific, = more specifically 单击此处编辑母版标题样式 单击此处编辑母版副标题样式 *7 表格主体段写作实战 表格出现时间怎么办？ 例见 P223 例10 第一个表格 想想怎么写？ How can I write it ? 单击此处编辑母版标题样式 单击此处编辑母版副标题样式 *8 写作解析 注意： 既有不同的时间（1994-1998），也有 不同的对象（四种原因）。
4、试写三段。 第一段（开头段）改写题目文字说明 。 第二段（主体段）分别描写各个对象 在这段时间的变化。 第三段 （结尾段 ） 对各对象进行比 较。 表示趋势的短语-动词（复习） ： 数字趋势动词 1.上升趋势: rise, go up, 2.下降趋势: fall, sink, drop, dip, reduce, go down 3.保持不变: remain steady, show no/little change 4.波动: fluctuate 趋势动词替换 1.上升趋势: increase, grow, climb, ascend ( jump, surge, soar, shoot u
5、p ) 2.下降趋势: decrease, decline, descend ( plunge, slump) 3.保持不变: level off/out at, hover at, stabilize at, reach a plateau at 单击此处编辑母版标题样式 单击此处编辑母版副标题样式 *10 表示趋势的短语-形容词（复习） ： 1.速度快: dramatic, drastic, rapid, 2.速度慢: gradual, slow, steady 3.幅度大: significant, substantial, marked 4.幅度小: slight, modest, m
6、oderate 注意: 以上加 ly 均为副词。 表示分别的副词是 respectively 。 单击此处编辑母版标题样式 单击此处编辑母版副标题样式 *11 表示趋势的短语-其它（复习）： 1.最高点: peak at, reach the highest point at, 2.最低点: bottom out at, reach the bottom at, the lowest point at 3.达到多少（量）: amount to, reach, hit, stand at 4.占多少（比例） : account for, make up, occupy, represent 单击
7、此处编辑母版标题样式 单击此处编辑母版副标题样式 *12 写作示范 （ P223 例10 ） 第一段（开头段）改写题目文字说明。 The ( first ) table compares the four reasons why 100,000 UK people travel abroad for five years to 1998 ( while the second table outlines the destination of visits abroad by UK residents during this period.) 单击此处编辑母版标题样式 单击此处编辑母版副标题样式
8、 *13 第二段（主体段）分别描写各个对象在这 段时间的变化 段落结构： 首句 It is manifest from the ( first ) table that the purpose of visits abroad by UK residents was made up of holiday, business, visits to friends and relatives, and other reasons. Specifically, 单击此处编辑母版标题样式 单击此处编辑母版副标题样式 *14 具体描写各对象在这段时间的变化 . Specifically, there w
9、as a slight decrease in the number of UK travelers for holiday from 1994 to 1995. After that , the number increased sharply until 1998, peaking at 20,700. （度假，2句） The 5 years witnessed a gradual rise in the number for business from 3155 to 3957. （生意，1句）In comparison, the number for visits to friends
10、 and relatives remained stable from 1994 to 1995. However, there was a dramatic growth in the following two years. （访亲，2句） The period from 1994 to 1998 experienced a fluctuation in the number for other reasons. （其他，1句） 单击此处编辑母版标题样式 单击此处编辑母版副标题样式 *15 第三段 （结尾段 ） 对各对象进行比较。 We can clearly see from the t
11、able that from 1994 to 1998, holiday had the highest number of UK travelers among the four reasons.(最大值 ） The number for business was higher than that for visits to friends and relatives. (第二最大 值） Other reasons had the smallest number in the four reasons. (最小值） 单击此处编辑母版标题样式 单击此处编辑母版副标题样式 *16 表格主体段写作
12、实战 表格出现时间怎么办？ 例见 P224 例10 第二个表格 想想怎么写？ How can I write it ? 单击此处编辑母版标题样式 单击此处编辑母版副标题样式 *17 Table 主体段模版 The tables gives data about _. According to the first table, . Specifically, . In figure 2, it can be seen that . More precisely . Consequently, it can be concluded that there is a significant tren
13、d towards_. 单击此处编辑母版标题样式 单击此处编辑母版副标题样式 *18 表格主体段写作 巩固作业 例见 P218 例题5 20分钟。 单击此处编辑母版标题样式 单击此处编辑母版副标题样式 *19 写作解析 分析说明： 如果没有不同的时间，只有不同的对象 ，主体段按描述对象分段，如果描述对象 多于三个，把相似的对象合为一段来写。 通过分析与表发现: 美国一枝独秀，中 间三个国家相似，第一个国家（孟加拉） 最差，所以写三段。( 按教材写成5段或4段也 行， 清晰，但缺少分析与变化。） 单击此处编辑母版标题样式 单击此处编辑母版副标题样式 *20 参考答案： The table ill
14、ustrates four aspects of quality of life in five countries in 1982.（注意改写手段： 横的四项，竖的五项，加上时间。） USA had the highest quality ( 最高值 ) of life in the five countries. It had the highest GN per head and daily calorie intake（热量摄取 ）, the longest life expectancy and the lowest infant mortality rate. In 1982, i
15、ts GN per head was 13160 US dollars, ( 最高值 ). but its infant mortality rate was only 12 per 1000 live births ( 最低值 ). 单击此处编辑母版标题样式 单击此处编辑母版副标题样式 *21 Egypt, Indonesia and Bolivia were similar ( 相同 值 可以合写，妙招。) in the four indicators ( 指标 ). As a whole, Egypt had the highest ( 次分类中的最 高值 ) quality of li
16、fe among the three countries. It had the highest number in three indicators: GN per head, daily calorie supply per head and life expectancy. In 1982, its GN per head was 690 US dollars, whereas ( 时刻记住对比 ) those of Indonesia and Bolivia were 580 and 570 US dollars respectively. （下面转折写另一个明显特征） However
17、, Indonesias infant mortality rate was 87 per 1000, which was slightly lower ( 较低 值 ) than that of Egypt (97) and that of Bolivia(124). 单击此处编辑母版标题样式 单击此处编辑母版副标题样式 *22 Bangladesh had the lowest quality of life in the five countries. ( 总的趋势：最低值 ) Its GNP was 100 times smaller than the USAs. (最低值和最高值比较
18、：除法-多少倍 ) The figures in terms of the daily calorie supply per head and life expectancy at birth in Bangladesh were only the half of those ( 除法) in USA. (高低比较：约一半 ) And its infant mortality rate was 11 times greater. ( 高低比较：除法-多少倍 ) 单击此处编辑母版标题样式 单击此处编辑母版副标题样式 *23 回顾使用过的句型 开头段 The table illustrates f
19、our aspects of quality of life in five countries in 1982. 两个对象之间的比较 However, Indonesias infant mortality rate was 87 per 1000, which was slightly lower than that of Egypt ( 97 ) and that of Bolivia( 124 ). ( 较低值 ) 用括号描述具体数据，是加分点。 单击此处编辑母版标题样式 单击此处编辑母版副标题样式 *24 三个以上对象的比较 USA had the highest quality (
20、 最高值 ) of life in the five countries. It had the highest GN per head and daily calorie intake, the longest life expectancy and the lowest infant mortality rate. As a whole, Egypt had the highest ( 次分类中最高值 ) quality of life among the three countries. It had the highest number in three indicators: GN
21、per head, daily calorie supply per head and life expectancy . Bangladesh had the lowest quality of life in the five countries. 单击此处编辑母版标题样式 单击此处编辑母版副标题样式 *25 描述倍数 Its GNP was 100 times smaller than the USAs. The figures in terms of the daily calorie supply per head and life expectancy at birth in Ba
22、ngladesh were only the half of those in USA. And its infant mortality rate was 11 times greater. ( 高低比较：多少倍 ) 表格题常要进行量化对比,减除运算。 比较时，如数字较大且悬殊，用除法以倍数 关系说明差别（twice/triple/three-fold/four times） ； 数字较小且相差不大，用减法以差值说明差 别。 单击此处编辑母版标题样式 单击此处编辑母版副标题样式 *26 表格主体段写作实践 超模板写作 例见 P222 例题9 参考答案-2 只供NB参考。 单击此处编辑母版标题
23、样式 单击此处编辑母版副标题样式 *27 参考答案-1： The table compares the different agricultural water consumption in Brazil ( 26,500 km2 数值明了) with that in the D.R.C.( 100 km2 ). (首句概括) More specifically, in 2000, there was a huge amount of water use (359 m3最大值) in Brazil, with a population of 176 million and an irrigat
24、ed land of 26,500 km2 . Unlike Brazil, the figure for water consumption per person in Congo was only 8m3, ( 最小值) for it had an irrigated land 265 times smaller （除法） than that of Brazil and a population of only 5.2 million （抄数字）. Therefore, we can draw a safe conclusion that the more population and i
25、rrigated land a country has, the more agricultural water it consumes. （结论） 单击此处编辑母版标题样式 单击此处编辑母版副标题样式 *28 参考答案-2 NB The table illustrates the differences in agricultural (water）consumption in some areas of the world by contrasting the amount of irrigated land in Brazil ( 26,500 km2 ) with that in th
26、e D.R.C.( 100 km2 ). (首句概括) This means that a huge amount of water is used in agriculture in Brazil, and this is reflected in the figures for water consumption per person: 359m3, compared with only 8m3 in the Congo. （抄数字） With a population of 176 million, the figures for Brazil indicate how high agricultural water consumption can be in some countries. （结论）