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1、最新 料推荐1. My English TeacherMiss Tang is my English teacher. She s very pretty. She is talland thin. She has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair islong.Shelikescatsverymuch.Andshelikessinginganddancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us
2、. We all love her.【要领点评】这篇作文的 题目是 “我的英 语老师 ”，是一篇介 绍人物的作文。小作者开 门见山，直接点 题，首先介 绍了英 语老师的姓名，然后逐一介 绍了她的外貌特征、喜好、英 语水平、上 课特点以及 师生情感等。小朋友 们在写作文 时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的 词 组 ，以免写出一些 错句子。写作 时要注意意思 连贯 、语句通 顺、标点正确、书写清晰、 规范等。2. My Days of the weekI m a student and I am in Grade 5.I get up at six oery clock evday. I have bre
3、akfast at half past six, and go to school at seveno clock. I have classesfrom Mondayto Saturday.I haveanEnglishclasson Fridayand I have a PE class on Tuesday.Idon t have to go to school on school, and I like to go swimming1最新 料推荐on that day.【要领点评】这篇作文的 题目是 “我的一周 ”，小作者没有 说一些空 话，而是从自己的 亲身经历 写起，叙述了自己一周
4、七天的所作所为，并特别强调了星期天的喜好，写得自然、流畅。小朋友 们写作文 时要注意人称及 谓语动词 的变化，要依据提示，结合自己的 实际，写自己身 边熟悉的事情。3. My Favourite FoodDo you know what this is?Guess! Its colour is yellow. It slong and thin. It looks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what that is? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It
5、s round. It looks like a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot. I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I like them very much.How about you? What s your favourite food?【要领点评】My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章， 小作者并不是 简单地列 举出自己最喜 欢的每一种食物，而是有
6、详有略地 进行介绍。整篇文章用 词准确、 语言流 畅、没有 语法错误 。另外，文章中出现了一些生 词，可 见小作者是用心 查字典了。2最新 料推荐4. I can help do houseworkI am a girl. My name is Li Ling. I m in Class Three, Grade Five.I m helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trashand sweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do thedishes. On Sund
7、ay, I can wash the clothes. What aboutyou?Are you helpful, too?【要 领点评】本篇作文的 题目是 “我可以帮助做家务 ”，作者主要叙述自己在家帮助做的事情， 介绍自己的名字， 所在年 级及在家能做的家务，很详细 ，到位。小朋友 们在写作 时，应尽量写一些 亲自经历的事情， 这样会避免在作文 时显得太空，因 为只有自己 经常做的事情印象才会特别深刻。写作 时还 要注意大小写和 时态 。5. In The KitchenThis is the kitchen of my family. It s big and nice. Look!
8、Mymother is cooking in it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here. There are many things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, they restrawberries. And what are those? They are grapes.3最新 料推荐【要领点评】这篇作文的 题目是 “在厨房 ”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和 电炉，有一 张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及妈妈 在做饭
9、，非常真 实。小朋友 们，可以从 观察自己身 边的事、物写起，利用所学的句子，描述身 边熟悉的 东西来训练习 作。6. My VillageMy village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village!【要领点评】本文以 “我的村庄 ”为题 描述了自己家 乡的风景。介 绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山，使人看了 这篇作文后确 实感觉到 “我的村庄 ”的美 丽。小朋友 们在写作 时，可仔细想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点，尽量使用本 单元学 过的单词 或短语进 行叙述。4