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1、How to keep healthy,- He An, Fengye Middle School,music,Listen and fill in the blanks.,Toms problems,Task: Write a letter about: How to keep healthy.,thin,fat,strong,has a cold,the top students,test,What kind of food can you see?,2.Presentation & Practice,What kind of food can you see?,2.Presentatio
2、n & Practice,2.Presentation & Practice,How many kinds of food do you know? Please make a list quickly.,Brainstorm 头脑风暴,What kind of food do you like?,beef pork mutton chicken duck fish,rice noodle bread hamburger corn porridge,carrot cabbage broccoli potato tomato onion,apple banana pear orange stra
3、wberry watermelon,Fruits:,Vegetables:,Meat:,Main food:,2.Presentation & Practice,prmd,A balanced diet Four layers,2.Presentation & Practice,Eat most,A balaced diet,Eat more,Eat less,meat:,fruits:,apple、banana pear、stawberry oranges、grapes watermelon,potato、 tomato、carrot、onion、cabbage,vegetabes:,por
4、k chicken hotdog hanburger,2.Presentation & Practice,The ways about keeping healthy,A balanced diet,Exercise,Sleeping,2.Presentation & Practice,F,F,T,F,T,Is it a right way to keep healthy?,1. Peter only eats food that tastes good.,2. Tony likes eating lots of candies.,3. Some types of oil are bad fo
5、r us. We should be careful.,4. Dont eat burnt meat. It might cause cancer.,5. Laura gets too nervous before big tests.,2.Presentation & Practice,competition,Group work:,2.Presentation & Practice,Make a summary: Can you make some sentences by using the word “healthy” or say something about health? 1.
6、 2. 3. 4. 5.,It is important for us to keep healthy.,An apple a day keeps the doctor away.,2.Presentation & Practice,Dear friends: My names Tom. Im a student of Fengye Middle School. I have some problems these days. I used to be thin. But now Im fat. I used to be strong, but now I always have a cold
7、 in winter. Whats more, I used to be one of the top students, but now I cant pass the test. My classmates said that I should keep healthy first. But I dont know how to do it. Can you tell me? Please write to me soon. Thank you! Tom,Its time to reply Toms letter. Do you remember the letter?,2.Present
8、ation & Practice,According to Toms letter, try to write a letter to Tom about “How to keep healthy”.,Dear Tom: Im glad to hear from you. -,Before writing, we should follow these writing skills: 1.Search (审题：主题，人称，时态) 2. List（列提纲,至少提三个方面建议） 3. Add （加入优美词句） 4. Connect（连接全文） 5. Correct （修改错误）,Best wish
9、es XXX,2.Presentation & Practice,According to Toms letter, try to write a letter to Tom about “How to keep healthy”.,Dear Tom: Im glad to hear from you. -,Best wishes XXX,评分标准： 1.观点正确，要点齐全（至少三个方面的建议， 每条建议2分） -记6分 2.表达清楚，结构合理,语法正确： -记2分 3.句式多样，最好能有亮点句 （从句、谚语） -记1分 4.卷面整洁，不少于80字。 -记1分,2.Presentation & Practice,3.Production,4.Homework,Thank you,Homework: Finish your composition, and try to keep a better lifestyle in the future.,