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1、.2016.9 浙江高考：One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom.“ Im going to
2、find a better spot for us to camp and walked away.With no path to follow,Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place. she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly r
3、ealized that she was lost.“ Tom! she cried. Help!No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, butthe farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in t
4、he dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him.Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落） somewhere at a distance. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy,she al
5、so saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now. Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake.As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unf
6、ortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.注意 :1.所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；2.应使用 5 个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：3.续写部分
7、分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.Paragraph 2It was daybreak when Jane woke up.;.2017.6On a bright, warm July afternoon, Mac Hollan, a primary school teacher, was cycling fromhis home to Alaska with his friends. One of his
8、 friends had stopped to make a bicycle repair, butthey had encouraged Mac to carry on, and they would catch up with him soon. As Mac pedaled(骑行 ) along alone, he thought fondly of his wife and two young daughters at home. He hoped toshow them this beautiful place someday.Then Mac heard quick and lou
9、d breathing behind him.“ Man, thats a big dog!” he thought. Buwhen he looked to the side, h e saw instantly that it wasn t a dogwolf,atall,quicklybuta catchingup with him.Mac s heartjumped. He found out his can of hear spray. With one hand on the bars, he fired thespray at the wolf. A brightred clou
10、d enveloped the animal,and to Macs relief, it fell back,shaking its head. But a minute later, it was by his side again. Then it attacked the back of Macsbike, tearing open his tent bag. He fired at the wolf a second time, and again, it fell back only toquickly restart the chase（追赶）。Mac was pedaling
11、hard now.He waved and yelled at passing cars but was careful not to showdown. He saw a steep uphill climb before him. He knew thatonce he hit the hill, he d be easycaught up and the wolf s teeth would be tearing into his flesh.At this moment, Paul and Beeky were driving their car on their way to Ala
12、ska. They didn t thinkmuch of it when they saw two cyclists repairing their bike on the side of the road. A bit later, theyspotted what they, too, assumed was a dog running alongside a man on a bike. As they got closer,they realized that the dog was a wolf. Mac heard a large vehicle behind him. He p
13、ulled in front ofit as the wolf was catching up fast, just a dozen yards away now.注意 :1.所续写短文的词数应为150 左右；2.应使用 5 个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语：3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1The car abrubtly stopped in front of him.Paragraph 2A few minutes later,the other two cyclists arrived.;.2017
14、11. 浙江高考A vacation with my motherI had an interesting childhood: It was filled with surprise and amusements, all because of mymother-loving, sweet, and yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took whenI was eleven tells a lot about her.My two sets of grandparents lived in Colorad
15、o and North Dakota, and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached, David, my eight-year-old brother, and I unwillingly said good-bye to all ofour friends. Who knew if we d ever see them again?theFi
16、nally,moment of our departure arrived,and we loaded suitcases, books, games, camping equipment, and a tent into the car and bravelydrove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after we d returned home to get the purseand traveler s checksMomhad forgotten.David and I were always a little ner
17、vous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was drivingwhile Dad slept:” You stand outside the door and play lookout while I go, and I ll stand outsidoor and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind:“ Honey, where arekids? ”“ What?! Oh, Gosh I thought they were being awfully q
18、uiet.” We were never actually lebehind in a strange city, but we weren t about to take any chances.On the fourth or fifth night, we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vainfor some time, Mom suddenly got a great idea: Why didn t we find a house-lookingwith a likelybackyard a
19、nd ask if we could set up tent there? David and I became nervous. To our great relief, Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections.If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps, Mom would have been delighted. She thinks everyone in the world as as nice as she is. We fi
20、nally found a vacancy in the next town.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；2. 应使用 5 个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Para1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us.Para2: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way.;.20
21、18 6It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.We took a plane to Albuquerque,a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reachedAlbuquerque in the late afternoon. Uncle Paul,my dad sfriend, picked us up from the airpo
22、rt anddrove us up to his farm in Pecos.His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. Mydad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and waterrolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up
23、to have breakfast.The day starts at dawn on my farm, he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens. while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze(吃草 ). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.In the afternoon, I as
24、ked Uncle Paul if I could take a hose ride, and he said yes, as long as mydad went with me.I wasn t going to take a horse rideby myself anyway. So, my dad and I put onour new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains.Don t belate for supper, Uncle Paul cried, and keep t
25、o the trackso that you dongetlost! OK! mydad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his fam house were out of sight. It was so peacefuland quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late afternoonsun mixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven(编
26、织的） blanket spread outupon the ground just for us.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为 l50 左右；2. 至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语：3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.We had no idea where we were and it got dark.;.参考范文一：Paragraph 1But no more helicopters came a
27、nd it was getting dark again.Jane had to stay alone in theforest for another cold night. At that moment (时间 ), she felt a little sad, but she wasn sot frightened ( 情感 ). She reminded herself constantly, (心理 ) “Tom must have called for those helicopters. Maybe ( 情感 ) he was in one of them and will re
28、turn soon( 动作 )! I have to guide him tomorrow. ” She felt asleep动作( ) and dreamed of seeing Tom ( 动作 ). Paragraph 2It was daybreak when Jane woke up. She ate some berries and then(时间 ) walked along thestream, hoping (心理 ) to find a suitable place to guide the helicopter. She walked and walked, exhau
29、sted but full of hope. Suddenly ( 时间 ), she spotted (动作 ) a huge flat rock. She managed ( 动作) to climb onto it and waited with patience. The moment (时间 ) the helicopter appeared ( 动作 )again. The nearer it got ( 动作 ), the more she waved (动作 ) the yellow blouse. To her great joy, ( 情感 ) the helicopter
30、 didn t miss Jane this time and it landed near the big rock slowly. Tom jumped off the helicopter and rushed (动作 ) towards Jane. They hugged each other tightly ( 情感 ) andburst into tears ( 情感 ).参考范文二：The car abruptly stopped in front of him. Mac jumped off his bicycle and dashed for the back door of
31、 the car. It was locked. He then ran around to the passenger door, but it was locked, as well, so he began to climb through the open window. When spotting this ,Paul quickly unlocked the door, and the frightened man dived in, slamming the door behind him. Paul looked out the back windowand saw the w
32、olf standing over Mac s bike as if it were a kill. Shortly after, the animal ran off.A few minutes later, the other two cyclists arrived .Mac emerged from the car and hugged hisfriends.“ I thought I was going to die,cried to”themMac.Mac retrieved （取回）his bicycle, andthe three men resumed(继续）their ro
33、ad trip, agreeing to keep in one another s sight line. A fewmiles down the road, Mac pulled over and burst into tears. “ The rest of the trip was amazing, but Ihad to let the former emotion out. ”参考范文三：Para1: The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought withus. Mom insisted that we m
34、ust make full use of it since we had brought it. David and I looked at Dad, hoping he could stop her crazy idea. To our great disappointment, he agreed. We spent a whole afternoon seeking a nice camping place and set up our tent before the night fell. It was the first time that I had thought mom cou
35、ld bewise as I admiring our stunning tent. “ Oh, I forgot the pillows! ” what a misconc Despite the ache of my neck, we had some great nights.Para1: We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along theway. The bright blue sky, the limitless green grass, the group of sheep, the sett
36、ing sun and the countless stars in the curtain of nights kept me spellbound. Not only did we;.see the picturesque scenery, we also managed to consider mom s scandals as a kind offun. I really love my Mum.To our relief, we arrived at grandparents place and went back to our home with all of four peopl
37、e. It was so fortunate to see my friends again.范文四：Paragraph 1Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. Instinctively, I yelled out loud, pulling back the reins hard in order to stop the horse from hurting the little creature. Badly startled by the sudden incident, the horse sped off
38、 the track into another direction. Dad followed closely behind, calling out to tell me how to soothe the terrified horse and I did as told. Finally, the horse calmed down, but we seemed to get lost, unable to go back to the mountain road.Paragraph 2We had no idea where we were and it was getting dar
39、k. Wandering around, we were still stuck in the dilemma. Much to our delight, the sound of water in the distance caught our attention and drove us to the riverbank. Dad proposed that we should walk along the river which may lead us to the farm house and nothing seemed better than that. Time appeared
40、 to be merrier and shorter when Istayed together with Dad and before long, the farm house came into sight. What a thrilling but memorable experience it was!Version 2Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. I immediately grew fond of the furry r abbit and called out excitedly, Dad! L
41、ook!“ ” Alarmed, therabbit ran away in a flash. I followed it eagerly, hoping to catch it as my trophy for the trip. My dad just followed me, knowing it was impossible to stop me. We tracked the rabbit for about ten minutes until it got completely out of sight. Depressed and tired, I suggested going
42、 back. But apparently, we had divergedfrom the track Uncle Paul warned us to keep.(86 words)We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. The thought that we might have got lost in such darkness sent shivers down my spine. Tears of fear and regret filled my eyes. Fortunately, Dad was not so
43、panicked as I was. He kept silent and listened very carefully as he took my horse rein and led the way.We had wandered for what seemed like ages when suddenly ariver came intosight. Hopefully, we could find our way back to thefarm house if we followedthe river. Finally, we arrived home safely just in time for supper, but what anexperience! It turns out there s always a way out of any(困plight境） as long aswe stay calm. (114 words);.