1、High School of Henan University Yang Kun How to Use the Attributive Clause in your Writing 写作中的定语从句 Part1.Part1.高考满分作文中的定语从句欣赏：高考满分作文中的定语从句欣赏：1.（20132013年全国高考新课标年全国高考新课标I I）Ive asked my uncle to bring you the Chinese painting youve asked for before.你知道，我的叔叔李明要去你居住的城市参加一个会议。You know,my uncle Li Ming
2、is going to the city where you live to attend an international meeting._我让叔叔带去你想要的那幅中国画。2.（20132013年广东高考）年广东高考）那些做普通简单工作的人也在推动着社会的发展。Those who do simple and ordinary jobs are also promoting the development of the society.正如我们都知道的那样，扫大街是最为困难的工作之一。As we all know,cleaning streets is one of the hardest
3、work._当今，父母为他们的独生子女做所有的事情，这使得这些独生子女非常依赖于父母。Nowadays parents have done everything for their single children,which makes the children rely on their parents badly._A sailor who has experienced no storm will never become an excellent sailor._3.（20132013年福建高考）年福建高考）没经历过暴风雨的水手永远不会成为一名优秀的水手。Part2.Part2.写作中
4、定语从句的主要作用：写作中定语从句的主要作用：1.增加词数Last Saturday I watched a concert.The concert was wonderful.Last Saturday I watched a concert which was wonderful.People can enjoy the moon while eating moon cakes,which are the special food for this festival.2.可连接两个包含同一事物的句子，避免单词重复和句式单一3.补充细节，以丰富文章内容This is my uncle,a d
5、octor.This is my uncle,who is a doctor.1.1.两个句子的合并两个句子的合并+S1S1：HarryPorterisHarryPorterisaboy.aboy.+S2S2：HehasascaronHehasascaronhisforehead.hisforehead.+S1+S2S1+S2+HarryPorterisaHarryPorterisaboywhohasascarboywhohasascaronhisforehead.onhisforehead.Guangzhou is a beautiful city.It develops very fast
6、Guangzhou is a beautiful city which develops very fast2.三个句子的合并（适当运用同位语）Jphn，my best friend，gave me a gift，which he bought from USA3.四个句子的合并（同位语词组）+KateKate，anewstudentfromanorthenanewstudentfromanorthenprovinceprovince，speaksadialectwhichwespeaksadialectwhichwefindithardtounderstand.findithardtound
7、erstand.+WangmengWangmeng，agirlof25whowasbornagirlof25whowasborninHeiLongjiangProviceinHeiLongjiangProvice，beganherbeganherskatingtrainingattheageof10.skatingtrainingattheageof10.IphoneIphone，苹果公司制做，深受年，苹果公司制做，深受年轻人的人的欢迎。迎。+IphoneIphone，akindofcellponewhichisakindofcellponewhichismadebyApplemadebyAp
8、ple，isquitepopularamongisquitepopularamongteenagers.teenagers.二.作为插入语使用+众所周知+综上所述+As we all know+As is mentioned above插入插入语位置灵活，可放在句子前中后的位置。位置灵活，可放在句子前中后的位置。+1.1.众所周知，中国众所周知，中国拥有最多的人口有最多的人口+ChinaChina，asweallknowasweallknow，hasthehasthelargestpopulationintheworld.largestpopulationintheworld.+2.2.综上所
9、述，我上所述，我赞成后者的成后者的观点点+AsismentionedaboveAsismentionedabove，IaminfavorIaminfavorofthelatterview.ofthelatterview.+3.3.正如我正如我们所期待的，她取得了第一名所期待的，她取得了第一名+SheShe，asweexpectedasweexpected，wonthefirstwonthefirstprize.prize.三.非限指代整句的使用+我们不应该参加选秀节目，这会影响学习。+Weshouldnottakepartinthetalentshow，whichhasabadeffecton
10、study.+注意，此句式可以对题目中没有说明的情况进行细节补充，丰富先行词。(2013年高考山东卷)描述你的假期打算（包括兼职、旅游、志愿者等）I would like to do a part-time job,which will help me earn money and accumulate working experience.Practice:用定语从句增添做这些事情的原因Traveling is one of my choices,which will enrich my life and broaden my horizon.I would like to do volun
11、tary work,which will make a great contribution to society.高考高考链接接+在内容匮乏的情况下，可适当添加细节+1.兼顾国内外新闻+ItcoversnationalandinternationalItcoversnationalandinternationalnewsnews，whichbroadensmysight.whichbroadensmysight.+2.介绍名人成功故事+ItintroducsmanystoriesofItintroducsmanystoriesofcelebritiescelebrities，whichcan
12、inspiremetowhichcaninspiremetostudyhard.studyhard.，可使我见识广阔。，可使我见识广阔。，这会激励我努力学习，这会激励我努力学习个人情况：年个人情况：年龄，性，性别，学，学历+Iam16yearsold.+Iamagirl.+IstudyinNo.1 Middle school.+可适当增加细节：是我们城市重点高中之一I,a 16 years old girl，study in No.1 Middle school，which is one of the best senior schools in our city.1.目前，英语在高考中是一个
13、备受争议的学科。对此，不同的人持有不同的观点。Currently,English is a controversial subject in the College Entrance Examination,about which different people hold different views.Translation:2.我没有及时回信的原因是我一直在准备期末考试。The reason why I failed to write back in time is that I had been preparing for the final exam.controversialfai
14、l to dowrite backprepare forFill in the blanks:去年暑假，我去乡村做志愿者。在那我看到了辛勤工作的农民和他们快乐的生活，给我留下了深刻的印象。Last summer vacation,I did voluntary work in the countryside _ I saw hard-working peasants and their happy life _made a deep impression on me.正如上面所提到的，定语从句用处很大。_,the Attributive Clause is of great use.where
15、thatAs is mentioned aboveAs is known to all=As we all know众所周知众所周知As is often the case 就跟就跟经常的情况一常的情况一样As is reported 正如所正如所报道的那道的那样（As引引导非限制性定非限制性定语从句，可放在主句前中后，从句，可放在主句前中后，“正如正如”）即将到来的端午即将到来的端午节是中国的是中国的传统节日日+TheupcomingDragonBoatFestivalisaChineseFestival.+定语从句可以对表达中没有说明的情况进行细节补充，丰富先行词（Festival）+可补
16、充:节日的目的，节目的活动+TheupcomingDragonBoatFestivalisTheupcomingDragonBoatFestivalisaChineseFestivalwhichisaChineseFestivalwhichiscelebratedtohonorournationalherocelebratedtohonorournationalhero，QuYuan.QuYuan.Mydestmateisaverywarm-heartedMydestmateisaverywarm-heartedman.man.+用定语从句具体化：经常帮我买早餐，在我有困难的时候帮助我，帮我提
17、高学习成绩等+Mydestmateisaverywarm-heartedMydestmateisaverywarm-heartedmanman，whoalwayslendsmeahandwhenwhoalwayslendsmeahandwhenIaminneedIaminneed.+1.句子合并+1）MissZhangisourEnglishteacher.+2）Sheisbeautifulwithbigeyes.+3)Sheoftenplaysgamesinherclass.+4)Wecanlearnalotinherfunnyclass.+2.翻译：正如我们所总结的，过度使用（overus
18、e）汽车会严重污染环境。+3.用定语从句具体化+Iwouldliketodosomevoluntarywork.+1.句子合并+1）MissZhangisourEnglishteacher.+2）Sheisbeautifulwithbigeyes.+3)Sheoftenplaysgamesinherclass.+4)Wecanlearnalotinherfunnyclass.+MissZhangMissZhang，ourbeautifulEnglishourbeautifulEnglishteacherwithbigeyesteacherwithbigeyes，oftenplaysoftenp
19、laysgamesinherclassgamesinherclassinwhichinwhichwecanwecanlearnalot.learnalot.+翻译：正如我们所总结的，过度使用（overuse）汽车会严重污染环境。+AswehaveconcludedAswehaveconcluded，overusingcarsoverusingcarswillcauseseriouspollutiontoourwillcauseseriouspollutiontoourenvironment.environment.+3.用定语从句具体化+IwouldliketodosomevoluntaryI
20、wouldliketodosomevoluntarywork.work.+IwouldliketodosomevoluntaryIwouldliketodosomevoluntaryworkwhichwillmakecontributiontoworkwhichwillmakecontributiontooursociety.oursociety.Our class is a big family,which consists of 40 girls and 25 boys.My best friend is Mr.Cai,whose nickname is“loser”.The reason
21、 why I dont like his nickname is that it deeply hurts him.He lives in Gucheng,where people can visit lots of scenic spots.I will never forget the days when we used to attend painting lectures together.Two Attributive Clauses are enough in one composition!Part4.思辨学学习学学习是一个人自己的事，不能依是一个人自己的事，不能依赖别人。人。我
22、我们都知道，学都知道，学习是一个知是一个知识积累的累的过程。程。他是一个人一生的任他是一个人一生的任务，不能一下完成。，不能一下完成。一个成功的学一个成功的学习者是一个独立的人，他不者是一个独立的人，他不仅要有要有强烈的意愿，而且要有惊人的耐力。烈的意愿，而且要有惊人的耐力。他要他要试着找到自己的学着找到自己的学习方法，并非只是方法，并非只是等着老等着老师的帮助。除了老的帮助。除了老师以外，他也可以外，他也可以利用以利用书本，本，电脑和朋友等。但学和朋友等。但学习确确实是件是件艰苦的事以至于苦的事以至于许多人最多人最终都失都失败了。了。因此学因此学习中最重要的事情是一个人自己的中最重要的事情是
23、一个人自己的努力。努力。On learning+Learning is ones own business,which can not rely on others.As we know,learning is process of accumulating knowledge.It is ones life-long task,which cant be finished in one move.A successful learner is an independent one,who has both a strong will and amazing endurance.He will
24、 try to find his own way of learning instead of only waiting for the teachers help.He can make use of the books,computer and friends as well as the teachers.But learning is rather a hard thing that many people fail in the end.So the most important thing in learning is ones own effort.作文中是不是越多定作文中是不是越多定语从句就越好？从句就越好？Two（or three）Attributive Clauses are enough in one composition!除定除定语从句之外，我从句之外，我们可以用并列句，非可以用并列句，非谓语做后置定做后置定语或状或状语，用介，用介词短短语（如（如with），），名名词性从句等复合句，性从句等复合句，强调句，全倒装和半倒句，全倒装和半倒装句装句1.Review what we have learnt.2.Describe a person you know,using as many Attributive Clauses as possible.
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