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1、单元主题写作三,Unit 3 Safety,话题分析,本单元的话题为“安全与规则”。如何注意安全和遵守规则是本单元的写作话题。通过本单元的学习，学生要能够用简单的英语表达出遵守规则的重要性及如何远离危险，保证安全。本话题多采用一般现在时和祈使句来表达。,单元主题写作三,典型例题,2017黔南州改编 目前，校园暴力时有发生，已经危害到中学生的身心健康。中学生应该懂得如何规范自身的行为习惯，保护自身安全，远离校园暴力。请以“规范自我行为，做个合格中学生”为主题写一篇英语短文。 要点：1.遵守学校纪律，听从老师及家长的教育，严格要求自己； 2远离网吧，按时上学，回家； 3待人礼貌，友好，不与同学打架
2、； 4遇到困难多与父母及老师沟通。,单元主题写作三,要求：1. 必须用到以上信息，可适当发挥； 2文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息； 380词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数； 4要求句子连贯，语义通顺，书写规范。 参考词汇：campus violence校园暴力be strict with对严格 stay away from the Internet bar远离网吧fight with与斗争 Campus violence happens from time to time nowadays. It is harmful for students. It hurts not only
3、our bodies but also our minds. As a student，,单元主题写作三,思路点拨,单元主题写作三,开篇点题,As a student, it is important to know how to be a good teenager.,具体描写,First SecondThirdFourth,表达看法,In a word, we should try our best to behave well.,素材积累,常用短语 1遵守规则_ 2当心_ 3照看；照顾_ 4远离_ 5注意_ 6求助_,obey/follow the rules,单元主题写作三,look
4、out/be careful,look after/take care of,stay/keep away from,pay attention to,ask for help,常用句子 1Its necessary for us to learn some rules. 2Stay away from danger. 3We should learn how to protect ourselves.,单元主题写作三,高分模板,Campus violence happens from time to time nowadays. It is harmful for students. It
5、hurts not only our bodies but also our minds. As a student, it is important to know how to be a good teenagerFirst, we should follow school rules to behave well at school. Its good for us to listen to the teachers and parents. We must be strict with ourselves.,单元主题写作三,Second, to be safe, we should s
6、tay away from the Internet bar, and go to school and go back home on time. Third, as teenagers, we should be friendly to one another, and dont fight with classmates. Fourth, if we have any difficulty in life, its best to talk about them with our teachers and parents. In a word, we should try our bes
7、t to behave well.,单元主题写作三,名师点评,“疑问词不定式”结构的运用较好地概述了文章的主题。 first, second, third, fourth这些序数词的运用使得文章思路清 晰，条理性强。 祈使句的运用符合警示语的要求。 in a word的运用强化了主题，起到了总结的作用。,单元主题写作三,小试身手,暑假即将来临，许多学生喜欢下河游泳。为预防游泳溺水事故的发生，你们班将举行以“珍爱生命，预防溺水”为主题的班会。请你写一篇英语发言稿，提出你对安全游泳的建议，建议内容包括：不要到陌生的河流和湖泊游泳；不要擅自结伴游泳；不会游泳，不要下水救人,单元主题写作三,要求：1.
8、 语言通顺，意思连贯，符合逻辑； 2内容可适当发挥； 3文中不得出现真实的校名和人名； 4词数：80词左右。 参考词汇：without permission(未经许可)cherish(珍爱) _ _,单元主题写作三,单元主题写作三,One possible version： Summer vacation is coming. Many students like going swimming in rivers and lakes. But how to swim safely? Here is my advice. Dont swim in strange rivers and lakes. We shouldnt go swimming alone. We cant swim with other students without permission. We are not allowed to swim without a parent. If we cant swim, we mustnt get into the water to save a person. Sometimes it is dangerous for students to swim. We live only once, we must cherish life.,