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1、基础写作,1,书面表达(基础写作),基础写作,2,错误类型一:汉式英语错误,基础写作,3,误:He cost five yuan to buy a dictionary. 正:或(2)误: The student is standing there is my brother. 正: 或,It cost him five yuan to buy a dictionary.,The dictionary cost him five yuan.,The student standing there is my brother.,The student who is standing there i
2、s my brother.,基础写作,4,错误类型二:句子结构不完整或结构错误,基础写作,5,一个句子至少包括主语和谓语两部分(祈使句除外)。两个各含有主语和谓语的分句不能写在一起，也不能只用逗号隔开, 必须用连词连接构成并列句或复合句。,基础写作,6,(1)误: The girls cleaned the desks and chairs, the boys mopped the floor.正:,The girls cleaned the desks and chairs, and/ while the boys mopped the floor.,基础写作,7,(2)误: I cant
3、imagine what life would be like if have not any TV sets.正:,I cant imagine what life would be like if we have not any TV sets.,基础写作,8,(3)误:The sun gives off heat and light, this makes it possible for the plants on the earth to grow.正:,The sun gives off heat and light, which makes it possible for the
4、plants on the earth to grow.,基础写作,9,错误类型三：重复累赘,基础写作,10,(1)误: We are very like his lesson.正: (2)误: Yours class was interesting.正:,We like his lesson very much.,Your class was interesting.,基础写作,11,(3)误: Mary married with John.正: (4)误: I returned back the book to you yesterday.正:,Mary married John.,I r
5、eturned the book to you yesterday.,基础写作,12,错误类型四：句子缺乏逻辑性或连贯性,基础写作,13,误: Being an honest man, Tom worked very hard.正: 误: Liu Hua is a kind-hearted girl. She will be successful in anything she tries.正:,Being an honest man, Tom never tells a lie.,AS she has a strong will , Liu Hua will be successful in
6、 anything she tries.,基础写作,14,错误类型五：语法、词法错误,基础写作,15,误: In the bedroom there are a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.正: 误: He closed the door and hurries away to class.正:,In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.,He closed the door and hurried away to class.,基础写作,16,误: 60% of the studen
7、ts against the idea of entrance fees.正: 误: 2 days past before his letter arrived.正:,60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fees.,2 days passed before his letter arrived.,基础写作,17,错误类型六：拼写错误及标点符号,基础写作,18,基本句型,基础写作,19,基础写作,20,1.David 7岁了。(主系表),David was seven years old.,2.他有一个梦想。(主谓宾),He
8、had a dream.,3.他想在天上飞。(主谓宾),He wanted to fly in the sky.,4.他给他自己做了一架纸飞机。(主谓宾宾补),He made himself a paper plane.,基础写作,21,5.他完成了作业。(主谓宾) He finished his homework. 6.他老是玩纸飞机。(主谓) He always played with paper planes. 7.天上有一架飞机在飞。(there be句型) There was a plane flying in the sky.,基础写作,22,8. 他的父亲鼓励他努力学习成为飞行员
9、。(主谓宾宾补) His father encouraged him to study hard and be a pilot. 9. 他非常努力地学习他的功课。(主谓) He worked very hard at his lessons. 10. 十八年后他实现了他的梦想。(主谓宾宾补) He made his dream come true 18 years later.,基础写作,23,David was seven years old. 2. He had a dream. 3. He wanted to fly in the sky. 4. He made himself a pa
10、per plane. 5. He finished homework. 6. He always played with paper planes. 7. There was a plane flying in the sky. 8. His father encouraged him to study hard and be a pilot. 9. He worked very hard at his lessons. 10. He made his dream come true 18 years later.,基础写作,24,_ David was seven years old, he
11、 _ _flying in the sky. _ finished his homework, he made himself a paper plane to _ _. On his way to school, there was a plane _ in the sky. His father _ him to be a _ in the future. _ _ by working hard _ he made his dream _ _ eighteen years _ .,When,dreamt,of,Having,play,with,flying,encouraged,pilot
12、,It,was,that,come,true,later,基础写作,25,合并成文：When David was seven years old, he dreamed of flying in the sky. In daily life , having finished his homework, he made himself a paper plane to play with. One day on his way to school, there was a plane flying in the sky. So his father encouraged him to be a
13、 pilot in the future. At last , it was by working hard that he made his dream come true eighteen years later.,基础写作,26,爬山日记 爬山是一种很好的运动。(主系表) 2. 爬山有益于健康。(主系表) 3.今天我和同学去爬西山。(主谓) 4.我们是乘出租去的。(主谓) 5.我们大约在早上八点到达那里。(主谓) 6.有许多游客在爬山。(There be) 7.我们很兴奋。(主系表) 8.我们一刻没耽搁就开始爬山。(主谓宾) 9.班长小明帮了我很大忙。(主谓宾宾) 10.我是唯一的女孩。
14、(主系表) 11.我们中午到达山顶。(主谓宾) 12.我们很累但很高兴。(主系表) 13.男孩子们让我跳舞。(主谓宾宾补) 14.我的表演让他们忘记了疲劳。(主谓宾宾补),基础写作,27,爬山日记 1. 爬山是一种很好的运动。(主系表) Climbing is a good sport. 2. 爬山有益于健康。(主系表) Climbing is good for our health. 3. 今天我和同学去爬西山。(主谓) Some classmates and I went to climb the West Hill today.,基础写作,28,4. 我们是乘出租去的。(主谓) We w
15、ent there by taxi. 5. 我们大约在早上八点到达那里。(主谓) We got there at about 8 oclock in the morning. 6. 有许多游客在爬山。(There be) There were lots of tourists climbing.,基础写作,29,7. 我们很兴奋。(主系表) We were excited. 8. 我们一刻没耽搁就开始爬山。(主谓宾) We began to climb the hill without any delay. 9. 班长小明帮了我很大忙。(主谓宾宾) Our monitor, Xiao Ming
16、, offered me a lot of help.,基础写作,30,10. 我是唯一的女孩。(主系表) I was the only girl. 11. 我们中午到达山顶。(主谓宾) We got to the top of the mountain at noon. 12. 我们很累但很高兴。(主系表) We felt tired but happy.,基础写作,31,13. 男孩子们让我跳舞。(主谓宾宾补) The boys asked me to dance 14. 我的表演让他们忘记了疲劳。(主谓宾宾补) My performance made them forget their
17、tiredness.,基础写作,32,Climbing is a good sport, which is good for our health. Today some classmates and I went to climb the West Hill. When we got there by taxi at about 8 oclock in the morning, there had been many tourists climbing. At that time, we were so excited that we began our climb without any delay, during which our monitor, Xiao Ming, offered me, the only girl, a lot of help. After we got to the top at noon, tired but happy, the boys asked me to dance to music . Luckily , my performance made them forget their tiredness. In a word , I really enjoy this climbing.,基础写作,33,Thank you!,