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1、高考概要写作公开课,1,概要写作 Summary writing,高考新题型,高考概要写作公开课,2,What is a good summary?,概要写作评分标准第五档（2125points）： 1.理解准确，涵盖所有要点 2.准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇 3. 完全使用自己的语言。(60-80W) 4.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使概要结构紧凑,contents (内容),language skills (语言),structure (结构),高考概要写作公开课,3,Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever
2、. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it. Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away soc
3、iety” which is a great waste of the earths resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material! Our industrial socie
4、ty has turned us into spoiled children. This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now. When we have no resources left, then we will start to take care of what we have. But why cant we act before this happens? Why cant we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is
5、a virtue? （182W）,高考概要写作公开课,4,Step 1 . Understand the whole passage and grasp the key points.,高考概要写作公开课,5,Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it. Nowadays
6、 industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earths resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style.
7、 Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material! Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children. This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now. When we have no resources le
8、ft, then we will start to take care of what we have. But why cant we act before this happens? Why cant we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue?,高考概要写作公开课,6,概要写作难点 1,How to get the key points quickly and correctly? (如何快速、准确地捕捉要点),抓住主题句或关键信息，忽略次要信息,高考概要写作公开课,7,Para 1：,On
9、ce upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. If you bought a car or a stove, it was a once-in-a-lifetime investment. You paid good money for it, and you took care of it.,detailed example,忽略具体事例,topic sentence,概要写作难点 2,How to express the key points by using your own words properly? (如何
10、灵活诠释，规避抄袭的嫌疑),characteristics,高考概要写作公开课,8,Once upon a time, industrial goods were made to last forever. _,industrial goods were made _.,Some time ago; In the past; Decades ago,to be used for a long time to function well for a long time; durable,近义词替换,高考概要写作公开课,9,You paid good money for it, and you t
11、ook care of it.,Decades ago, industrial goods were made durable.,spent much money on,treasure,treat it kindly,You spent much money on it and treasure it.,Decades ago, industrial goods were made durable You spent much money on it and treasure it.,Para1.,use it carefully,高考概要写作公开课,10,Nowadays industry
12、 has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earths resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of
13、 the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material!,topic sentence,detailed examples,characteristics,result,忽略具体事例,高考概要写作公开课,11,Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time. It is cheaper
14、 to throw them away than to repair them. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earths resources. Just think of the cars that are traded daily, just because they are out of style. Think of the expensive packaging material that is thrown away every time a new
15、object is bought. And we shoppers have to pay for that material!,高考概要写作公开课,12,1. Nowadays industry has persuaded us that products couldnt last a long time. 2. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. 3. This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the eart
16、hs resources.,Modern Industry,made us believe,convinced,not permanent,Modern industry has convinced us that products are not permanent.,short-lived,近义词替换,高考概要写作公开课,13,2. It is cheaper to throw them away than to repair them. To throw them away is cheaper than to repair them. It is more expensive to r
17、epair them than to throw them away.,改变主语（形式主语）,正话反说、反话正说,高考概要写作公开课,14,This has led directly to the “throw-away society” which is a great waste of the earths resources.,which has resulted in a great waste of the earths resources.,改变句式,result in,高考概要写作公开课,15,Modern industry has convinced us that produ
18、cts are not permanent. To throw them away is cheaper than to repair them, which has resulted in a great waste of the earths resources.,Para2.,高考概要写作公开课,16,Para 3：,提炼相关信息,Our industrial society has turned us into spoiled children. This wastefulness has got us into the great trouble we are in now. Whe
19、n we have no resources left, then we will start to take care of what we have. But why cant we act before this happens? Why cant we try to build a society in which the prevention of waste is a virtue?,过渡句,We need to save resources before its too late,This wastefulness has caused us a lot of trouble.,
20、We are running out of resources and we need to take action.,高考概要写作公开课,17,This wastefulness has caused us a lot of trouble. We are running out of resources and we need to take action. We need to save resources before its too late.,Para3.,This wastefulness has caused us a lot of trouble. We are runnin
21、g out of resources. We need to save resources before its too late.,高考概要写作公开课,18,Decades ago, industrial goods were made durable. We spent much money on it and treasure it. Modern industry has convinced us that products are not permanent. To throw them away is cheaper than to repair them, which has r
22、esulted in a great waste of the earths resources. This wastefulness has caused us a lot of trouble. We are running out of resources. We need to save resources before its too late. (71W),Polish your writing,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使概要结构紧凑,1921分,However,Therefore,高考概要写作公开课,19,Step 1： Step 2: Step 3: Step 4:,读懂
23、文章大意,抓住主题句或关键信息，忽略次要信息,How to write a good summary?,Conclusion,灵活运用语言，对关键信息进行改编,添加有效连接成分，使概要结构紧凑,高考概要写作公开课,20,The food we eat seems to have a great effect on our health. Although science has made big steps in making food more fit to eat, it has, at the same time, made many foods unfit to eat. Some r
24、esearch has shown that perhaps eighty percent of human illness is related to food and forty percent of cancer is related to food as well. That food is related to illness is not a new discovery. In 1945, some researchers realized that things commonly used to keep colour in meats and other food additi
25、ves（添加剂）caused cancer. Yet, these additives remain in our food, and it is difficult to know which things on the wrappings（包装）of foods are helpful or harmful. The additives which we eat are not all so direct. Farmers often give penicillin to their animals, and because of this, penicillin has been fou
26、nd in the milk of cows. Sometimes similar tings are supplied to animals not for their health, but just to make a profit. The farmers are simply trying to fatten the animals in order to get a higher price on the market. Although some countries have tried to control such things, the practice continues
27、. （201W）,高考概要写作公开课,21,The food we eat seems to have a great effect on our health. Although science has made big steps in making food more fit to eat, it has, at the same time, made many foods unfit to eat. Some research has shown that perhaps eighty percent of human illness is related to food and fo
28、rty percent of cancer is related to food as well. That food is related to illness is not a new discovery. In 1945, some researchers realized that things commonly used to keep colour in meats and other food additives（添加剂）caused cancer.,Para 1：,高考概要写作公开课,22,(1.)The food we eat seems to have a great ef
29、fect on our health. (2.) Although science has made big steps in making food more fit to eat, it has, at the same time, made many foods unfit to eat. (3.) Some research has shown that perhaps eighty percent of human illness is related to food and forty percent of cancer is related to food as well.,1.
30、 Our food affects our health.,2. Although science has greatly improved the quality of our foods, some are still unsafe to eat.,高考概要写作公开课,23,(3.) Some research has shown that perhaps eighty percent of human illness is related to food and forty percent of cancer is related to food as well.,3. Research
31、 has proved that most of our diseases are caused by food, including cancer.,高考概要写作公开课,24,Our food affects our health. Although science has greatly improve the quality of our foods, some are still unsafe to eat. Research has proved that most of our diseases are caused by food, including cancer.,Para
32、1：,高考概要写作公开课,25,Para 2：,Yet, these additives remain in our food, and it is difficult to know which things on the wrappings (包装) of foods are helpful or harmful. The additives which we eat are not all so direct. Farmers often give penicillin to their animals, and because of this, penicillin has been
33、found in the milk of cows. Sometimes similar tings are supplied to animals not for their health, but just to make a profit.,高考概要写作公开课,26,(1.) Yet, these additives remain in our food, and it is difficult to know which things on the wrappings of foods are helpful or harmful. (2.) The additives which w
34、e eat are not all so direct. (3.) Sometimes similar tings are supplied to animals not for their health, but just to make a profit.,1. We can hardly tell whether the additives in our food are harmful or not.,2. They affect our body indirectly.,高考概要写作公开课,27,(3.) Sometimes similar tings are supplied to
35、 animals not for their health, but just to make a profit.,3. Some farmers raise their animals with additives to earn more money.,高考概要写作公开课,28,We can hardly tell whether the additives in our food are harmful or not. They affect our body indirectly. Some farmers raise their animals with additives to e
36、arn more money.,Para 2：,高考概要写作公开课,29,Para 3：,The farmers are simply trying to fatten the animals in order to get a higher price on the market. Although some countries have tried to control such things, the practice continues.,Some countries have taken measures to stop such things, but in vain.,高考概要写
37、作公开课,30,Our food affects our health. Although science has greatly improved the quality of our foods, some are still unsafe to eat. Research has proved that most of our diseases are caused by food, including cancer. We can hardly tell whether the additives in our food are harmful or not. They affect
38、our body indirectly. Some farmers raise their animals with additives to earn more money. Some countries have taken measures to stop such things, but in vain. (77W),it,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使概要结构紧凑,because ,高考概要写作公开课,31,Weight loss is most likely to be successful when people change their habits. Here are se
39、veral ways to make that happen. Regular physical activity burns calories and builds muscles -both of which help you look and feel good and keep weight off. Walking the family dog, cycling to school, and doing other things that increase your daily level of activity can all make a difference. One reas
40、on people get less exercise these days is because of an increase in “screen time”- the amount of time spent watching TV, looking at the computer, or playing video games. Limit recreational screen time to less than 2 hours per day. When you really get away from “screens”, such as TV, computers, IPad
41、or mobile phones, you will really benefit a lot. Portion sizes are bigger than they used to be, and these extra calories contribute to obesity. Another key factor in weight gain is that more people drink sugary drinks, such as sodas, juice drinks, and sports drinks. So choose smaller portions (or sh
42、are restaurant portions) and go for water or low-fat mild instead of soda. People who skip breakfast often feel so hungry that they eat more later on. So they get more calories than they would have if they ate breakfast. In fact, people who skip breakfast tend to have higher BIMs than people who eat
43、 breakfast. If you really put the above into practice at once, you will definitely reduce your weight gradually. And wish you have a good figure.,高考概要写作公开课,32,Weight loss is most likely to be successful when people change their habits. Here are several ways to make that happen. Regular physical acti
44、vity burns calories and builds muscles -both of which help you look and feel good and keep weight off. Walking the family dog, cycling to school, and doing other things that increase your daily level of activity can all make a difference.,Changing some habits may be a good way to lose weight.,If peo
45、ple change their habits, they will surely succeed in losing weight.,Whether people can lose weight or not depends on their living habits.,Taking more physical exercise will make much difference to peoples health.,Increasing the amount of regular exercise will benefit people a lot.,高考概要写作公开课,33,One r
46、eason people get less exercise these days is because of an increase in “screen time”- the amount of time spent watching TV, looking at the computer, or playing video games. Limit recreational screen time to less than 2 hours per day. When you really get away from “screens”, such as TV, computers, IP
47、ad or mobile phones, you will really benefit a lot. Portion sizes are bigger than they used to be, and these extra calories contribute to obesity. Another key factor in weight gain is that more people drink sugary beverages, such as sodas, juice drinks, and sports drinks. So choose smaller portions
48、(or share restaurant portions) and go for water or low-fat milk instead of soda.,It is necessary to limit “screen time” if people want to lose weight.,We are supposed to reduce “screen time”.,Sticking to smaller portions and avoiding sugary drinks contribute to weight loss.,Watching out for portion
49、sizes and drinking water instead of sugary drinks are also a key to weight loss.,高考概要写作公开课,34,People who skip breakfast often feel so hungry that they eat more later on. So they get more calories than they would have if they ate breakfast. In fact, people who skip breakfast tend to have higher BIMs than people who eat breakfast. If you really put the above into practice at once, you will defin