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1、高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,1,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,2,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,3,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,【特点】 1.英语不好。 2.经常用小事麻烦别人，例如写信、发邮件。 3.好高骛远，肚子里连点儿墨水都没有就想要参加学生会组织活动，还让别人出谋划策。 4.曾经喜欢过唱歌，曾经喜欢过跳舞，曾经参加过朗诵比赛，当过奥运志愿者，还想去世博会当志愿者，曾幻想过去支教。 5.经常在网络上结交世界各地的笔友，并把他们骗到家里来住。 6. 不断留级，几十年还没有毕业。 7. 他会分身术，能同时以多个年级身份出现在多个地方。 8. 他热心公益，每次活动都要当志愿者，天天给报社投
2、稿，但是一直没有见到回复。 ,4,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,我有什么办法，我也很绝望啊！,5,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑假课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：1. 本人简介；2. 求助内容； 3. 约定时间；4. 你的联系方式(Email: ; Phone:12345678)注意： 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯；3. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好,6,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,7,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,“应用了较多的词汇”,
3、What does it mean by this?,8,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,1) We see it as important for the success of development. We see it as essential for the success of development. 2) Suddenly I had a good idea. Suddenly I came up with a good idea. 3) Plenty of memory work is good to English study. Plenty of memory work wi
4、ll contribute to English study. 4） The question is really difficult to understand. The question is really confusing.,对比分析,9,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,1) We find it important for the development of success. We find it essential for the development of success. （高级单词代替普通单词） 2) Suddenly I had a good idea. Suddenly
5、 I came up with a good idea. （词组短语代替普通单词） 3) Plenty of memory work is good to English study. Plenty of memory work will contribute to English study. (高级词组替代普通词组) 4） The question is really difficult to understand. The question is really confusing. (高级词汇代替常见表达）,对比分析,10,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,1) We see it as i
6、mportant for the success of development. We see it as essential for the success of development. 形容词：good excellent different careful cautious 动词：spend _ thank _ meet _ 名词：way opinionperspective duty _/responsibility 副词： greatly-strongly/ sharply/ _ so_/ accordingly,一、 高级单词代替普通单词,11,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,1)
7、 We see it as important for the success of development. We see it as essential for the success of development. 形容词：good excellent different various careful cautious 动词：spend devote thank appreciate meet encounter 名词：way approach opinionperspective duty obligation/responsibility 副词： greatly-strongly/
8、 sharply/ enormously so consequently/ accordingly,12,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,Suddenly I had a good idea. Suddenly I came up with a good idea. 1) I hope to get some help from you. I to get some help from you 2) I wonder how to solve the problem. I wonder how to the the problem. 3) You do have to consider the
9、feelings of others. You have to the feelings of others .,二、 词组短语替代普通单词,13,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,Suddenly I had a good idea. Suddenly I came up with a good idea. 1) I hope to get some help from you. I am anxious to obtain some help from you 2) I wonder how to solve the problem. I wonder how to figure out th
10、e problem. 3) You do have to consider the feelings of others. You have to take the feelings of others into consideration.,二、 词组短语替代普通单词,14,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,三、高级词组代替普通词组,Plenty of memory work is good for English study. Plenty of memory work will contribute to English study. I thought of a good idea. A
11、good idea me We should try our best to prevent the environment from being polluted. We should to prevent the environment from being polluted. I am making use of each opportunity to practice my oral English. I am each opportunity to practice my oral English.,15,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,三、高级词组替代普通词组,Plenty of m
12、emory work is good for English study. Plenty of memory work will contribute to English study. I thought of a good idea. A good idea occurred to me We should try our best to prevent the environment from being polluted. We should spare no effort to prevent the environment from being polluted. I am mak
13、ing use of each opportunity to practice my oral English. I am taking advantage of each opportunity to practice my oral English.,16,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,四、高级词汇替代常见表达,The question is really difficult to understand. The question is really confusing. I am interested in learning English. I cherish my enthusias
14、m for learning English. I have no idea whether or not to go abroad. I am in a dilemma of whether or not to go abroad. She aims to win the match. To win the match is her priority.,17,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,总结：,高级词汇代替普通词汇 词组短语代替单个词汇 高级词组代替普通词组 高级词汇代替普通表达,18,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑假课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导
15、中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：1. 本人简介；2. 求助内容； 3. 约定时间；4. 你的联系方式(Email: ; Phone:12345678)注意： 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯；3. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好,19,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,20,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,“应用了较多的语法结构”,What does it mean by this?,21,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,高级句型,简单句的高级形式，即简单句中含非谓语动词(特别是作定语和状语)、介词短语等 复合句，包括状语从
16、句(特别是表示时间、条件、让步、目的、结果的从句)，名词性从句(特别是主语从句、同位语从句)，定语从句(特别是非限制性定语从句)。 特殊句型如：被动句强调句型：It isthat.；用do, does, did强调一般现在时和一般过去时的谓语动词。 倒装句型：only的倒装句、not onlybut also的倒装句、sothat的倒装句及notuntil的倒装句。,形式主语句型：It is +adj. /n. + for sb. to do sth. Sb. was /were doing sth., whendid 正在做某事时，突然又发生另一事。There is no doubt/den
17、ying that 毫无疑问等 并列句和平行结构也可以适当添加，特别是and, but, bothand, not onlybut also, eitheror, notbut等并列连词的用法。 修辞手法，如比喻句、感叹句、排比句及双重否定句等 恰当引入名言,一、原因和时间状语从句变非谓语,一、原因和时间状语从句变非谓语,When they heard the news, they all jumped for joy.,Hearing the news, they all jumped for joy.,时间状语从句变非谓语,When the girl realizes her mom mu
18、st be very tired after a days work, she helps to remove the bag from her moms shoulder.,优化_,25,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,一、原因和时间状语从句变非谓语,When they heard the news, they all jumped for joy.,Hearing the news, they all jumped for joy.,时间状语从句变非谓语,When the girl realizes her mom must be very tired after a days work,
19、she helps to remove the bag from her moms shoulder.,优化：Realizing her mom must be very tired after a days work, she helps to remove the bag from her moms shoulder.,26,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,一、原因和时间状语从句变非谓语,TheydidnotgototheSummerPalacebecausetheyhadalotofworktodo,Havingalotofworktodo，they didnt go to the Sum
20、mer Palace.,原因状语从句变非谓语,TheboyCaterwentuptohisteacherandsaid“sorry”becausehewasgreatlytouchedbyhiswords,优化：_,27,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,一、原因和时间状语从句变非谓语,TheydidnotgototheSummerPalacebecausetheyhadalotofworktodo,Havingalotofworktodo，they didnt go to the Summer Palace.,原因状语从句变非谓语,TheboyCaterwentuptohisteacherand
21、said“sorry”becausehewasgreatlytouchedbyhiswords,优化：Greatlytouchedbyhisteacherswords，theboylater wentuptohimandsaid “sorry”.,28,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,2016全国卷I 第二节书面表达（满分25分） 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr. Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format)。 注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯,Knowing that yo
22、u are the expert in this field, I am writing this letter to ask for some advice on.,二、not onlybut also 用于倒装,Television not only appeals to those who can read but to those who cant.,Not only does television appeal to those who can read but to those who cant.,The poor man not only had been fined,but a
23、lso he had been sent to prison.,优化： _,二、not onlybut also 用于倒装,31,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,四、not onlybut also 用于倒装,Television not only appeals to those who can read but to those who cant.,Not only does television appeal to those who can read but to those who cant.,The poor man not only had been fined,but also
24、he had been sent to prison.,优化：Not only had the poor man been fined,but also he had been sent to prison,32,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,（2015全国卷I） 假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：,（2015全国卷I） 假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：,Not only are we interested in articles c
25、oncerning their holidays and festivals but also the life of American high school students.,我们不仅对节日风俗的文章感兴趣，也对中学生生活文章感兴趣。,(15四川卷）假如你是李华，你看到美国留学生Sharon 在网上发贴，希望有人能帮助她提高普通话（Mandarin）水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。 1.表达给她提供帮助的意愿； 2.说明你能胜任辅导的理由； 3.给出讲好普通话的两点建议； 4.提出你学习英语的具体需求。,Seeing your post on the
26、Internet that you are looking for someone to improve your Mandarin, I am writing this letter to.,Not only did I scored high in the Mandarin Level Test, but also accumulated many skills on how to practice it.,总结：一、时间/原因状从变非谓语二、not onlybut also 引导的非谓语,Practice,I. 把下列从句变成合适的非谓语形式,1. When we see the ear
27、th from space, we find it like a blue ball,2. As I know the money is safe, I shall not worry about it.,3.SinceyouareaPartymemberyoushouldsetanexampletoothers.,4.Themanthrewoffhiscoatbecausehefelttoohot.,38,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,翻译： 1. 因为我出生在上海，所以我对上海很熟悉。 这样的变化不仅会提高他的社会形象，而且会改善他的健康。 住在偏僻的乡下,他们对外界发生的事知之甚少. 很长时间没有得到你的信,我真是有点想你.,39,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,（2017全国卷I）书面表达 假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括： （1）时间和地点； （2）内容：学习唐诗； （3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,40,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,亲爱的同学， 让我们从现在开始， 携手前进，不断提升学习成绩， 享受学习带来的乐趣吧！,41,高考英语写作之词汇与句型优化,