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1、阅读短文，根据其内容写一篇 60 词左右的内容概要。The way of Chinese peoples life has been changed through the Chinas “NewFour Great Inventions”. What are “New Four Great Inventions”？They are High-speed rail, Shared bike, Online shopping and AliPay.What did the Chinas “New Four Great Inventions” bring to us？High-speed rail
2、Modern transportation makes everybody neighbors. Theinvention of the high-speed railway makes it easy to thousands of miles a day. TodayChinas rail transit technology isthe best, the Chinas daily average of 4, 000 trains, sending about 4.6 million passengers.Shared bikeShort walks become more conven
3、ient and faster, and carbon missionsare reduced, which is friendly to the environment. You can download the APP aboutshared bikes, pay some money, then you can use bicycles everywhere in the street.The Chinese shared bicycle programs have been becoming more and more popular.Online shoppingDont need
4、to go out to find the needs for living. Onlineshopping, as the name implies, is to pay money online. Purchases(购买物) can be senthome. China has 751 million internet users, 724 million mobile phone users; totaltransactions (销售额) on November 11 andDecember 12 hit a recordhigh every year.Online shopping
5、 lets Chinese internet users enjoy “shopping carnival” every day.AlipayA software which can replace cash payment. With intelligence phonespopularization, AliPay has become an indispensable (不可或缺的) APP. Throughscanning the “QR code”, AliPay wants to realize the ambition of “replacing cashpayments” gr
6、adually. On 11 November 2018, both the mobile payment account and the transaction reached 213.5 billion.There is no doubt that China has already used its own power of “New Four GreatInventions” to become the great powerful technological country, showing the powerof China once again._【答案】Chinas new “
7、Four Great Inventions” High-speed rail, Shared bike,Online shopping and AliPay have changed Chinese peoples life. High-speed railmakes trips faster than before. Meanwhile, Shared bike lets the short walks becomefaster, more convenient and environmentally friendly. Online shopping creates manybusines
8、s opportunities on the internet and Alipay will gradually replace cashpayment. Without doubt, new four inventions contribute to a great and powerful technological China.【解析】【分析】这是一篇概要写作应用文。【详解】如何提取要点，注意事项。本文是一篇说明文。主要介绍了中国新的“四大发明”：高速铁路，共享单车，网上购物和 支付宝。文章结构为总分总结构。第一、二段总起全文，介绍了中国新的“四大发明”，因此围绕这一句话可以展开概述。
9、第三、四、五和第六段详细介绍新的“四大发明”。第四段介绍高速铁路，其中“Theinvention of the high-speed railway makes it easy to thousands of miles a day.”指出高速铁路的发明使得交通更加快速，故可根据本句进行概述为 High-speed rail makestrips faster than before.；第五段介绍共享单车“Short walks become more convenientand faster, and carbon missions are reduced, which is friendl
10、y to the environment.”指出共享单车使短途行走变得更加方便快捷，减少了碳排放任务，对环境友好。故可根据本句进行概述为 Shared bike lets the short walks become faster, more convenient andenvironmentally friendly.；第五段介绍了网上购物，指出“total transactions (销售额) on November 11 and December 12 hit a record high every year.”高额的销售额意味着更多的商业机会；第六段介绍支付宝“A software which can replace cash payment.”可替代现金支付，故可根据本句进行概括为 Alipay will gradually replace cash payment. 。最后一段阐述新“四大发明”对中国的影响为：become the great powerful technologicalcountry。