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1、【专项突破】2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十五）【专项突破】短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Passage 1On a snowy winter night, a bus with 45 passenger had an accident
2、because the wet road. And all of them were trapping in the bus and what is worse, the bus ran out of gas and it was very cold in it. They could do nothing but to wait for help. A man who lived nearby saw that had happened. He and some villagers succeeded in open the door and helped all of them out o
3、f the bus. He took them to his home but offered food and water and even some warm clothes to the children. They spent two days in their home and finally help came. All of them were thankfully for their help.Passage 2A foreign student graduated with honors from a finely university in Germany. He expe
4、cted to find a good job and have a bright future. But in his disappointment, he wasnt even giving the chance for an interview! The third time he was refused, he phoned the company to ask how. We dont employ dishonest people in Germany is the answer. What was wrong? Shortly before he arrived in Germa
5、ny, he found easy to steal subway rides. But he often rode without a ticket and was caught up three times. Now he had to pay a high price for his own behavior. We should all keep in minds: honesty is the best policy.Passage 3One year ago,I had a special English lesson hold at the railway station. It
6、 was quite different from the regular English classes we were familiar to, for we had no textbooks, no blackboard or no fixed seats. Gathering at the entrance of the station, we told to collect as many English words and sentences as possible here. Curious and excited, we walked around the station an
7、d looked everywhere, search for any information in English. Whenever an English word comes into sight, the class would burst into the cheers as if we had discovered a new world. With the Chinese translation and vividly pictures, we could figure out its meaning with ease.Now, this unforgettable lesso
8、n still encourages me to be an active learner where I go.Passage 4Dear Mandy， Pm not doing well in my lessons at school，especial in maths. My dad says I must try hardbecause he wants me go to university. He thinks Im lazy，but its not true. I work really hard，often study late into the night！Ive tried
9、 to talk to my mother，but she always said I have to workas hard like my brother does. My brother doesnt study very hard，and he always gets excellentgrades. Its not fair！ The only thing I like it is art. My teacher says rm the best student shes had for year. WhenI told my dad，all he said was，“You mus
10、tnt waste your time in art. You must focus your mindon your lessons！”Pm feeling quite puzzling what to do nowWould you please help me out?Thanks a lot！ Yours sincerely， LisaPassage 5Theres an old man in our village calling Old Joe who said to be 110 years old. This cant be proved though he doesnt ha
11、ve a birth certificate. All his personal papers were destroy during the World War II. I dont know if he really is so old, and it doesnt matter. He certainly looks very old. Of course, he is often asked question by people who want to be told the secret of long life. Old Joe always answered them like
12、this, “If you are offered a cigarette, never accept it; if you are annoyed by someone, never lose his temper; and if you are asked foolishly questions, never answer them.”Passage 6Dear Jin Jing，Your problem is common one among middle school studentsMaybe the following advices can help youFirst in al
13、l, believe in yourselfYour greatest problem is that you lack self-confidenceThe first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmatesOne smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any wordsYour smile will show that you are friendly to himNext, trying talking with a student who is as
14、shy as you or who share the same interest as youYou can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbiesUnless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or herOnce you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possiblyYours,Lily2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十五）答案Pa
15、ssage 1On a snowy winter night , a bus with 45 passenger had an accident because the passengers ofwet road .And all of them were trapping in the bus and what is worse, the bus ran out trapped wasof gas and it was very cold in it. They could do nothing but to wait for help . A man who lived nearby sa
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17、 thankfully for their help. thankfulPassage 2A foreign student graduated with honors from a finely university in Germany. He expected tofinefind a good job and have a bright future. But in his disappointment, he wasnt even giving theto givenchance for an interview! The third time he was refused, he
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19、n behavior. We should allkeep in minds: honesty is the best policy.mindPassage 3One year ago, I had a special English lesson hold at Shijiazhuang Railway Station. It was quite different heldfrom the regular English classes we were familiar to, for we had no textbooks, no blackboard or no with andfix
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21、g cameclass would burst into the cheers as if we had discovered a new world. With the Chinese translationand vividly pictures, we could figure out its meaning with ease. vividNow, this unforgettable lesson still encourages me to be an active learner where I go. whereverPassage 4Dear Mandy,Im not doi
22、ng well in my lessons at school, especial in maths. My dad says I must try hard especiallybecause he wants me go to university. He thinks Im lazy, but its not true. I work really hard, to often study late into the night! Ive tried to talk to my mother, but she always said I have to work studying say
23、sas hard like my brother does. My brother doesnt study very hard, and he always gets excellent as but grades. Its not fair!The only thing I like it is art. My teacher says Im the best student shes had for year. When yearsI told my dad, all he said was, “You mustnt waste your time in art. You must fo
24、cus your mind on on / overyour lessons!” Im feeling quite puzzling what to do now. Would you please help me out? Thanks puzzleda lot!Yours sincerely,LisaPassage 5试题分析：题目主要考查学生对冠词、名词、并列连词、形容词、过去分词、定语从句、状语从句、时态【答案】：BCD等语法知识的掌握情况。(2)根据资料(5)，判断所涉及的事项哪些不应计入甲公司20X4年度合并利润表中的其他综合收益项目，并说明理由。【小题51】考查过去分词作定语。m
25、an和call之间是动宾关系，即一个被叫做.的人，应该用过去分词作定语，故把calling改为called。A.系统分析B.系统调查C.系统设计D.系统实施【小题52】考查定语从句。who引导一个定语从句，sb be said to be/do sth据说某人.，根据“Theres an old man”可知短文用的是一般现在时，故在who和said之间加is。【小题53】考查状语从句。句意：这得不到证明，因为他没有出生证明。前后是因果关系，故把though改为because。(1)根据附件l：【小题54】考查被动语态。papers和destroy是动宾关系，即文件被毁坏，故用被动语态，故把d
26、estroy改为destroyed。【小题55】考查冠词。World War II二战，是专有名词，前面不需要冠词，故把the去掉。因增持对子公司的股权增加资本公积3 200万元；【小题56】考查并列连词。句意：我不知道他是不是真的有那么大年纪了，但这无关紧要。前后是转折关系，故把and改为but。B维蛋白原 E组织因子【小题57】考查名词。经常有人问他问题，question问题，是可数名词，被问过的问题不止一个，应该用复数形式，故把question改为questions。答案 B【小题58】考查时态。always与一般现在时连用，且根据“Theres an old man.I dont kn
27、ow.he is often.who want to.”可知，短文使用的是一般现在时，故把answered改为answers。【小题59】考查物主代词。根据“if you are annoyed.”可知，这里说的是“你”，即第二人称you，应该用形容词性物主代词your，故把his改为your。【小题60】考查形容词作定语。副词修饰动词、形容词或句子；形容词作定语修饰名词，这里修饰名词questions，应该用形容词，故把foolishly改为foolish。(1)4月1曰，甲公司收到先征后返的增值税600万元。考点：考查冠词；名词；并列连词；形容词；过去分词；定语从句；状语从句；时态【答案】Passage 610、系统连续无故障工作时间1.is后加a 2.advices改为advice 3.first in改为first of 4.去掉it5.loud改为louder 6.him改为them 7.trying改为try 8.share改为shares9.Unless改为If 10.possibly改为possible