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1、Unit 6 A Special MachineWriting- Exposition说明文,No.47 Middle School 胡月峰,1/9/2022,A SPECIAL MACHINE-FlOWBEE,The Flowbee was invented in the late 1980s. What is it? It is a special machine. It cuts hair with little mess. Was it invented by a barber? No! The Flowbee was made by an American man who built
2、 things with wood. In 1987, Rick Hunt was working in his wood shop. A lot of wood was cut in the shop, so little pieces of wood were everywhere. Pieces of wood were on the ground, on Hunts shirt, and even in his hair. The shop had a big vacuum for cleaning. Hunt used it to clean not only the shop, b
3、ut also himself. The pieces of wood were easily sucked from his clothes and his hair. As Hunts hair was cleaned by the vacuum, he got an idea. “This would be a good way to cut hair with less mess,” he thought. Some special parts were added to a common vacuum. In this way, the first Flowbees were bui
4、lt. Those first Flowbees were sold out of Hunts home. Then, a fall festival was held near Hunts home. He took all of his Flowbees there, and a lot of people bought them. Next, Hunt went on television with the Flowbee. More and more Flowbees were sold. More than a million Flowbees were sold in Americ
5、a over the next ten years. Today, this interesting machine is sold to people around the world. Hunts clever way to cut hair really works. Sometimes great ideas come from surprising places.,1. Reading for Main Idea,Whats the main idea of the passage?A. It tells us when the Flowbee was invented. B. It
6、 tells us how the Flowbee was invented.C. It tells us who invented the Flowbee.,2. Reading for Structure,Whats the style(文体) of the passage?A. Narration 记叙文 B. Exposition 说明文C. Argumentation 议论文,2. Reading for Structure,Which kind of exposition is it?A. Exposition about justification 事理性说明文 B. Expos
7、ition about objects 事物性说明文,It tells us some advice about how to do sth.,It introduces something, such as a building,a festival or a place.,1/9/2022,A SPECIAL MACHINE,The Flowbee was invented in the late 1980s. What is it? It is a special machine. It cuts hair with little mess. Was it invented by a b
8、arber? No! The Flowbee was made by an American man who built things with wood. In 1987, Rick Hunt was working in his wood shop. A lot of wood was cut in the shop, so little pieces of wood were everywhere. Pieces of wood were on the ground, on Hunts shirt, and even in his hair. The shop had a big vac
9、uum for cleaning. Hunt used it to clean not only the shop, but also himself. The pieces of wood were easily sucked from his clothes and his hair. As Hunts hair was cleaned by the vacuum, he got an idea. “This would be a good way to cut hair with less mess,” he thought. Some special parts were added
10、to a common vacuum. In this way, the first Flowbees were built. Those first Flowbees were sold out of Hunts home. Then, a fall festival was held near Hunts home. He took all of his Flowbees there, and a lot of people bought them. Next, Hunt went on television with the Flowbee. More and more Flowbees
11、 were sold. More than a million Flowbees were sold in America over the next ten years. Today, this interesting machine is sold to people around the world. Hunts clever way to cut hair really works. Sometimes great ideas come from surprising places.,Title,Beginning,Body,Ending, Lead to the topic 引出话题
12、, Explain the topic解释话题, Conclude the topic总结话题,Reading for Structure, Show the topic展示话题,Title,Beginning,Body,Ending,Match them together. 左右栏内容连线。,Parts of the Exposition,Roles(作用) in the Exposition,Reading for Structure,Title,A Special Machine,Show the topic展示话题,clear 清晰性,direct 直接性,Flowbee,How to
13、 write a title?,A.在你的心里是不是有这样一个地方，在那里你畅游书海，学习新知.这个地方一定是你的学校。下面请你介绍一下你的学校吧。,MY SCHOOL,MOTHERS DAY,B. 母亲赐予我们生命，母亲也是我们人生的第一任老师。请你介绍一下母亲节的由来以及在母亲节为母亲都做了些什么？,Beginning,Lead to the topic 引出话题,Level 1Connect the topic 关联话题,Level 2Reveal the center 点明中心,Level 3 Transition below 过渡下文,Three levels（三个层次）,Readi
14、ng for Structure,How to write the beginning,Beginning,Have you ever heard of Flowbee before? It is a special machine that cuts hair. It has changed our way of cutting hair. Now let me introduce the Flowbee to you.,Questions, good sentences,sayings,Three levels （三个层次）,Level 1Connect the topic 关联话题,Le
15、vel 2Reveal the center 点明中心,Level 3 Transition below 过渡下文,Let me introduce to you.2. I will tell you about ,Ending,Conclude the topic总结话题,Level 1 Conclude the topic 总结全文,Level 3Sublimate the topic 升华主题,Level 2 Deepen the topic 深化主题,Three levels （三个层次）,Reading for Structure,How to write the ending,Th
16、ree levels （三个层次）,A Flowbee is really a useful invention. It was invented by an American man who built things with wood. Sometimes great ideas come from surprising places.,Ending,Description of the contents,Description of the contents,Description of the contents,Exposition Structure 说明结构,Reading for
17、 Structure,Body,Reading for Exposition Structure,total total structure总-分-总 结构,score structure总-分 结构,sub-total structure分-总 结构,Reading for Exposition Structure,total total structure总-分-总 结构,Reading for Exposition Structure,total total structure总-分-总 结构,Description of the contents,Reading for Exposit
18、ion Order,Body,Exposition Structure 说明结构,Exposition Order 说明顺序,Reading for Exposition Order,Exposition Order,Time Order时间顺序,Space Order空间顺序,Logic Order逻辑顺序,Reading for Exposition Order,Whats the exposition order of this passage?(此篇文章的说明顺序是什么？) A. Time order 时间顺序B. Space order 空间顺序C. Logic order 逻辑顺序
19、,Description of the contents,Reading for Exposition Content,Body,Exposition Structure 说明结构,Exposition Order 说明顺序,Exposition Content说明内容,Reading for Exposition Content,Fill in the blanks according to the body part.,1987,Then,television,Today,Over,Reading for Exposition Content,In1987 , the first Flow
20、bees were built. Next, they were sold on a fall festival.Then, Hunt went on television with the Flowbee.Over the next ten years, they were sold in America.Today, it is sold to people around the world. ,Exposition Content 说明内容,Reading for Exposition Method,Body,Exposition Structure 说明结构,Exposition Or
21、der 说明顺序,Exposition Content说明内容,Exposition Method说明方法,Reading for Exposition Method,Exposition Method 说明方法,How to write the body,How to write the body,Explanation methods(说明方法）：,A hobby can be almost anything that a person likes to do in his spare time.,下定义denefition,举例子example,打比方contrast,I have ma
22、ny hobbies, such as reading, skating, and watching TV.,I can fly like a bird in my reading sky.,.European football, is played in 80 countries, making it the most widely played sport in the world. American football, on the other hand, is popular only in North America.,作比较comparision,.There are many g
23、ames which boys and girls can play after their school work is done， for instance,football,tennis, and kite-flying.,举例子example,列数字number,Find out the sentences with exposition methods in groups. 分组讨论，找出文中所使用的“说明方法”。,Exposition Method 说明方法,Reading for Exposition Method,Find out the sentence with expos
24、ition methods. 找出使用“说明方法”进行表达的句子。,definition 下定义,Reading for Exposition Method,Find out the exposition methods. 找出文中所使用的“说明方法”。,example 举例子,Reading for Exposition Method,Find out the exposition methods. 找出文中所使用的“说明方法”。,number 列数字,Body,Exposition Structure 说明顺序,Exposition Order 说明顺序,Exposition Conten
25、t说明内容,Exposition Method说明方法,C,O,M,S,B,Reading for Structure,主旨段,Reading for Structure,C O M B S,“梳理”结构法,Lets know more about our hometown, Harbin!,Harbin,liev.位于,in the northeast of China,position：,weather：cool and nice in summer long and cold in winter,feature：old and modern(现代的),sights: the Sun Is
26、land, the Central Street, the Ice and Snow World, Yabuli Skiing Center,transport：convenient but busy,写 作 训 练美丽冰城，我的家。这里四季分明，人杰地灵，交通便捷，景点繁多。下面就请你向大家介绍一下我们可爱的家乡吧！要求： 围绕中心，突出主题，完成主旨段。2.合理架设“说明结构”，正确使用“说明顺序”，充分体现“说明内容”，恰当使用“说明方法”（使用COMBS方法）3.需要包含信息：position, weather, area, population, feature, transport
27、, sights。4.至少80词。,This is a beautiful city, which has beautiful ice and snow. This is an attractive city, which has attractive sights. This is a young city, which has a young history. Which city is it? Its my hometown-Harbin. Let me introduce it to you. position: in the northeast of china area: 53.1
28、 thousand square kilometers population: about 10 million weather: long and cold in winter feature：old and modern(现代的) sights: the Sun Island, the Central Street, the Ice and Snow World, Yabuli Skiing Center transport：convenient but busy This is my hometown where I live for many years. As the saying
29、goes, “Seeing is believing.” Harbin is really a good place to visit. I love my hometown. Welcome to my hometown.,_,My Hometown,BODy,Title,Beginning,Ending,Showing Time,Show your passage to everyone, and tell us how you use “COMBS”. 向大家展示你的作品，并解释在文章中你是如何使用“COMBS”方法的。,What did we learn from this lesson?,青青校园，我们的乐园。幽静的小路，热闹的操场，雄伟的教学楼，明亮的教室，朗朗的读书声，校园中无处不留下你我的身影。下面请你向大家介绍一下你就读的初中校园吧！要求： 1. 围绕中心，突出主题；2. 合理架设“说明结构”，正确使用“说明顺 序”，充分体现“说明内容”，恰当使用“说 明方法”；3. 至少80词。,Homework,1/9/2022,Thank you !,