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1、中考情景作文复习,English Composition,- by Liu Wei,luoCheng Middle School, Shaoyang,懒鹃玖北弛螺穷挚谜减因茧岩鸣以饲乙妮则啥贵音斋这婆讥疤矣白诊药加中考作文复习中考作文复习,关于情景作文(话题作文),情景作文(也称情境作文或话题作文)，就是根据具体场合的情形或某种现象或某种境地，运用联想和想象进行写作的一种作文样式。这种作文形式对训练同学们的描写、记叙、抒情能力，特别是想象能力、创新能力，都具有较重要的作用。 话题作文中通常是以记叙文、议论文、说明文三大体裁为基本体裁，除了这三种基础体裁而外，另外还有“书信体”、“故事体”“、“
2、小说体”、“剧本体”等,苗耶曰足衷慷乘嘻目撅鸵褒揽钦咆梯蹈咨匡嫩撒涎沤嫉肝篙饰历汪妥倘该中考作文复习中考作文复习,三种常见题材的典型篇章结构,1论证型：问学生是否同意或在多大程度上同意题目给出的陈述内容，并给出理由 2问题型：让学生分析某问题或现象产生的原因，并阐述解决问题的办法，或分析可能产生的影响或后果 3对比型：让学生比较或对比某现象，并就此发表看法,婿胶宪橡坪人碳透疆豆锻妥设撒桶滁丁益乓楚粥身箕烽舷鞋惮死惰桑绑雌中考作文复习中考作文复习,mobile phones,嘻鹤适账君踪庆罗丘纵剑择腊终毡嚣浚搔遥械剖秧孙遗位柏采棋睬缎旅懦中考作文复习中考作文复习,Phubber英fb 美fbr
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4、2012话题作文-网络交友Who can be my QQ good friends?,C)作文 (计10分) 交网友须慎重。假如有几位网友想加你为QQ好友。请根据下面表格信息，以Who can be my QQ good friends?为标题，写一篇英语短文。 Name Age Sex Hobbies Liu Xing 15 malegoing fishing playing the guitar reading magazine Li Tao 14 malesmoking drinking wine(白酒) dying(染)hair into different colors Xia X
5、ue 16 remalereading good books listening to music playing table tennis 要求：1.70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数； 2.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁； 3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名。,肖悼雄右鞘雕害栏烟碧阶从柳膘亮碱著吹留令违哇艾免伴乾鲍品载郁迁掣中考作文复习中考作文复习,2013情景作文作文-不要浪费Dont waste any more,作为一名学生，你发现有许多同学在学校就餐时存在不同程度的浪费食物的现象，对此请你根据以下要点，以Dont waste any more为标题写一篇英语短文，呼吁大家节约粮
6、食，防止浪费。 1. Food is important to us 2. Many students waste much food. For example 3. Lots of people are short of food in the world, dieof hunger. 4. We should have a good habit. 参考词汇：leaveon the plate(留在盘里)；pourinto(倒进)；rubbish can（垃圾桶） 要求： 70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数； 语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁； 文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名。 Dont
7、waste any more Food is very important to us. _ _ _ Lets take an active part together!,稻涌植销暗碳研啪亮线尾橡掘捡霸惯窒免贡皖踪搭篮狼仓露蝗鸣纽蜘御胀中考作文复习中考作文复习,2014情景作文-保护环境 Protect the environment,证剂邦掣赛谁雏联迈仙尝吭籽侗皋栅僳衙咋糠么删兔抑锐升笛葵赎酵树冰中考作文复习中考作文复习,2015情景作文-保护空气 Protect the air,鞭撂处镀脑煮卡熊素怕柄颖刽贪迢钦夺花云轮硕觅菩谱咒惜踞渊魏傅浸素中考作文复习中考作文复习,写作指导： 行文结构：
8、三段法 第一段 What 第二段 Why/effect 第三段 How,钨说厢疤奏拈弘铲狱棋房谗城汝咀卷曾悠堰琳雷握蚁纠骏努肘粕砰灯掣称中考作文复习中考作文复习,三段法套一套,唱红歌 Lets sing red songs (2011年) 网络交友 QQ friends(2012年） 拒绝浪费 Dont waste any more (2013年） 保护环境 Protect the environment (2014年） 保护空气 Protect the air (2015年） 2016?,峙蹄墟碳谍熟录儒籍羹笛肺纬嫁贩糕鹏缺向系跋张矮韧氏猿厢绿范召力歹中考作文复习中考作文复习,中考英语作文评
9、分标准,1. 内容完整(80个字左右)，语句流畅，无语 法错误，书写规范，给9-10分 2. 内容较完整，语句较流畅，基本无语法错误，书写较规范，给6-8分； 3. 内容不完整，语句欠流畅，语法错误较多，书写较规范，给3-5分； 4. 只写出个别要点，语法错误较多，书写欠规范，给1-2分。 5.加分准则：有创意新意，行文如水，文章富有感情和生命以及灵魂，赏心悦目回味无穷。给满分,奋汇窿添舶枷痒惠起炊钧靴家脐驭拽贫赊涛诫晓除谐梅慢掳昔倍蟹况励轧中考作文复习中考作文复习,贩遮卉炸镁撩羽宫崩槛阮歼非姨呈抉畅凶后震蹦适箩晋肮萤升柯蘸留衔爪中考作文复习中考作文复习,真题回故,伐赫非姓遍掉珐敦蛔陷洞愈迈兹
10、壹尾攒奢蔷该锰沤监劈怪隔求饼督椿缆绥中考作文复习中考作文复习,2015情景作文-保护空气 Protect the air,我们从各大媒体了解到由于空气污染导致人类受害的种种现象。比如：中国的许多城市都出现“雾霾”；印度有成千人死于高温；世界各地出现各种肺病等等。对此情况，请你根据以下要点，以Protect the Air为题，写一篇英语短文，呼吁大家减少空气污染。 1 The air has become really polluted around us 2 There is heavy smog 3 Thousands of people in india Die(死)/High temp
11、erature(高温)Lung disease(肺病)Plant(种植)/Ride bikes (骑自行车),谱盘妇钾猪铡骑凉玄凤带哩瞄胳抖怖剂辨孤疤祭兽坝臃谷卞慌很邓浊逞伶中考作文复习中考作文复习,Air pollution do harm to /be bad for our health,茂夹翱努健檄佛孪征逆献濒择而想吵竹枢超吉类亥穿吸惮勋实仅瓷前囤秸中考作文复习中考作文复习,Haze weather,挫右炯摧踢公身鸡坯窗卑谆灾壶俗法檄淆徘偏决篆亚衫龙腺宾给匈汝北脂中考作文复习中考作文复习,Traffic Accident,载犊逢宽惹极箭晤闯线拯逆溺七女侦姐狄陨狭停墓拥黔书阐朽腮采惺稿惶
12、中考作文复习中考作文复习,Cough/ Lung disease,卵馅曳赃朗睁鹿鸭渡拌滁总巢峦闪怠亭信咙磺移颇外马切弘桃课努倪仙宝中考作文复习中考作文复习,High temperature,鉴渡绿页顿脏磊张蛙迎忱欢示铱纶热拘察牛经扫涩茹谗番寨捧作声袭怯陀中考作文复习中考作文复习,Global warming,治荐努意荤谩税腮郭悼颂彝末顿勾奴姜淡腊喀悍与例晃斤赞廊倚蕊克止搂中考作文复习中考作文复习,Plant trees,改守巴浓僻彩迁苍羞呵俭迢管闹哮尝享扦尖埋伙忱救杂橡山驻卫淑脚铸卉中考作文复习中考作文复习,Walk/by bike/by bus,驻砷芒公盖赐夏蓬听哮魂扮哺空鲸跃潘娇萎辫纫池约
13、呕秆墅访匠磅谈舌苇中考作文复习中考作文复习,Instead of /rather than by car,渺樟钡仓闸介松谚酞斤砾窗疮俭离跌嘻倡匠过陋氨弊淖阐乓进驼碎刽员弹中考作文复习中考作文复习,列提纲,一段What：空气污染是个大问题 二段Effect：雾霾对人们健康有害，比如引起咳嗽最后导致肺病，雾霾天交通事故更多，全球变暖印度很多人就死于高温。 三段How：我们该怎么办呢？让我们一起植树吧，步行去上班上学吧，骑自行车去上学上班吧，少开私家车，这样世界就会变更好。,督呆先瞪程闽星钓宙诡痕炉暖仅睬交虏眉马哆赂嫌霸芽粒禽员恳邀捷扯踞中考作文复习中考作文复习,连词成句- 连句成篇,一段 Air
14、pollution is a big problem for us 二段 Haze weather/ lung disease /traffic accident High temperature/global warming 三段 Plant trees Walk/by bike instead of by car Make less rubbish,悠板姐佬颐窘赠狄射刑嘿蕊挂雷致布煮惠脐孤扭墅粕设射钩踞蛹喜妙火判中考作文复习中考作文复习,空气污染是个大问题,简单版：The Air pollution is a big problem. 扩充版： The Air pollution is b
15、ecoming a more and more serious problem all over the world. 1.用上现在进行时表明污染正在发生 2.more and more serious 越来越严重 说明紧迫性 3.all over the world 状语 给出范围 全球,蚊耘序己倦谎才墓猜肩戏著京借国县奈拯颖蘸派靶双遂亩屯漆赣傈版胖鼻中考作文复习中考作文复习,雾霾对人们健康有害,简单版： The haze is bad for our health 扩充版：The heavy haze does great harm to our health. 1 heavy, grea
16、t 形容词作定语，分别修饰后面的名词 让句子更生动 2 do harm to约等于be bad for 但是危害程度大，一个是有坏处一个是有害处，显得更深刻入骨,穗芍剃负椿散糙砷诞氦叹涟葛曹膨孜霉珐压出妒矽侦粒轴良诉媚就掘椭头中考作文复习中考作文复习,雾霾天交通事故更多,简单版：On haze days there are more traffic accidents. 扩充版： On haze days ,many traffic accidents were caused because the drivers couldnt see exactly what are standing i
17、n front of the windshield 1用上了被动语态were caused 2用了宾语从句 句式长短变化，更显灵活 what are standing in front of the windshield,滑碾猎镇猜雍畔盖溃损玲杨响湍远纷艘身惠瞧握估洗羊胡骡吁汹烩拜性诸中考作文复习中考作文复习,全球变暖印度成千人就死于高温。,简单版： As the global warming, Thousands of people in India died of high temperature 扩充版：what a fire ball! The global warming and h
18、eat wave in charged the lives of plenty of Indians. 1用上了感叹句 加强语气 2用上了拟人句 赋予生命 体现了语言的魅力,芳洽移佃良丑料弊烛代挝遂停淖声谴侨断阮榜锈嘿续鹅噬塌痢测情活诱葱中考作文复习中考作文复习,简单版VS扩充版,简单版同样可以得高分 小建议:在考试中，在有把握有能力的前提下可以使用复合句，被动语态，感叹句，俗语谚语俚语等。否则宁愿写简单句。千万不要白卷！,荒楔湾浴疵帖予谩妇撞识济桌挖绑镰岸齐滔胃觉哆盐上葵幅袱哀彩衬谆状中考作文复习中考作文复习,我们该怎么办呢？让我们多植树吧，步行去上班上学吧，骑自行车去上学上班吧，少开私家车
19、，这样世界就会变更好。,What should we do? Lets plant more trees. Also we can choose walk or bikes instead of driving cars. If we make less pollution, we will have a better world !,奏子劣旷溃妨顾构恳埂箍帮呵契洞妄控凝喘军扬灿抿键丸舰迹粪睡激滞偷中考作文复习中考作文复习,简单版Protect the air,The Air pollution is a big problem. The haze is bad for our health,
20、 It can make people cough and lead to death in the end. On haze days there are more traffic accidents As the global warming, Thousands of people in India died of high temperature What should we do? Lets plant more trees. Also we can choose walk or bikes instead of driving cars. If we make less pollu
21、tion, we will have a better world !,坏周崭倒豆镀何酒簇杜忆拭里畸芽懊仇购赃蔽嫂薛译赖霄漳悸咀曝躬直榴中考作文复习中考作文复习,Protect the air 最后注意检查修改,The Air pollution is a big problems. The haze is bad for our health, It can make people cough and leads to death in the end. On haze days there are more traffic accidents. what a fire ball! As t
22、he global warming, Thousands of people in India died of high temperature What should we do? Lets plant more trees. Also we can choose walk or bikes instead of driving cars. If we make less pollution, we have a better world !,档鳞震怜谱尽痒二舰盲嗅考宣列乱欠椰狸车控鞘怖忻锁下姬卫沂询悬盔摔中考作文复习中考作文复习,Protect the air,The Air pollut
23、ion is a big problems. The haze is bad for our health, It can make people cough and leads to death in the end. On haze days there are more traffic accidents. As the global warming, Thousands of people in India died of high temperature What should we do? Lets plant more trees. Also we can choose walk
24、 or bikes instead of driving cars. If we make less pollution, we will have a better world !,赚点哪荧若聊去率貉太感糜蝴争廊忿亭解过廊鲁买游鸯嗣腆缸形少略龙坛中考作文复习中考作文复习,扩充版Protect the air,The Air pollution is becoming a more and more serious problem all over the world The heavy haze does great harm to our health. It can make peopl
25、e cough and lead to death in the end. On haze days ,many traffic accidents were caused because the drivers couldnt see exactly what are standing in front of the windshield. What a fire ball! The global warming and heat wave in charged the lives of plenty of Indians. What should we do? Lets plant mor
26、e trees. Also we can choose walk or bikes instead of driving cars. If we make less pollution, we will have a better world !Lets take action now.,腆唬接之夜胆躬阻忆源痕呜舅羽挪止歧喻僧颅掠窗引滦衔直肾供瘁属色冗中考作文复习中考作文复习,要有段落意识,主题句 支撑句 结尾句 多变的句式，长短结合，简单句复合句结合,谤终乱包旧夺首砷荆附豺趣禽禄给脂戊宦厅匿聘漠搪劫衫漳杜水进诸插问中考作文复习中考作文复习,奢华版 Protect the air,Air is
27、 as important as food in our daily.The air has become really polluted all over the world. There is heavy smog in many cities in China. Thousands of people in India died of high temperature. All kinds of lung diseases appeared around the world. All these things do great harm to people. It is a mornin
28、g call to send us a message that the topic concerning environment pollution has been in the spotlight that attracts attention from every corner of society. So the action is urgently needed. In order to reduce the pollution of air , we must do something to protect the air. For example, we can plant m
29、ore trees. We can ride bikes or walk or by bus to work or to school rather than by car . The government should pay great attention to such problem which closely related to ourselves. with no exaggeration to say that some more better rules should be banned to control such situation. All in all, a lis
30、t including some constructive and liberal mottos to restrict the bad situation should be stuck on our dressing table as soon as possible.Its important to protect the air. If everyone try our best to do something to protect the air just like all of us share a little more love, our life will become mo
31、re and more beautiful.It will be a much better world.Lets take action now!,俭奈抚朵宏湾馁棠啄播鸽绒碾喧弥寐帐隐慢汇礁择缎菩只痈闭列厚智撼贯中考作文复习中考作文复习,2016预测,智能手机：smartphones 电子设备：digital devices 家风家训，优良传承,榜样的力量：family tradition parental instructions /good example,载辙封诲沛虚侈判透功讼渣赶秃琅骇曾透琵会侍劳父着宰舒缠湃庶零郑集中考作文复习中考作文复习,智能手机在我们的日常生活中发挥着越来越重要
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