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1、2017年11月浙江省高考英语读后续写试题分析及范例点评 2017年11月浙江省高考英语科目写作第二节依然是读后续写，要求考生阅读一篇短文，根据所给情节续写，使短文与续写部分合成一个完整的故事。自2016年10月实行新高考以来，三次英语考试写作第二节均为读后续写，之所以如此，其中一个原因可能是，相比于其他类型考题而言，读后续写对测试学生的实际写作水平具有较高的有效性。这一点，从本次考试的试题与答题情况也可看出。 一、题型分析 与上两次考试一样，本次读后续写题依然是结合了对考生输入（input）与输出（output）两种语言能力的考查（关于这两者能力的考查和读后续写文体特征等，请参见笔者发表于本
2、刊2017年第3期的浙江省高考英语读后续写试题分析及范例点评一文）。但是，虽然同属记叙文，本次考试所给短文的故事线索与逻辑复杂程度明显高于上两次，主要表现为次要信息较多，对考生把握情节主线有较强的干扰（具体见本文“试题要点分析”和“答题建议”）。从这一点来看，本次考试对考生的输入考查要求远高于上两次。另外，从所给段落开头语来看，第二段的开放性很强，考生可以有多种情节接续的可能，甚至可以有体裁的转换。结合这两点，可以说，本次读后续写交际任务是否能很好地完成，基本上取决于对所给短文阅读理解任务完成的情况。这给我们的启示是，读后续写教学要见成效，阅读教学上所花的功夫绝对不能少。 二、题目要求 阅读下
3、面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 A Vacation with My Mother I had an interesting childhood. It was filled with surprises and amusements， all because of my motherloving， sweet， and yet absent-minded and forgetful. One strange family trip we took when I was eleven tells a lot about her. My two sets of grand
4、parents lived in Colorado and North Dakota， and my parents decided to spend a few weeks driving to those states and seeing all the sights along the way. As the first day of our trip approached， David， my eight-year-old brother， and I unwillingly said good-bye to all of our friends. Who knew if wed e
5、ver see them again？ Finally， the moment of our departure arrived， and we loaded suitcases， books， games， camping equipment， and a tent into the car and bravely drove off. We bravely drove off again two hours later after wed returned home to get the purse and travelers checks Mom had forgotten. David
6、 and I were always a little nervous when using gas station bathrooms if Mom was driving while Dad slept： “You stand outside the door and play lookout （放哨） while I go， and Ill stand outside the door and play lookout while you go.” I had terrible pictures in my mind： “Honey， where are the kids？” “What
7、？！ Oh， Gosh I thought they were being awfully quiet.” We were never actually left behind in a strange city， but we werent about to take any chances. On the fourth or fifth night， we had trouble finding a hotel with a vacancy. After driving in vain for some time， Mom suddenly got a great idea： Why di
8、dnt we find a house with a likely-looking backyard and ask if we could set up tent there？ David and I became nervous. To our great relief， Dad turned down the idea. Mom never could understand our objections （反?. If a strange family showed up on her front doorsteps， Mom would have been delighted. She
9、 thinks everyone in the world is as nice as she is. We finally found a vacancy in the next town. 注意： 1.所?m写短文的词数应为150左右； 3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 三、试题要点分析 四、答题建议 五、习作点评 学生习作1 The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Thinking of this tent， Mom suggested that we go camping
10、in the next village in excitement， with eyes glittering. Considering her enthusiasm， we all agreed. When the door of our car opened， Mom stormed out instantly and urged us to put up the tent. David and I were asked to pick up some branches to build a fire. And when we came back， Dad and Mom had alre
11、ady lain on the grass comfortably in front of the tent， talking merrily with a local boy at our age， who always cast a glimpse at this tent curiously. Soon we learnt that the boy in rags even didnt have a home to live. Of course， Mom “forgot” to take this tent with us again. We drove through several
12、 states and saw lots of great sights along the way. And we also had a nice time living with my grandparents during that vacation. But what impressed me most was that tent， which was forgotten deliberately by Mom. Though she did love going camping， she presented that poor boy with this tent out of sy
13、mpathy. It was Mom that made my childhood colorful. And it was also she that showed me the true meaning of giving. 点评1 学生习作2 The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. The reason was that we couldnt find a hotel， meaning that our tent had to be used and Moms dream came tru
14、e. Unexpectedly， David noticed that Mon disappeared after dinner. Eventually， it was Dad that found Mom. This absent-minded and forgetful woman explained that she just wanted to seek some charming flowers but got lost finally. However， thanks to Mom， we found a new way with more beautiful views wher
15、e she got lost. We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. All of a sudden， as driving， Mom asked， “Where is our camping equipment？” In the end， we had to accept the fact that we ought to return to find it left by Mom. In that time， I thought this trip was in a mess
16、because of Mom. But its obvious for me today that our trip should have been boring without this loving and sweet lady. There is no person even a wise lady that can match her， my loving， sweet， yet absent-minded and forgetful mom. 点评2 The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with
17、us. It seemed that we wouldnt get any chance to use it. Just when we felt tough to deal with it， a bagger came into our sight. Mom soon came up with an idea that we should give it to him. But the tent was really new and it costed us a lot. Despite Dad， David and Is objection， Mom determined her mind
18、 and gave it to the bagger， which means we couldnt do camping anymore. We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. The trip was wonderful and we really had a nice time in my grandparents house. Time flow so swiftly that we couldnt notice it. After we finished our trip
19、 and came back to our sweet house， Mom suddenly found something while checking the baggage. She whispered： “Where was the tent？” Thats my Mom， a really nice person but also a forgetful and absent-minded woman. ?c评3 学生习作4 The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. Until the
20、n， it hadnt shown any advantages yet. David and I felt deeply upset about the travel. It didnt seem like camping or travelling but worrying about Mom all the time. The decisions she made and the actions she did must be taken good care of. However， Mom was lighted and was ready to continue the trip.
21、She didnt say any words about the tent， even though Dad had mentioned it many times. Without any hesitation， we continued the trip. She drove happily， while David and I sat quietly behind. We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. It had been several times that my b
22、rother screamed out “What a fantastic scenery！” The trip became more interesting. I began to talk with Mom and Dad. I felt warmth through Moms excited voice. We smiled and laughed along the way. With the wonderful sights beside us， we all enjoyed the trip. That day， I realized that my mom was actual
23、ly the nicest person in the world. It was her that brought light to our lives. 点评4 学生习作5 The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. David like the tent very much. He like sleeping in the tent. We can sleep in the tent. And we can not found the place to sleep. But mom still
24、 said it is a trouble. she always wanted to find a vacancy to sleep. But I thinked. the tent is great. I could see stars and the moon when I sleep in the tent. And I can look around the nation. We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. I like the trip very much. I c
25、ould see a funny mom and a funny dad They always didnt agree another. And I also saw many beatiful views. I like this views. Than we visited our grand Parents. They were healthy. And they can play games with us. We lived at grand parents house some days. Then we baced our home. I lived the vacation
26、with my mother. ?c评5 学生习作6 The next day we remembered the brand-new tent we had brought with us. I and David were very shocked. I and David got to the tent fast， we only can cried and save help， At that time， my mom go back， she help we go out in the trouble. We drove through several states and saw lots of great sights along the way. Though a few days， wee get the Colorado and North Dakota， we was very exsicing. At night， I and David had a dinner with my two sets of grandparents and go back with mom. I mind that， nobody as nice as my mom 点评6 六、结语