《高中英语作文训练.ppt》由会员分享，可在线阅读，更多相关《高中英语作文训练.ppt（25页珍藏版）》请在三一文库上搜索。
1、书面表达训练,如何审题、如何遣词造句,如何审题,最近，你校师生帮助辍学的李明同学返校。请根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观介绍这一情况。,注意：1、信的开头已为你写好。 2、词数：100左右。 3、参考词汇：捐款 offer money; 募捐collect money,范例 1,如何审题？,1、审定体裁、题材； 2、审定人称； 3、审定时态； 4、审定要点； 5、审定结构。,1.审定体裁、题材： 2.审定人称： 3.审定时态： 4.审定要点： 5.审定结构：,书信、李明遭遇 第三和第一人称 现在时、过去时 李明1.2.3；师生1.2.3. 可分为两部分,审题提示,最近，你校师生帮助辍学
2、的李明同学返校。请根据下表提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观介绍这一情况。,Li Ming was one of the students in our school. He was good at his studies and always ready to help others. His father died and his mother is seriously ill in bed. He had to leave school.,学生习作,如何遣词造句,The whole school was shocked at the news. Every teacher and stud
3、ent offered money to him. They went out to collect money for him. With their help, Li Ming returned to school soon.,学生习作,如何遣词造句,Li Ming was one of the students in our school. He was good at his studies and always ready to help others. His father died and his mother is seriously ill in bed. He had to
4、 leave school.,习作提升,Li Ming is a student of our school. He is not only good at his studies but also always ready to help others. But he had to leave school because his father died and his mother is seriously ill. As a result, he had to make money to help his family.,The whole school was shocked at t
5、he news. Every teacher and student offered money to him. They went out to collect money. With their help, Li Ming returned to school soon.,习作提升,Hearing the news, all the teachers and students were shocked. In order to help Li Ming, we decided to offer money to him and some students went out to colle
6、ct money for him in the streets. With our help, Li Ming has already returned to school.,Dear editor， Im writing to tell you what the teachers and students have done to help a student who discontinued his studies in our school. Li Ming is a student of our school. He is not only good at his studies bu
7、t also always ready to help others. But he had to leave school because his father died and his mother is seriously ill. As a result, he had to make money to help his family. Hearing the news, all the teachers and students were shocked. In order to help Li Ming, we decided to offer money to him and s
8、ome students went out to collect money for him in the streets. With our help, Li Ming has already returned to school. With best wishes! (100) Yours, Wei Fang,定稿誊写,如何遣词造句,范例 2,题目：根据以下提示，用英语写一篇介绍香港的短文，字数100字左右。 香港位于中国的东南部，面积1045平方公里，人口600多万，被称为“东方明珠”。1842年鸦片战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将香港割让给英国。1997年她已回到祖国的怀抱，其前景会更美好
9、。 参考词汇：明珠 pearl，鸦片 opium。,理清要点 1、香港的地理位置、面积、人口和特点。 2、鸦片战争后香港的处境。 3、1997年她回到祖国的怀抱。 4、其前景会更美好。,题目：根据以下提示，用英语写一篇介绍香港的短文，字数100字左右。 香港位于中国的东南部，面积1045平方公里，人口600多万，被称为“东方明珠”。1842年鸦片战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将香港割让给英国。1997年她已回到祖国的怀抱，其前景会更美好。 参考词汇：明珠 pearl，鸦片 opium。,题目：根据以下提示，用英语写一篇介绍香港的短文，字数100字左右。 香港位于中国的东南部，面积1045平方公里，
10、人口600多万，被称为“东方明珠”。1842年鸦片战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将香港割让给英国。1997年她已回到祖国的怀抱，其前景会更美好。 参考词汇：明珠 pearl，鸦片 opium。,1.审定体裁、题材： 2.审定人称： 3.审定时态： 4.审定要点： 5.审定结构：,介绍、香港 第三人称 现在时、过去时、将来时 1.2.3.4. 可分为两部分或三部分,要点 1、香港的地理位置、面积、人口和特点。 2、鸦片战争后香港的处境。 3、1997年她回到祖国的怀抱。 4、其前景会更美好。,译写单句,1. 香港位于中国的东南部，面积1045平方公里，人口600多万，被称为“东方明珠”。 Hong
11、Kong lies in the southeast of China. Her area is 1,045k. Her population is more than 6 million. She is called “The Pearl of the East”,要点 1、香港的地理位置、面积、人口和特点。 2、鸦片战争后香港的处境。 3、1997年她回到祖国的怀抱。 4、其前景会更美好。,译写单句,2. 1842年鸦片战争后，当时的中国政府被迫将香港割让给英国。 She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War. 1997年她已回到
12、祖国的怀抱， In 1997, she returned to motherland. 4. 其前景会更美好 Her future is / will be very beautiful.,1. Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. Her area is 1,045k. Her population is more than 6 million. She is called “the Pearl of the East”. Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. Her area is 1,045k a
13、nd (. Her) population is more than 6 million. She is called “The Pearl of the East” 2. She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War. In 1997, she returned to motherland. 4. Her future is very beautiful. She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War. In 1997, she returned to motherland
14、 and (. Her) future is very beautiful.,连句成篇,Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. Her area is 1,045k and population is more than 6 million. She is called “the Pearl of the East” . Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of 1,045k and has a population of more than 6 million. She
15、 is well-known as “the Pearl of the East”.,检查润色,It,to us that she is called,She was given up to Britain after the 1842 Opium War. In 1997, she returned to motherland and future is very beautiful.,检查润色,In 1842, the then Chinese government was forced to give up Hong Kong to Britain after the Opium War
16、, and the people in Hong Kong suffered a lot. After the return of Hong Kong to China in 1997, the people of Hong Kong are united more with the Chinese people in mainland China, and they will work hard to make her more beautiful.,Hong Kong lies in the southeast of China. she has an area of1,045k and
17、has a population of more than 6 million. It is well-known to us that she is called “the Pearl of the East”. In 1842, the then Chinese government was forced to give up Hong Kong to Britain after the Opium War, and the people in Hong Kong suffered a lot . After the return of Hong Kong to China in 1997
18、, the people of Hong Kong are united more with the Chinese people in mainland China, and they will work hard to make her more beautiful.,定稿誊写,实际操练,假如你班要就“如何为高考做准备”开一个班会，请根据以下内容写一篇发言稿，备考过程中要注意的谈谈你对要注意的事项及建议理由： 1. 保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气。 2. 目标明确、正确评价自己。太低的目标使人松懈，太高的目标使人丧失信心 3. 与父母、老师或同学沟通帮助走出困境 4.
19、 作息合理，饮食均衡，以保持旺盛的精力。 注意： 1.词数100左右，开头已为你写好（不计入总词数） 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 参考词汇：明确的（definite） 评价（estimation） No doubt every Senior 3 students wishes to be successful in the National college Entrance Examination. _,要点,1. 保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气。 2. 目标明确、正确评价自己。太低的目标使人松懈，太高的目标使人丧失信心 3. 与父母、老师或同学沟通帮助走
20、出困境 4. 作息合理，饮食均衡，以保持旺盛的精力。,如何遣词造句,表示原因 1）There are three reasons for this. 2）The reasons for this are as follows. 3）The reason for this is obvious. 4）The reason for this is not far to seek. 5）The reason for this is that. 6）We have good reason to believe that.,表示好处 1）It has the following advantages.
21、2）It does us a lot of good. 3）It benefits us quite a lot. 4）It is beneficial to us. 5）It is of great benefit to us.,表示坏处 1）It has more disadvantages than advantages. 2）It does us much harm. 3）It is harmful to us.,如何遣词造句,表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能 1）It is important（necessary，difficult，convenient， possible）for
22、sb.to do sth. 2）We think it necessary to do sth. 3）It plays an important role in our life.,表示措施 1）We should take some effective measures. 2）We should try our best to overcome （conquer） the difficulties. 3）We should do our utmost in doing sth. 4）We should solve the problems that we are confronted（fac
23、ed）with.,如何遣词造句,表示事实、现状 1）We cannot ignore the fact that. 2）No one can deny the fact that. 3）There is no denying the fact that. 4）This is a phenomenon that many people are interested in. 5）However，thats not the case.,表示看法 1）People have（take，adopt，assume）different attitudes towards sth. 2）People have
24、 different opinions on this problem. 3）People take different views of（on）the question. 4）Some people believe that.Others argue that.,如何遣词造句,表示结论 1）In short，it can be said that . 2）It may be briefly summed up as follows. 3）From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that .,套语 1）I
25、ts well known to us that 2）As is known to us， 3）This is a topic that is being widely talked about. 4）From the graph（table，chart）listed above，it can be seen that . 5）As a proverb says，“Where there is a will， there is a way”.,Write a short letter asking Copernicus to publish his ideas so everyone can read them.,Practice makes perfect !,