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1、综合介绍及便条写作 2012年11月,英语专业四级写作,Brief Introduction of TEM4,Requirements: 1.Number of word of the essay:about 200 words and 35minutes 2.Marking: clear central idea; good organization; few or no mistakes of grammar and word; neatness of the paper,测试形式,本部分分为主观试题, 在主观答题卷2上作答。分两节:Section A和Section B. Section
2、 A: Composition 15% 35分钟 本节是命题作文,文章体裁主要属于说明文 议论文或记叙文的范围 Section B: Note-Writing 10% 10分钟 本节是写便条.,测试范例2：2012年TEM-4写作部分,PART VI WRITING 【45 MIN】 SECTION A COMPOSITION 35 MIN The Dragon Boat Festival(端午节)is one of the important national festivals in ChinaWrite on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of abo
3、ut 200 words on the following topic： The Dragon Boat Festival First, you should tell what you know about the festival Second, you should describe how you or other people usually observe the festival Marks will be awarded for content, organization，language and appropriatenessFailure to follow the ins
4、tructions may result in a loss of marks,SECTION B NOTE-WRITING 10 MIN Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: The winter vacation was over，and you came back by train yesterday. Your friend (Michael or Lucy) went to the railway station to meet you and
5、 helped cleaning your dorm. Now, write him/her a note, expressing your gratitude and offering your help in return Marks will be awarded for content organization, language and appropriateness.,测试范例2：2011年TEM-4写作部分,PART VI WRITING 45 MIN SECTION A COMPOSITION 35 MIN Recently government agencies in som
6、e big cities have been studying the possibility of putting a “pollution tax” on private cars. The amount of tax private car owners would have to pay would depend on the emission levels, i.e. engine or vehicle size. This has caused quite a stir among the public. Some regard it as an effective way to
7、control the number of cars and reduce pollution in the city. But others dont think so. What is your opinion?,Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Should Private Car Owners be Taxed for Pollution? You are to write in three parts. In the first part, stat
8、e specifically what your opinion is. In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the i
9、nstructions may result in a loss of marks.,SECTION B NOTE-WRITING 10 MIN Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: During the summer vacation you would like to invite your best friend to your home town. Write a note to him/her, extending your invitatio
10、n and telling him/her how to get to your home town. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness.,(一)写作题的性质,写作是人们表达的一种重要手段，我们称之为comprehensive test的综合测试，体现的是学生综合运用语言的能力。因为它不仅考核考生对词汇的掌握、对语法的应用 ，同时也考查了学生的表达能力、思维的逻辑性和条理性。我们知道，学习英语需掌握四种技能：听、说、读、写。听和读是语言的input(输入)过程，因而对于听力
11、和阅读的测试是考查学习者的被动英文技能；说和写是语言的output(输出)过程，对于口语和写作的测试则是考查学习者的主动英文技能。学习者的被动英文水平往往高于主动英文水平，因此听力理解材料的难度往往大于口语的内容，阅读理解材料的难度往往要大于写作。由此可见，在经 过两年基础专业课的学习后，学习者应该将重点放在把被动英文水平转化成主动英文水平上 。一旦我们的大脑有了大量的语言输出之后，就能达到出口成章、下笔有神的境界。,(二)英语专业四级写作要求,(1)能根据各种不同的听读材料笔头回答问题，复述内容写摘要、写提纲和记笔记。 (2)能根据题目列出写作提纲，在一小时内写出200250词的短文。 以上
12、均要求做到内容完整、条理清楚，语法基本正确，语言通顺恰当。 (3)能写一般的书信、通知、便条、请帖，填写简单的表格，格式正确，语言得体。 写作课培养学生初步写作能力，包括提纲、文章摘要、短文以及最简单的常用应用文。,(三)考试大纲对英语专业写作的要求和规定,(1)测试目的：按照英语专业基础阶段英语教学大纲的要求，学生在基础阶 段末期的英语写作能力。 (2)题型：主观试题，分为Section A和Section B两个部分。 Section A: Composition写作文 Section B: Note-writing写便条 (3)测试要求： a)作文。要求根据所给的题目和列出的写作提纲或图
13、表、数字统计表等(也附有写作提纲) 写一篇200词左右的短文，能做到内容切题、完整，条理清楚，文章结构严谨，语法正确，语言 通顺恰当。作文的类别有说明文、议论文或记叙文。考试时间为35分钟,计分15分，比重15%。 b)便条。要求根据提示写大约5060词的便条、通知、请帖等。要求做到格式正确，语言 得体。考试时间为10分钟。计分10分,比重10%.,(1)文章内容切题、丰富，文章通顺，表达清楚。 (2)行文流畅。 (3)组织严密，逻辑性强。 (4)句型多样化，句法结构正确。 (5)用词得体、恰当、丰富。 (6)语法正确。 (7)拼写及标点正确，书写整洁。,(四)英语专业四级写作作文的评分标准,
14、Personal interests: Hobbies; life style; fashion; traveling Teenagers problems: Generation gap; smoking; ideal; occupation and career;conceptions etc,Ranges of topics,（五）、作文命题所涉及的内容,Ranges of topics,Social issues: employments; environment; energy; media; traffic; marriage; fake commodities; crime; e
15、tc. School life: Method of studying; classroom activities; sports; personal relationship; lectures; militant training,etc New technologies: Commuter; cloning; space science; traffic tools; sea resources;,Four kinds of writing,Description1.detailed description, unmodified description 2.direct descrip
16、tion and indirect description 3. Description of person, of scene, of object,of place, Narrationaccording to the sequence of the time ,start from the beginning of the story or start from the end of the story, or start from the middle of the story by using flash back(Making clear of the time ,the plac
17、e,and the characters who are involved in the story),Exposition comparison and contrast; division and classification; cause and effect; illustration/exemplification; definition Argumentation Argument(idea, attitude, opinion)must be true,clear and keep the same from the beginning to the end. Evidence(
18、facts and theory)must be powerful and reasonable. Process of reasoning must be logically clear.(analogy, deduction and induction),1）Date：便条日期 2）Salutation：称呼 3）Body：正文 4）Signature：署名,Basic components of note-writing,便条写作分析,特点： 文内语言尽量通俗口语化，简单扼要，直截了当，无需使用客套语言。 便条虽简单，但中心务必突出，更要注明活动的时间及地点。 3. 便条不需邮寄，不用信
19、封。通常请人代为转交。有时可写在留言板和留言簿上。,Characteristics of note-writing,专业四级多便条的要求,专业四级多便条的要求如下：10分钟内写一个50-60字的便条，总分为10分，6分为及格线。 一 便条必须包括以下几个基本要素 1）Date：便条日期 2）Salutation：称呼 3）Body：正文 4）Signature：署名,二、评分标准 1. 格式：（占2分）：包括日期、称呼和结尾三部分 日期（DATE），位置在右上角或左上角。 正确：April 16th, 2011 April 16, 2011 April 16th April 16 16/4/2
20、011 4/16/2011 Abbreviations are usually used, Jan., Feb., Mar., Apr., May, June (Jun.), July (Jul.), Aug., Sept., Oct., Nov., and Dec.,称呼（HEADING），位置在日期下面一行左侧。 正确：(Dear) Mike:(,) 结尾（ENDING）： 正确：Truly/ Sincerely yours, Yours truly/ sincerely, Yours, Sincerely, Mike, Hilda（若在一行扣1分） Yours Sincerely（两个单
21、词的首字母都大写扣1分） 若名字没写或人名XXX（或Mike/ Hilda）扣1分。 格式需前后一致，如全左或全右，若不符合，扣1分。 凡不符合上述正确格式或表达均要扣1分。最多扣扣2分。,2. 内容：（占3分）一般包括三部分内容 写便条的原因 要告诉的事情 有关的建议、希望或要求等 Note: 少一点扣一分，最多扣3分；需用自己正确的语言表达，若完全抄提示扣一分 3. 语法：（占4分）要求语法、词汇正确 Note: 眼中语法、句法错误扣1分，一个句子或同类错误扣1分，拼写等小错误两个扣1分，最多扣4分,4. 语言得体性：（占1分） 总分在8分及以上时可考虑加此分 5. 便条总字数（包括三部分
22、格式在内）要求在50-60 字；不到40 或超过80词扣1分。,便条真题,1999（慰问） Youve learned that your friend Jimmy is ill these days. Write him a note expressing your concern, asking after his health and giving your best wishes. 2000（建议） You have read on the notice board that the university library is looking for a part-time libra
23、ry assistant who can work at weekends. You think that your classmate, George, is a suitable person for this vacancy. Write him a note, telling him what you know about the vacancy and trying to persuade him to go for an interview.,2001（道歉） Yesterday you failed to turn up for the appointment with your
24、 teacher, Professor Wang. Write him a note of apology and make a request for another meeting. You should also suggest the time for the requested meeting. 2002（询问） You have heard your friend, Jack, wishes to sell his walkman. Write him a note expressing your interest in it, asking him about its condi
25、tion and offering a price for it.,2003（拒绝邀请） Your friend Clare has invited you to her house-warming party this weekend. However, you will be away then. Write her a note politely declining her invitation and expressing your best wishes to her. 2004（表示同情） Your friend, Jane, has failed in the final exa
26、m, and is feeling very unhappy about it. Write a note to comfort her and give her some encouragement.,2005（邀请） You have got two tickets to a concert given by a famous pop band/orchestra. Write a note to your friend, Hilda/Mike, describing briefly what it is and inviting her/him to come with you. 200
27、6（询问） You have got to know that you classmate, Michael, is organizing a weekend excursion for the class. And you are thinking of joining the trip, write him a note expressing your interest in the excursion and asking for information on two details related to the excursion.,2007（拒绝邀请） Your classmate,
28、 Jimmy, is head of the universitys swimming club. He has invited you to join the club, but you like some other sport. Write him a note, declining his invitation and explaining why. 2008（推荐） Jane, your classmate, is thinking of subscribing to an English-language newspaper. And you would like to recom
29、mend one to her. Write a note, telling her which newspaper it is and describing two features of the paper.,2009（推荐） Lily, your roommate, is looking for a part-time job in the coming summer vacation. You saw an ad for a private English tutor for a schoolboy. Write her a note, telling her what the job
30、 is and strongly recommending it to her. 2010（建议） Your good friend, John, is thinking of organizing an end-of-the-term party. Write him a note telling him that you like his idea and offer to help him. You have to be specific about how you help him.,2007（拒绝邀请） Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a note of abou
31、t 50-60 words based on the following situation: Your classmate, Jimmy, is head of the universitys swimming club. He has invited you to join the club, but you like some other sport. Write him a note, declining his invitation and explaining why. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar
32、 and appropriateness.,April 22nd, 2007 Dear Jimmy, Its very kind of you to invite me to join the universitys swimming club. I am most grateful to be asked. However, Ive already joined a basketball club. You know I like playing basketball very much. Im afraid I do not have enough time to take part in
33、 two sports. I am very sorry for that and really regret that I would miss such an excellent chance of enjoying swimming with you. Good luck to your club. Yours, Mike,22 April, 2007 Dear Jimmy, Thank you for your inviting me to participating in the universitys swimming club. But I regret to tell you
34、that Im not able to join you, since I found myself more interested in the basketball club. I hope you will not be angry to me. Yours, Mike,April 22, 2007 Dear Jimmy, Sorry! I couldnt take part in your university swimming club, because I more like football. I have to decline your invitation. What a p
35、ity! I am sure you will not be angry at me, because you are always my best friend. Sorry again! Yours, Tom,Hello, Jimmy: Im shy to tell you I like other sport. So I dont take part in you club. You may ask: Why? Not because other reasons, I interested more in pingpong and it is more cheaper. I think,
36、 except me, more people will support you. Tony,便条写作八大类型板块,1. 约会 一般包含三方面内容： 约会的事由 建议约会的时间和地点 期待对方做出回复，并可表示感谢,Sample,Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: You have many problems about your current work, so you want to see your friend, Jane, for her a
37、dvice. Write her a note, making an appointment to see her tomorrow. Do not sign your own name, using “Rain” instead. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness,July 12Dear Jane, I wonder if I could see you in your office tomorrow, at 10:00 a.m. I have many problems
38、to talk over with you on my current work. It makes me very puzzled. So I hope you could give me some good advice. Please give me a call and let me know whether it is OK, or when you are convenient. Yours, Rain,Class Job: Note-Writing (10 MIN),Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a note of about 50-60 words b
39、ased on the following situation: You want to discuss your paper with your supervisor Professor Wang to solve the problems during the paper research. Write him a note, making an appointment to see him tomorrow. Do not sign your own name, using “Nick” instead. Marks will be awarded for content, organi
40、zation, grammar and appropriateness,July 12 Dear Professor Wang, During the research, I have found some problems. I wanna solve these problems first, and then go on my research. Id like to talk them about with you at your office tomorrow afternoon. Please ring me if you find the time is not convenie
41、nt for you. Yours, Nick,2. 道歉 一般包含三方面内容： 说明为何事而致歉 解释造成过失或不能履约的原因 再次致歉或提出解决方案,Sample,Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: You are Wang Ming. You have borrowed a book from your friend, Liu Hui. Unfortunately, our daughter broke it. Write her a note,
42、 making an apology and explaining why. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness,July 12 Dear Liu Hui, I am terribly sorry to tell you that the book you have lent me was broken by my daughter. I intended to return it today, but when I came back home, I found it bro
43、ken by my little daughter. I will get a new copy for you. For this irrecoverable loss, I am to blame. Please accept my sincere apologies. Yours, Wang Ming,Class Job: Note-Writing (10 MIN),Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: You are Chen Bo. Youll
44、 attend an English competition on behalf of your class. But suddenly your voice is in a bad condition. Write to Mrs. Li and tell her your quitting the competition. Write her a note, making an apology and explaining why. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness,Jul
45、y 12 Dear Mrs. Li, Im really sorry to have to tell you that I shall not be able to attend the English competition, because my voice is in a bad condition. Then I recommend Wang Li to take my place. She is good at oral English. I do hope I can attend this competition, but the doctor told me that I sh
46、ould have a rest. My regrets. Yours sincerely, Chen Bo,3. 邀请 一般包含三方面内容： 邀请对方参加活动的内容、时间和地点 与该活动有关的注意事项 期待对方接受邀请，并可表示感谢,Sample,Write on ANSWER SHEET THREE a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: You are Li Ming, the monitor of your class. Suppose your class is going to have a mee
47、ting to discuss how to learn English well. Write a note to invite Professor Chen to attend the meeting. Tell him the exact time and place. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness,July 12 Dear Professor Chen, We shall greatly appreciate it if you can attend our cl
48、ass meeting. Well discuss how to improve our English in Room 201 of teaching building No. 1 at 7:00 p.m. of July 16. all of us do hope you can come and give us some valuable advice. We are looking forward to seeing you. Sincerely yours, Li Ming,Class Job: Note-Writing (10 MIN),Write on ANSWER SHEET
49、THREE a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: You, Wang Ming, have just received a note from your friend, Li Wei, inviting you to his birthday party on the coming Sunday. Now write to inform him of your acceptance of the invitation. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness,July 12 Dear Li Wei, I want to express my heartfelt congratulation to you on your coming 20th birthday. I am very pleased to accept t