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1、书面表达 之 赢取高分策略,NMET对书面表达的要求,要求考生根据所给情景，用英语写一篇100个单词左右的短文 情景包括目的、对象、时间、地点、内容等；提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲等。 本部分满分25/30分，所需时间约为30分钟。,NMET书面表达评分原则,1、先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定档次。,第五档. 2125分 第四档. 1620分 第三档. 1115分,第二档. 610分 第一档. 15分 0分,语言地道，规范,覆盖所有内容要点,2、主要内容： 内容要点； 词汇和语法的数量和准确性； 上下文的连贯； 语言的得体性,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,3、拼
2、写和标点是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。,4、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。,5、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。,词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）,1.覆盖了所有的要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑,要点全,连接词,如何算是一篇好文章？,书面表达如何写？,五个步骤,1、审题,题材、人称、时态、要点,2、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出每句 话的细节要点。,3、联词成句：用联词成句的方法将上述要点 的词语扩展成句子。,4 联句成文：,注意：,主语和谓语,背景（适当增加
3、时间、地点条件等）,逻辑关系,开头与结尾 语篇衔接,5、检查修改，规范抄写,给阅卷人以好的第一直观印象,整体三部分,Heading 点题；一两个句子；概括性；暗示性 2. Body 中心记述部分；层次分明 3. Ending 小结；呼应主题,词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。,运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。,使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。,增强书面表达效果的技巧,1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.
4、2.We all think he is a great man. 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. 4.The students there neednt pay for their books. 5. As a result the plan was a failure.,The plan turned out to be a failure.,Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.,一、怎样使用较高级的词汇,We all think highly of him .,A go
5、od idea occurred to me.,/ A good idea suddenly struck me.,Books are free for the students there.,6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow. 7. She went to Austria in order to study music. 8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. 9.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms
6、. 10.You can find my house easily.,She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.,At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.,The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.,Our school is made up of twentysix classrooms.,Youll have no trouble finding my house.,丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构） 利用不同的句型来
7、表达同一个意思， 能增加文章的文采。,1. 感叹句 e.g. How happy I was when I received your letter! What a kind boy he is! How disappointed he was ! 2. 强调句 e.g. It was this young boy that helped the old granny. I do hope you can come if possible.,3、 倒装句 e.g. Only in this way can you solve this problem. There comes the poli
8、ce car. Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man. 4、 省略句 e.g. They read while walking or riding on a bus. Come to me if necessary. 5、 with短语 e.g. I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.,6、 定语从句 e.g. In my opinion, cyber cafes should be a plac
9、e where we can find much useful information. Lets come to the main teaching building, at the back of which stands the school library. 7、 各种名词性从句 e.g. Thats what I should do. We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.,8、 各种状语从句 e.g. Time passed quickly before we knew it. The moment we re
10、ached the farm, we got down to harvesting. So long as we work harder at our lessons, well catch up sooner or later. Do call me before hand so that I can meet you at the airport. They had to wait because the rain was getting more and more heavily.,1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形
11、式）. 2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句） 3. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用倒装句) 4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型) 5. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气）,On his arriving, please give me a
12、n e-mail.,What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.,Practice 怎样使用较丰富的句式,Weak as I am, Ill make the effort.,It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.,I couldnt have passed the physics exam but for your help.,6. She walked out of the
13、lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词) 7. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式) 8.I wont believe what he says. （使用状语从句） 9.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句） 10He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句),No sooner had he
14、 come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.,Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.,Singing and laughing, they went back to school.,No matter what he says, I wont believe.,Study hard and youll make rapid progress.,高考大纲中常用的连接词 1. 表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容 另外，还有：what is more; besides; also; m
15、oreover; in addition 2. 表示转折关系 但是， 然而， 相反：but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.,3. 表示因果关系 因为，因此，所以: since; as; because (of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result; 4. 表示条件关系 如果，只要: if ;on condition ( that ); as long as 除非: unless 否则: or else,5. 表示时间关系 当 的时候 : when ; while 在之后:
16、after 在之前: before 直到: until 一就 : as soon as 后来， 然后: later; afterwards 不久: soon 近来: lately; recently 自从 :since 从那时起: from then on,6. 表示特定的顺序关系 首先， 最主要的: above all 其次: secondly 然后: then; next 最后: finally; in the end 7. 换一种方法表述 换句话说: in other words; that is to say;,8. 进行举例说明 例如，比如: for instance; for ex
17、ample; like; such as 9. 用于陈述事实 实际上: in fact; actually; as a matter of fact 跟你说实话 : to tell you the truth,10. 对一个话题进行总结 总而言之，总的来说: on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word 其它常用到的副词 Therefore ; otherwise ; finally ; furthermore ;Thus ; namely ; although ; afterwards ; personally;,On o
18、ne side of the road there is a new classroom building.On the other side,where the playground used to be now stands another new buildingour library. (NMET1999 范文),As far as I know, everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.(NMET2001 范文),Whats more, I can go to bed earlier. (NMET2001 范文),
19、三、怎样使用恰当的连接词,Practice 1 请在下列句子中（间）填上恰当的关联词或意思有联系的短语。 Xiao Ming was walking in the street _ he heard someone cry for help. 2. He advised that I hire a car _ I could travel around in the west . 3. It was not long _ the police came . _he heard the cry for help, he jumped into the water to save the girl
20、.,when,in order that,before,As soon as,5. Do you agree with my arrangement ? _ , do write to me soon. 6. We can go downtown and do some shopping. _, we can pay a visit to some places of interest. I shared the cost of the gas with my friends ._, I saved $80. 8. Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. _ ,
21、it may make us fat.,If not/so,In addition,As a result,Whats worse,Practice 书面表达：,Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school !, This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.,It used to be very poor., However,it has changed a lot since 1978 ,and has been develop
22、ing very fast.,People here live a much better life than before .,书面表达：,Now it is taking,on a new look.,In the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. ,But now it has been rebuilt and, which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village.,All the
23、 school-age children can study here., Whats more,they enjoy free education., May you enjoy your stay here,the newly built teaching building,/ May you have a pleasant time here!,Thank you.,Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school ! This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and
24、 about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast. People here live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. But
25、now it has been rebuilt and the newly built teaching building which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. Whats more, they enjoy free education. May you enjoy your stay here / May you have a pleasant time here! Thank you.,2001年春季高考作文 给澳大利
26、亚的朋友写一封信，谈谈减负给学生的学习和生活带来的变化。 I will tell you the changes of my life. Before, we had many classes every day. I had to do a lot of homework after school. I went to bed at 11:30 in the evening. I had no time to play. I was very tired. Now I can visit museums. I can learn computer and drawing. In the ev
27、ening, I can read books and newspapers and watch TV. I go to bed at 10:00 now.,17分,高考满分作文 Im very pleased to tell you the changes in my life since our homework has reduced. Before that, learning during the day was very simple. Having class and doing homework was the only thing we should do. In the e
28、vening, we also had a lot of homework to do. We could not go to bed until 11:30. Nevertheless, since reducing the learning load, my life has become much more interesting. I often visit museums and computer rooms and draw pictures in my spare time. In the evening, I also have time to watch TV and rea
29、d newspapers. I no longer stay up late; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 pm. In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now.,写作常见错误分析：,1. 句子缺谓语,1) The building like a match box. 2) He told me that all my classmates sitting in the classroom.,1) A worker of the farm lead us to the field. 2) A
30、ll the students like books that was written by Lu Xun.,2.主谓不一致，尤其是单数第三人称作主语时，谓语的单复数形式出现错误。,3.时态错误,4.词性混用,1) When he came back, he found that his wife has gone to bed. 2) What are you doing this time yesterday?,1) She enjoys study English. 2) If anyone against the plan, please let me know.,5.介词误用,6.冠
31、词误用,1) In my surprise, he has got the first prize. 2) He came here to attend the meeting by a new car. 3) Dont read under the sun.,1) We elected Li Hua the monitor of the Class Five. 2) Once upon a time, there was an one-eyed lion. 3) The history is actually a very interesting subject.,7.名词的数混淆,8.动词
32、用法错误,1) It is rare to see such a nice weather in Beijing. 2) There is always traffic jam.,1) Where are you come from? 2) When I arrived Hong Kong, my mother was there waiting for me. 3) He didnt notice the teacher to come into the classroom. 4) The accident was happened in 1999.,9.习惯用法错误,1) The acto
33、r in this movie is very beautiful. 2) I and my parents were working in the fields at that time. 3) The reason is because he does not know what to do next.,10. 句子之间的逻辑关系不清 误：It hit the old man down but the driver, a woman, didnt stop her car. Finding she had caused an accident, the woman sped her car
34、 to flee away. The old man and I saw the cars number. Its AC864. The old man couldnt move , I decided to help him.,正：It hit the old man down but the driver, who was a woman, didnt stop her car. Finding she had caused an accident, the woman sped her car to flee away. Fortunately, I saw the cars numbe
35、r. Its AC864. Noticing the old man couldnt move, I decided to help him.,11.画蛇添足 、过多的长句使句子复杂化（语言不简洁） 修改前： A famous sportsman was giving a speech which was rather interesting. 修改后： A famous sportsman was giving an interesting speech.,12.过于简单的句子使文章缺少逻辑 性，可读性。 修改前 Yesterday, there was a policeman in the
36、 street. He stopped a car. The car was at the corner. It looked like a Honda. There was a boy on the sidewalk. He was riding his bicycle. The bicycle was a two-wheeler. The car nearly knocked down the boy.,修改后 Yesterday, a policeman stopped a carHonda at the corner of the street, because it nearly k
37、nocked down a boy who was riding a two-wheel bicycle on the sidewalk.,英文作文必背之35个句型,一、the + est +名词+ (that) +主词+ have +ever + seen (known/heard/had/read, etc) the most +形容词+名词+ (that) +主词+ have +ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc) 例句： Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen. 海伦是我所
38、看过最美丽的女孩。,Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had. 张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师。 二、Nothing is + er than to + V Nothing is + more +形容词+ than to + V 例句： Nothing is more important than to receive education. 没有比接受教育更重要的事。,三、 cannot emphasize the importance of too much.(再怎么强调.的重要性也不为过。) 例句： We cannot em
39、phasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much. 我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过。 四、There is no denying that + S + V .(不可否认的.) 例句： There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse. 不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。,五、It is universally acknowledged that +句子 (全世界都知道.) 例句： It is universal
40、ly acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us. 六、There is no doubt that +句子(毫无疑问的.) There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired. 毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。 七、An advantage ofis that +句子(.的优点是.) 例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it wont create (produce) an
41、y pollution. 使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。,八、The reason why +句子 is that +句子(.的原因是.) 例句： The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air. The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us. 九、So +形容词+ be +主词+ that +句子(如此.以致于.) So precious is time that
42、we cant afford to waste it.,我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气。,时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。,十、Adj + as + Subject(主词)+ be, S + V(虽然.) 例句： Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. by no means = in no way = on no account一点也不 十一、The + er + S + V, the + er + S + V The + more + Adj + S
43、+ V, the + more+ Adj + S + V (愈.愈.) The harder you work, the more progress you make. The more books we read, the more learned we become. 我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。 十二、By +Ving, can (借着.，能够) 例句：By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy. 借着做运动，我们能够始终保持健康。,十三、 enable + Object(受词)+ to + V (使能够) 例句：Listening to
44、 music enable us to feel relaxed. 听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松。 十四、On no account can we + V (我们绝对不能.) 例句：On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge. 我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。,十五、It is time + S +过去式(该是.的时候了) 例句：It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems. 该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候
45、了。 十六、Those who (.的人.) 例句：Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished. 违反交通规定的人应该受处罚。 十七、There is no one but (没有人不.) 例句：There is no one but longs to go to college. 没有人不渴望上大学。,十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V (不得不.) 例句：Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled t
46、o give up doing sports. 既然考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃做运动。 十九、It is conceivable that +句子(可想而知的) It is obvious that +句子(明显的) 例句：It is conceivable/obvious that knowledge plays an important role in our life. 可想而知，知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色。 二十、That is the reason why (那就是.的原因) 例句：Summer is sultry. That is the reason why I don
47、t like it. 夏天很燠热。那就是我不喜欢它的原因。,二十一、For the past +时间，S +现在完成式.(过去.年来，.一直.) 例句：For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination. 过去两年来，我一直忙着准备考试。 二十二、Since + S +过去式，S +现在完成式。 例句：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard. 自从他上高中，他一直很用功。 二十三、It pays to + V (.是值得的。
48、) 例句：It pays to help others. 帮助别人是值得的。,二十四、be based on (以.为基础) 例句：The progress of thee society is based on harmony. 社会的进步是以和谐为基础的。 二十五、Spare no effort to + V (不遗余力的) 例句：We should spare no effort to beautify our environment. 我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境。 二十六、bring home to +人+事(让.明白.事) 例句：We should bring home to people the valueof working hard. 我们应该让人们明白努力的价值。,二十七、be closely related to (与.息息相关) 例句：Taking exercise is closely related to health. 做运动与健康息息相关。 二十八、Get into the habit of + Ving= make it a rule to + V (养成.的习惯) We should get into th