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1、写作指导 Lets go for it!,There are some problems in our studies and daily life, we have many lessons and have lots of homework to do every day. So we have little time to do sports, As a result , quite a few of us are in poor health. Whats more, more and more students are interested in playing computer g
2、ames . They spend too much time on it. And some students like eating junk food. In my opinion, students need to keep fit and study well. First , we should spend less time playing computer games and have more sleep. Second , we should eat healthily and do more sports.,英语作文8个话题,一、介绍人 （自己、家庭、朋友、老师、个人变化
3、、个人感受等） 二、介绍地点 （旅游等） 三、校园生活 （春游、校规、科目、学习困难等） 四、课外生活 （家庭生活、家务劳动、电影、个人爱好等） 五、假期安排 （计划、过去经历等） 六、节假日活动 （志愿者活动、过去经历） 七、环境、健康 （环保、疾病、食品健康等） 八、个人观点建议 （提建议、劝告等）,写话常见体裁,初中阶段的写作体裁主要包括记叙文、议论文和应用文。,记叙文的训练包括记人、叙事、写景状物。教师要帮助学生分析不同类型文章的写作规律。,记人 ( My best friend) 文章可通过介绍人物的年龄、外貌、职业、爱好、 学习工作等方面来展现人物鲜明的个性。 (叙述的原则是从外到
4、内）,叙事： ( An interesting lesson) 文章需要交代以下五个要素，Who、When、Where、What、How,学生作文常见语法错误 1）名词的单复数前后不统一 Exams are necessary because it helps improve ourselves in many ways. 2）时态、语态、主谓不一致 Having family teachers are very common among students. 3）副词位置或选用不当 We also can do something for our parents to show our tha
5、nks .,4)表达随意,中国式英语比比皆是 There are a large number of tourists visit Shanghai every year. 5）语言表达繁琐或生硬 Ill try my best to study hard. I want to get good marks. (建议用in order to 连接) To buy things on line makes our life more convenient.(用Shopping on line),basic structure (基本结构的安排),Dear Mr. Know， I m please
6、d to write to ask for some help. I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study. First，some of us arent interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then its so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us dont have enough confiden
7、ce to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. Whats more, there are so many new words we havent meet before in the passage. I dont know what to do. Sometimes we cant understand the main idea, let alone(更不用说)answer the questions about them. But the most difficult
8、 thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences. Can you help us? How can we improve our English? Please give us some useful advice. Thank you very much. Write to me soon.,Lets go for it!,Mary,(the beginning),(the ending),the body（正文）,basic rules (写作考试规则),search（审） list（列） add(加: 开头和结尾) c
9、onnect(连) beautiful(美：谚语/例子),牛刀小试,健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。,审(search),travel,stay at home,visit friends or parents,work,如何度假 调查报告 倡议假日休闲,stay at home,work,visit friends or parents,travel,列(list),根据以下关键词及图表用 简
10、单的句子列出文章的要点。,A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation.,列(list),How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. （the beginning） A lot of people travel. Some people stay at home. Th
11、ey watch TV or surf the internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well. （the ending）,加(add),加首尾，使结构完整。 可以采取总分总结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁、漂亮。,How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. Acco
12、rding to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,连(connect),Writing skills（“写”的技巧）,方法一:善用词汇 甚至善用高级词汇,Which
13、 is better?,他们在海滩上听音乐。,A They listened to the music on the beach. B They enjoyed the music on the beach.,Which is better?,我希望你能帮助我。,A I wish you can help me. B Im looking forward to your help.,Which is better?,他们很早就到了。,A They arrived early. B They arrived as early as they could.,Which is better?,最后，
14、他的狗得救了，他感到很惊讶。,A His dog was saved at last. He was very surprised. B To his surprise, his dog was saved at last.,A I think learning English is interesting. B I find it really fun to learn English .,我认为学英语很有趣。,我们应该保护环境。,A We should protect the environment. B Its our duty to protect the environment.,方
15、法二:活用多种句型,Writing skills（“写”的技巧）,她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。,A She is very young. She cant carry the heavy box. B She is too young to carry the heavy box. C She is so young that she cant carry the D She is not old enough to carry the,方法三:妙用关联词,Writing skills（“写”的技巧）,1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bothand, whats mor
16、e not onlybut also, neithernor 2.表示选择: or, eitheror 3.表示转折: but,however,althoughthough,after all,anyway 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, notbut, while, in the same way, on the one handon the other hand 7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such a
17、s, that is to say, in other words,to tell the truth 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end 9.表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact 10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, in short,关联词
18、(connection words),How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our report. According to it, a lot of people travel. And some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Also some other people visit friends or parents. However, a few people work. Come and enjoy your
19、vacation. People who relax well work well.,连(connect),Lets try,_ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight. He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _. We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking. _, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled.,ThoughAlthough,
20、instead,like,First,Next,FinallyAt last,We interviewed people about the ways to spend the vacation and here is our report. According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to h
21、ave a good rest. And to visit friends or parents also makes them relaxed. However, a few people have to work. Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,美(beautify),According to it, most people choose to travel to get away from the busy world during the holidays. Then some people
22、 like to stay at home, watching TV or surfing the Internet to have a good rest. However, a few people have to work. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” Come and enjoy your vacation. People who relax well work well.,美(beautify),And to visit friends or parents also makes
23、them relaxed.,Proverb（谚语）/saying,加谚语(Proverb/saying) 可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。,锻炼对学生有好处,It is good for us students to take exercise,As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” It is good for us students to take exercise.,集中注意力于学习,We should concentrate on our studies.,As the
24、 saying goes, “No pains, no gains.” We should concentrate on our studies.,加谚语(Proverb/saying) 可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。,加谚语(Proverb/saying) 可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。,加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法,Joining the English club is a good way to learn English.,As the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” So joining the Englis
25、h club is a good way to learn English.,加谚语(Proverb/saying) 可用于开头和结尾，多是结尾。,加谚语(Proverb/saying) 可用于”beginning”和”ending”，多用后者。,Enjoy some proverbs,1.Practice makes perfect. 2.Think twice before you do. 4.Do as the Romans do.,三思而后行。,熟能生巧。,有志者事竟成。,入乡随俗。,早起的鸟儿有虫吃。,失败是成功之母。,5.The early bird catches the wor
26、m.,3.Where there is a will, there is a way.,6.Failure is the mother of success.,Enjoy some proverbs,7.It is no use crying over spilt milk. 8.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 9.All roads lead to Rome. 10.Never too old to learn.,覆水难收。,一天一个苹果， 医生远离我。,条条大路通罗马。,活到老，学到老。,方法四:妙用引文和例子 （多用于“the body”）,W
27、riting skills（“写”的技巧）,青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。,We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.,For example, we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags, stop using napkins, plant more trees and save water and energy.,加例子,加例子,在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。,I often help my parent
28、s do housework,such as washing dishes, folding the clothes, taking out the trash and so on.,结尾：提出倡议或号召,Lets Do it now ! / Dont do it again! As students, we should start from ourselves.,Dont wait. Join us now! Start to join us now! Dont put it off! Become a volunteer today! How amazing! I cant wait!
29、Save animals! Save Ourselves! Save our planet! Dont hesitate(犹豫). It will be great fun!,知己知彼，学范文,First，some of us arent interested in English. We think studying English is such a boring thing. And then its so difficult for us to remember all the words in the texts. So lots of us dont have enough con
30、fidence to keep up English study. And we are always afraid to join the group discussion. Whats more, there are so many new words we havent met before in the passage. I dont know what to do. Sometimes we cant understand the main idea, let alone(更不用说)answer the questions about them. But the most diffi
31、cult thing is to write. We often use wrong words and sentences.,Lets go for it!,Dear Mary, I heard you didnt do well in English. Here is some advice for you.,Yours ,_, I think reading English every day and listening to the teacher carefully in class are the most important._, you can join the English
32、 club to practice English. You know, “Practice makes perfect.” _, it is necessary for you to listen to the English radio every morning. It can improve your listening skill._, English is not difficult to learn and I hope what I have said is helpful for you.,To begin with,Of course,In fact,Then,Your t
33、urn to go for it!（check）,The Life as a Grade 9 Student How time flies! Now Im in Grade Nine. Actually I feel the life is quite different from it used to be. Now Im as busy as a bee. Theres a lot of homework and exams. The only feeling I have is : The life as a Grade Nine student is very busy and cha
34、llenging ! ! Theres an old saying: He who fails to plan plans to fail. I dont want to fail, so I create a plan for the following days. Since nothing is difficult if I put my heart into it, I will change my attitude towards maths and physics which I am poor at now. Ill spend the rest time efficiently. As theres no elevator to success, Ill try my best to do everything step by step! I believe that I can do it!,Its your turn! （ 请分析以下的文章）,Your turn to go for it!,Good words:,Good sentences:,Connection words:,Lets go for it!,Thank you!,