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1、Guidance on writing,基本要求： 1.书写整洁、卷面清晰 2.分段！ 3.标点！大小写！ 4.格式正确 5.不遗漏要点,如何算是一篇好的文章？,1、覆盖了所有的要点。 2、应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。（词汇、句型【高级】和语法多样化【较复杂】） 3、有效的使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。,书面表达六步法,书面表达,审,抓,遣,连,查,抄,1.审：审文体、审要求、审人称、审时态 文体：记叙文、说明文、议论文、应用文 要求：（见试题） 人称：第一、二、三人称 时态：过去式或者一般现在式.,2.3： 抓、遣： 列要点（关键词动词或动词词组） 遣词造句 4
2、. 连： (1) 扩词成句。在书写时，若无把握的情况下尽量用简单的句子、单词或短语表达。 (2) 组句成文（开头结尾、增添细节、行文连贯、高级结构），并呈现常用承接、过渡词语。思路清晰，逻辑严密。,假定你是李华，准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康成长”的英语作文比赛。请按要求写一篇短文，主要内容包括： 1. 乐观的人生态度； 2. 努力学习； 3. 参加体育锻炼,Example: To grow up happily and healthily We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do se
3、veral things. Firstly, we should develop a good attitude to life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times. We should be brave in front of difficulties. Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. If we have the power. We can help to build our country and enjoy life better
4、. In order to study well, we need to do sports so that we can keep fit. We can go running, play ball games or simply take a walk after a days study. If we do those things well, we will be able to grow up happily and healthily.,Practice,假如你们学校“英语爱好者俱乐部”将对“良好饮食习惯”这一话题进行讨论。根据下文提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。内容要点应包括：,分 析
5、,一、审题：1、文体： 2、时态： 3、人称：,二、提炼要点： 1,部分同学的饮食习惯:,1,Some of the students eating habits dont have breakfast, like eating snacks only some kinds of food, eat too much,应用文-讨论稿,一般现在时,第一人称,（不吃早餐爱吃零食,偏食 饮食过量）,2、Good eating habits all kinds of food, the same amount and at the same time,In my opinion,3、发表自己的观点,2
6、、良好的饮食习惯 饮食多样化饮食 定时定量）,三、扩词成句（尽量使用高级词汇）,高级:Some of the students go to school without breakfast,一般: Some of the students dont have breakfast and go to school.,分析:修改后没有用过于直接的 only some kinds of, 而使用了 are particular about,该词组就属高级词汇。,一般: They only have some kinds of food.,高级:They are particular about fo
7、od.,分析:在表达要点时， without比dont have语气强，也显得生动.,一般: They have all kinds of food .,高级: They have various healthy diet ,一般:They have the same amount of food and at the same time.,高级:They have meals regularly.,选好词，写好句 做好文章,成文,As we know , we are what we eat. Therefore, its very important for us to form heal
8、thy eating habits. However, bad eating habits are still very common among us students. Some of us often go to school without breakfast; some like to have snacks; some others are particular about,food; and still some eat or drink too much. All these bad eating habits will surely do harm to our health
9、. To keep fit, we should have various healthy diets, which generally include proper amounts of fruit,fish,meat,vegetables as well as main food. Besides, wed better have meals regularly.,In my opinion, we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body. Only in this way can we h
10、ave enough energy to study better. Thats all. Thank you.,一句多译练习 例一 . 写请假条。情景：我生病了，明天不能上学。,1. Im ill. I cant go to school tomorrow. 2. Im ill and I cant go to school tomorrow. 3. Ill be absent from school tomorrow just because Im ill. 4. Im so seriously ill that I cant go to school tomorrow. 5. I can
11、t go to school tomorrow because of my illness.,6. Being ill, I cant go to school tomorrow. (用分词作原因状语) 7. I cant go to school tomorrow. Thats because Im ill. （用表语从句） 8. Im seriously ill, which makes me unable to go to school. （用定语从句） 9. Im seriously ill, which makes it impossible for me to go to scho
12、ol.,10. It is because Im ill that I cant go to school tomorrow.(强调句型) 11. The reason for my absence from school tomorrow is that Im ill. （用表语从句） 12. My illness prevents me from going to school tomorrow. 13. I have a disease, which prevents me from going to school tomorrow.,昨天下雨，我没来。,It rained yester
13、day, so I didnt come. It rained yesterday, and as a result, I didnt come. I didnt come yesterday because it rained. I didnt come yesterday because of the rain. The rain prevented us （from）coming yesterday. The rain stopped us （from）coming yesterday . The rain kept us from coming yesterday.,Practice
14、一句多译 这本书花了我300元。,I spent 300 yuan on the book. I paid 300 yuan for the book. The price of the book is 300 yuan. It cost me 300 yuan to buy the book. The book cost me 300 yuan.,我喜欢古典音乐。,I enjoy classical music. I like classical music. I love classical music. I am interested in classical music. I am i
15、nto classical music. I am fond of classical music.,1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. 2.We all think he is a great man. 3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. 4.The students there neednt pay for their books. 5. As a result the plan was a failure.,The plan turned out to be a
16、 failure.,Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.,一、怎样使用较高级的词汇,We all think highly of him .,A good idea occurred to me.,/ A good idea suddenly struck me.,Books are free for the students there.,6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow. 7. She went to Austria in order
17、to study music. 8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. 9.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms. 10.You can find my house easily.,She went to Austria for the purpose of studying music.,At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow.,The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.
18、,Our school is made up of twentysix classrooms.,Youll have no trouble finding my house.,巧用习语-增加文采,1.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms. 2.You can find my house easily. 3.Many houses are being built.,Our school consists of twentysix classrooms.,Youll have no trouble finding my house.,Many
19、 houses are under construction.,洋味十足-才是好文章,1. I dont want to live with a stranger in a hotel room. 2. I was very eager to go home. 3. She shouted loudly , “Ive succeeded!”,I dont want to share a hotel room with a stranger.,I couldnt wait to go home. I hunger for going home. I long for going home. I
20、am dying to go home.,She shouted at the top of her voice, “Ive made it!”,1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）. 2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句） 3. Though Im weak, Ill make the effort. (使用as倒装句) 4. He did not know what had happened until he had rea
21、d the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型) 5. I won the competition because of her help.(用虚拟语气）,On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.,What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.,二、使用较丰富的句式,Weak as I am, Ill make the effort.,It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper t
22、hat he knew what had happened.,I couldnt have won the competition but for your help.,6. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词) 7. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式) 8.I wont believe what he says. （使用让步状语从句） 9.If you study hard, you will make ra
23、pid progress. （用并列句） 10He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句),No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.,Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.,Singing and laughing, they went back to school.,No matter what he says, I wont believ
24、e.,Study hard and youll make rapid progress.,11devote替换spend He spends all his spare time in reading. He devotes all his spare time to reading. 12on替换as soon as As soon as he arrived, he began his research. On his arrival, he began his research. 13round the corner 替换 coming soon/ nearby The summer v
25、acation is round the corner ( coming). Do you have any plans? Li Ming studies in a school round the corner (nearby). 14occur 替换 think of Suddenly I had an idea that someone had broken into my house. An idea occurred to me that someone had broken into my house. It occurred to me that someone had brok
26、en into my house.,随着人们的生活越来越富裕，人与人之间的关系变得越来越淡漠，人们之间的帮助也越来越少了。请你以Helping others is helping yourself 为题写一篇120词左右的短文。 内容包括： 1）为什么需要帮助别人？ 2) 帮助别人给自己带来什么益处？ （可以适当发挥）,Have a try!,To Help Others Is To Help Yourself We cant do all the jobs and complete all the things by ourselves, so a cooperation and help
27、is needed. Its important for us to help others because even a small help can also give others warmth and sunshine. Looking back, we can know the history of human beings is a history of helping each other. First, helping others is essential, as our abilities are limited and we cant finish everything
28、alone. We need a help in order to do the thing well. Second, to help others means to help ourselves. We cant live in a single world. When we help others in trouble , someday, they will help us in return. On the contrary, if we dont offer a help, we wont get a help. Third, helping others is not only
29、a good quality, but also a happy thing. We can get much happiness by helping others. Friends, dont hesitate to give your love or help to those in need, for helping others is just helping ourselves.,目前地球向临水资源危饥。21世纪报学生版针对此情况面向全体中学生征稿，呼吁人们重视目前的问题，并保护水资源，征稿题目是：Global Shortage of Fresh Water请根据以下提示写一篇10
30、0词左右的短文，向21世纪报投稿。 稿件要点：1人们认为淡水的取之不尽的，而实际不是；2淡水资源危机的原因；3人们应该采取的措施。,Global Shortage of Fresh Water Many people believe that the worlds supply of fresh water will never be used up. They think that fresh water comes from such a variety of sources that it is always sufficient for use. Such an opinion lea
31、ds to a shocking waste of water. As a matter of fact, the earth is short of fresh water. Furthermore, with the rapid growth of the world population, the rising demand for water by industry, and the serious pollution of our surroundings, the world is facing the danger of running out of fresh water. A
32、ctually, in some big cities, fresh water can not meet the daily needs. Therefore, to find new ways to save water is an urgent task. First, we should pass strict laws to control any waste of water. Second, scientists must work even harder to purify sea water, and try to find substitute to reduce the
33、use of fresh water.,书面表达（满分25分） 近日你所在的学校开展了“为建设节约型社会献一计”主题活动，同学们提出了许多建议。请你根据以下要点，用英语写一篇短文向English Horizons杂志编辑部投稿，要点如下： 1、不浪费粮食和纸张 2、尽量不使用方便筷、塑料袋 3、毕业生将书赠给低年级同学循环使用？ 注意： 1、不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节; 2、词数：120字左右，开头已经为你写好，不计入总词数; 3、参考词汇：方便筷disposable chopsticks Recently，there has been an activity of “doing your
34、bit for an energy -saving society” in our school.,Recently，there has been an activity of “doing your bit for an energy -saving society” in our school. Our schoolmates are highly concerned about the increasing lack of energy and provide their own suggestions. Some students suggest that we shouldnt wa
35、ste any food or paper, though they appear very easy to get. Meanwhile, some other students think it advisable to refuse to use disposable chopsticks and plastic bags. Besides, it is also strongly recommended that those used textbooks as well as reference books of graduates, which are still in good c
36、ondition， not be thrown but recycled. Actually, there are still quite a lot that we can easily do: say, try to take buses or ride bicycles instead of driving cars, etc. All of these will definitely help to build an energy-saving society.,据报道，为了应对网络有害信息，北京展开了一项活动，选出60个母亲为“Mom Jury”，让她们参与到整顿不良网站的活动中。请
37、你根据下表提供的有关信息，用英语写一篇短文。 要点： 1. 背景：网民日益年轻化；网上不良信息很多2. 任务：举报不良网站；提出建议；督促政府部门采取措施等效果一个月后，许多不良网站被关闭 3. 你的看法,Nowadays Chinese netizens tend to be younger than before and they have many chances to visit websites with bad contents which are harmful to them. In order to protect them from this harm, sixty mot
38、hers were selected from a large number of mothers to form a “Mom Jury” in Beijing. Their responsibility was to report bad websites, give the government advice, urge the government to take measures, and so on. The activity was so effective that many bad websites were closed a month later. In my opini
39、on, it is a good way to deal with the problem , but Dads should also take part in the activity, because the fight against bad websites calls for a joint effort by both parents. It is also important to teach teenagers how to protect themselves while surfing the Internet.,最近，很多中学生都纷纷开起了自己的博客。一方面，博客可以作
40、为展示自己的窗口，可以释放学习的压力，因此已经被越来越多的中学生所接受。但是，另一方面，很多家长和老师都认为管理个人博客要花相当多的时间和精力，会耽误学习。 请对这一现象进行简要介绍，并发表自己的看法。,Nowadays , it is a common phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the Internet. For one thing, it can provide a colorful platform to showcase their talent, and it
41、is a way to release their pressure, and all this makes it more and more popular with high school students. But many parents and teachers hold the different view, they think that managing ones blog will take a lot of time and energy, while this should be used to study which is their main responsibili
42、ty. In my opinion, I do approve of this activity. Nowadays the Internet is playing an important and essential role in our life that we cant ignore its influence. Therefore as high school students of the so-called information age, we need to learn and make the most of this useful tool to communicate
43、and display ourselves. More importantly, opening and organizing an eye catching blog needs various abilities such as writing ,designing, being skillful at computer and so on. Only if we master those abilities can we make a successful blog. As a consequence, we improve ourselves during the procedures
44、 of organizing our blogs. Blog itself is of little harm. It is your attitude towards it that matters. We should take the advantages and avoid some bad effects.,面对现实生活的各种压力，保持一个良好的心态非常重要。请你以The importance of keeping a good mood为题，写一篇100字左右的英语文章，发表自己的看法，以及支持你的看法的原因（至少两个）,The Importance of Keeping a Go
45、od Mood People in modern society live under a lot of pressure from many aspects such as education, career or familyIt is important to keep a good mood in your daily lifeIn the following context I am going to justify my point from two aspects First, individually speaking, to keep a good mood makes ev
46、erything easier to youJust like the grease smoothing a machine, keeping a good mood optimizes your lifeIf you are happy, work would not seem to be that hardYou may learn to enjoy the processSecond, for the sake of people around you, you should keep a good moodIf you are very cheerful everyday, you a
47、re apt to throw your positive influence upon others who are also faced with varied pressureJust like a shining sun, keeping a good mood enables you to radiate your happiness to everyone around you and then they respond to you with an enlightening smile To keep a good mood helps to start a positive r
48、ecycle around you which may free pressuresWhy not meet your life with a smile?,Lets try to reach the top and hold all mountains in a single glance!,May you succeed in June!,步骤：,Step 1: Examine the topic Step 2: List the main points Step 3: Make some sentences: Step 4&5: Connect the sentences and make some polish. Step 6: Copy it out carefully and clearly.,