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1、,2013 福建高考 英语书面表达评析,主讲教师：谢燕华,孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母 包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅 读下面的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。,内容要求： 1.描述漫画内容； 2. 分析漫画所揭示的问题； 3. 提出你的看法。 注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯； 3.词数120左右; 4. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息。 参考词汇: pave the way From the picture, we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet
2、_.,审漫画,审图示说明,1 内容介绍 2 内容要求 3 参考词汇,审内容介绍,孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。,审内容要求,1.描述漫画内容； 2. 分析漫画所揭示的问题； 3. 提出你的看法。,第1段,第2段,第3段,审参考词汇,pave the way,第一段：漫画介绍：该幅漫画中有三个人物，一个孩子和他的爸爸妈妈。孩子走在中间，身着西装，挥着小手。孩子的妈妈正在前头满头大汗地为孩子的道路铺红地毯，而孩子的父亲则跟在后头帮孩子提衣服。,第二段：分析漫画所揭示的问题：孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严
3、重。,第三段 ：提出作者的看法。,From the picture, we can see a family of three walking on a long red carpet.,1 We can see in the picture that 2 The picture above shows that 3 In the picture above a child is 4 As is shown in the picture, ,第一段首句,1“It shows a common phenomenon that” 2 “The picture reflects a social p
4、henomenon in our society.” 3 “What the picture tries to tell us is that” 4 “The phenomenon reflected in the picture is that”,第二段首句,1 “As far as I am concerned, I believe that” 2 I hold the view that 3“In my opinion/view,第三段首句,1 The child is waving his hand in the middle. The mother is busy paving th
5、e way for the child. The father is bending forward to hold the suit. 2 The child is waving his hand in the middle while the mother is busy paving the way for him and the father is bending forward to hold the suit.,1.表示举例时使用： for example, for instance, such as, take .for example, and so on, namely等。
6、2 表原因 because of、thanks to、due to、 owing to，on account of ，as a result/consequence of 3 表结果 therefore、thus、as a result/consequence 、so 4 表列举 First(ly), second(ly) finally , last but not least above all, first of all,5.表示归纳总结： in a word, in all, to sum up, in brief, in short， generally speaking ，on t
7、he whole, in conclusion， 6.表补充： in addition ,whats more , besides, moreover 7.表示转折时使用: however, while, on the contrary, on the one hand/on the other hand,1）短语、句型优先：,Parents love their children very much. Parents believe that they should do everything for their children because they love them.,Childr
8、en are the apple of their parents eye.,It is believed that parents should do everything for their children because they love them.,2） 弃旧取新:,1 Parents try to pave the way for their childrens success. 2 Parents spare no effort to pave the way for their childrens success.,1 The child is dressed in a bl
9、ack suit and waves in the middle. (2) Dressed in a black suit, the child waves in the middle.,2 Children can grow up to be independent in this way. (2) Only in this way can children grow up to be independent.,3 Because their parents arrange everything for them, children are lacking in independent thought. (2) With their parents arranging everything for them, children are lacking in independent thought.,反思及感悟,首先，教师在平时应对学生写作进行系统、分块地训练。比如将书面表达分为漫画作文、图表作文、利弊型作文、应用型作文等模块对学生进行训练。 其次，教师应当将语法教学和写作教学有机结合起来。 最后，教师平时应注意引导学生在写作中活用所学短语及句型。,Thank you ! Good bye!,