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1、高考写作,1 评分标准 2 内容框架,第四部分：书面表达（满分25分） 假设你是卜曼宜，你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。 要点： 问题： 手机不响铃，不能发短信；该产品已售完，无法更换；型号新，无配件，无法维修。 3. 要求：公司应尽快予以更换。 注意： 1. 词数为100左右； 2. 参考词汇：配件 spare part 3. 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入你所写词数）； 4. 已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡。,When I bought it home, I found there were seve
2、ral problems about the quality of the mobile phone. There is no ring in the new mobile phone, besides, it can not be used to send short messages. When I want back to the local company, the manager told me this product has sold out and that I wasnt able to change it. Whats worse, this style mobile ph
3、one is a new product, there is no spare part and cant to be repaired. These problems worries me most. I hope your company would change it for me as soon as possible.,【分析】基本表达清楚；时态运用恰当；采用了些简单连接手法；内容较连贯；准确性不够。,15,第四部分：书面表达（满分25分） 假设你是卜曼宜，你购买了一部某外国公司生产的手机，因有质量问题，要求该公司更换。请根据下列要点，用英文写一封电子邮件。 要点： 问题： 手机不响
4、铃，不能发短信；该产品已售完，无法更换；型号新，无配件，无法维修。 2. 要求：公司应尽快予以更换。 注意： 1. 词数为100左右； 2. 参考词汇：配件 spare part 3. 电子邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入你所写词数）； 4. 已给出的电子邮件的开头和结尾不得抄入答题卡。,However, some problems are presented with this mobile phone. In the first place, when there are phone calls, the mobile phone just cant ring. In addition,
5、 short messages can never be sent. when I came back to the mall for exchange, I was disappointed to be told that this model had been sold out. Worse still, it is a new model, thus no spare part is available at the moment. Nowhere can I have this phone repaired. Maybe there are some alternatives to h
6、andle this case, but I hope it can be dealt with and solved as soon as possible. In brief, my personal viewpoint is that you replace this mobile phone. Im looking forward to your reply.,【分析】全文共九个句子,其中有 两个时间状语从句,一个并列句; 一个倒装句; 一个表语从句。 运用了however, in the first place, in addition, worse still, in brief
7、五个过渡性词汇。 运用了 available, alternative 两个较高级词语。,25,1 评分标准,keep to the point accuracy (spelling and grammar) bright points(words , phrases and sentence) natural,2 内容框架,1 真题一（环境保护 一次性筷子的使用） (how to make your content logical) 2 真题二（周末集体活动 介绍一个地方） (how to make bright points for your article) 3 真题三（讨论动物园是否应
8、搬出市区） (how to make accuracy) 4 历年真题翻译练习,真题一,假如你叫李华，是一名高中学生。根据下面内容，写一封倡议书，呼吁人们停止使用一次性筷子。 注意： 1开头和结尾已给出。 2字数100左右。 3参考词汇：reject throwaway chopsticks,写作步骤,1 扩展 -逻辑性 -分段 2 翻译 -亮点 -词与句 3 检查 -错误,假如你叫李华，是一名高中学生。根据下面内容，写一封倡议书，呼吁人们停止使用一次性筷子。 注意： 1开头和结尾已给出。 2字数100左右。 3参考词汇：reject throwaway chopsticks,目前状态 导致结
9、果 采取措施,1扩展,砍伐森林会导致很多严重的环境问题。,面对这样的情况，我们应该采取一些措施来保护森林了。,目前，中国的森林正遭受着严重的破坏。,2 翻译 第一部分,Do you know why sandstorms and landslides are happening more frequently than ever in recent years? According to the recent statistics, 中国正面临着严重的森林破坏问题。中国的森林覆盖率仅为13%，但是中国每年要生产大约450亿双筷子，而这些筷子就需要我们砍伐2500万棵树。有环保主义者警告，照这样
10、的速度，中国可能在20年内就要砍伐所有的森林。,面临着 森林破坏问题 覆盖率 大约 450亿 2500万 警告 灭绝,be confronted with the problem of deforestation be covered with approximately 45 billion 25 million warn die out,中国正面临着严重的森林破坏问题。 中国的森林覆盖率仅为13%，但是中国每年要生产大约450亿双筷子 而这些筷子就需要我们砍伐2500万棵树。 有环保主义者警告，照这样的速度，中国可能在20年内就要砍伐所有的森林。,China is confronted w
11、ith the serious problem of deforestation. 13% of china is covered with forest, but china produces approximately 45 billion pairs of throwaway chopsticks. These chopsticks need us to cut down 25 million trees. Some environmentalists warn the public that the forest of China will die out after 20 years
12、 by this speed.,China is confronted with the serious problem of forest destruction. 13% of china is covered with forest, but china produces approximately 45 billion pairs of throwaway chopsticks. These chopsticks need us to cut down 25 million trees. Some environmentalists warn the public thatthe fo
13、rest of China will die out after 20 years by this speed.,Confronted with the serious problem of deforestation. 13% of china is covered with forest, however approximately 45 billion pairs of throwaway chopsticks are produced by China annually, which means that we need to cut down 25 million trees. Th
14、erefore, some environmentalists warn the public that the forest of China will die out after 20 years by this speed.,被动语态,定语从句,连词,分词作状语,第二部分,砍伐森林会导致很多环境问题，例如，水土流失，废气排放增多，温室效应。人类将会遭受一个由自己带来的灾难。,砍伐森林 水土流失 废气排放增多 遭受,Excessive deforestation soil erosion the increase emission of carbon dioxide suffer from
15、,砍伐森林会导致很多环境问题， 例如，水土流失，废气排放增多，温室效应. 人类将会遭受一个由自己带来的灾难。,Excessive deforestation will lead to a series of environmental changes, for instance, soil erosion,the increase emission of carbon dioxide ,especially the green house effect. Its sure that the humen will suffer from a disater which is caused by
16、ourselves.,第三部分,所以，我们是该采取一些措施来保护我们的森林资源了。 its time that sb did sth.,万能措施一,The long term goal of environmental protection is to prevent the creation of pollutants and wastes and to produce durable, recyclable goods.,万能措施二,In view of sustainable development, the exploitation of mineral resources shoul
17、d be under strict government.,万能理由三,Mankind should join hand in hand to create an inhabitable world for themselves and their offspring.,3 检查 纠错,Do you know why sandstorms and landslides are happening more frequently than ever in recent years? According to the recent statistics, theyre due to the dis
18、appearing of forests. Dear friends, do you know they were eatlen by you when use the chopsticks? Every year it products 45 billion chopsticks from China. The forests only cover 13 percents in China. These need 25 million of trees. Someone who cares the environment has alarmed that China may use out
19、all of its forests according to this speed! It means that the environment of China will break down entirely. So please throw away chopsticks now!,using the throwaway chopsticks may kill our forests. China whose forests only covers 13% of its land, produces 45000000000 throwaway chopsticks every year
20、. This needs 2500 million trees to be cut down. Whats worse, some environmentalists even warned that if we continue using these chopsticks at this speed, it will be possible for China to use up all its forest resources in only 20 years.( At that time, we human beings could not live on the plannet an
21、y longer and there way be no living thing on the earth, either. What a frightening thing it is! )So we should not use the chopsticks any more in order to make a better environment for our younger generation and for ourselves. Dear friends, lets take action from now on!,必备词汇,disaster, flood, hurrican
22、e, lighting, thunderstorm, tornado, volcano, wave, ash, furniture,feather,fur, latitude,equator,longitude bury, occur, strike, ruin,erupt, eruption. current, tropical, violent, previous,常用表达,污染大气 无节制地开发资源 乱扔垃圾 砍伐森林 冰川融化 土地沙漠化 渡过灾难 回收再利用垃圾 减少废气排放 最大化地利用资源,pollute the atmosphere exploit natural resour
23、ces excessively litter around deforest the poles melt desertification survive the disaster recycle the garbage reduce the exhaust emission maximize the use of resources,真题二（仿写）,假定你是一名导游，你将接待一个外国旅游团。请你拟定一份100词左右的导游词向客介绍青岛。要点如下： 1.青岛位于山东半岛的南端，面积10654平方公里，总人口699万； 2.青岛三面环海，大海是青岛的魅力所在； 3. 古代名人如李白，蒲松龄，康有
24、为等的足迹遍布青岛各地，留下了华美的诗文。 4. 青岛是一座现代化城市，现代化的工厂和楼房林立。 参考词汇；半岛 peninsula,Paris is the capital and largest city of France, situated on the River Seine. It is one of the most beautiful cities in the world and is visitied by more than eight million tourists every year. cover an area of with a population of,Q
25、ingdao is a beautiful city of China, situated in the south of Shandong peninsula , covering an area of 10,654 square kilometers and with a population of 6.99 million.,France is Europes third largest country and faces the United Kingdom acoss the English Channel. Florence is an Italian city which bec
26、ame famous because of the Renaissance.,Qingdao faces the sea which becomes famous because of the blue seawater.,Many of Florence s most beautiful paintings and sculptures were produced by great artists such as Leonardo da Vinci and Michelangelo. Greeces best writers lived in ancient Athens. Their wo
27、rk has influenced writers ever since. poet essay celebrity,Chinas best writers travelled around ancient Qingdao.Many of China s most beautiful essays and poems were produced by great artists such as Li Bai, Pu Songlin and Kang Youwei.,international possess modern,Qingdao is a beautiful city of China
28、, situated in the south of Shandong peninsula , covering an area of 10,654 spuare kilometers and with a population of 6.99 million. Qingdao faces the sea which becomes famous because of the blue seawater. Chinas best writers travelled around ancient Qingdao.Many of China s most beautiful essays and
29、poems were produced by great artists such as Li Bai, Pu Songlin and Kang Youwei. Qingdao is a international city, which possesses a great many modern buildings and factories.,1 连接词 2 框架词 3 内容词,1 连接词汇 表列举：for example、for instance、 that is to say 表补充：besides、in addition、moreover 表对比：on （the） one hando
30、n the other hand, in spite of 表原因：because of、thanks to、due to、 owing to 、as a result of 表结果：therefore、thus、as a result、so 表结论：to conclude、in a word、in brief、 to sum up in a nutshell in conclusion 表转折：however、nevertheless、yet,different,more and more,face,emphasize,many,discussion,attention,happen,rea
31、lize,various , vary from,growing, increasing,confront,attach importance to,vast, a overwhelming majority of, quite a few, an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of,debate, controversy,focus,occur,be aware of,think,believe, hold, argue, maitain, harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, h
32、old the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally ackowledged that, to my mind, as far as I am concerned,important,essential, vital, significant, notable,support,be in favor of, approve of,disagree,disapprove of , frown on sth,like,prefer, feel inclined to , be keen on, be fond of , app
33、eal to,good,benefical, positive, favorable, perfect, pleasurable,bad,dreadful,unfavorable, poor, adverse,内容词汇,Solve, deal with, cope with, handle, resolve, address, tackle,Damage, hurt, injure, harm, impair, undermine, jeopardize,Give, offer, render, impart, provide,supply, afford,Develop, cultivate
34、, foster,Advantage, merit, virtue, benefit, upside, strength,Disadvantage, demerit, drawback, downside, weakness,Puzzle, bewilder, perplex, baffle,Protect, conserve, preserve,Key, crucial, critical, important, significant, vital, substantial, indispensable, imperative,Assure, ensure, guarantee, pled
35、ge,Eliminate, clear, remove, clear up, take away, smooth away,Lead to, bring about, result in, cause, spark off, conduce to, procure, induce, generate,Allege, assert, declare, claim,Useful, helpful, beneficial, profitable, rewarding，advantageous,Influence, impact, effect,Clear, obvious, evident, sel
36、f-evident, manifest, apparent, crystal-clear,Comprise, take up, account for, constitute, consist of, make up, occupy, hold, compose,Compared with，compared to，in comparison with， in comparison to，by comparison with，by comparison to,Show, reveal, illustrate, demonstrate, depict, present, represent, de
37、scribe,Approximately，almost，about，around，nearly，roughly,真题三,假设你是李华，最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应该迁出市区。以下是你所在班级的讨论情况。请你给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。,扩展,第一段 引话题,第二段 正反议论,第三段 总结,第一段 引话题,When asked about their opinion of career and family, people always respond differently. Some people deem it more important to pursue their
38、 career, while there are always other people who argue that family should be the number one in ones life.,Punctuality is a necessary habit in all public affairs in civilized society.Without it ,nothing could ever be brought to a conclusion; everything would be in a state of chaos.,No creature has re
39、ceived more praise and abuse than the common garden snail. Cooked in wine, snails are a great luxury in various parts of the world.,第2段 正反议论,The other side of the picture is quite the opposite, One mans meat is another mans poison,Some people take the attitude that . . can produce positive effects o
40、n us in more than one way. First of all Furthermore Whats more,Others harbor the idea that . . may bring about negative impacts on us. For one thing For another,第三段 总结（个人观点）,Perhaps there is an element of truth in both these pictures. I hold that .,讨论,cell phone career and family,When asked about th
41、eir opinion of career and family, people always respond differently. Some people deem it more important to pursue their career, while there are always other people who argue that family should be the number one in ones life.,It goes without any question that career plays a key role in our life. In t
42、he very first place, career can give us an aim to live on. Without career, much of our living time will be certainly wasted. Whats more, career can provide us with a means to live on. Most of the people earn their income from a job. On the other hand, family is also an indispensable part of life, as
43、 many people will admit. Family is always regarded as a place where we can escape from troubles in life. In addition, we can obtain a sense of belonging to from family. Without it, anyone will feel lonely and desperate.,In my opinion, career and family are not in opposition to each other. Rather, th
44、ey can enhance each other so that ones life can become better and better. Therefore, its not a choice between right and wrong, but one between ideal and practical.,1 北京动物园建于1906年，有一段很重要的历史。,定语从句和分词作状语,Beijing zoo was built in 1906 and it has a very important history. Beijing zoo , which was built in
45、 1906 , has a very important history. Built in 1906 , Beijing zoo has a very important history. date back to,这个公寓位于芳草街，离建新华文学校只有一站。,Located on Fangcao Street, this flat is only one station from Jianxin Huawen School by bus No.11.,江城位于长江边，风景优美，适合居住。,Settled along the banks of Chinas longest river, th
46、e Yangtze river, Jiangcheng is a beautiful town for people to live in.,2 我们之所以要去种树，是因为树可以给我们提供新鲜的空气。,原因句型,The reason why + 句子 is that + 句子 （.的原因是.）,The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air. The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air
47、for us.,the reasons why I hold the view that name is very essential to individuals are as follows,3 草样年华这本书太有趣了，我看了好多遍还是大笑不止。,倒装句,So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子 （如此.以致于.）,So interesting is the book named The Age of Youth that I read it many times and cant help laughing.,Never had a dream come true .
48、 Impossible is nothing. ONLY so do I, so I do ,neither do I as,4 时间是如此珍贵，我们经不起浪费它。,So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it.,5 尽管一些西亚国家很富有，但是他们的民主制度是很难令人满意的。,Adj. + as + Subject（主词）+ be, S + V （虽然.）,Rich as the countries in west Asia are , the democracy there is by no means satisfactory.,
49、by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不,我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值。,On no account can we + V （我们绝对不能.）,On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.,6 你愈努力，你愈进步。,结婚后就没有歇过,the + er + S + V The + more + Adj. + S + V,The harder you work, the more progress you make.,我们书读愈多，我们愈有学问。,The more books we read, the more learned we become.,7 该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。,It is time + S + 过去式 （该是.的时候了）,虚拟语气,It is tim