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1、高考英语专题复习,06书面表达运用策略,国家教育部提出了修改中学课程标准的意见，其指导思想是：一个宗旨（素质教育）、二个重点（创新精神和实践能力）、三个面向（面向未来、面向国际、面向竞争）。同时提出了英语素质教育的目的和内容：激发和培养学习兴趣，帮助学生树立自信心，形成有效的学习策略，养成良好的学习策略，养成良好的学习习惯、掌握一定的语言知识和基本技能，建立初步的语感，获得基本的语言运用能力，开发智力、培养观察、记忆、思维、想象、创造能力，了解文化差异，增强世界意识，为学生的发展和终身学习打下良好的基础。在如此背景下进行的本研究项目的意义在于既符合国家对中学外语教学所提的要求和目标，也将写的训
2、练贯穿于日常教学活动的全过程，寓写于听说读等诸方面的训练中，从而使学生达到真正全面提高写的能力的目的。同时对中学外语教师指导学生如何写好英语作文也极具参考价值和帮助作用。,目前国内就中学生英语写作课题尚缺乏较完整、系统和科学的研究，更勿论提出有份量乃至权威的实验报告，用以指导我国学生的英语写作。而随着我国经济与国际接轨及加入世贸组织后，英文写作的重要性正在日益凸现，我们知道，语言交际，就是传递和接受信息。传递信息就是说和写，接受信息就是听和读。听和说是口头交际，读和写是书面交际，我们不仅要听懂别人说的、看懂别人写的，而且还要自己能说，且要说得地道，写得洋气，这样才算是真正实现了用英语进行交际的
3、目的。英语的听说读写四者密不可分，相互渗透，互为基础，又呈螺旋式提高。写的能力要在听说读的基础上培养和提高，而写的训练又能进一步提高听说读的能力，因此，今后有关中学生英文写作的研究将会越来越引起重视，并将进一步深化、细化。 中文和英文毕竟是两种不同的语言，差异很大。我们在写英文的时候经常会出一些错误，一部分是最基本的语法错误，这里我们把英文写作中常犯的错误列出一部分，以引起我们的注意。另一部分是由于东西方文化的差异所带来的不同思维方式所造成的。,写作研究的现状和发展趋势,第一章 高考作文评析,（一）题目要求 一个国际青年参观团正在访问我国某城市，你负责安排他们的参观活动。请起草一份通知，准备向
4、参观团成员宣读。通知必须用一段话说明以下几点： 1.参观日期：7月22日，星期六。 时间：早餐后8点出发。午餐在参观地吃。下午回来。 2.参观内容：分四组，每组参观一个地方：工厂、学校、农场或医院。 3.欢迎每人参加一组活动。请选择好参观地点，并在今晚9点前到服务台(the Service Desk)签名。,满分作文： Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? Welcome to our city! Im very glad to tell you our trip plans. There are four choic
5、es, including factories, schools, farms, and hospitals. Its up to you to decide which group you have interest. Were supposed to get going at 8 oclock tomorrow morning right after breakfast, and you dont have to take any food with you since lunch will be served at the site. Please make sure the place
6、 that you feel like going and sign up at the service desk before 9 p.m.! Thank you!,其它可用于本篇作文的好句子： 1. You will be put into four groups. 2. We have four trip plans for you to choose from. 3. You are supposed to be in any of the four groups. 4. There are four choices. Its up to you to decide which one
7、 is yours. 5. Choose a place which you may feel like visiting. 6. Well get going at 8 oclock tomorrow morning right after breakfast. 7. The trip is scheduled for a whole day, so Im afraid well have lunch on site. 8. In addition, you dont have to take any food with you, since lunch will be served at
8、the place you will be visiting. 9. Always stay with your guide, just to be on the safe side. 10. To make sure that the visits are well planned, we need you to sign up for your trip by 9:00 P.M 11. Thank you for listening.,04年浙江省高考英语卷书面表达解析,一、题目 假设你是李越,你的加拿大笔友Steve来信说,他和他的一些同学正在学中文,请你推荐两本学中文的词典，根据下表提
9、供的信息,请你给他写一封回信.,不少教师认为本案起点比较低，尖子生发挥水平的空间比较少，连“初中毕业生”都可以“应付”。但是评卷结果却让人大跌眼镜：该题的全省平均得分只有12.58分，满分（25分）者更是凤毛麟角。,二、写作解析,、这种英汉、汉英的方式使得学生能更方便地查找参照词。 、这本字典实际上是“双向”字典：一半是英汉，一半是汉英， 分别拥有20,000个汉字和18,000英语单词。 、这本字典大约有10,000字。 、英汉部分的英语单词后面都有相对应的汉语。 、所有的汉字都有英语翻译，这些翻译有助于更精确地理解汉字。 、尽管没有小本的新华字典那样容易携带，英汉/汉英字典还是更受学生们的
10、欢迎。 、对于常见的单词来说，它还含有充足的例子。 、它提供了大量的用法注解。,三、语句使用建议,9、它有相当多的例句和注解。 10、由于其易用和全面，我也经常使用这本字典。 11、我向所有中文学习者推荐这本字典。 12、因为它拥有其他字典不曾拥有的东西，所以我说它很有用。 13、平均三个中国人就有一个拥有这本字典。 14、总体上说，它特别有用，是本很有价值的字典。 15、与其他字典相比，这本字典十分有用。 16、总而言之，要选汉语字典，这是最好的选择之一。,1、The English-Chinese, Chinese-English format makes it convenient fo
11、r students to cross-reference words. 2、This dictionary is actually a two-way dictionary: one half is English/Chinese and the other half is Chinese/English, containing some 20,000 Chinese words and 18,000 English words. 3、This dictionary has roughly 10,000 words. 4、The E/C section has the English wor
12、d followed by the Chinese equivalent. 5、All Chinese characters are followed by English translation, which helps you understand the characters more accurately. 6、While not as portable as the smaller XD, the E/C C/E was more warmly welcomed by my students. 7、For common words it also includes efficient
13、 examples. 8、It provides lots of usage notes.,9、It has a good number of example sentences with necessary usage notes. 10、I use this dictionary a lot due to its ease of use and its completeness. 11、I highly recommend this dictionary for all learners of mandarin Chinese language. 12、I have found this
14、dictionary to be very helpful because it has what many Chinese dictionaries do not have. 13、On average, one in three Chinese own a copy of the dictionary. 14、Overall, it is extremely useful and a good value. 15、This dictionary is incredibly useful comparing to other ones. 16、In short, its one of you
15、r best options for a Chinese dictionary.,1、高考范文 Dear Steve, Im so pleased to learn that you and your classmates are learning Chinese. Id like to recommend the following two dictionaries. The English-Chinese Chinese-English Dictionary is really a good one for beginners. It has 18,000 English words an
16、d 20,000 Chinese words. Besides plenty of examples, it has many notes telling you bow to use a word. Xinhua dictionary is the most popular Chinese dictionary, and it has a vocabulary of 10,000 words. It may also be useful to some advanced learners of Chinese. Of the two, ECCED is the more expensive,
17、 costing 52 yuan, and XD costs 11 yuan. Please let me know if you want me to buy these dictionaries. (111 words),四、范文欣赏,2、考场高分范文 Dear Steve, Thank you very much for your last letter which asked me something about how to choose a dictionary for learning Chinese. Here I strongly recommend you the foll
18、owing two which may be useful to you. One of them is the English-Chinese/Chinese-English Dictionary, which will cost you 52 yuan. It contains some 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinese words. As it has lots of examples showing how to use the words, it will be much valuable for the beginners like y
19、ou. The other one, Xinhua Dictionary, which charges you only 11 yuan and has a collection of 10,000 Chinese words. It is the most commonly used one in China. If you need my help with your Chinese please write to me. (120 words),3、教师范文 Dear Steve, Very glad to have received your letter, saying that y
20、ou and your classmates are learning English. I wish you good luck with your efforts in Chinese learning. In your letter you also ask what Chinese dictionaries to use. Here are the two that I highly recommend. An ideal tool for study, the English-Chinese & ChineseEnglish dictionary collects 20,000 Ch
21、inese words and 18,000 English words. Abundant examples illustrate how and when a word can be used. As a must-have reference for beginners, the dictionary is worth the price, 52 yuan. The Xinhua Dictionary, consisting of 10,000 Chinese words, has been the most influential Chinese-only dictionary ava
22、ilable. The dictionary is relatively small, easy to carry and affordable, costing only 11 yuan. If you have further questions, let me know. (128 words),普通高校招生全国统一考试大纲中英语学科书面表达的“评分标准”中指出，评分时，应该注意“应用词汇和语法结构的数量、上下文的连贯性和语言的得体性”；最高档次的给分要求中还要求考生能够“应用较多的语法结构和词汇；尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇，具备较强的语言用用能力；有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全
23、文结构紧凑”等等。这些要求在上述三篇范文中，尤其是最后两篇范文中，都有较好的体现。,五、范文评析,范文中能够通过从属连词（第2篇）、非限制性定语从句（第2篇）、同位语（第3篇）和现在分词短语（第1、3篇）等语法结构来构建长句，使多个要点能够在一个句子中得以表达，从而使意义更为连贯、文章更为流畅。本案的并列信息比较多，如价格、拥有词汇量等，但是上面提到的多种语法结构的运用，使文章摆脱了内容上的乏味，变得很耐读. 范文中也体现了较强的词汇运用能力。在“考场高分范文”中，contain、charge、a collection of等的正确运用，无疑为文章增色不少；而“教师范文”中的用词亦有可圈可点之
24、处，通过efforts、collect、abundant、illustrate、consist of、influential、available、relatively等词，彰显了作者的词汇量，这与评分标准中的要求也是相吻合的。,05年浙江卷英语书面表达,一、题目（满分30分） 你的英国朋友正在做一个课题：世界各地的生日庆祝方式。他请你介绍中国学生过生日的方式。请你根据以下要点写一篇短文： （一）通常方式：1. 生日聚会 2. 生日礼物 3. 生日祝福 （二）我认为更有意义的庆祝方式和理由 词数：100-120,二、高考范文 Chinese students celebrate their bi
25、rthdays in different ways, but the most common way is to have fun drinking, singing and dancing. On the birthday, one usually receives nice gifts and good wishes from friends and parents. Sometimes, parents will prepare a special dinner or a cake to show their love for their children. Since birthday
26、 celebration is one of the important activities in ones life, it can be done in more meaningful ways. For example, we can buy some flowers or cook a delicious meal for our mothers on that day. In this way, we express thanks to our parents in return for their love. (105 words),三、考场优秀作文 In China, the
27、most common way to celebrate a birthday is to hold a birthday party. The birthday person usually invites some classmates and other relatives to the party in which his family members and friends will get together and have a good time. A big cake with candles on it is often seen and the birthday song
28、is sung on the occasion. People who are invited will bring gifts as well as their bet wishes. However, I think there is another way to make a birthday celebration more meaningful, to do a good deed for mothers. We can help them cooking or cleaning. Although this wont help them much, we at least show
29、 our love for them. (119 words),四、教师范文 In China birthday parties are important social gatherings where friends and relatives would bring gifts to the child having their birthday. Birthday cards with warm words of good wishes are often sent. A feast is usually given to the guests and noodles, extra-l
30、ong to symbolize long life, are served in honor of the birthday child. Although these traditions have been practiced for generations, people can create birthday traditions of their own, which I think should focus on thanksgiving rather than consumption. Children should set aside some time thinking w
31、hat they are thankful for and what they can do in return. One alternative is to help wash the dishes at night or do other chores for their mothers because it is their mothers “birth“ day. (124 words),五、可用于本题的一些好句子 Birthday parties are always among the highlights of each year for Chinese students. A
32、lot of people are invited including neighbors, friends and co-workers even if they dont have kids around the birthday childs age. Adults congratulate children on becoming a year older by presenting them with red envelopes that contain “Lucky Money.“,When boys or girls turn 10, they have a huge party
33、. On the day we have a family dinner with lots of invited guests. It does not seem like a birthday without noodles. The celebration includes noodles representing long life. The birthday child wears entirely new clothes to mark the occasion. One of the best-received gifts is the red envelope of money
34、. Like British students, the majority of Chinese children celebrate birthdays with a cake topped with lighted candles. When the cake is set before the guest of honor, he or she is supposed to make a wish, without telling anyone what it is.,A cake is made, and candles are put on top based on how old
35、the person is. At the end of the “happy birthday“ song, the birthday person blows out the candles and all guests applaud or cheer. The birthday child can choose where to eat out that night. The kids are taken out to their desired place where they can buy anything they want within a certain price ran
36、ge. I think we should create our own traditions, making birthday celebration more special and unique. The birthday person gets presents but also must give one present to the entire family. We can visit the hospital where we were born. Instead of giving money as a gift, parents can buy their children
37、 books. Each year a different theme should be chosen for the birthday.,六、评价与指导 1. 英语书面表达的题型从过去详细的中文提纲，慢慢演化为简洁的图画列表，到今天某一话题下的自由表达，走过了20多年的道路。本年度的书面表达半开放的命题方式，既是对新课程理念的响应，也是20多年探索的最新选择，应该说这一步并非是试探或偶然，而是走得非常坚决。,2开放或半开放的作文模式，写作容易落入俗套，因此这种题型要挑战我们过去英语作文只关注语言表达的狭隘思维，转而更多地去关注新的主意甚至是立意。“教师范文”中的because it is
38、their mothers “birth“ day一句，就是很好的“主意（理由）”，是寻常作文中不易发现的亮点。如果能够提出新鲜的主意，如We can visit the hospital where we were born等，相信可以赢得更多的赞赏分。然而新鲜的主意，并非能天上掉得下来，而是要仰仗大量的阅读和输入。越开放的作文题目，越要求平时有大量的阅读经历。课堂上积极回应教师的brainstorming、mind map等任务，认真倾听同学发言也不无裨益。,3. 开放或半开放的作文模式，题干通常比较简洁，因此要更加注意审题。在本例中，同学们比较容易忽略“更有意义”、“理由”等信息。忽略前
39、者，容易导致思想内容不够积极。比如有同学说：We can play tricks on the birthday person，或者：kissing is the best way because it doesnt cost much，就有调侃的意味，不够恰当。忽略后者，容易导致文章内容不够充实，比如有同学说We should say thanks to our parents and give them presents instead，接着就嘎然而止，缺乏了细致性和丰富性。,06年浙江卷英语书面表达,一 题目 当前不少文学作品被改编成电影。有人选择电影，有人喜欢读原著。请你以“Film
40、or book, which do you prefer?”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文： 看电影：省时、有趣、易懂 读原著：细节更多、语言优美 我的看法及理由 注意：1.词数100-120，文章题目和开头已给出（不计词数）。 2. 参考词汇：original work或book in the original（原著） Film or book, which do you prefer? Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.,二 高考范文,Film
41、or book, which do you prefer? Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow. Some others have just the opposite o
42、pinion. They think that they can get more detailed information from the original. Meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful. Personally, I agree with the second view. Actually I have more reason for it. I think I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my
43、own, and whats more, I am able to better understand the authors ideas. In a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.,三 考场优秀作文,Film or book, which do you prefer? Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. Compared with
44、reading the original work, they think, seeing the film requires less time, which no doubt is an outstanding advantage in this crazily rounding society. Seeing the film is also much more fun and helps understanding. Others, however, prefer reading the original work. Thats because the work has more de
45、tails of the story. Also, the beautiful language in the work has great appeal for the readers. I prefer reading the original work. In my opinion, books lead us to think, while seeing the film makes us lazy. Besides, reading the original work can also improve our reading skills.,四 教师范文,Film or book,
46、which do you prefer? Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. In their opinion, the film is much more interesting and easier to understand than the book. Whats more, to see the film saves us much time to know about the whole story. Howerver, some othe
47、rs hold a different view. They think that they can get much more details of the story from the original work. Meanwhile, the beautiful language in the book is also a great feast for their mind. As for me, I prefer to see the film. Thats because I like to see the carefully designed scenes of the stor
48、y. Besides, I can enjoy some beautiful music at the same time, which is especially important to a music lover like me!,五 可用于本文的一些好句子,The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. Thats because we can more easily understand the story through the film. Some others hold a differe
49、nt view. Some others dont share the same opinion. Personally, I agree with the second view. As for me, I would rather read the original book than see the film. In my opinion, reading the original book is much better than seeing the film.,I can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own. I will be able to see the carefully designed scenes as well as to enjoy some beautiful music. The original work tells more detailed information of the story and is well written in beautiful language. Whats more, I will be able to bet