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1、十句作文法 大纲要求： 要求考生根据提示进行书面表达。考生应能 ： （1）准确使用语法和词汇； （2）使用一定的句型、词汇，清楚、连贯 地表达自己的意思。要求考生根据提示写 一篇100词左右的英语作文。提示或图表、 或图文皆有。 写好英语作文至少要注意以下五个方面： 1、文章的组织：包括叙述的顺序、各句之间的逻辑关系 、过渡词的正确使用及格式的规范。叙述的顺序一般是 由总体到具体或者按照时间顺序而定。为使文章主体突 出、行文流畅，应注意上下文的逻辑关系的确定和过渡 词的恰当使用，这对提高整篇文章的档次至关重要。 2、句子的结构：一般来说，高考书面表达的篇幅大约是 10句，其中多数是简单句，少数
2、复合句。建议使用十句 作文法训练。 3、意义的表达：主要指用词妥当、句型正确和具有一定 的变通技巧。当同时可以用多种句型来表达一个意思是 ，考生应当选择自己熟悉的、有把握的句型。 写好英语作文至少要注意以下五个方面： 4、词的正确使用：包括词性的正确使用、动词的各种变 化形式的规范、名词的单复数的使用等。其中动词尤为 重要，动词形式的错误比其他词类形式的错误的扣分要 重。 5、内容的完整：一般供料作文包括一定数量的内容点， 漏写某一点则要被扣掉23分，因此审题要细心观察， 特别是在做看图作文题时，要注意某些夸张“画点”，它 （们）常是暗示应当写出的内容点。画面内容较多时， 不要事无巨细，全面开
3、花，应当仅仅围绕主题。恰当取 舍，做到详略得当。此外，100词左右的英语作文至少 需80词，最多不能超过120词，少词或多词则要扣分。 十句作文法 英语写作中流行的十句作文法是由专家总结一种高分作文方 法，考生在经过短期训练之后便可较大提高作文成绩。需要指出 的是：所谓十句作文并非一定是10句，很多考生的高分作文（ 200字以下）的句子数量都在8至12句之间（以句子长短和结构 不同而变化）。如按每个句子平均1015个单词计算，用812个 句子便能完成一篇要求在120150词的作文。其基本模式为： 第一段（开头） 主题句 扩展句 第二段（正文） 主题句 扩展句 扩展句 扩展句 扩展句 扩展句 （
4、视内容而定扩展句的多少） 第一段为开头，包括两句。第一句为主题句，提出 问题并通过问题点明全文主体；第二句为扩展句， 进一步说明和支持主题句。另外，也可将两句顺序 倒过来，由第一句说明情况，第二句提出问题。 第二段为正文，共七句。第一句为主题句，提 出本段的主体，它应与第一段的主体相一致。第二 句至第七句为扩展句，说明和支持本段的主体。句 与句之间要注意运用好过渡词，以使行文流畅。 第三段为结尾，简化为一句，使对全文的总结 ，并说明作者自己的观点。 三段之间的衔接要灵活运用“启、承、转、合”的 过渡手段。 第三段（结尾）结尾句 （范例） 高三学生学习紧张，考试压力大，因此，做 一些户外运动时很
5、有必要的。请你以“Health and Sports”为题完成一篇短文。可以围绕主题 适当展开，词数100120。 Health and Sports Some students say that taking sports is just a waste of time. At school, there are so many subjects to learn and so much homework to do that time is precious to them. To us senior three students, every minute counts. As a co
6、nsequence, there is no time available, especially for students to take outside sports. However, I should utter a sonorous voice that sports are essential to us. As an old saying goes, “All work and no play make Jack a dull boy.” Concentrating on study for all day long without any relaxation is not e
7、ffective and do harm to our health. Taking some exercises after class can relive the pressure of taking examinations. Of course, it is improper for students to overdo sports. As a whole, we should make a balance between sports and study. 专家点评： 本文是仿照十句作文法而写的一篇优秀考场作文。文 章围绕“Health and Sports”这一主题展开，两种观
8、点 陈述清楚。文中运用大量的词组和短语，语句变化多样 ，过渡自然，结尾表明自己的观点，也显得落落大方。 十大经典句型： 1、Its said that 2、No matter what/which/who/where/when/whose+从句 3、It is/was +被强调部分 +that (who) +剩余部分 4、It happened (chanced) that +从句=sb. Happened/chanced to do sth.= sb.did sth by chance 5、由as引导的非限制性定句从句/由where, when引导的定语从句 十大经典句型： 6、It +谓语
9、+时间段 +before +主语 +谓语(before 引导的是时间状语从句） 7、When/ So long as/ As long as/ Once +从句 ，+主句（从句也可放在主句之后） 8、No sooner + had +主语 +donethan +主语 + did 9、倍数表达句型 10、形容词、副词、名词 + as/though + 主语 + 谓语 +主句 句式供略 要抓住英语高考作文得高分的”关键点”,就 需要把好增加句子复杂性和使用高级词汇 这两道关。以下是增加句子复杂性的常见 方法： （1）句式要有变化。改变句子的开头方式 ，不要一味地以主语开头，接着是谓语， 宾语，最后
10、再加一个状语。可以把状语放 在句首，或用分词作状语等。 原文 We met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning. 修正 Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. 原文 The young man couldnt help crying when he heard the bad news. 修正 Hearing the bad news, the young man couldnt help cryin
11、g. (2) 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要 灵活运用诸如到装句、强调句、主从复合句、分 词状语从句等。 强调句 原文 My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It had saved my little sister bravely. 修正 My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It was our brave Ah Fu who had saved my little sister bravely. 由what等引导的从句，此处的what相当于中 文中的“所 ”，有很强的概括，如： 原文 We had to stand here
12、 to catch offender. 修正 What we had to do was ( to ) stand there, trying to catch the offender. 由with或 without引导的短语。如： He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand. 分词短语如： Satisfied with the result, he dicided to go on with a new experiment. 到装句 Only in this way can we achieve our goal. Never befor
13、e have I seen such a wonderful film. 省略句 If so, victory will be ours. You can make some changes wherever necessary. 对比，这在中文中也是常使用的方法如 Failure is not a crime, but failure to learn from failure is. When I play, I feel excited, and after it I feel relaxed. (3) 通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现 力。 原文 He stopped us an
14、 hour ago. He made us catch the next offender. 修正 He stopped us an hour ago and made us catch the next offender. 原文 We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and danced. Some told stories. Some played chess. 修正 After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes
15、 and playing chess. Transitional Word Consequence 结果类 让步类 Concession Cause 原因类 Time 顺序类 Conclusion 结论类 therefore, so, otherwise, as a result, thus, as a consequence after all, but, even if, although, but even so, in spite of because, for this reason, because of, due to ,on account of , thanks of, as
16、 first of all, in the first place, to begin with, but later on, first, second, at first, but soon, to sum up, to summarize, in a word, in brief, On the whole, 5. Transitional Word Example Emphasis (强调类） Addition Addition ( (递进递进 ） For example, for instance, for one thing,for another, namely, such as
17、,that is in deed, above all, in any case, in fact, Most important of all, whats more in addition besides, again also , moreover furthermore Whats more, Worse still, Transitional Word Transitional Word 连接词连接词 IX IX Contrast (Contrast (对比类）对比类） Jeans are the first choice for 72% of those in the 15 -19
18、 age group, whereas less than half of the teenagers in the UK wear other types of casual trousers. unlike, in contrast(相反） however, but, yet, on the contrary （正相反） still, whereas, while, instead, 1. Unlike her mother; she is tall and her mother is very short. 2.2. China is a developing country, in c
19、ontrast, Japan is a developed country. 3.Guangzhou has very good vegetables. Dalian, however, has much better seafood. 4. He wants to go to the West Lake, but he does not have enough money. 5.H loved swimming. Yet he had never been to the sea shore. 6.You must be tired. On the contrary, I feel wide
20、awake. 7.7. He had failed many times, still he kept on the experiment. 8.8. The husband wanted a boy, whereas the wife wanted a girl. 9.9. Some people like coffee, while others like tea. 书面表达 以下图画为我们描述了“山区饮水贵如 油，村里浇地直发愁；饱汉哪知饿汉 饥，城里水管哗哗流“的情景，请就此 写一篇英语短文，谈谈自己的感想。 词数：120左右。 Waste of water should not be
21、 excused! As we all know, our world is short of water. In some mountain areas water is more valuable than oil and sometimes many animals and even villagers die just because they have no water to drink. At the same time farmers need water to irrigate their fields but every year in some areas of the w
22、orld, important to save water. So it is high time that we should make it known to everyone that water is valuable. it rains little. As a result, farmers worry about how to water their fields. If they cant get enough water they will have to go hungry. Meanwhile, people in cities waste water every day. We often find that some people leave the running water flowing day and night. They dont realize it is