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1、英语书面表达写作指导,之,漫 画 作 文 (议论类),谋篇,3 parts: 1) describe the picture 2) interpret its meaning 3) give your opinions about the phenomenon,Part 1 Describe the picture,The picture is talking about/shows The picture shows a common phenomenon. The picture describes an interesting phenomenon. The picture above
2、is about ,Part 1 Describe the picture,What an interesting picture it is! Sitting before a plate of zongzi, the boy is at a complete loss of how to unwrap them and eventually turns to a book for instructions! The picture is trying to convince us of a fact that many of the young are losing their basic
3、 hands-on ability in everyday life.,Part 2. Interpret the picture,It seems very ridiculous thatHowever, this kind of story is performed everywhere. The picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection of The picture indicates that weNowadays, it is a common phenomenon that,Many factors contribute to thi
4、s phenomenon.(过渡句) Firstly, many children have been forced to focus on their school work only, having little or no space to experience things in real life. Secondly, parents are over-protective. They take over almost all their childrens life. Thirdly, the Internet and certain books provide actually
5、everything we need. It is not surprising for children to develop dependence on them for help.,Part 3 Give your opinions (结合动手能力和新的人才观，谈看法）,I think/believe that As far as Im concerned, In my opinion, From my point of view,should It is better/advisable to I consider it necessary,Only in this way can.,
6、must have to Do/Dont,From where I stand, giving children chances to do things for themselves is the only remedy. Anyway, nobody can learn to swim without jumping into water. . Only in this way can we children grow up confidently and eventually live our dreams.,高级句,1.Its our dependence on machines an
7、d lack of practice that contribute to the problem.(陈雨瑶) 2.Only when we combine book knowledge with practice can we lead a better life.(杨云) 3.Being a student, I think not only should we put our study in the first place, but also we need pay attention to developing our hands-on ability.(薛刘娅) 4.Only wh
8、en we gain our knowledge and practical skills can we adapt to society well.,5.So what we need to do is to keep the balance of studying book knowledge and gaining our hands-on ability. 6.Our studies are important, but so is our hands-on ability. (钱玲) 7.To be an outstanding man, not only should we bro
9、aden our horizons by learning knowledge, but we are also supposed to master some basic abilities.(陈雪菲) 8.Only if we are aware of the importance of hands-on ability and take measures to practice can we improve our lives in the long term.,1.努力推进素质教育 3给孩子充分自由发展他们自己的兴趣 3努力去实现梦想 4有助于社会发展 5全方面发展,1.push ah
10、ead with quality education 2.give children more freedom to develop their own interests 3.make every effort to realize their own dreams 4.contribute to the development of society 5.develop in a all-round way,注意点:,1.时间分配和文章长度 2.标题 3.图画的描述 4.层次 (分段, 原因分析, firstly. secondly thirdly ) 5.发表自己的看法至少三行 6.句式多样:强调句,倒装句,非限制性定语从句,分词做结果状语 (不宜用很多的问句),