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1、中文论文中的英文写作：一些较常见的问题,中国医学科学院 北京协和医学院,肿瘤研究所,周传农,题目,题目太繁,双侧迷走神经和颈总动脉联合切断法 建立急性脑缺血大鼠动物模型的实验研究 Bilateral vagotomy and carotid arteries combined cutting method Establishment of rat model of acute focal cerebral ischemia animal model experimental study 双侧迷走神经和颈总动脉联合切断法建立急性脑缺血大鼠动物模型 Establishment of a rat m
2、odel of acute focal cerebral ischemia by combined bilateral vagotomy and carotid artery cutting,题目太大,儿童单纯性肥胖模型的制作 Establishment of Childood Simple Obesity Animal Model 儿童单纯性肥胖小鼠模型的制作 Establishment of a mouse model of childhood simple obesity,（本文只作了小鼠实验，未涉及其他动物）,题目太笼统,不同测压方法测试大鼠结肠破裂压 A comparison of
3、different pressure testing systems for hollow organ of laboratory animals Comparison of different methods for testing the colon rupture pressure in rats,题目不能反映原意、用错单词,基因工程大鼠研究进展 Process in Rat Genetics Progress in research on rat genetic engineering,题目滥用缩写,乳酸调控大鼠肠黏膜微血管内皮细胞NF-B信号通路的研究 Lactic acid inh
4、ibits NF-B signaling pathways in RIMMVECs 读者看不懂 RIMMVECs是什么； “的研究”可以省去。,题目滥用缩写,哺乳动物 ES 细胞与 EG 细胞研究进展 哺乳动物 胚胎干细胞与 胚胎生殖 细胞研究进展 ES embryonic stem cells EG embryonic germ cells,题目 拼写错误,comparision of hematological parameters in germ-free and conventional guinea pig comparison of hematological parameters
5、 in germ-free and conventional guinea pig,题目 用错单词,适度深吸气呼吸控制部分乳腺外照射时基于不同参照物配准对银夹构成几何体分次内位移的影响 Influence of registration based on the different reference markets on the displacement of the geometry consisted of all clips in the cavity for external-beam partial breast irradiation at moderate deep inspi
6、ration breath holding,markers,署名与单位,署名大小写,Li bao-ming , wang zhida，liu xiaowen，yao tao,ouyang xiaotong,su jiagang Li Bao-ming , Wang Zhi-da，Liu Xiao-wen，Yao Tao, Ouyang Xiao-tong, Su Jia-gang 姓名大写、标点符号,单位 错词、错名、大小写,The forth Applicated Hospital of Suzhou University the Forth Affiliated Hospital of S
7、oochow University,历史形成的传统地名，已成为这所大学的正式名称，不可用现今的汉语拼音代替,单位不全,Academy of Military Sciences Academy of Military Medical Sciences,单位大小写,Department of , The Fifth Central Hospital of Tianjin, Tianjin 300162, china. Department of , The Fifth Central Hospital of Tianjin, Tianjin 300162, China.,写错单位名称,Wantwa
8、nthospital, Changsha 410016, China Wang Wang Hospital,错误的注释,注释错误,糖尿病 (diabetic mellitus ) 糖尿病 (diabetes mellitus),注释错误,腺病毒（adenoviral） 腺病毒（adenovirus）,注释错误,单纯疱疹病毒 （herpes simple virus） 单纯疱疹病毒 （herpes simplex virus）,错误注释,无特定病原体 (special pathogen free，SPF) 无特定病原体 (specific pathogen free，SPF),注释错误,独立通风
9、笼具 (Individually wentilate cagesdul，IVC) (Individually ventilated cages，IVC),注释错误,集落形成抑制法 (human tumor cell cloning assay , HTCA ) (colony formation inhibition assay ),注释错误,自然杀伤细胞 (natural kill cell，NK) 自然杀伤细胞 (natural killer cell，NK),注释错误,神经生长因子 （never growth factor，NGF） 神经生长因子 （nerve growth factor
10、，NGF）,全文多处，全都错用这个单词,参考文献的 书写错误,参考文献作者 丢失第一作者、姓与名颠倒,Jeongmi An, Hee-Jin Y, Kimoon Park，et al. (原杂志) Jeoum Lee, Jeongmi An，Hee-Jin Yang，Byung-Woo Kim, Kimoon Park. Lee J, An J, Yang HJ，et al.,参考文献作者 姓名拼写错误、标点符号,Gordon MN,K ing DL,D iam ond DM et al. Gordon MN, King DL, Diamond DM, et al.,参考文献作者 姓与名颠倒、
11、标点符号,Maria WW,Edward P,Dennis L,et al . Werner-Wasik M, Pequinot E, Leeper D, 原文：Maria Werner-Wasik, Edward Pequinot, Dennis Leeper, et al.,参考文献作者 不可用怪异的写法,Giuseppe VerdileSamuel E Gandy Ralph N. Martins. Giuseppe Verdile G, Gandy SE, Martins RN.,参考文献作者 etc./et al.,Tyler KL, Barton ES, Ibach ML,ETC.
12、 Tyler KL, Barton ES, Ibach ML, et al.,拉丁文： etc. 是指物，例如 apple, banana, etc. et al. 是指人，例如 Gordon MN, King DL, Diamond DM, et al. 不可混淆。,参考文献 不可出现两批作者,Vanini G, Wathen BL, Lydic R, et al. Baghdoyan,et al.Endogenous GABA Levels in the potine Vanini G, Wathen BL, Lydic R, et al. Endogenous GABA Levels i
13、n the potine ,参考文献作者 不可用数字11代替文字母ll、 姓与名颠倒、大小写、etc.,Wi11iam Luyties, Peter J. Bredenbeek, Ans F.H. noten etc. Luytjes W, Bredenbeek PJ, Noten AF, et al.,参考文献 错写中国作者、标点,Yuhuan W,Xinming T,Charles H,et al. Wang YH, Tu XM, Humphrey C, et al. 原文：Yuhuan Wang, Xinming Tu, Charles Humphrey, ,参考文献 引错作者、文题拼写
14、错误、杂志拼写错误,Schmitt CA, Lowe SW. Apoptosis cell death following exposure to fluoride in rat alveolar macrophage. Arch Toxical, 1996, 70: 249-251 Hirano S, Ando M. Apoptotic cell death following exposure to fluoride in rat alveolar macrophages. Arch Toxicol, 1996, 70: 249-251,参考文献 缺杂志、缺标点,Age-related i
15、ncrease inducible atrial fibrillation 201021(1):88-93. Age-related increase inducible atrial fibrillation. J Cardiovasc Electrophysiol 2010，21(1): 88-93.,参考文献 文题首词丢失,Campylobacter jejuni infection in different mice strains Primary Campylobacter jejuni infection in different mice strains,参考文献 丢了作者、写了
16、单位,Cleveland Clinic Foundation, Cleveland, OH, USA. The global epidemiology of heart failure. Med Clin N Am 2004, 88: 1135-1143. Young JB. The global epidemiology of heart failure. Med Clin N Am 2004, 88: 1135-1143.,参考文献文题脱漏,Fossella FV, DeVore R, Kerr RN, et al. Randomized phase III trial of doceta
17、xel versus vinorelbine or ifosfamide in patients with advanced non-small-cell lung cancer previously treated with platinum-containing chemotherapy regimens. The TAX 320 Non-Small Cell Lung Cancer Study Group. J Clin Oncol, 2000，18: 2354-2362.,滥用缩写,滥用缩写,Ca.C 中survivn阳性 “Ca.C”是什么？ （一张照片的说明） （文内根本就没有见到
18、过“Ca.C” ） （猜想是癌细胞的意思）,英文摘要滥用缩写,To screen the genes differentially expressed in human renal cell carcinoma (RCC) cell lines using SSH. To screen the genes differentially expressed in human renal cell carcinoma (RCC) cell lines using suppression subtractive hybridization (SSH).,（摘要首句）,滥用缩写英文摘要,IHC ana
19、lysis on TMA revealed that Immunohistochemical analysis on tissue microarray revealed that ,滥用缩写英文摘要,Objective： To observe the affect of RGZ and ATRA on the growth of myeloma xenograft in nude mice and RGZ rosiglitazone ATRA all-trans-retinoic acid affect effect,用错词,错词,大鼠给予药液灌胃 All rats were lavaged
20、 with KFL solution. All rats were gavaged with KFL solution.,错词,神经上皮移植 Neuralepithelial transplantation Neuroepithelial transplantation,错词,巴马小型猪12只 12 Obama mini-pigs were randomly divided into 12 Bama mini-pigs were randomly divided into ,错词,Low does Low dose High does High dose,通篇如此,错词,RT-PCR was
21、used to amplification the full-length sequence of RT-PCR was used to amplify the full-length sequence of ,错词,GeneBank GenBank,错词 用词颠倒了,正常、特异抗原批内变异系数分别为8.3%和6.4%，批间平均变异系数分别为9.7%和11.5%. The inter-assay coefficient of variation of normal antigen and special antigen was 8.3% and 6.4%, and the intra-assa
22、y average coefficient of variation was 9.7% and 11.5%, respectively,错词,评价其抗癌作用 To access the anti-tumor effect To assess the anti-tumor effect ,错词,探讨其作用机理 To explicit the molecular mechanism of To explore the molecular mechanism of ,英文摘要首句,错词,系统性感染 Systematic infection Systemic infection,单复数,The lev
23、el of P24 antigen in the supernatant were tested continuously. The level of P24 antigen in the supernatant was tested continuously.,其他,不好的文章首句,MG患者通常有眼肌受累， 重症肌无力（myasthenia gravis，MG）患者通常有眼肌受累，,不好的摘要首句,To Investigate the mechanism of NAFLD in gerbils To Investigate the mechanism of non-alcoholic fat
24、ty liver disease (NAFLD) in gerbils,中英文的语气应该一致,结论 Ezrin、E-cadherin和CD44V6在NSCLC的生长和转移过程中发挥着重要的调控作用， Ezrin, E-cadherin and CD44V6 probably play an important role in the regulation of growth and meastasis of lung cancer.,材料与方法,Methods Rats were divided randomly into 2 groups. Methods One hundred and t
25、wenty healthy adult male rats were randomly divided into two groups.,英文无顿号,The values of Ri, Re, Cl, MVV, FVC, Fev0.2, Fev0.2/FVC, FEF25-75%, PEF were 1.81 (0.94-4.10) cm H2O/mLs、1.83 (0.71-3.57) cm H2O/mLs、0.15（0.05-0.29）mL/cm H2O、144.65 (77.28-256.20) mL/min、8.49 (5.82-12.70) mL、5.72 (3.62-7.01)mL
26、、68.12 (39.14-85.28)%、34.11 (28.25-46.87) mL/min、38.28 (30.75-50.25) mL/min, respectively.,（9个参数）,英文无顿号,拼写错误,主要组织相容性复合体II类 (majorhistocompatibilitycomplex II, MHC II) 主要组织相容性复合体II类 (major histocompatibility complex II, MHC II),大小写错误,20 mg/Kg 20 mg/kg 1 KDa100 KDa分子量 1 kDa100 kDa分子量 ALT( u/l) ALT ( U
27、/l),讨 论,SCI拒稿十大原因,1. 可读性差，英文书写太差、与杂志内容或格式不符 2. 原创性不足，证据和逻辑不清 3. 摘要与正文不一致 4. 文体杂乱，序言太长，缺乏完整性 5. 应按照CONSORT指南书写，不可缺项 6. 结果凌乱 7. 统计学处理错误 8. 讨论离开正题，进行无关的议论 9. 结论未充分结合观察结果 10. 未引用最新进展的文献，过时了,20120425 亚洲环宇 MEDCOM ASIA,国际期刊的录用标准,一流：思路新颖 70%，实验25%，写作5% 二流： 40% 40% 20% 三流： 20% 50% 30%,说明在一篇论文中，英文的撰写很重要，不可疏忽大意。,因果探讨,第一作者的科研作风和实际水平 通讯作者的把关和实际水平 审稿人的把关和实际水平 折射出我国医学英语教育中有缺失 直接影响与长期影响值得重视,具体建议,导师讲解英文书写的重要意义 导师的具体指导和督促检查 阅读文献不忘学习英语 端正科研作风和优化学习方法： 文题 作者和单位 方法 结论 文内的注释 参考文献,呼吁： 作者、审者、编者、读者 共同努力， 大力促进两刊发展！,