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1、Writing a composition,英语记叙文的写作的结构,Beginning Topic sentence 主题句,Ending,Conclusion 结论句,写作基本要求 仔细研读汉语及英文提示词，千万不要漏项 列出可能用到的句型，注意关联词的使用，如： and, but, so, although, because等 语法方面：时态，人称的准确使用 形成整个文段，想好“开头，中间，结尾”（发表议论，谈感受） 可以适当分段 写完后要通读检查,每个人都需要朋友。你的朋友叫什么？来自哪里？你们是怎样认识的？谈谈你们之间的友谊以及你的看法。 everyone, friend ,come
2、from, get to know, be sure.,Everyone needs friends. But different people have different ways to make friends. My friend is an American girl. Her name is Linda. We got to know each other on the Internet. We talk about what we are interested in through the Internet. Though we live in different countri
3、es, I think we have known each other well. We only wish to see each other one day. People often say few friends can last long. But if we can really understand and help each other, we are sure that we can be friends all the time.,假设你是李平，已在初中学习大约三年。你的学习生活很紧张，但在课余时间你还是参加了许多体育运动，如足球、乒乓球、跑步、游泳、谈谈你最喜爱的一项体
4、育运动，为什么喜欢，运动的情况和感受等、 name, Liping, study, busy, spare time, healthy, think.,My name is Li Ping. Im a student of Grade Three. Although Im very busy with my study, in my spare time, I take part in several kinds of sports, such as, playing football, pingpong, running, swimming and so on. They can help
5、me keep strong and healthy. Of all the sports, running is my favourite, because its very easy to do. Now Im in our school running team. I practise very hard every day at any place when Im free. With my practice and the teachers help, I have made great progress. I think Ill try my best to win some pr
6、izes for our great country like Liu Xiang in the future. Im sure I can make it.,学校要组织课外活动丰富同学们的业余生活,你想参加哪项体育活动呢? 1)请你写出参加的活动, 2)并说明你参加的理由 3)以及在活动中你都做了什么, 4)同时谈谈你对课外活动的看法.,There are many after-class activities in our school, such as running, playing tennis,playing basketball and so on. I like playing
7、 basketball very much, so I want to take part in the basketball activity. I think playing basketball can not only make us strong, but also help us keep healthy. I often play basketball with my friends after class.While Im playing basketball, I often practise passing the ball, shooting at the basket
8、and some other basketball skills,sometimes we have a basketball match. I have also made many new friends. After-class activities can help us relax our body and mind. I hope everyone can take part in after-class activities, because its good for us.,你曾经去过长城.请你描述一下去长城的经历, 如: 1)你什么时间去的 2) 怎样去的 3)和谁去的 4)
9、做了什么及感受如何 the Great Wall, wonder, about 6700 kilometres, happy, proud,The Great Wall is one of the greatest wonders in the world. Its about 6,700 kilometres long. As far as I remember, I went to the Great Wall in 2002 for the first time and I went there with my parents by bus. Standing at the foot o
10、f the Great Wall, I found the Great Wall looked like a huge dragon on the mountains. It took us about two hours to get to the top. Then we took some photos and had a picnic.,We didnt come back until it was very late. Although I felt very tired, I was very happy. Im proud of being a Chinese because o
11、f the Great Wall . I hope that more and more people can visit the Great Wall and enjoy the beautiful scenery.,Dear Jack, Thank you for your letter.Im sorry to hear that you often get sick.Here Id like to give you some advice on how to stay healthy.First,have enough sleep every day.Secondly,eat a bal
12、anced diet.You can eat more fruit and vegetables.Thirdly,wash your hands before you have meals.Fourthly,take enough exercise every day.Finally,drink more water,and you can drink a glass of milk before you go to bed.I hope my advice will be useful to you. Best wishes! Yours,Henry,Take picture 拍照片 to
13、ones surprise 令某人感到惊讶的是 throw litter仍垃圾 pourinto把倾倒入 produce harmful gases 产生有害的气体 as a result 结果 protect the environment 保护环境 范文 This term I take part in the research of our school geography study group.The topic is Environmental Pollution and Protection. We took many different kinds of pictures.Th
14、ey showed the present pollution conditions of our city.To our surprise,there are still many people doing harm to the environment.Some people throw litter everywhere,some cars produce harmful gases,and waste water is poured into rivers by some factories by some factories.As a result,the environment i
15、s polluted badly.How important it is to prtect the environment! I think everyboby must do something to save our world.If we dont, our future will be hopeless.,6、学校要组织课外活动(after- class activities)丰富同学们的课余生活，既有体育类的又有英语角活动，你想参加(take part in )哪一项活动？庆任选其一，说明你先参加的理由，并谈谈你对课外活动的看法。,There are all kinds of af
16、ter class activities in our school, such as sports activities, English corner and so on .I think after-class activities can make our life rich and interesting .At the same time ,we can learn a lot of knowledge that we cant learn in class. I want to take part in English corner , I like English very m
17、uch .I think its very interesting and useful. As we all know ,the Olympic Games will be held in Beijing in 2008 .I want to be a member of serving the 2008 Olympics, I also want to help the foreign friends from all over the world . I will talk with them and show them around the places of interest in
18、Beijing .So now I should try my best to practise my spoken English so that I can talk with them .,7.随着网络的发展，电子贺卡得到越来越多的人的青睐，请根据以下提示，阐述电子贺卡的优越性，,With the development of the Internet ,more and more people have begun to send electronic cards instead of paper ones Electronic cards have some advantages .
19、First , its much faster to send an electronic card than to send a paper one. Secondly ,compared with paper cards ,electronic cards are more interesting .There are many kinds of electronic cards for you to choose on the Internet .You can get not only pictures but also sounds and animations .Thirdly .
20、this can help protect forests and environment .,作文：随着阳光体育运动在全国开展“每天锻炼一小时，健康工作50年，幸福生活一辈子。” 的理念深入人心，校园里出现了可喜的变化：运动时间延长了， 运动项目增加了，学生体质增强了， 校园生活丰富了。清以为题给校刊写一份报道。 内容要点提示：80词左右，可适当发挥。 1：time for sports 2:kinds of sports 3:change of students health and study 4:change of school life,Sports in our school,Sp
21、orts in our school have changed a lot ,now we have more than three P.E classes a week, and we have at least one hour to exercise every day . Students get so excited at these changes . More and more students take an active part in the ball games , running ,and jumping on the playground .our school li
22、fe is becoming more wonderful. Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit .What more ,a healthy body can help us study better and live a happier life.,My mother My mother is very kind and easygoing.She helps me a lot.She takes good care of my daily life.For example,every morning,she wakes me u
23、p and cooks breakfast for me.When Im in trouble,she always encourages me to face my difficulities and cheers me up.I still remember that once I argued with my best friend and was sad.My mother talked with me the whole night and finally helped me solve the problem.With her help,I became a top student
24、 in my class.Im very thankful for all that she has done for me.I believe she will be proud of me in the near future.,My teacher My English teacher Miss Li is very kind and easygoing. She helps me a lot. She takes good care of us.She often helps me with my English. When Im in trouble,she always encou
25、rages me to face my difficulities and gives me good advice.I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and was sad.With her help,I made great progress in English and became interested in it. Im very thankful for all what she has done for me .Ill try my best to live up to her exp
26、ectations.,在你学习过程中，你的老师、同学或者朋友一定曾经给过你很多的帮助。请你以“My Best”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，来参加英语周报的征文比赛。内容应包括：对你的老师或朋友的简单介绍；谈谈他/她是怎样帮助你的以及你的感受及想法。 所给英文提示词语供选用。 注意：请不要写出真实校名和姓名。 best friend, kind, help，encourage，cheer up,My best friend is Liu Mei. She is very kind and easygoing. She helps me a lot. When Im in trouble, sh
27、e always encourages me to face my difficulties and cheers me up. I still remember that once I failed in an important English exam and became upset, she cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With her help, I made great progress in English and became interested in it. Im very
28、 thankful for all what she has done for me. Ill never forget her. (91words),文段 你一定有不少美好的经历.请你把其中有意义的一天描述出来.谈谈那天的天气如何?发生了什么事?你有什么心情、感受或体会？,a good time , invite, enjoy, relaxation,That day I had a good time. It was sunny and hot, and you know sunny days always make me happy. My friends invited me to g
29、o to the beach to have fun. There we did a lot of things. In the morning we all went out boating in the sea. In the afternoon ,some were playing beach volleyball joyfully, while others were swimming in the sea. As for me , I especially enjoyed the sunshine. So I lay on the beach and read my favourit
30、e novel under my umbrella. It was so relaxing. Study is important, and so is relaxation.,现在网络在人们的生活中越来越重要，人们可以在网上做很多事情。你经常上网吗？你是如何看待中学生上网的？请谈谈你的看法。 （要求80100个单词） Internet ，important ，make good use of,The Internet is becoming more and more important to us. Without it, we cant do work better . We can g
31、o shopping without going out of our houses. And we can listen to music or watch movies on the Internet. It can also help a lot with our study. We can learn much knowledge on different subjects, and get information as soon as possible.,But now, some of us study or play on the Internet for a long time
32、. Its bad for our eyes and health. Some students spend too much time playing computer games. As a result, they cant get good marks although they are very clever. I think if we make good use of the Internet, it will be our best friend and help us a lot .,writing,作文练习(Module 6) 李明是北京一所绿色学校的学生，他非常关心保护环
33、境每周六他都去他家附近的公园，街道捡拾垃圾 请你就李明的事迹，以”Learn from Liming”为题，给学校投稿内容包括:李明的事迹简介，你对这件事的感受，以及你对环保的一些想法 student, a green school, Beijing, care about, protect, go, rubbish, moved(受感动的）, learn from, from now on, earth.,Liming is a student at a green school in Beijing. He cares about protecting the environment. E
34、very Saturday he goes to the park and the streets near his home to pick up rubbish. I was deeply moved by his story. I think he is a good student because what he did shows that he is always careful of the environmental problems.I should learn from him. From now on, I will also do something for our e
35、nvironment, such as, using things for as long as possible, opening a window,instead of turning on air conditioning, taking my own cloth bag when shopping instead of using plastic bags and so on. The earth is our home, so everyone should try to protect our environment. Now lets all do something for o
36、ur Earth. Please remember : a better environment lies in our hands.,汶川地震（Wenchuan Earthquake）发生后，9岁学生林浩救了两名同学，然后步行7个小时到达安全地点。 请你就林浩同学的事迹，以 “Learn from the hero”为题，给你校英语专刊投稿。内容包括林浩同学事迹简介，你对这件事的感受，以及你要想他学习什么。 提示词语：a student, nine years old, happen, save, walk, to safety, be deeply moved, brave, give u
37、p,Lin Hao is a student. He is nine years old. After Wenchuan Earthquake, he saved two of his classmates. Then he walked for seven hours to safety. I was deeply moved by his story. I think he is a brave boy. He did his best when he faced great danger. I should learn from him. I will think of others f
38、irst and help them as much as possible. I will never give up when I face difficulties.,假如你们班将举行一次以“sports and Health” 为主题的班会。请你根据自己的实际情况，写一篇介绍自己体育锻炼情况的文稿，说明喜欢体育锻炼的原因、感受和建议。 提示词语：love, sports, because good, play, enjoy, strong, keep, take part in,假设你是新华中学的学生,简要介绍一下你自己,包括个人情况、业余爱好以及今后在学习英语方面的打算。 提示词语：
39、 I， student, XinHua Middle School, old, like, in my spare time, often, learn English, listen, speak, in The future.,Im a student in XinHua Middle school. Im fifteen years old. I like listening to music in my spare time, I often read English in the morning and try to talk with others in English, Im i
40、nterested in English and Im good at it,too. From now on, I will learn English harder than before. I plan to listen to English half an hour every day and speak English as much as possible.,In the future I will go abroad to study.So its important for me to study English well.,保护我们的环境是十分重要的,它有利于我们的身体健康
41、.世界上仅有一个地球,我们就生活在这个地球上,所以保护环境是我们的责任.在生活中,我们应该做些什么呢?我们该怎么做呢? important environment necessary pick up dustbin(垃圾箱) plant should shouldnt,学校英文校刊正在征集有关保护环境的文章。假如你是李华，请你为校刊写一篇文章，内容包括：介绍你的个人信息；你平时是如何保护环境的；你的感受以及建议。 name,LiHua,No. Middle School,care about,save,rubbish,dustbin,be good for hope,earth,My name
42、 is Li Hua. I study at No.6 Middle School.Although I am busy with my study, I always care about the environment. When I see some rubbish in the street, I pick it up and put it into the dustbin. I never throw the waste things everywhere. I think everyone should protect the environment.We mustnt throw
43、 rubbish everywhere.and we can plant more trees and flowers.Its good for our environment.,There is only one earth in the world.So we should try our best to protect it and make it more and more beautiful.,Everyone wants to keep healthy. It,s important for us stay healthy. In order to make myself stro
44、ng, I often take part in some kinds of sports, such as running, playing basketball, swimming and so on. I also play pingpang with my friend in my spare time. On the other hand, I have more vegetables and less meat for my meals. I like eating fruit ,too. Now Im becoming healthier and stronger. Im not
45、 often ill.,I think if you want to keep healthy, you should take exercise a lot and eat healthy food. They,re good for you.,All the schools in our country are having all kinds of sport activities now. Every morning there are many students taking exercise on the playground. Some play football. Some g
46、o running. Others jump or do morning exercises. The exciting time for me is Da Kejian in the afternoon. All the students and teachers get together to run on the playground after two classes . It often takes us half an hour to run around the playground.,I like such sport activities. Every day after r
47、unning I feel very comfortable. Though sometimes I feel a bit tired, I never give up and now I become stronger and healthier than before. I think everyone should take more exercises because it can make you healthy and strong. Its very important for everyone to keep healthy.,1、随着人们生活水平的不断提高，父母经常给自己的孩
48、子一些零花钱，有的孩子将这些钱花在食品、饮料上, 有的用来购买学习用具，还有的将这些钱一点点积攒起来,花在更有意义的事情上。你是怎样想和怎样做的呢？ 提示词语：parents, pocket money, different, food, drinks, save, future, help,Parents usually give their children some pocket money. Children spend the money on different things. Such as food, drinks or school things. I dont spend
49、the money like they do. My parents are both workers. They dont have a lot of money. When I get some pocket money from them, I save the money for future use. I hear that some children in poor areas cant go to school because their families are very poor. I think if I save my pocket money and give it to the poor children , maybe I can help them study at school. I hope theyll have a nice future when they grow up.,2.假设你是李平，已在初中