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1、如何取得作文高分 -CET4作文精讲（二）,DAI Hui English Dept., SFL GDUT,Fear can hold you prisoner; Hope will set you free. -“Andy” from Shawshanks Redemption,考试大纲 p1-2,一般性写作任务 两个“一般性” 一般性话题 290-710 500均值+70 425， 550,第二课 TYPE 1的写法和作文使用技巧（上）,一、 TYPE 1的写作手法（正反我型）,题目：Reading Selectively Or Extensively? 提纲： 1）有人认为读书要有选择
2、2） 也有人认为应当博览群书 3） 我的想法,The issue over how to read is heatedly discussed. Some people claim that we should read selectively. They argue that, with the evolution of society, books in growing numbers are published. It is impossible for us to read all of them. Moreover, there are countless bad books whi
3、ch are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldnt read them, at all. But others may not agree. They emphasize that todays society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed, of course. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in others, he
4、is not likely to succeed. So far as I could understand, both of them have something sensible. And I think we should read extensively first and read selectively in one particular field afterwards. (142 words),TYPE1 大模板分析,P1-第一段 S1：XX问题已经变成了我们讨论的热点。 S2: 有人认为我们应该。 S3: 他们强调说。比如。,TYPE1 大模板分析,P2-第二段 S1：然而
5、，另有一些人并不同意。 S2：他们坚持认为XX是合理的做法。 S3：举例来说，。,TYPE1 大模板分析,P3第三段 S1：关于以上问题，我认为 S2：因为。 S3：总的来说，如果能很好的结合两种观点，XX将会更加完善、有效。,P1,The issue over ( )is heatedly discussed. Some people claim that 选择A is a preferable choice. They emphasize that todays world is not what it was before. With the evolution of society i
6、t is sensible to 3分钟，自己写一个P2模板,P2,S1：Others, however, may not accede to such idea. S2: They hold on to the belief that we should (选择B) S3: Take YY for example,P3,S1: So far I am concerned, I agree to the former/latter viewpoint because. S2: Judging from the two sides of the story, if we can achieve
7、a balance between A and B, XX will function more appropriately for us.,总结,T1(正反我型)的命题有什么特点？ 1. 选择性疑问句 Should we Or should we? 2. 提纲中出现“有些人，另一些人”“赞成，反对”，“好处，弊端”“正面，反面”。 有“我的看法”不一定是T1。,反模板训练,临摹训练 滴水穿石 点石成金,写作技巧（上）,1. 词汇多样性：(详见所有词汇替换词表) 观点 idea-opinion-viewpoint-notion 认为 think-argue-claim-maintain-ins
8、ist-adhere to the belief that,练习 词汇,Many people _ it and _ that. applaud, argue It has become _ for college students to Fashionable Recently, there has been a _ over the issue dispute, _ has not been reached among people as to the issue of consensus,写作技巧（上）,2句子结构 长短句 （必） 被动语态 （必） 倒装 （选） 插入语 （必） 问句 （
9、选）,长短句,Our college is completely overcrowded. The lack of space is apparently in all parts of the campus. With thirty students sit in only forty-odd square meters, the classrooms are so jammed that students look like sardines. 短长长、短长、短长短,Nowadays people tend to buy more things online. They simply sq
10、uander their money on the Internet ranging from books to cosmetics, from clothes to bags. This is called cyber shopping or E commerce.,被动语态,From the above mentioned, a conclusion can be easily drawned. Consensus among people can not be reached when it comes to the problem of From what has been discu
11、ssed above, Disagreement was incurred when we talk about the issue of,倒装,位置？ Only by striking a balance between the two can we have a more objective idea of Only through joint efforts can people really have a sound and efficient future. Solely by energy from the two parties can human race forever pr
12、osper.,插入语,Others, however, do not agree. They argue that, with the progress of human society, integrity is becoming increasingly important.,练习 插入语,The issue of building a green university, _, calls for more attention than any age in human history presently The conclusion, _, can be naturally worked
13、 out. therefore,问句,位置？ What is happiness? Apparently, peoples agreement can not be reached. How shall we look at the problem of reading books? What is the reason for such phenomenon? But, do lucky numbers really bring good fortune?,写作技巧（上）,3 亮点 修辞 My love is a red, red rose. My love is like a beauti
14、ful red rose. Robert Burns 警句名言 Practice makes perfect. Even Homer nods.,练习 句子结构,There are countless reasons accounting for such noticeable phenomenon, according to my humble understanding. First, recreational activities are important. Second, they bring us a lot of fun. Finally, we can get a lot from them. 句子间的平衡感,写作技巧（上）,4. 修改注意事项 四遍修改法 大小写-固定的几个表达 拼写常用单词的拼写 主谓一致需要一定量的练习，关键位置绝不能错 动词时态议论文和记叙文不同,homework,自己创造一个TYPE1(正反我型)作文模板,