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1、书面表达的训练与提高,中考英语指导,Correct errors,1.There are many visitors go to the zoo. 2. They are looking forward to visit the zoo. 3. They were all went to the zoo last Sunday. 4. Ellen is 16-year-old. 5. Many animals in the zoo may dead during the project of moving.,16 years old,die,visiting,M,6. He said he w
2、ill buy a new car. 7. The Beijing Zoo were built in 1906. 8. It will influence the capitals normal develop. 9. The traffic jam is a big problems. 10. He gets school very early every day.,Correct errors,would,was,to,development,一书面表达题,在日常生活中，因特网起到越来越重要的作用。请根据下表所给提示为某英文报写一篇题为On the Internet的征文稿。,因特网的主
3、要用途,注意：1 征文稿必须包括表内所有信息，行文连贯通顺。 2 词数80左右。 3 开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 4 参考词汇： play an important part in send messages by go to net school besides On the Internet The Internet is playing,One possible version,On the Internet The Internet is playing a more and more important part in our daily life. On the net, we
4、can learn news both at home and abroad, and we can know all kinds of other information as well. We can also send messages by e-mail, make phone calls, go to net school, read various kinds of books and learn foreign languages by ourselves.,Besides, we can enjoy music, watch sports matches and play ch
5、ess or cards. On the net, we can even do shopping, have a chat with others and make friends with them. In a word, the Internet has made our life more colorful.,中考对书面表达的要求,要求考生根据所给提示，用英语写一篇80-100个单词左右的短文。提供情景的形式有图画、图表、提纲、英文提示等。 本部分满分15分，所需时间约为15分钟。,中考书面表达评分原则,1)、先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定档次。,第五档. 1315分 第四档. 101
6、2分 第三档. 79分,第二档. 46分 第一档. 03分,语言地道，规范,覆盖所有内容要点,2)、主要内容： 内容要点； 词汇和语法的数量和准确性； 上下文的连贯； 语言的得体性,应用了较多的语法结构和词汇,有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,3)、拼写和标点是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。,4)、词数过少或过多的，从总分中减去一定分数。一般词数不可少于规定词数，并在规定词数以上20词以内。,5)、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。,词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）,1.覆盖了所有的要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句
7、间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑,要点全,连接词,如何算是一篇好文章？,1. 次重点：“内容要点” 中涵盖的内容 2. 大错：句子结构 谓语构成 词序 语态 时态,补充解释：,返回,3、小错： 名词单复数 第三人称单数 拼写 标点符号 字母大小写,返回,少量错误：1个大错或34个小错 一些错误：2个大错或56个小错 较多错误：3个大错或78个小错 错误多： 4个大错或910个小错 错误很多 5个大错或10个小错,大错,小错,错误的界定：,书面表达常见错误,一. 标点使用不准,1.“ ,”的使用,误:Turn right, there is a building ahead.,正:Turn righ
8、t,and there is a building ahead.,It rained yesterday,he didnt come.,It rained yesterday, so he didnt come.,She failed in the exam,it made her sad.,She failed in the exam, and it made her sad. She failed in the exam, which made her sad.,2.写信称呼语和结束祝愿语中的标点,Dear Sir Madam: Yours Sincerely Mary,3.英语中一般不用
9、“、”,She likes dancing、skating、surfing、boating and swimming.,She likes dancing, skating, surfing, boating and swimming.,4.英文的省略号 “”，而不是,He said he could play volleyball, basketball ,He said he could play volleyball, basketball ,5.每个句号后面的句子的第一个单词首字母要大写,In came a girl in a red dress. the whole class fi
10、xed their eyes on her.,In came a girl in a red dress. The whole Class fixed their eyes on her. In came a girl in a red dress, and the whole class fixed their eyes on her.,二. 时态混淆不清,He said he is going to come tomorrow. He is very clever, so he thought of a good idea.,was,thinks,三. 书写不规范,1. 字母书写 “四不象
11、”,o-u, l-e, r-v,2. 字母书写不到位,3. 书写了草、不认真，既非斜体，又非圆体,4. 排版能力较差，卷面涂抹太脏,策略,1.平时多写，并注意养成规范书写的习惯； 2.及时更正错误，避免再犯； 3.注重积累单词、词组、固定短语、 常用句型； 4.多背诵模仿； 5.把平时练习作为考试，培养沉稳的应试心理。,提醒注意：,1. 初中要求的“书面表达” 还不是真正意义上的写作，只是用文字基本表达出要表达的内容。,2.看懂图画或文字说明，其次是找出要点。,People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. (公园是公
12、众休闲的地方）,应用较多的语法结构和词汇,3.要用所学过的语言知识来构思,避免使用没有把握的词,What is more,it will become necessary to build gates and walls. （需建大门、围墙。）,4.要尽量用所学过的句型来表达。(我们所学过的句型足以表达这些内容。),People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves.It will become necessary to build gates and walls,which will do harm to the appe
13、arance.,5.在很有把握的情况下，用一两句复合句(如使用状语从句或定语从句,或宾语从句) 如做不到这一点，还不如简单句 ,They had to ride bikes to school. What is worse, people lived in a small houses. But now.,6.有效地使用连接词,And we can go to school by car. What is more, people live in big apartments now.,常用连接词,表示转折：but , yet, however, 表示因果：for, so 表示时间：when,
14、 while, as, after, before, until, as soon as 表示原因：because, as, since, now that 表示条件：if , even if, unless , suppose, , as long as, 其他：although, than, so that, in order that, in order to, in order not to,掌握必要的词汇,开场白：to tell the truth, first of all, now, 岔开：by the way, could I just point out, 展开：beside
15、s, another thing, 转折：however, even so, on the other hand 解释：that is to say, in other words, that is , for example 列举：first(ly), second(ly), in the third place, 总结：in a word , in conclusion, at last, we hope that,如故事性的文章，一般应使用过去时态，且前后一致。说明性的文章，大体应使用一般现在时态。,7.要注意时态的用法,为深入教学改革，英语组的李平老师将给你们做一次专题报告。请你用英语
16、口头通知。通知应包括表内全部内容。,题例：,注意：1 词数60左右。 2 不可直译、内容连贯。 3 开头已写好。 4 参考词汇 English department Information and English study Improve ones English,Boys and girls, May I have your attention, please? There will be a lecture,Boys and girls, May I have your attention, please? There will be a lecture at half past thr
17、ee on Friday afternoon. Its about “Information and English Study”. And it will be given by Mr Li Ping, who is a famous teacher from the English Department.,返回,Theres sure to be something instructive and interesting. We can get some information from it, I think. And it will improve our English studie
18、s to a new stage. Anyone who wants to attend it can come to Room 206. Take notes and have a discussion after it. Please come here on time. Dont be late. Thats all.,请根据下面表中提供的信息， 以Kate的名义给旅行社写封信，让旅行社为他们史密斯一家安排一次旅行。,Dear Light Travel, My family and I want to take a trip this summer, _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
19、_ _,Dear Light Travel, My family and I want to take a trip this summer, so I want to get some information about travelling from your agency. First, we cant go somewhere too far, because my grandparents are old and cant stand long journey. They love peaceful places. But my father prefers to do someth
20、ing thrilling, such as trekking.,Then my brother and I hope that we can learn more knowledge from some educational sites. We both enjoy history and animals. Well my mother just wants to play with us, but she dislikes flying. On the other hand, my father has only a two-week holiday, and my brother an
21、d I can enjoy this trip in our summer vacation. Could you tell us the best place and give us the best plan about this trip? Thank you very much. Yours, Kate,假定你是李教授的女儿小丽，李教授生病住在人民医院，他的一位朋友John星期日上午10：00要去看他。请根据下面的示意图，给他写封信，告诉他到达大众广场后如何去医院，从东街公园到警察局需要步行5分钟。你在医院门口等他。,要求：1 把图示中的所示内容表达完整，条理清晰，意思连贯，字数80个
22、左右。 2 开头部分已经给出，不计入总词数。 注意信的格式。 参考词汇： the Da Zhong Square East park Peoples Hospital,April 12nd, 2006 Dear John, Im so happy youre coming to see my father at 10:00 a.m. this Sunday. Here is how,April 12nd, 2006 Dear John, Im so happy youre coming to see my father at 10:00 a.m. this Sunday. Here is ho
23、w you can find Peoples Hospital. After your coming to the Da Zhong Square, you can walk along the street till you get to the gate of East Park. Please turn right and walk along the street, and it will take you about 5 minutes to walk to the police station.,Walk up again and turn right at the second crossing, then you will find Peoples Hospital in front you. Ill meet you at the hospital gate. Im sure youll have no trouble coming here. I hope you will have a pleasant journey. Yours, Xiao Li,Thank you,2,