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1、5月雅思考试预测,社会生活类 教育类 科技类 政府类，,雅思议论文,李威廉老师下载绝杀雅思写作和阅读宝典和最新8分范文集,雅思图表作文,饼图 表格 地图流程,自我介绍： 李润生 李威廉老师 南京大学与美国霍普金斯大学硕士 雅思阅读写作7分速成专家； 作者：绝杀雅思写作宝典 绝杀雅思阅读宝典 2014最新雅思高分范文 留学与职业规划咨询师； 性格匹配以及Face Reader 高手；,# 写作5分到6.5的提分不可回避 的三步曲#,写作是完全可以短时间提高的，主要是方法不对导致6分以内。首先，要纠正20组语法错误；再翻译5篇全文最新考题中文，理清思路，规范结构，理解英文思维(这一步至关重要）。这
2、一步至关重要！接着背十篇作文素材，80个地道词伙。最后原创5篇，名师修改。,审图训练,先总后分 先一般后特殊,新浪微博：李威廉IELTS,The table below shows changes in Australias nursing employment between 1987 and 2001. the nursing workforce represented in this table consists of nurses working at four different levels. As expected, the higher the level, the lower
3、 the employment number.,During these 14 years, Australias entire labor force grew from 2,728 thousand to 3,738 thousand, an increase of 37%. Despite this impressive growth in the total workforce, however, there was a 10 percent decrease from 180 thousand to 161.2 thousand in the number of employees
4、in the nursing sector.,The vast majority of the nurses were working at the lowest level, i,e. Assistant nurses, whose number remained largely unchanged between 1987 and 2001 (117 thousand and 112 thousand respectively) .However, the number of senior nurses and that of junior nurses decreased dramati
5、cally, the former by 20 percent the latter by 28 percent.,The significant drop in employment numbers at lower levels were somewhat compensated by a 30 percent increase in the number working at the highest level (director of nursing ) from 4,000thousand to 5.200.,节尾段,Overall, the table suggests that
6、the development of the nursing employment in Australia was incompatible with the growth of its total workforce.,请用这个句型造句： The whole process begins in the _,followed by _,next comes ,while it finally end up with _. 请各位造句：我昨天上午先去了西湖逛了一圈，然后中午去了千岛湖吃了大鱼头，晚上去了浙江大学找我们的初恋约会，最后夜里去了电影院。请跟贴翻译。,Yesterday , the
7、whole day began with a walking around the Xihu in the morning, followed by a wonderful dish of fish in Qian Daohu. Next came a sweet and hopeful dating with my first love in the evening while it finally ended up with a movie in the cinema.,中式思维下的矫情的句型是要减分的，而不是加分句型 矫情的中式思维句型减掉1分， 如想表达“ 在广场上面，市民们可以跳舞，
8、唱歌，交朋友。” 本来这句话很简单，但是有些故作矫情的同学会写成： the phenomenon that ciztizens gather together to dance, sing and date happened prevalently.,Rich countries often give financial aid to poor countries, but it does not solve the poverty, so rich countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather t
9、han the financial aid . To what extent do you agree or disagree?,颠覆性思维的开篇-细化的思维训练（一） （政府政策类）It is quite common for rich countries like the United Kingdom and Australia to offer a wide range of aid to help poor countries that are lacking in money or resources. For example, the Australian government o
10、ffered Laos as many as 10,000 boxes of medicine last year.,2014.04.24 大作文,There are many television advertisements aimed at children. What effects of these on children? Should TV advertisements be controlled?,今天0424的考题不会跑题的吧？因为今天考的是分析解决的report 类型的题目。除非你非要写“广告的优点和缺点”的话。这个题目的关键点在于“effects 的” “s”,也就是说至
11、少要写2个或者2个以上的后果。,中文商家以及广告营销专家们更专业于客户的心理研究和客户的针对性，这一点本无可厚非，但是过多的针对小孩的广告涉及到了更多的道德评判.,The businessman and marketing experts can make joint efforts to be more professional in analyzing the customers psychology and make the advertisements more pointed, which is originally beyond reproach. However, when th
12、e advertisements aimed at kids, it suddenly involves much morality conflicts.,商业广告的道德感在下降，虽然商业广告的技术一 直在提升，会对儿童的心理甚至儿童与父母之间的关系产生影响。一方面，儿童的判断能力不够理性甚至完全没有形成，当带有诱惑性的图片和广告短片出现在孩子的视线中的时候，孩子们很容易被游说。但是孩子本身并没有收入，没有消费能力，他们必须通过向家长来要钱来满足自己的购买欲望。当孩子的购买欲望被充分的放大之后，孩子不劳而获的心理被进一步放大。,Undoubtedly, the morality of comm
13、ercial advertisements is eroding sharply, although the artistic design and making technique of advertisements are progressively updating. these children-orientated advertisements have exerted unexpected effects on children and family bonds. On one hand, the evaluation and rationality of children are
14、 not fully mature to deal with alluring advertisements featuring the extremely seductive lines and gorgeous pictures.,When these advertisements in the forms of video and leaflet showed up in front of children, they are likely to be lobbied. However, in the fact , the kids have no income at all and n
15、o consumption power, therefore they have to ask for their parents to satisfy their demands. As the consuming desire of kids is greatly swelling , their psychological deforms as reaping without sowing are seriously expanding.,而在另一方面，如果家长没有满足甚至是及时满足儿童的购买欲望，孩子与家长的关系会受到影响，而儿童在成长过程本应该养成的勤俭节约的态度被毁灭殆尽。这一点也
16、给学校和家庭教育对于孩子的教育制造了难题。,On the other hand, once their deformed attitudes towards the shopping fail to be met or even immediately satisfied, the family bonds between the parents and kids are negatively affected. The valuable minds of combating extravagance and waste would be ruined completely. It even
17、set obstacles for schooling and parenting education on kids.,2014年 4月12日作文真题以及8范文,大作文：some people say the purpose of education is to prepare individuals to be useful adults for society. Others say the purpose of education is to achieve personal ambitions. Do you agree or disagree?,首段体现批判性思维 高分的节奏,我的
18、观点是教育的短期目标是实现学生技能和思维能力的提升，从而实现个人梦想；而终极是必然是为了服务于社会，甚至人本身存在的意义就是在于服务社会。教育只是一种手段，而人更多的是通过实现个人目标而对社会有意。,首段体现细化思维和批判性思维,My personal answer to the purpose of education is that students and teaching staff should hold critical attitudes. It means that education involves the contemporary and ultimate goals.
19、The ultimate goals of education is the service of society. However, whether or not achieving it should take the accomplishment of personal goals as the prerequisite.,第一段主题段 充分展开个人目标,学生在接受教育的时候，首先想的是要通过学校的技能训练，能获得谋生的手段，包括生存的必须的物质条件。当然，个人目标还包括对于个人在某些专业领域的提升，从而有机会从事这个行业。最后，在通过教育手段所获得的社会地位，从而获得社会的尊重和认可。
20、,先充分展开一方面,On one hand, students are expecting to acquire the survival skills with the aid of schooling training in the professional skills and thinking abilities. Personal ambitions also consist of the access to their preferred working fields and the progression in the professional fields.Besides,th
21、ey finally win the social respect and acknowledgement.,另一方面，通过批判性思维体现逻辑,至于教育是否应该为社会提供服务为标准，答案是多样的。而我坚定的认为，个人目标的实现和对社会有好处总体上并不矛盾。毕业生也只有通过找到好的工作，获得体面的工作，才能发挥才干，比如成为一个杰出的建筑师的同时，个人获得了很好的薪水，对于社会做出了一定的贡献，设计更多的建筑物，满足居住和审美的需求。,When it comes to whether or not taking the social service to the society as the e
22、ducation goal, views differed greatly. However, I firmly believe that the accomplishment of personal wishes does not contradict to the willingness to the service of society. Graduates have to acquire the decent job, reasonable salary and social respect first and simultaneously contribute to the soci
23、ety. Take the excellent architects as an example, they design the fashionable structures for peoples living and aesthetic demand while they can acquire a decent income as well.,结尾段，仍然可以体现强悍的逻辑,当然，也存在一些个人利益与社会利益发生的冲突的时候，有效的教育应该培养他们优先考虑社会利益的思维。比如官员的贪污行为，商人的不择手段。如果教育能够在这个点上做的很好，便是成功的教育。,下面我们来具体看几个排序在真
24、题中的用法： I. College C has the greatest proportion of lectures with PHD qualification among all the colleges, at 60%. Next comes college A, at 50%, followed by college B, at 30%. （按照数据大小关系） II. London has the oldest underground railway system among the six cities and it was opened in the year 1863. Par
25、is comes next, with the second oldest underground system being opened in 1900. （按照时间的先后）,III. Flying by air produces by far the greatest CO2 emissions. This is followed by passenger cars which are the next largest producers. （按照数据大小关系） IV. The underground train driver saw a much quicker growth rate
26、in their annual salary than other professions. Police officer comes next, followed by the fire fighter and nurse. （按照数据的幅度大小关系）,in some countries, the government encourages industries and businesses to move from large cities to rural areas. do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?,Th
27、e looks of cities have shaped peoples behaviors on a large scale due to its ripple effect. Factories can be rarely seen in inner city blocks, and some city dwellers have said farewell to business officies in downtown areas. I definitely believe it will be a popular worldwide trend with some overt be
28、nefits, despite some minor problems.,However, more employees have become the beneficiaries of this trend. Many employees used to complain about crowed office space, acute shortage of parking lots, expensive luncheon and tedious civic landscape filled up with cement blocks. now, they can move to a la
29、rger spaces, like industrial parks equipped with more personalized facilities ,including regular shuttle bus service, areas for relaxation and comfortable and large meeting rooms with nicer views.all these seems to be a “utopia“ to those who are still working in congested blocks.,4分和5分作文是如何实现的？ 十组语法
30、错误,第一组： 1，Although the crime rate is falling in many parts of the world, but violent crimes are constantly rampant. 2，Man has become master not only of the earth, but also the space. 3,To rear a child alone are challenging to any parent.,4分和5分作文就是这样实现的！ 十组语法错误,1， The number of the population was dec
31、reased in the 1990 to 1995, the figure of population was increased in the years of 1996 and 2000,the data was then continue increase in the last 5 years. 2, I earned the money is the least. 3,I was come from Nanjing.,戳到你内心的“痛” 十组语法错误,第二组： 1，There are plenty of natural resources in china ,most of tha
32、t are unused. 2，I cry, you cry. 3, We all tried our best, however, we lost the game. 4, Education has been made available to more people ,however , many adults have some problems with literacy and numeracy.,戳到你内心的“痛”,第六组： It is advertising makes us buy something on a whim. There is a research shows that the wealthier countries the more artworks they needed. There is a river cross the Beijing.,第八组语法错误 介词短语的搭配,1， Overpopulation leads to damage the economy. 2, When it comes to ask the questions about the definitions of happiness. 3, I still fail to pass the TOEFL despite I have paid too much.,