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1、Try to get the highest marks in writing!,报纸上有人想寻找一位网友，你有意， 给她写一封信，告诉她，你的情况 ， 你的家庭 ，学校生活。,Dear friend, Im writing the letter in response to your advertisement .I am a girl of the same age with you ,and I come from a happy and warm family, which includes my father,my mother and I . I study in a key sc
2、hool from my hometown, but I have never regretted for my own choice, for the life here is very colorful and challenging. I am interested in stamp collecting and I have collected a lot of stamps. I also like swimming. I wish I can get in touch with you and hope to be friends with you . Yours truly, L
3、i Hua,Dear friend , I cant wait to write to you. Having known that you are looking for a pen-friend, I am very eager to be friends with you. I just graduated from a middle school. I am 18 years old. There are four people in my family. My mother is a worker. My father is a doctor. My sister is a stud
4、ent. My school is beautiful. I also want to look for a pen-friend. I am interested in stamp -collecting. I am waiting for your answer . Best wishes ! Yours truly, Li Hua,词汇,句型 （高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）,1.覆盖了所有的要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑,要点全,连接词,如何算是一篇好文章？,1,一、避免句式单一,Rewrite the sentences,1.
5、 They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere. 2. I will be given another chance. I will succeed. 3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard.,方法一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,When they arrived at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere.,Arriving at the school, they felt the happy atmosp
6、here.,If I am given another chance, I will succeed.,Given another chance, I will succeed.,In order to improve his English, he studies hard.,方法一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,Complete the sentences with non-predicate (非谓语动词) 听到这个消息,他们变的很激动. _the news, they got excited. 2. 尽管被告知许多遍,他仍然重复这个错. _many times, he still r
7、epeated the mistake. 3.除非被邀请发言,你应该在会议上保持沉默. Unless _to speak, you should keep silent at the meeting.,Hearing,Having been told,invited,方法二. 巧用多种结构增强句子的表现力,he returned home did he realize his foolishness. not until he returned home he realized ,by changing the way we live can we save the earth.,Clever
8、 he is, he does not work hard.,stands the clock tower.,5. When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用介词）. 6. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句） 7.I wont believe what he says. （使用状语从句）,On his arriving, please give me an e-mail.,What surprises him is that the little girl
9、 knows so many things.,No matter what he says, I wont believe.,8. My father sat in the sofa. He was smoking and reading a newspaper. (with结构) 9. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.(越) 10.The Chinese artists were to perform here that night.The news cheered everyone of us.(同位语从句),My father w
10、as smoking in the sofa with a newspaper in his hand,The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.,The news that the Chinese artists were to perform here that night cheered everyone.,方法三.使用高级词汇、词组以增加文采,1.Dont worry about your expenses for university education, and we will try to help you., and we will
11、 make the greatest effort /do our best / try every means to help you.,2.At that time the taxi driver had to ask the tourist for help. 3.As a result the plan was a failure.,At that time the taxi driver had no choice but to turn to the tourist.,The plan turned out to be a failure.,I came up with a goo
12、d idea.,4.I had a good idea.,A good idea occurred to / struck / came to me.,1,二、适当的过渡语使句子更美,表示罗列增加 besides / whats more/ in addition / furthermore/ moreover /especially/ In particular, 表示解释说明 in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, in fact, actually,表示时间顺序 at present, recently, after a
13、 while, at first, to begin with, all of a sudden, from then on, at the same time, meanwhile,表示转折关系 however, while, otherwise, on the contrary, on the other hand, despite, in spite of, except (for), after all,表示条件关系 as (so) long as, on condition that, if, unless,表示因果关系 now that, thanks to., due to.,
14、therefore, as a result (of) 表示让步关系 as, even if, even though, whether .or.,表示强调 indeed, in fact, surely, certainly, no doubt, without any doubt, truly, obviously, above all,表示概括归纳 in a word, in short, in brief, generally speaking, as far as I know, As we know, as has been stated，as I have shown, As f
15、ar as I am concerned, in summary,二、适当的过渡语使句子更美,一、避免句式单一,方法一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,方法二. 巧用多种结构增强句子的表现力,方法三.使用高级词汇，词组以增加文采,Summary:,Ladies and gentlemen, Welcome to our school !, This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.,It used to be very poor. However,it has chan
16、ged a lot since 1978 ,and has been developing very fast.,People here live a much better life than before .,书面表达：,Now it is taking on a new look.,In the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. ,But now it has been rebuilt and, which has 4 storeys is the
17、most beautiful one in the village.,All the school-age children can study here., Whats more,they enjoy free education., May you enjoy your stay here,the newly built teaching building,/ May you have a pleasant time here!,Thank you.,二、适当的过渡语使句子更美,一、避免句式单一,方法一. 使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,方法二. 巧用多种结构增强句子的表现力,方法三.使用高
18、级词汇，词组以增加文采,Summary:,上网是中学生最热门的话题之一。对此，有的同学说好，有的同学则持反对意见。请根据下面所提供的信息写一篇短文并发表自己的意见。,注：1、词数：100左右2、文章的开头已给出 Nowadays, going online is one of the most popular topics of the students.,Nowadays, going online is one of the most popular topics of the students. The Internet is helpful to students. We can lo
19、ok for information and study on it. We also get latest news from it. It help us see more and learn more. The Internet has a bad influence to our study. Some students chat and play games on it. And someone even visit bad websites. These hurt our both body and heart. So we should make full use of the
20、Internet to advance us. And we also should avoid bad influences of the Internet.,Nowadays, going online is one of the most popular topics of the students. Some students think the Internet is a great help to them. On (the) one hand, they can get some information about / on their school subjects or ta
21、ke a course. On the other hand, they can learn more about the world, which can broaden their mind / views and enrich their knowledge. On the contrary, other students think the Internet does great harm to our body and mind. Instead of studying on the Internet, most students waste their time (in) chatting, playing computer games, or even visiting ill web sites. As a result, the Internet has a bad influence on our studies. In my opinion, we students should put right our wrong doings and make full use of the Internet to improve our studies.,Assignment,Please finish the composition after class.,