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1、Composition Analysis,组员：曾晓君、李婷、谭颖慧、姚灿,Is Writing Better than Calling?,Writing, as a way of,transmission of,information and,emotional exchange,has a long history in China.,with the development of society and technology, writing,And,is,forgotten gradually,people,instead of writing,but now,should we,ma
2、ny times,choose calling,forget the way of communicating with others?,The answer is “no”.,transmitting,But,is being,More often than not,Should we drop the way of communicating with others? Or should the way of communicating with our friends give way to the other ones?,In this,society,with peace of mi
3、nd, when we are make ourselves calm down to think about our life or the feeling. When we,we need,a space to think,are tired,we can write something,to ourselves, talk to ourselves,express our feeling.,impetuous,impetuous: progressively impetuous,space to think,write,we can,writing,are tired: become e
4、xhausted,and express our feeling.,Maybe some people will say we can call a friend to talk, but when you,finish the calling,you maybe forget,what did you say in,the phone just now, but if you,write it down you can turn it out to see your own words in the future or when you are tired again.,seeing,the
5、se inspiring and encouraging words, that,will be a big treasure for you,and always remind you,to get over the difficulty.,hang up,you may forget,What did you say in: what you have said on,Seeing,And always remind you: and it will always remind you,If you want to,contacted,an old friend who you,haven
6、t seen each other,for,long time, you can write a,letter . Because if you call him or her without a precious notice, you maybe feel a,little fear,and dont know what to say,and this moment is very,awkward.,But if you write a letter, you can recall the,thing,between you and your friend,look forward,to
7、the future.,tell,say anything you want,to say without fear.,contact,to,for,him or her,bit nervous,between you and your friends.,Looking forward,him or her about your life, you can,Telling,without fear.,If,you want to show your love to someone, the best,way is to write a love letter to her, you can u
8、se your,power,words to express your love, your feeling. And in,the letter, you may feel,confidence.,I remember my,foreign teacher said,that his wife had written a 20,pages love letter to him, and he was,move.,So I think,writing is the best way to express our own feeling. But if you choose to call, t
9、he moment,when,you say, your,words will become the past,you wont keep the words,forever.,Also if,powerful,confident.,Once, my foreign,teacher told us,deeply moved.,what,and you wont keep the words,Dont be busy,on,calling, it is,necessary,for you to do,some writing, writing down anything you want to say,feel,the feeling of writing,revel in writing.,with,essential,enjoying,and reveling in writing.,Conclusion：,1、动词、形容词的使用不准确，词性掌握不准确 2、连词的使用不恰当 3、标点符号 4、中式英语的使用 5、语法,Thank you!,