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1、高考书面表达备考指导,郑裕彤中学 张先德,教学目的,通过本节课的教学, 使学生掌握英语书面表达的一般技巧及方法。,教学重点,书面表达五个步骤,书面表达注意事项,教学难点,I. 1990 2002年高考书面表达题样回顾,1. 从内容和体裁上分,体 裁 内 容 历年书面表达,应用文,书 信（便条） 对 话 通 知（口头书面） 请 柬,记叙文,说明文,介 绍,人 物,事 件,日 记 故事或经历 场 景 事 物,95, 99, 2001 2002,94,91, 96,2000,92, 98,93，97,2. 从提示形式上分,提示形式,文 字,中 文 英 文,历 年 书 面 表 达,表 格,90, 91
2、, 94,96, 2001 ，2002,92, 93, 95, 97, 98, 99, 2000,图 画,结论,从上面两表看出：高考书面表达最常 见的是应用文和记叙文，所写内容都 与日常生活密切相关。,II. 书面表达的五个步骤,仔细审题，找出主题 (Read the directions carefully, look through all the words or pictures given to you in order to find the main idea.),（以 2001年高考题为例）,假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友 Dick 听 说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，来
3、信询问有关情况。请根据下表提供的信息，写一封回信，谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。,change,change,周末活动 (减负前) 周末活动（减负后）,白天：上课、做作业 白天：参观博物馆、 学习电脑、绘画等,注意：1、词数100左右； 2、开头已为你写好。 生词：减轻学习负担 reduce learning load * Dear Dick, How nice to hear from you again.,The main idea,change,晚上：做作业 晚上：看新闻、读书、看报,就寝时间：11:30 就寝时间：10:30,（再以2000年高考题为例）,假设你是李华，在美国探
4、亲。2000年2月8日清晨，你 目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时 所见情况。请根据下列图画写出报告。,注意：1、目击者应该准确报告事实； 2、词数100左右； 3、结尾已为你写好。,The main idea？,A traffic accident,2. 认真阅读所给提示或图画，抓住所有细节，找出每幅 图画或每个句子的中心词。,（以93年高考题为例）,为了配合国际动物周活动，一家英文杂志邀请各国 学生提供有关动物的故事。请根据下列六幅图画，用英语为该杂志写一篇故事。,bark: vi. & n. 吠叫 注意： 1、故事必须包括所有图画的内 容，可以适当增加细节，使 故事连贯。
5、2、词数100左右。,Picture 1: Picture 2： Picture 3: Picture 4： Picture 5: Picture 6：,go to work; take my sister and Ah Fu,Find out the keys words in each picture：,be working; play by the river,pick a flower; fall into the river,bark; jump into the river,run to the river; swim; take my sister,praise,3. 把中心词或
6、词组扩展成句子。(Extend the words and phrases to sentences.), One day my parents went to work in the fields taking my little sister Ah Fu along., While they were working, my sister walked to a river nearby., She was trying to pick up a flower when she fell into the river., Ah Fu barked and jumped into the r
7、iver immediately., When my parents heard Ah Fu barking they ran to the river.They saw Ah Fu swimming towards the bank carrying my little sister., My parents praised Ah Fu warmly.,4. 把以上句子编排成一个段落，在必要的地方加入一些 连接词或句子。(Arrange these sentences in order, getting in some linking words where necessary.),My p
8、arents live in the country. They keep a dog called Ah Fu. One day my parents went to work in the field taking my little sister and Ah Fu along. While they were working, my sister walked to a river nearby. Ah Fu followed there. She was trying to pick a flower when she fell into the river. Ah Fu barke
9、d and jumped into the water immediately. When my parents heard Ah Fu barking, they ran to the river. They saw Ah Fu swimming towards the bank carrying my little sister. My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It was our brave Ah Fu who saved my little sister.,5. 通读全文，仔细检查。(Read through the whole passage to
10、 make sure that no mistakes are made.),III. 书面表达注意事项,适当运用结构词、从句和关联词：and, but, so, however, therefore, them, thus, after a while, suddenly, at last, as a result, in fact 等, 使句子 更为流畅。,1) You may stay at school. You may come to spend the holiday with us.,You may _ stay at _ come to spend the holiday wi
11、th us.,either or,2) It is not too cold in spring. It is not too hot, either. 3) The teacher pointed out the mistakes. The students had not corrected.,It is _ too cold _ too hot in spring.,The teacher pointed out the mistakes _ the students had not corrected.,neither nor,which,(that),4) You must spea
12、k English in class. You must speak English out of class. 5) She finished her lessons. Then she went to bed.,You must speak English both in class and out of class.,Having finished her lessons, she went to bed.,避免使用对其拼法、意义和用法没有把握、不熟悉 的词汇和句型，避免可以避免的错误。,喜欢,like, be fond of, care for, enjoy,.,1）两天后他就要过生日
13、了。, His birthday is two days away. His birthday is in two days. His birthday is in two days time. It will be two days before he celebrates his birthday.,2）我碰巧遇见他的叔叔。, I happened to meet his uncle. I chanced to see his uncle., I met with his uncle. I came across his uncle. I ran across his uncle. It
14、(so) happened that I saw his uncle. It chanced that I met his uncle.,（再以93年高考书面表达为例）,My parents live in the country. They keep a dog called Ah Fu. One day my parents went to work in the fields taking my little sister and Ah Fu along. While they were working, my sister walked to a river nearby. Ah Fu
15、 followed there. She was trying to pick a flower when she fell into the river. Ah Fu barked and jumped into the water immediately. When my parents heard Ah Fu barking, they ran to the river. They saw Ah Fu swimming towards the bank carrying my little sister. My parents praised Ah Fu warmly. It was o
16、ur brave Ah Fu who saved my little sister., They keep a dog called Ah Fu.,They have a dog with the name Ah Fu. They raise a dog that / which is called / named Ah Fu. c. They keep a dog whose name is Ah Fu. d. They have a dog who is named Ah Fu., One day my parents went to work in the fields taking m
17、y little sister and Ah Fu along.,One day my parents went to work in the fields with my little sister and Ah Fu. b. One day my parents went to work in the fields and Ah Fu followed them., When my parents heard Ah Fu barking, they ran to the river., They saw Ah Fu swimming towards the bank carrying my
18、 little sister.,Hearing Ah Fu barking, my parents went to the river in a hurry. b. Having heard Ah Fu barking, my parents rushed to the river. c. Having heard Ah Fu barking, my parents were worried and hurried to the river.,They saw Ah Fu carrying my little sister in the river towards the bank. b. T
19、hey saw my little sister carried by Ah Fu to the bank., My parents praised Ah Fu warmly.,My parents patted Ah Fu on the head and praised him for his bravery. b. My parents were so glad that they patted Ah Fu on the head and praised him.,3. 留心汉英表达差异, 避免中式英语。,1) 父母对我们期望很高。,The hope of our parents is v
20、ery high.,Our parents expect too much from us.,2) 高考,high exam ?,college entrance examination,3) 他的右眼瞎了。 a. Her right eye is blind. 4) 他健壮如牛。 a. He is strong like a cow. 5) 汤姆的父亲打了他一个耳光。 a. Toms father beat him in his face.,b. She is blind in the right eye.,b. He is strong like a horse (as strong as
21、 a horse).,b. Toms father beat him in the face.,4. 书写必须工整,确保不犯拼写错误 (以避免丢冤枉分)。,parents & peasant & present,sun & son,attack & attract,blood & flood,flood & floor,IV. Homework,5月3日, 你参观了一个农场，请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记。,注意： 1、日记必须包括所有图 画的内容，可以适当 增减细节，使日记连 贯； 2、词数100左右。,One possible version: May 3 Sunday Fine Toda
22、y we visited a farm. Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together. The farm workers gave us a warm welcome. Then the head of the farm showed us around. How glad we were to see the crops and vegetables growing well. At noon we had a picnic lunch in the sunshine. After a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes or stories. Two of us even played a game of chess. The time passed quickly. Before we knew it, we had to say goodbye to the workers.,