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1、中文论文中的英文写作问题,中国医学科学院 北京协和医学院,肿瘤研究所,周传农,2014.10.29,题目,题目太繁,二甲双胍体外诱导人肝癌Huh-7 细胞凋亡的实验及其机制研究 二甲双胍体外诱导人肝癌Huh-7 细胞凋亡及其作用机制,题目不全,儿童单纯性肥胖模型的制作 儿童单纯性肥胖小鼠模型的制作,不好的中文题目,去垂体幼鼠生物特性及激素水平的观察 去垂体幼年大鼠的生物学特性与激素水平,不好的中文题目,中药松友饮对体内化疗后残余肝癌作用的实验研究 中药松友饮对裸鼠体内化疗后残余肝癌的作用,不好的中文题目,IRP对无初乳仔鼠十二指肠IgG+和SIgA+细胞表达的影响 板蓝根多糖对无初乳仔鼠十二指
2、肠IgG+和SIgA+细胞表达的影响,题目错误,基因工程大鼠研究进展 Process in Rat Genetics Progress in research on rat genetic engineering,题目太大,不同测压方法测试大鼠结肠破裂压 A comparison of different pressure testing systems for hollow organ of laboratory animals Comparison of different methods for testing the colon rupture pressure in rats,不好的
3、英文题目,儿童单纯性肥胖小鼠模型的制作 Establishment of childhood simple obesity animal model Establishment of a mouse model of childhood simple obesity,题目滥用缩写,哺乳动物 ES 细胞与 EG 细胞研究进展 哺乳动物 胚胎干细胞与 胚胎生殖 细胞研究进展 ES embryonic stem cells EG embryonic germ cells,不好的中文题目 滥用缩写,反复冷冻与冠状动脉结扎法制作大鼠AMI模型方法对比研究 反复冷冻与冠状动脉结扎法制作大鼠急性心肌梗死模型
4、方法的比较,题目滥用缩写,乳酸调控大鼠肠黏膜微血管内皮细胞NF-B信号通路的研究 Lactic acid inhibits NF-B signaling pathways in RIMMVECs 读者看不懂 RIMMVECs,题目 拼写错误、大小写,Comparision of Hematological Parameters in Germ-free and Conventional guinea pig Comparison of Hematological Parameters in Germ-free and Conventional guinea pig,不好的中、英文题目,LPS和
5、石墨粉诱导小鼠急性肺损伤病理形态学比较 Pathological comparison of LPS and Graphite power-induced acute lung injury 中文：应写明 脂多糖 英文：LPS Lipopolysaccharide 英文： power powder,英文题目拼写错误,Gong H, Shu L, Xu H, Chen B, Mao R, Zhang F, Wang Y. Bilateral internal carotid arteries ligation temporary impairs brain vasculaturev in you
6、ng rats. Auton Neurosci. 2013, 173(1-2):39-44. 此文已在国外正式发表,不好的英文题目,清脑方对缺血性眩晕大鼠脑损伤的保护作用 Protective effect of QNF on brain injury in ischemic vertigo rats Protective effect of the Chinese medicine Qingnaofang on brain injury in ischemic vertigo rats,英文题目 错误,改良半椎板切除法建立大鼠腰神经根压迫模型的研究 The study on rat mode
7、l of lumbar never nerve root compression via modified unilateral hemilaminectomy approach 啰嗦、缺建立、拼写错误,英文题目单复数,非人灵长类局部脑缺血动物模型研究现状述评 Review of focal cerebral ischemia model in non-human primate Review of focal cerebral ischemia models in non-human primates,英文题目滥用缩写,小型猪体外循环下心脏手术的麻醉 Anesthesia of Cardia
8、c Surgery Under CPB on Swine Anesthesia in Cardiac Surgery Under Cardiopulmonary Bypass on Pigs,英文题目 拼写错误,Comparision of Hematological Parameters in Germ-free and Conventional guinea pig Comparison of Hematological Parameters in Germ-free and Conventional guinea pig,很错误的英文题目,基因工程大鼠研究进展 Process in Ra
9、t Genetics Progress in research on rat genetic engineering,英文题目错误用词,The Comparative Study on Tumor Growth and Metastasis of There Kinds of Mice Breast Tumor Cells with Luc-labeled The Comparative Study on Tumor Growth and Metastasis of Three Kinds of Mice Breast Tumor Cells with Luc-labeled ,英文题目很大错
10、误,常压缺氧致大鼠小脑浦肯野细胞急性病理改变的研究 Acute pathology changes of Purkinje cells in mouse cerebellum under normobaric hypoxia,署名与单位,署名大小写,He bao-ming , wang zhizhong，liu xiaofei，yao hao,ouyang xiaohui,su jiagui He Bao-ming , Wang Zhizhong，Liu Xiaofei，Yao Hao, Ouyang Xiaohui, Su Jiagui 姓名大写、标点符号,单位 错词、错名、大小写,The
11、forth Applicated Hospital of Suzhou University the Forth Affiliated Hospital of Soochow University,单位不全,Academy of Military Sciences Academy of Military Medical Sciences,单位大小写,Department of , The Fifth Central Hospital of Tianjin, Tianjin 300162, china. Department of , the Fifth Central Hospital of
12、Tianjin, Tianjin 300162, China.,署名、单位,Bai aiguo*，Zheng chuansheng，Zhou guofeng，Liang huiming，Feng gansheng. Wantwanthospital, Changsha 410016, China (Wang Wang Hospital),人名的大小写。单位名称错误,署名、单位 大小写、拼写错误、标点符号,WEI Bing-yan,LIU Tian-fu,GUO Yong-chang ,ZHANG Yin-hong (the center of Laboratory animal of Shan
13、 Xi Mendical University,taiyuan 030001, China),英文摘要中 滥用缩写,英文摘要滥用缩写,Objective： To observe the affect of RGZ and ATRA on the growth of myeloma xenograft in nude mice and RGZ rosiglitazone ATRA all-trans-retinoic acid affect effect,滥用缩写英文摘要,IHC analysis on TMA revealed that Immunohistochemical analysis
14、 on tissue microarray revealed that ,英文摘要滥用缩写,To screen the genes differentially expressed in human renal cell carcinoma (RCC) cell lines using SSH. To screen the genes differentially expressed in human renal cell carcinoma (RCC) cell lines using suppression subtractive hybridization (SSH).,（摘要首句）,用
15、错词,错词,大鼠给予药液灌胃 All rats were lavaged with KFL solution. All rats were gavaged with KFL solution.,错词,神经上皮移植 Neuralepithelial transplantation Neuroepithelial transplantation,错词,巴马小型猪12只 12 Obama mini-pigs were randomly divided into 12 Bama mini-pigs were randomly divided into ,错词,Low does Low dose Hig
16、h does High dose,通篇如此,错词,RT-PCR was used to amplification the full-length sequence of RT-PCR was used to amplify the full-length sequence of ,错词,Other adverse reactions include atrial premature, oral mucositis, fatigue et al. Other adverse reactions include atrial premature, oral mucositis, fatigue,
17、 etc.,错词,GeneBank GenBank,错词 意思反了,正常、特异抗原批内变异系数分别为8.3%和6.4%，批间平均变异系数分别为9.7%和11.5%. The inter-assay coefficient of variation of normal antigen and special antigen was 8.3% and 6.4%, and the intra-assay average coefficient of variation was 9.7% and 11.5%, respectively,错词,评价其抗癌作用 To access the anti-tum
18、or effect To assess the anti-tumor effect ,错词,探讨其作用机理 To explicit the molecular mechanism of To explore the molecular mechanism of ,英文摘要首句,错词,脂质体 Lipidosome Liposome （该文论述基因治疗的主要手段）,错词,系统性感染 Systematic infection Systemic infection,错词,was analysised was analyzed,错词、单复数,The sequence were comparised wi
19、th the The sequences were compared with the ,单复数,The level of P24 antigen in the supernatant were tested continuously. The level of P24 antigen in the supernatant was tested continuously.,频繁的 错误注释,滥用注释,糖尿病 (diabetic mellitus ) 糖尿病 (diabetes mellitus),一篇关于小型猪糖尿病模型的论文,错误注释,腺病毒（adenoviral） 腺病毒（adenovir
20、us）,错误注释,单纯疱疹病毒 （herpes simple virus） 单纯疱疹病毒 （herpes simplex virus）,错误注释,无特定病原体 (special pathogen free，SPF) 无特定病原体 (specific pathogen free，SPF),错误注释,独立通风笼具 (Individually wentilate cagesdul，IVC) (Individually ventilated cages，IVC),错误注释,热休克蛋白 ( Hot shock protein, HSP) ( Heat shock preotein, HSP),错误注释,
21、C反应蛋白（C-reactionprotein，CRP） C反应蛋白（C-reactive protein，CRP）,错误注释,集落形成抑制法 (human tumor cell cloning assay , HTCA ) (colony formation inhibition assay ),错误注释,自然杀伤细胞 (natural kill cell，NK) 自然杀伤细胞 (natural killer cell，NK),错误注释,神经生长因子 （never growth factor，NGF） 神经生长因子 （nerve growth factor，NGF）,全文多处，一律错,错误注
22、释,表皮生长因子受体2 （human epidermal growth factor-2，HER-2） （human epidermal growth factor receptor-2，HER-2）,滥用缩写,图1 Ca.C 中survivn阳性 （一张照片的说明） （文内根本就没有见到过Ca.C ） （猜想是癌细胞的意思）,参考文献,参考文献 丢失第一作者、姓名颠倒,Jeongmi An, Hee-Jin Y, Kimoon Park，et al. (原杂志) Jeoum Lee, Jeongmi An，Hee-Jin Yang，Byung-Woo Kim, Kimoon Park. Le
23、e J, An J, Yang HJ，et al.,参考文献作者 姓名拼写错误,Gordon MN,K ing DL,D iam ond DM et al. Correlation between Gordon MN, King DL, Diamond DM, et al. Correlation between ,参考文献作者 姓与名颠倒、标点,Maria WW,Edward P,Dennis L,et al . Maria Werner-Wasik，Edward Pequinot，Dennis Leeper， et al. Werner-Wasik M, Pequinot E, Leepe
24、r D, et al.,参考文献作者 格式怪异,Giuseppe VerdileSamuel E Gandy Ralph N. Martins. Giuseppe Verdile G, Gandy SE, Martins RN.,参考文献作者 etc./et al.,Tyler KL, Barton ES, Ibach ML,ETC. Tyler KL, Barton ES, Ibach ML, et al. et alii (and others) 人 et cetera (and the rest, and the others)物,参考文献作者 人数多、人名繁、出现号码,Kunihiro
25、 Nishida1, Georghia Michael1, Dobromir Dobrev2 .and Stanley Nattel1 Nishida K, Michael G, Dobrev D, et al.,参考文献 出现 两批作者?,Vanini G, Wathen BL, Lydic R, et al. Baghdoyan,et al. Endogenous GABA Levels in the potine Vanini G, Wathen BL, Lydic R, Baghdoyan HA. Endogenous GABA Levels in the potine ,参考文献作者
26、 11ll、姓名颠倒、大小写、etc.,Wi11iam Luyties, Peter J. Bredenbeek, Ans F.H. noten etc. Luytjes W, Bredenbeek PJ, Noten AF, et al.,参考文献 错写中国作者、标点,Yuhuan W,Xinming T,Charles H,et al. Wang YH, Tu XM, Humphrey C, et al. 原文：Yuhuan Wang, Xinming Tu, Charles Humphrey, ,参考文献 作者、文题、标点,Bakeman R QV.OTS. A program for
27、converting Bakeman R, Quera V. OTS: a program for converting ,参考文献 作者、文题、杂志、标点,Quinn P, Kerin J. F.,Warners G.M. Improverd pregnancy rate in hunman in vitro fertilization with the use of medium based on the composition of hunman tubal fluid.Fertil. Steril.,1985,44:493- 498.,参考文献 引错作者、文题有错、杂志拼错,Schmi
28、tt CA, Lowe SW. Apoptosis cell death following exposure to fluoride in rat alveolar macrophage. Arch Toxical, 1996, 70: 249-251 Hirano S, Ando M. Apoptotic cell death following exposure to fluoride in rat alveolar macrophages. Arch Toxicol, 1996, 70: 249-251,参考文献 卷号怪异,Compr Ther, 2010, V36N:3-13. Co
29、mpr Ther, 2010, 36:3-13.,参考文献 丢失问号、错误的卷号页码,Inferior vena cava leiomyosarcoma: is reconstruction necessary after resection. J Am Coll Surg, 2010, 211(1):145-146. Daylami R, Amiri A, Goldsmith B, et al. Inferior vena cava leiomyosarcoma: is reconstruction necessary after resection? J Am Coll Surg, 201
30、0, 210:185-190.,参考文献 同一本杂志两种写法,Chishima T, Yang M, Miyagi Y, et al. Proc Natl Acad Sci U S A. 1997, 94(11):573-576. Humpherys D, Eggan K, Akutsu H, et al. Proc. Natl. Acad. Sci. U S A. 2002, 99(20): 12889-12894.,参考文献 缺杂志、缺标点,Age-related increase inducible atrial fibrillation 201021(1):88-93. Age-rel
31、ated increase inducible atrial fibrillation. J Cardiovasc Electrophysiol 2010，21(1): 88-93.,参考文献作者 姓名书写错误,Li J H WQS. Allogrooming in wild Tibetan macaques Li JH，Wang QS. Allogrooming in wild Tibetan macaques ,参考文献 学位、杂志全称、标点、大小写、拼写错误,Shanglong Yao, Ph. D,Dan Feng,M. D. Losartan Attenuates Ventilato
32、r-Induced Lung Injury. Journal of surjical Research, 2008, 145(1): 25-32.,K TA, R M, B C, et al. Poly (ADP-ribose) polymeraseinhibition improves post ischemicmyocardial function after cardiople-giacardiopulmonary bypass. J Am Coll Surg, 2003, 197(2):270-277. Khan TA, Ruel M, Bianchi C, et al.,参考文献 缺
33、姓名、拼写错误,参考文献 文题首词丢失,Campylobacter jejuni infection in different mice strains Primary Campylobacter jejuni infection in different mice strains,参考文献 丢了作者、写了单位,Cleveland Clinic Foundation, Cleveland, OH, USA. The global epidemiology of heart failure. Med Clin N Am 2004, 88: 1135-1143. Young JB. The glo
34、bal epidemiology of heart failure. Med Clin N Am 2004, 88: 1135-1143.,参考文献文题脱漏,Fossella FV, DeVore R, Kerr RN, et al. Randomized phase III trial of docetaxel versus vinorelbine or ifosfamide in patients with advanced non-small-cell lung cancer previously treated with platinum-containing chemotherapy
35、 regimens. The TAX 320 Non-Small Cell Lung Cancer Study Group. J Clin Oncol, 2000，18: 2354-2362.,参考文献格式颠倒,Circulation. 2003 Sep 9;108 Suppl 1:II230-6. Gene transfer of hepatocyte growth factor attenuates postinfarction heart failure. Jayasankar V, Woo YJ, Bish LT, Pirolli TJ, Chatterjee S, Berry MF,
36、 Burdick J, Gardner TJ, Sweeney HL.,其他,不好的文章首句,MG患者通常有眼肌受累， 重症肌无力（myasthenia gravis，MG）患者通常有眼肌受累，,不好的摘要首句,To Investigate the mechanism of NAFLD in gerbils To Investigate the mechanism of non-alcoholic fatty liver disease (NAFLD) in gerbils,中英文的语气应该一致,结论 Ezrin、E-cadherin和CD44V6在NSCLC的生长和转移过程中发挥着重要的调控
37、作用， Ezrin, E-cadherin and CD44V6 probably play an important role in the regulation of growth and meastasis of lung cancer.,材料与方法,Methods Rats were divided randomly into 2 groups. Methods One hundred and twenty healthy adult male rats were randomly divided into two groups.,Respectively, 英文无顿号,The val
38、ues of Ri, Re, Cl, MVV, FVC, Fev0.2, Fev0.2/FVC, FEF25-75%, PEF were 1.81 (0.94-4.10) cm H2O/mLs、1.83 (0.71-3.57) cm H2O/mLs、0.15（0.05-0.29）mL/cm H2O、144.65 (77.28-256.20) mL/min、8.49 (5.82-12.70) mL、5.72 (3.62-7.01)mL、68.12 (39.14-85.28)%、34.11 (28.25-46.87) mL/min、38.28 (30.75-50.25) mL/min, respe
39、ctively.,（9个参数）,英文无顿号,拼写错误,主要组织相容性复合体II类 (majorhistocompatibilitycomplex II, MHC II) 主要组织相容性复合体II类 (major histocompatibility complex II, MHC II),大小写错误,20 mg/Kg 20 mg/kg 1 KDa100 KDa分子量 1 kDa100 kDa分子量 ALT( u/l) ALT ( U/l),未写明箭头和圆圈说明什么问题。,讨 论,SCI拒稿十大原因,1. 可读性差，英文书写太差、与杂志内容或格式不符 2. 原创性不足，证据和逻辑不清 3. 摘要
40、与正文不一致 4. 文体杂乱，序言太长，缺乏完整性 5. 应按照CONSORT指南书写，不可缺项 6. 结果凌乱 7. 统计学处理错误 8. 讨论离开正题，进行无关的议论 9. 结论未充分结合观察结果 10. 未引用最新进展的文献，过时了,20120425 亚洲环宇 MEDCOM ASIA,撰写欠佳的文稿,国际期刊的录用标准,一流：思路新颖 70%，实验25%，写作5% 二流： 40% 40% 20% 三流： 20% 50% 30%,网上,思考与建议,因果探讨,折射出我国医学英语教育的缺失 第一作者的科研作风和实际水平 通讯作者的把关和实际水平 审稿人的把关和实际水平 直接影响与长期影响,具体建议,端正科研作风 优化学习方法，阅读文献不忘学习英语 导师讲解英文书写的重要意义 导师的具体指导和督促检查,写文章的具体建议,中文为主，也审英文 重在内容，兼顾文字和格式 投稿前分项目校阅文稿 提高英语水平，受用一生,