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1、高考英语书面表达写作指导 之 漫 画 作 文 (议论类) 2010届 Tasks: 1. To deal with difficulty in writing about cartoons 2. To learn the basic structure of cartoon writing 3. To learn some useful expressions of cartoon writing 2010年江苏省高考说明：writing 示例 示例 2010年江苏省高考说明：writing 文字材料类 2010年江苏省高考说明：writing 漫画类 1997 1997 1998 1998
2、1999 1999 2000 2000 叙述类 2010年江苏省高考说明：writing 议论类 2010? 之 英语漫画作文 (议论类) 攻 略 Group work （1）: 1. share your essay with your group members 2. raise the difficulties you had when writing it Difficulties? 1. 读图 2. 解意 3. 谋篇 读图 1. 漫画的题目 眼睛 2. 漫画的画面 细节 3. 漫画的文字 观点 4. 漫画的夸张 寓意 读图 题目 画面 文字 夸张 读图 The underwear (
3、 shorts for men and panties for ladies) is a funny way to look at how desperate parents get - trying to prevent children from seeing things they should not - and maybe underwear isnt a good thing to see either but a lot better than some of the materials on the Internet! 夸张 Lets practise! 题目 画面 文字 夸张
4、 解意 1. 辨明褒贬，找准角度 夸奖褒扬 or 批评讽喻？ 解意 . 联系生活，明晰主旨 Imagination! 解意 注意: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)， 切记要认真阅读！ Lets practise! Lets practise! The picture shows some problems in the present education system in China. In the poor countryside, there are no buildings for classrooms, let alone good teachers. They are
5、sometimes forced to leave their studies because their families cannot afford the necessary fees. However, the situation is totally different in the cities. Almost all the children in the cities can have regular education. But they have their own problems. What they face is the endless homework, whic
6、h puts so much pressure on them that some students dont want to continue their studies. 谋篇 3 parts: 1) describe the picture 2) interpret its meaning 3) give your opinions about the phenomenon Part 1 Describe the picture The picture is talking about/shows The picture shows a common phenomenon. The pi
7、cture describes an interesting phenomenon. In the picture, there are/is (are) doing The picture above is about Lets look at the picture above/first. Lets practise! Describe the picture The picture is talking about a story about neighborhood. Two ladies living in the opposite apartments say “hello” w
8、hen they happen to meet each other in the corridor. One of them says, “I moved here 5 years ago, but I never met you before. Could I ask your name please?” The other says,” I have been here for 6 years. How should I call you?” Lets practise! Describe the picture We can see in the picture that a chil
9、d is burdened with heavy schoolbags as well as huge mental pressure. When he was a kid, he was expected to be able to go to a key elementary school, and later a key high school. And now he is expected to be admitted to a key university. Part 2 Interpret the picture It seems very ridiculous thatHowev
10、er, this kind of story is performed everywhere. The picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection of The picture indicate that weNowadays, it is a common phenomenon that This is a satirical (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomenon among Part 3 Give your opinions I think/belie
11、ve that As far as Im concerned, In my opinion, From my point of view, should It is better/advisable to I consider it necessary Only in this way can. 2/3 must have to Do/Dont Group work （2）: Join your group and rewrite the essay together, using the expressions youve learned. Polish up your article! 1
12、. To use linking words if necessary 2. To use complicated structures if possible 1. To use linking words 表示平行、对等或选择关系 and, as well as, together with, not onlybut also. 表示转折关系 but, however, in spite of, although, otherwise, while 表示对比关系 on the contrary, instead of, on one handon the other hand. 表示因果关
13、系 so, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, thanks to. 表示时间、顺序关系 first, second , then, next, finally, for one thing . for another, in the end, 表示递进、强调关系 besides, whats more, in addition, worse still, above all 表示解释、说明关系 such as, for example, for instance(例如), in other words, and so
14、 on 表示结论 in short, in brief, in a word, in general, on the whole, in conclusion 1. To use linking words (五三) 2. To use complicated structures People suggest that the conference be put off. It is suggested that the conference be put off. She walked out of the room and many students followed her. Foll
15、owed by many students, she walked out of the room To his surprise, the little girl knew so many things. What surprised him was that the little girl knew so many things. 被动语态 非谓语动词 从句 The couple was so curious about wild plants that they decided to travel to the forest. 倒装 So curious was the couple a
16、bout wild plants that they decided to travel to the forest. Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920. 强调句 It was not until in 1920 that regular radio broadcasts began. Many lives were saved because there were the efforts of firefighters. 虚拟语气 But for the efforts of firefighters, many lives would not h
17、ave been saved. My version: For most of the parents, its no easy job to keep their children away from the PC monitor. Lets look at the picture above. Two people are standing in front of a computer, whose monitor is wearing underwear. The woman is staring at the computer, thinking while the man is te
18、lling him that there are three ways to make the Internet safer for her children-hardware, software and underwear. It may be ridiculous to cover the PC monitor with someones underwear, but it describes vividly parents distress and feelings of helplessness when they are faced with the problem. Concern
19、ed about their childrens security, some of them just cut off the access to the Internet at home -“the hardware solution”; some choose to use a certain software program to prevent their kids from getting on line “the software solution”; others may make some rules to limit the time their children spen
20、d on the Internet -“the underwear solution”! From my point of view, this phenomenon calls for the attention of the whole society. On one hand, the government should make laws to censor the Internet and block inappropriate sites, making it a safer place for all teenagers. On the other hand, it is bet
21、ter for parents to give their children a proper guide instead of just prevention. Teenagers need to be taught how to tell and resist bad information consciously. Only in this way can the Internet be made safer for the children. 再叮嘱几句： 1. 保证三要素体裁、时态、人称正确 体裁：议论文 时态：一般现在时 人称：第三人称 你不是父母！ 人称混乱！ 再叮嘱几句： 1.
22、 保证三要素体裁、时态、人称正确 体裁：议论文 时态：一般现在时 人称：第三人称 . 避免漫画类作文的一些常见失误 1)误解图意 大忌！ 2) 企图幽默 可笑！ 3)不明寓意 白写！ 4)中心不明 混乱！ 再叮嘱几句： 1. 保证三要素体裁、人称、时态正确 体裁：议论文 人称：第三人称 时态：一般现在时 . 避免漫画类作文的一些常见错误 . 控制字数（没话说PK太啰唆） . 搞一精辟的结尾！ Too short! Too long! 不要动不动就study hard! Enjoy this excellent ending! In my view, this phenomenon is no
23、good to us, nor to our society. Its time that we took some measures to improve it. People living in the same zone can be organized to have some activities together. We should call on people to be friendly to each other. As a popular song says, “ If everybody gives a little love to each other, the wo
24、rld will become the sea of love.” Enjoy this excellent ending! From my point of view, reducing the childrens heavy burden requires efforts from the schools, the society as well as the parents. Education that breaks the rules of childrens development in body and mind is bound to fail. Thus, parents t
25、ogether with teachers should become active supporters of all-around character education and work closely with each other in guiding the students towards a balanced development. 一篇好的英语漫画作文 仔细审题 准确立义 规范行文 整洁书写 Not good! Worse! Neat! 一篇好的英语漫画作文 仔细审题 准确立义 规范行文 整洁书写 Lets try it! 下图描绘的是目前很多孩 子们的苦恼。请你根据对 下
26、面这幅漫画的理解用英 语写一篇短文，描述一下 造成这种现象的原因并发 表你的看法。 In my opinion, spare-time training courses are a waste of time for many students. They might do better when they show interest in what they are learning. Please dont force these students to do what they are not willing to, and when learning is fun, surely they will do better than we expect! Enjoy this excellent ending! Lets try it! 下图描绘的是中国当前教育中存在的问题。请你根据对下面这 幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文，描述一下造成这种现象的原 因并发表你的看法。