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1、Heres an example of how an examiner would analyse it:一.Task repsonse1.The essay fully addresses the task; it is on topic at all times, and it definitely answers the question.2.The position (opinion / overall answer) is clear throughout the essay. It is presented in the introduction, and then support
2、ed in the rest of the essay (with no surprises in the conclusion!).3.Lots of detail is given. Ideas are fully extended (explained in depth) and well supported.二.Coherence and cohesion1.Ideas are presented in a logical and organised way.2.There is definitely a good flow to the essay, so that the argu
3、ment builds and develops.3.Paragraphing is well managed, and each paragraph is well constructed.4.Cohesive devices (linking) are used in an effective but subtle way - they help with the development of ideas, but do not overshadow those ideas.三.Lexical resource (vocabulary)1.A wide range of vocabular
4、y is used.2.Vocabulary is used appropriately, skillfully and naturally in the development of ideas.3.There are several examples of less common items of vocabulary, all of which are used appropriately.四.Grammatical range and accuracy1.A wide range of structures is used.2.There are no mistakes!Can you add to this analysis by listing the linking words and the good vocabulary from your essay?