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1、考法 3| 行文逻辑错误 错误 1主谓不一致 1. ( 2014 全国卷 )My dream school look like a big garden. look looks 主语 My dream school是单数，谓语应用第三人称单数。 2( 2014 辽宁高考 )The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. havehas 主语 The early morning barking为单数，故把have 改为 has。 3 ( 2016 日照市二模
2、)More and more Guoxue courses is given in schools of different levels all over China. is are主语 More and more Guoxue courses为复数，故把is 改为 are 。 4( 2016 哈尔滨市第六中学模拟)Eating snacks are a bad habit and is also a waste of money. areis动名词短语作主语为单数，故把are 改为 is 。 5 ( 2016 长春外国语学校质检)You are the most considerate p
3、erson who know exactly what I need in our class. know knows 定语从句的先行词the most considerate person 为单数，故who后的 谓语动词应为单数。 6( 2016 银川一中模拟 )Therefore, too much exposure to phones are bad for people in terms of health. areis主语为 too much exposure为单数，故把are 改为 is 。不要受phones 的影 响而认为主语是复数。 【导学号： 90892033】 7 (201
4、6 湖北省七市联合考试)There are green grass and colorful flowers everywhere. areis当 there be结构后有两个并列的主语时，遵循就近原则，green grass为 单数，故把are 改为 is 。 8( 2016 银川一中二模)What you have gained are the result of your hard work. areis主语从句为单数，故are 改为 is 。 9( 2016 济南市模拟 )Talking to friends or family members first are always a g
5、ood idea. areis动名词作主语为单数，故把are 改为 is 。 10( 2016 沈阳二中模拟)Last month, I, together with my parents, were invited to my uncles in the USA. werewas 本句的主语是I ，不受 together with后面主语的影响，故把were 改为 was。 感悟与反思 主谓不一致错误主要有三种情况：由于对基本概念忽视而失分：应注意单复数的一致， 例如当不定式、 动名词或从句作主语时应为单数。由于受其他词的影响而失分：例如第六 题 too much exposure to p
6、hones中易受 phones 的影响而认为主语是复数。注意就近原 则。 错误 2时态不一致 1( 2016 全国乙卷 )It is always crowded with customers at meal times.Some people even had to wait outside. hadhave 由前面的句子可知，这里吃饭时总是涌满了顾客，用的是一般现在时，根 据时态的一致性，后面的句子也应用现在时。 2( 2016 全国甲卷 )I thought that it is a good idea.It does not cost much, yet we can still le
7、arn a lot. thought think 由 is ，does 和 can 可判断句子的主体时态为一般现在时，根据时 态的一致性，应把thought改为 think 。 3( 2015 全国卷 )When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there. think thought 这两句话是回忆童年的事情，由was，hoped 和 would 也可知时态 应为过去时，根据时态的一致性，把think改为 thought 。 4 ( 2014 全国卷 )We can lie on the
8、grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening to music. sat sitor连接两个并列谓语，第一个是can lie，第二个应是can sit，前面已 有 can，后面的can 应省去。 5( 2014 浙江高考 )I was taking a train to Londons Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noisy and filled with people. 去掉 had 此处只是对过去事实的描述，而且没有明显的时间提示，故用一般过去时。 6( 2016
9、陕西师大附中模拟)Last night, I went to my friends birthday party, where I make some new friends. make made 既然是昨晚发生的事情，时态是一般过去时，根据时态的一致性，where 引导的定语从句也应指过去。 7( 2016 邯郸市第一中学模拟)Yesterday morning I went fishing, but the only thing I catch was a tree branch. catch caught 句子的整体用过去时，有went 和 was，故把 catch 改为 caught
10、。 8( 2016 西工大附中适应性训练)One day, our teacher told us that we would have an exam and asked us to go over our lessons carefully.However, my friend Lisa spends too much time playing computer games. spendsspent 第一句指的是过去，时态用的是过去时，根据时态的一致性，第二 句应用过去时。 9( 2016 海南省 “七校联盟 ”联考 )I decided that I would enter for el
11、ections again in my final year at school and that I will win the election. will would 句子的整体时态为过去时，故will与前面的would 并列，也应用 would。 10( 2016 青岛市一模 )One of the reasons is that they show great interest in Chinese and English.Besides, they thought a number of physics and maths problems are too difficult for
12、 them to work out. thought think 句子的整体时态为现在时，故把thought改为 think 。 【导学号： 90892034】 感悟与反思 时态不一致错误主要有三种情况：并列句中的时态不一致。主从句的时态不一致。 前后句中的时态不一致。 错误 3指代不一致 1( 2016 全国甲卷 )If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledge we cannot get from books. yourour 由前面的 we go on a trip和 we can broade
13、n 可知， 应把 your 改为 our 。 2( 2016 四川高考 )When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand. herhis 由前面的When he came back 可知，这束花是在“他的(his) ”手里。 3( 2015 全国卷 )We must find ways to protect your environment. yourour/the 本句的主语为we ，因此把物主代词your改为our ，此处也可以用 the 。 4( 2014 四川高考 )If its a false alarm and t
14、here is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. usyou由前面的your teacher可判定后面的us 改为 you。 5( 2016 绵阳市诊断性考试)When I was in high school, most of my friends had bicycles.I hoped I could also have it. it one我的大部分朋友有自行车，我希望也能有一辆。此处应用one 表示“一辆自 行车”，不能用it表特指。 6( 2016 大庆实验中学训练)To make the journ
15、ey fruitful, our teachers devoted his time and energy to us. his their 由 our teachers可判定后面的his 改为 their。 7 ( 2016 哈尔滨市第六中学一模)In fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city. it that 此处 from 后的代词应用that代替前面出现过的the weather ，不能用 it ， 因为 it特指前面提到过的同一个人或者物。 8( 2016 哈师大附中模拟)The Palace Mus
16、eum plans to extend their opening hours to make it more convenient for tourists. their its 由 The Palace Museum 可知应把 their改为 its 。 9( 2014 陕西高考 )My uncles immediately jumped up and shot their arrows at the bird.Neither of the arrows hit the target. Neither None 代替第一句的their arrows，应用 none，因为没有说是两支箭，故
17、不能用 neither。 10. ( 2016 德州市模拟 )It is not only bad for smokers himself, but also a threat to the public health. himself themselves 由 smokers 可知应用themselves 。 感悟与反思 指代不一致错误主要有四种情况：人称不一致。单复数不一致。性别不一致。 替代词和不定代词考查错误，特别是 it和 that 的错用， 不定代词表示两者和两者以上代词 的错用等。 错误 4逻辑不一致 1( 2016 全国卷 )Nearly five years before,
18、and with the help of our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果 )in our back garden. before ago 这里讲的是过去发生的事情，着眼点是现在， 故应把 before改为 ago。 2 ( 2016 银川一中模拟 )Doctors can also help people to live a better life without their professional knowledge. without with 句意：医生也可以用他们的专业知识帮助人们更好地生活。wi
19、thout 应改为 with 。 3( 2016 平顶山调研考试)I keep a diary in English every day because my written English is becoming better and better. becauseso/and 句意：我每天用英语写日记，因此我的英语写作越来越好。前后 为因果关系或并列关系，故把Because 改为 so 或 And。 4( 2016 沈阳二中模拟)For me, this is one of the most rewarding trips I have never made in my life. nev
20、erever 肯定否定错误，既然这次旅行进行过，就不能用never 。 5 ( 2016 南昌市十所省重点中学模拟)Before I finished it, I sent it to a newspaper, which published it. Before After 按常理应该是完成之后送给报社出版，故把Before 改为 After 。 6( 2016 天水一中模拟)I love playing basketball and often play with my friends on weekends.Therefore, it is difficult to rent a bas
21、ketball field and impossible to find a free one. Therefore However 前后为转折关系，故应把Therefore改为 However。 7( 2016 山东省实验中学模拟)Overcome it, or we will be able to achieve our goals. orand 或 will wont 句子自我矛盾，把or 改为 and 或者把 will改为 wont 。 8( 2016 哈尔滨市第六中学模拟)Anxiety and pressure did discourage me at times.Besides,
22、 with the encouragement of my teachers and classmates, I think Ill make it. BesidesHowever 前后为转折关系，故应把Besides 改为 However。 9( 2016 遵义市模拟 )How is everything going recently? Im writing to tell you something more about my birthday. 去掉 moremore 意为“另外的，其他的”，应去掉。 10 ( 2016 石嘴山市模拟 )But, the actual entrance
23、to the tomb has ever been found, nor has the tomb been opened. evernever 根据后面的nor 可知前面应为否定，故ever 改为 never 。 【导学号： 90892035】 感悟与反思 逻辑不一致错误主要有两种情况：肯定否定错用。连接词错用：应根据先后顺序， 或逻辑关系，选择适当的连词或副词。 A ( 2016 石家庄市调研检测) People used to communicate with each other through letters and public phones.So nowadays they us
24、e mobile phones and the Internet instead of.This change in communication have good effects on our works and life.Comparing with letters and public phones, mobile phones and the Internet are fast and much more convenient.If you missed your grandmother, you just take out your phone and say “hello ” to
25、 him.And she will be happy to hear your voice.If you want to place order with a foreign company, you can e mail the message.Itll be minutes after you get their reply. 【答案与解析】 People used to communicate with each other through letters and public phones. So But nowadays they use mobile phones and the
26、Internet instead of 去掉 of .This change in communication have has good effects on our works work and life. Comparing Compared with letters and public phones, mobile phones and the Internet are fast faster and much more convenient.If you missed miss your grandmother, you just take out your phone and s
27、ay “hello ” to him her .And she will be happy to hear your voice.If you want to place an order with a foreign company, you can email the message.Itll be minutes after before you get their reply. So 改为But 考查连词。根据语境可知，上下句表示逻辑上的转折关系，故用连词 But。 删除 of 考查介词。 instead of意为“代替”，后跟名词、代词或动名词作宾语， 但是此处of 后无宾语，故删除
28、of 。instead是副词，在句中作状语。 have 改为 has 考查动词时态和主谓一致。由语境可知， 应用一般现在时；由句子主 语 This change可知，谓语应用单数形式，即has。 works 改为 work 考查名词。此处名词work 表示“工作”，而不是作品，是不可数 名词，没有复数形式。 Comparing 改为 Compared 考查非谓语动词。 compare 和句子谓语are 之间没有连词， 故用非谓语动词，且和句子主语mobile phones and the Internet构成逻辑上的动宾关系， 故用过去分词形式。 fast改为 faster 考查形容词比较级。
29、由and 后的“ much more convenient ”可知， 此处表示对比的概念，故用形容词比较级faster作表语。 missed 改为 miss 考查动词时态。由“ you just take out your phone and say” 可知，从句谓语应用一般现在时，即miss。 him 改为 her 考查代词。与上文的“ grandmother”呼应可知此处应用her 。 place 后加 an 考查冠词。 order 是可数名词， 意为“订单”， 在语境中第一次出现， 故用不定冠词修饰。order 的读音以元音音素开头，故用an。 after改为 before 考查连词。此
30、处为固定句型“it be时间段 before.”， 意为“多久以后”，故用连词before引导时间状语从句。 B ( 2016 河南省八市重点高中质检) I am grateful to my English teacher Susan, at whose help I couldnt have won first prize in the English Talent Competition for high school student last week. I used to be poorly in spoken English.I was too shy to speak in cl
31、ass.Since she teaches us last term, she has been encouraging him to overcome fear and speak out in class.Thanks to her, I have made great progresses.Besides, I practiced several times in the front of her.It was her advice which made me a better speaker and full of confidence.And I owe my success to
32、her. Susan set me a good example.I am determined to become an English teacher when I grow up. 【答案与解析】 I am grateful to my English teacher Susan, at without whose help I couldnt have won first prize in the English Talent Competition for high school student students last week. I used to be poorly poor
33、 in spoken English.I was too shy to speak in class.Since she teaches taught us last term, she has been encouraging him me to overcome fear and speak out in class.Thanks to her，I have made great progresses progress .Besides, I practiced several times in the 去掉 the front of her.It was her advice which
34、 that made me a better speaker and full of confidence. And So I owe my success to her. Susan has set me a good example.I am determined to become an English teacher when I grow up. at 改为 without 考查介词。 根据语境可知， 此处表示“要是没有她的帮助”，故将 at 改为 without 。 student改为 students 考查名词复数。 根据语境可知， 英语才艺大赛是面向所有高 中生的，故将stud
35、ent改为 students 。 poorly改为 poor 考查形容词。此处应用形容词作表语。 teaches 改为 taught 考查动词时态。 在含 since 引导的状语从句的复合句中，主句 为现在完成时，从句用一般过去时，故将teaches 改为 taught 。 him 改为me 考查代词。整篇短文都在讲述“我”的情况，和“他”没关系，故将 him 改为 me 。 progresses改为 progress 考查名词的数。progress为不可数名词，不能用复数形 式，故将progresses改为 progress 。 删除 in 后的 the 考查冠词。 in the front
36、 of 表示“在前面”，通常指在某物 内部的前面。本题是指“在她的前面”，故删除the 。 which 改为 that 考查强调句。 分析该句可知， 本句是一个强调句，强调 her advice ， 故将 which 改为 that 。 And改为 So 考查连词。前后句是“因果”关系，故将And 改为 So。 Susan 后加has 考查动词时态。老师为“我”树立好榜样是过去的事情，并且对 “我”产生了影响，所以用现在完成时。【导学号： 90892036】 C ( 2016 合肥市质检 ) For students learning instruments, summer is always
37、 a “music season ” During vacation times, we are always busy attending variously lessons, taking exams and participating in competitions.This summer I joined a music competition but was lucky to get the second place.It was the first time that I had played on the stage in front of such many people.I
38、felt very upset at first, but the encourage from my teacher keeps me going ahead.Surprising, I was given the silver medal，that increased my confidence.If we try our best to get ahead, we will be able to achieve what we desire and deserve it. 【答案与解析】 For students learning instruments, summer is alway
39、s a “music season ” During vacation times time ， we are always busy attending variously various lessons, taking exams and participating in competitions.This summer I joined in a music competition but and was lucky to get the second place.It was the first time that I had played on the stage in front
40、of such so many people.I felt very upset at first, but the encourage encouragement from my teacher keeps kept me going ahead. Surprising Surprisingly ， I was given the silver medal, that which increased my confidence.If we try our best to get ahead, we will be able to achieve what we desire and dese
41、rve i t 去掉 it times 改为 time 考查名词。根据语境可知，此处time 表示 ( 用于工作、休息等的) 一段时间，为不可数名词，故改为time 。 variously改为 various 考查形容词。根据语境可知，此处表示上各种各样的课， 应用形容词作定语修饰名词，故改为various 。 joined后面加 in 考查固定搭配。join in意为“参加 ( 活动) ”，符合语境，故加 上 in 。 but 改为 and 考查连词。根据语境可知，此处表示并列关系，故改为and。 such 改为 so 名词 people 前面有形容词many修饰应用so，故改为so。 en
42、courage 改为 encouragement 考查名词。此处是名词作主语，表示“来自老师的 鼓励”。故改为encouragement 。 keeps 改为 kept 考查动词时态。这是介绍假期中的一件事情，并且由上文的felt 可知，应用一般过去时，故改为kept 。 Surprising改为 Surprisingly 考查副词。此处应用副词作状语，修饰整个句子， 故改为 Surprisingly。 that 改为 which 考查关系代词。 本句为非限制性定语从句，并且关系词指代前面整 句话，故改为which 。 删除 it 考查宾语从句。what 在宾语从句中充当宾语，it多余，故删除
43、。 D ( 2016 福建省五校高中毕业班统一考试) Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.All kind of pollution and the destruction of the environment could be see everywhere in our daily life. With the development of industry and agriculture, cars make much noise and gave off poisonou
44、s gases.Because of population expansion and overdevelopment, resources have become less and less.Trees have been cut down, but waste water is being poured continuously into rivers and lakes.The whole ecological balance of earth is changing.Massive destruction of the environment have brought about ne
45、gative effects in the ecosystem around the world and even become a great threat to mans existence. We must face in the situation that exists and take immediate action to solving our environmental problems together.We hope all these measures will be effective and bring back a healthy environment so t
46、hat we could live happy in a beautiful and harmonious world. 【答案与解析】 Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.All kind kinds of pollution and the destruction of the environment could be see seen everywhere in our daily life. With the development of industry and ag
47、riculture, cars make much noise and gave give off poisonous gases.Because of population expansion and overdevelopment, resources have become fewer and fewer.Trees have been cut down, but and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers and lakes.The whole ecological balance of the earth is c
48、hanging.Massive destruction of the environment have has brought about negative effects in on the ecosystem around the world and even become a great threat to mans existence. We must face i n 去掉 in the situation that exists and take immediate action to solving solve our environmental problems together.We hope all these measures will be effective and bring back a healthy environment so that we could live happy happily in a beautiful and harmonious world. kind 改为 kinds 考查名词的数。根据“ All ”可知，kind 应使用复数形式。 see 改为 seen 考查语态。主语与see 之间是动宾关系，应用被动语态，故将se