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1、文常用万能功能句（天龙八部- 陈曲） 1. 六级的题目分类 (1) 首先六级作文有导读（关键性词语均已经划出）： Direction: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essayentitled. You should write at least150 words but no more than 200following the outline given below. (2) 六级考试题目一般分为两类：1. 现象解释解决类； 2. 正反观点对比类。除了2011 年 12 月出现看似较新的题目外，其余均逃

2、不出这范围，与专业四级的题目有些类似。 现象解释解决类 2010 年 06 月 Due Attitude Should Be Given to the Study of Chinese 1. 近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文的现象; 2. 出现这种现象的原因和后果； 3. 为了改变这种状况，我认为 正反观点对比类 2009 年 12 月 现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班； 1. 对这种做法有人表示支持， 2. 有人并不赞成； 3. 我认为 Should parents send their kids to art classes? 2. 六级的写作黄金五法则 由于六级先按百分制的15 分评卷（五

3、档 2 5 8 11 14），又按阅卷时间不足30秒，阅卷人大 体以印象给分。其实写作好坏的确看若干句即现端倪。 黄金法则包括： 1. 题目提纲要点大致意思写成英文各段中心句 注：便于阅卷人了解每段的Topic Sentence ； 2. 惊艳学会制造亮点（尤其第一段） 注：往往阅卷第一印象甚为重要，即体现考生水平； 3. 清晰学会使用标志词（尤其是主体段） 注：中间段落结构清楚，助于评卷人了解思想； 4. 词汇原则四级词汇六级高端词汇 注：第一偏向书面，第二偏向准确。用太简单的的确不容易得高分。你以为你是海明威呀？ 5.卷面保持清楚切忌藏宝图 注：让阅卷老师看卷费力，即便你文笔隽永，恐怕也难

4、见天日。 3. 天龙八部 说天龙八部，只是卖个噱头，目的是告诉给位，开头不好写，模板（template ）是没有任何作 用的。请一定要学习模板句，而不要用所谓的模板段，不信你给我找个万能能套所有开头段的 试试？ 整理下历年来的所有开头段： 2011.06 1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试； 2010.12 1.目前高校排名相当盛行； 2010.06 1.近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文的现象； 2009.12 1.现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班； 2009.06 1.有人认为名字很重要； 2008.12 1.大学生的心理健康十分重要； 2008.06 1.随着信息技术的发展，电子图书越来越多；

5、 2007.12 1.如今数字化产品得到越来越多广泛的使用； 2007.06 1.有人做好事期望得到回报； 2006.12 1.阅读经典书籍对人的成长至关重要。 我们发现一般要描述的都是一些社会的热点： 这里有八个句型各位可以背一下。考试场上根据题目，将八个句子任意选择、随意组合起来即 可！ 天龙八部之一：描述类经典句 预备知识：写句子的亮点要么是词，要么是句型。 句型部分 1：阅读经典书籍非常重要。(划线处可以根据题目变换) 1. Reading classics is very important. / It is very important to read classics. 2. I

6、t is of vital/great importance to read classics. 3. Nothing is more important than reading classics. 4. Reading classics plays an extremely important role throughout our lives. 5. Reading classics never fails to be important. 也可以将 34 句一起用： Nothing can play a more important role than reading classics

7、. Important可以替换词汇： significant（意义深远的） essential（关键的）indispensable （不可替代的）pivotal（中枢作用的）等等。 句型部分 2：在写作时表示真理性的描述可以加上一个引导抬头。 如：做了好事要不要求回报的开头可以写成： It is generally accepted that one should never expect a reward when doing a good deed. Seemingly justifiable, however, it is not always the case. 这样的抬头句替换： 1

8、. It is generally accepted that / There is general acceptance that 2. There is little doubt that 3. It cannot be denied that 4. There is a growing recognition that 5. It has been widely noted that 6. It is universally acknowledged that 7. A prevailing notion / trend is that 句型合并成模版句型： It is generall

9、y accepted that nothing can play a more indispensable role thanreading classics. 学会灵活替换如： It goes without saying that reading classics plays an extremely important role throughout our lives. 天龙八部之二：趋势类经典句 模版句型（划线处可以根据题目变换）： 越来越多的父母开始考虑把孩子送到艺术学校去。 More and more 不是不好，可以替换句型使用 1. An increasing/a growin

10、g/a mounting number of parents begin to consider sending their kids to art classes. 2. Parents in growing numbers begin to consider sending their kids to art classes. 3. It is obvious that digital products have become increasingly popular andhave been extensively used in a variety of ways. 2007.12 如

11、今数字化产品得到越来越多广泛的使用。 4. Nowadays, college undergraduates have increasingly realized certificateplays an extremely important role in pursuit of their future career. As a result, they get involved in a certificate mania. 2011.06 现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试 天龙八部之三：关注类经典句 预备知识： 英汉差异 1：英语多被动，汉语多主动。 如：我们应该重视电子书 We shoul

12、d pay attention to e-books. （we I people用的太多，句子显得累赘） You should pay attention to e-books.（第二人称最好不要在作文中出现） 主语替换成 one是一个选择，另外用被动语态为佳。 Much more attention than ever before should be paid to _. 英汉差异 2：汉语多短句，英语多长句 中文讲意境，所以当出现小桥流水人家，中国人都懂这个场景，但是外国人句式不加动词，这 三个词语是无意义的。一般可以翻译成： Murmuring stream runs below th

13、e tiny bridge, leading to elegant dwellings. 英语中的长短句可以连起来： Much more attention than ever before has been paid to the fast-developing IT industry. The IT industry has brought unprecedented transformation to human beings life. 模板句型（划线处可以根据题目变换）： In recent years, much more attention than ever before ha

14、s been paid to the fast-developing IT industry, whichhas brought unprecedented transformation to human being s life. 天龙八部之四：重视类经典句 句型举例： 近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文的现象 With the onset of globalization, we the post-80 s generation increasingly attach great importance to foreign language learning. Sadly/Unfortunate

15、ly, we instead pay little attention to our mother tongue. 重视关注类句型： attach great importance to pay attention to set store by lay stress on/upon 模版句型： 1. With/owing to the development of _, we, the post-90 s generation, should attach great importance to/pay attention to/set store by/lay stress upon _.

16、 2. With the advent of the 21 st century, as todays college students, we should pay special attention to the issue of _. 天龙八部之五：发生类经典句 预备知识：近几年来越来越多的父母把孩子送到了艺术学校去。 The past several years have witnessed an exponential increase in the number of parents who wish to send their kids to art classes. 模板句型：

17、 Time/Place have witnessed a/an sharp/dramatic/striking/exponential/considerable/significant increase/decrease in the number of _ who/which _. 练习 1：根据的调查，仅仅 2009年间，中国就有约大学生由于心理健康问题而跳楼。 According to a recent survey conducted by China Daily, the year 2009 has witnessed approximately _ college students

18、 who committed suicide owing to their mental problem. 练习 2：近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文的现象。 The past several years have witnessed a considerably striking phenomenon that a growing number of students, despite their fluency in English, start to pay little attention to the study of Chinese, their mother tongue. 这种句型

19、其实句式举例。 附举例一种句型： The digital age has exerted a conspicuous impact on our life, which can be exemplified by the popularity of e-shop. 天龙八部之六：议论类经典句 预备知识： 2008.12 The Importance of Students mental health 如何提高大学生心理健康问题（A）引起了社会广泛争议（ B）。 A：the issue of how to improve the students mental health B：a heated

20、 discussion / a debate / a variety of conflicting views / much controversy 模版句型： 1. A has caused/led to/resulted in/triggered/given rise to a variety of conflicting views. 2. As regards A, there has been a heated discussion among the general public in our society. 3. There is much controversy over A

21、. / a national debate has sprung up onA. 如：As regards the issue of how to improve the students mental health, there has been a heated discussion among the general public in our society. 天龙八部之七：出现类经典句 模版句型： 随着信息技术的发展，电子图书越来越多 Owning to/With the development of IT industry, e-books in growing numbersbe

22、gin to emerge into peoples vision. 或者： Probably without our consciousness/ realization, the IT technologyseems to give birth to a digital age in todays world. A emerge into peoples sight/vision A B A give(s) birth/rise to B 练习：大学排名（试着使用我们学过的句型） It has been widely noted that university plays a fundam

23、ental role in ones cultivation and provides a platform for higher education. Recently, however, much more attention than ever before has been paid to the university ranking, which has become increasingly prevalent among educationalists. With the wizardry of the internet, universities all across the

24、global have been ranked according to such factors as their academic reputation and faculty students.Consequently, this phenomenon might give rise to a variety of conflicting views among the general public in our society. 天龙八部之八：结果类经典句 预备知识： 2007.06 Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed?

25、例句： Seemingly simple, the question of whether one should expect a reward after doing a good deed poses a considerable challenge, which tends toshowcase people s moral belief. 模版句型 1（对产生）： pose a considerable challenge to 1. Pollution poses a great threat to our existence. 2. Rapid population growth

26、will exert a strain on economies around the world. 3. Smoking places a great influence on our health. 模版句型 2（表示一种趋势，一般插入主谓之间）： 1. One tends to shout when he gets excited. 2. In winter, people are apt to catch cold. 3. He is likely to make mistakes when tired. 4. She is prone to lose temper in diffic

27、ult situation. 5. Leo is liable to act aggressively. 6. This kind of shoes is inclined to slip on wet ground. 最后给各位储备三种句式： 1. enable/allow me to gain much knowledge. ( enable sb. to do sth.) 2. bring us numerous/countless/a multitude of benefits/drawbacks. (bring sb. ) 3. Books provide me with the a

28、ccess to knowledge. ( provide sb. with sth.) offer supple可以替换 provide ，但是要注意搭配。比如：offer sb. sth. offer sth to sb. 如何灵活处理这些句型呢： 建议 1：先牢牢记得：议论类和发生类。发生类就是举例子，只要能举例子最好举，例子一定 不是模板。议论类，只要你觉得引起大家的争议，必可用。 建议 2：前三大句型，关注类、描述类、趋势类，一般必在开头可以用一句。 建议 3：后三大句型，重视类、出现类、结果类，一般必可在后面跟一句。 学完六脉神剑后再写模板。 4. 六脉神剑 当分述观点的时候，一般

29、多会说第一、第二、第三。接下来总结六脉神剑：起承转合独评 启部：用于引导第一点 首先： 1. first, firstly, first of all; 2. to begin with, to start with; 3. in the first place, first and foremost 一方面： 1. on the one hand (on the other); 2. for one thing (for another thing). 承部：承接前面观点 其次second, secondly, third, thirdly 进一步 furthermore, whats mo

30、re, moreover 此外 besides, in addition 结果 consequently, as a consequence/result, thus hence therefore, on this account, in light of this 转部：转折语义相反 技巧 1：but 改 although/in spite of/despite 如：Selecting their favorite lecturer does bring great benefits to students study, butit also cause a number of probl

31、ems. Althoughselecting their favorite lecturer does bring great benefits to students study, it also causes a number of problems. In spite of/despiteits great benefits for students study, selecting their favorite lecturer does cause a number of problems. 注：很多老师建议but 改成 in spite of the fact that. 那么那些

32、老师有兴趣去看看GMAT 语法，这种写法叫wordy 或者 redundancy（冗长，累赘）。但是如果改成in spite of this， 那还可以。不过前面需要句话句掉。 技巧 2：but 改 yet/while/whereas 如：Many people argue that the spring festival gala should not be cancelled,butothers adopt a completely different view. Many people argue that the spring festival gala should not be c

33、ancelled, while others adopt a completely different view. 此外还可以用： 不幸地： sadly unfortunately 相反地： on the contrary, by contrast, conversely 事实上： as a matter of fact, in fact 然而： nevertheless, nonetheless 合部：小结上文中段落的内容 总结： in conclusion, all in all, in a word 简而言之： in short, in brief, to sum up 如前所述： as

34、 has been noted / mentioned above given the factors I have just outlined taking into account all the above factors (后面主语用 I) 独部：个人观点标志词 personally speaking可以用 in my eyes, as for me, as I see it in my opinion可以用 from my perspective from my point of view可以用 as far as I am concerned it seems to me that

35、可以用 from where I stand, my stance is that 评部：在观点前可以加一些副词来评价 Interestingly, surprisingly, more importantly Especially, particularly Undoubtedly, apparently, evidently, obviously, conceivably等等 5. 综合性模板 正反观点对比型： 第一组话：介绍故事的背景 (1) It is generally accepted that _ tends to play an extremely significant ro

36、le in _. (2) For the past several months, much more attention than ever before has been paid to _, which gives rise to _. 第二组话：引出争议的焦点 Consequently, there has been much controversy over the issue of _. 第三组话：引出正方观点 (1) Obviously, many _ will choose to _(动宾)/ agree/concede that _(句子) /vote for _(名词),

37、generally for _ reasons. 替换： Many people welcome it with applause and enthusiasm, believing that _. (2) On the one hand, _(试着使用 with the development重视类句式 ). (3) On the other hand, _(试着使用 place/put/pose结果类句式 ). (4) Most importantly, _(试着使用 enable/allow句式). 注：如果能自己用自己的原因那是最好了，如果想不出来，试试用我的吧！总比你写不出来好。 第

38、四组话：引出反方观点 (1) Nevertheless, other people adopt a completely different view, believing that _( 试着用 fail to求反). 替换： However, those who strongly oppose the _ are not among the minority. They hold that _. (2) In addition, _.(试着用 give birth to出现类句式 )。 第五组话：引出总结 (1) Given the factors I have just outlined

39、, it can be concluded that the question quite depends on personal choice. (2) From where I stand, _. 如何亮自己的观点呢？ （犀利） When considering opinions of both sides, I am inclined to be in favor of the former/latter one since _. （中庸） When considering opinions of both sides, I find they are of the equal weig

40、ht since _. （犀利） The advantages far outweigh the disadvantages in terms of _, since _. （中庸） The advantage and disadvantage are of equal weight in terms of _, since _. （中庸） _ is just like a double-edged sword. However, one point should be kept in mind that we should take sensible use, always being a

41、master instead of slave of them. 现象解释解决型： 第一组话： (1) There is a growing recognition that _ is of vital importance in _. (2) Consequently, with the development of _, we, the post-90 s generation, should attach great importance to _. (3) For example, the past several years have witnessed a dramatic inc

42、rease in the number of _ which _. 第二组话： 如果是解决问题： (1) To put an end to the serious problem, in my mind, it calls for the efforts from all sides. 或者： To this problem, in my mind, there are at least three approaches. 或者： Urgent measures are needed to tackle the above-mentioned problem. 或者： The followin

43、g ways can be adopted to create and maintain a harmonious dormitory life. 那么怎么解决呢？一般的解决方案，不是个人努力，就是政府努力！ (2) To begin with, only when all of us join in the efforts at all levels can we expect to address the issue properly. 或者 It seems to me that it is high time that we should take concerted step to

44、address the issue properly. (3) Besides, if the government/authority makes relevant policies and measures to _, the problem can be readily solved in the foreseeable future. 或者 Since my own voice is too weak to be heard, I hope we can call on the public to _. 第三组话： 如果是解释问题： (1) Three reasons, in my m

45、ind, can account for this social phenomenon. 或者： The reasons why the spirit of teamwork has become so important are as follows. 或者： There are several factors contributing to these changes. 或者： To account for this phenomenon, people have come up with a variety of reasons. 理由一般来源于什么？在中国的现象中，第一是人口（popu

46、lation ），由人口可能引出的经济 （economy ），也许有些问题产自教育制度（educational system），有些有来自于环境问题 （environment ）。所以后面的空格按照上面类型的词语进行填写。 (2) First and foremost, I firmly believe that the problem derives/stems/originates/results from _, which is inevitable/unavoidable. 或者 To begin with, this phenomenon could be attributed to _, which majority of the students fail to take into consideration. (3) In addition, this situation could be seen/considered/regarded/deemed as the results/consequences of _.