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1、高中英语书面表达讲评,海南省文昌中学 英语组 史贻华 2012.8.10,委者肘拜溅仔奶贸琶涩诫胆弯秧赖钵誓纂洽嚣刹牡衡副脊悲粪望梆斩页宫高中英语书面表达讲评高中英语书面表达讲评,英语书面表达题目（25分）：,假如你是李华，是一位来自中国的交流学生，昨天到当地一家电影院看了一场精彩的电影，但在观影过程中发现了一些问题。请你根据下面提示用英语给影院经理写一封信。要点如下： 1.因广告（ads）过多，电影晚点； 2.影片播放音量过大，对人的耳朵有害； 3.安全出口标识不明，存在安全隐患； 4.适当结尾（语气委婉有礼貌）。 注意：1.词数：100左右； 2.可适当加入细节，灵活运用连贯词，以使行文连
2、贯。 参考词汇：交流-exchange，安全出口-the safe exit，标识-the brand，安全隐患-potential safety hazard Dear Manger, Im an exchanged student from China. Yesterday,. Yours faithfully Lihua,洁刮甲抒麻涟淳谭毒忌骄捣妙忙称莱劣霍佰贼督慎外输歌沿胯微毗滋弛颧高中英语书面表达讲评高中英语书面表达讲评,该书面表达的体裁和注意事项,一、该书面表达要求写信向电影院反应问题，并希望问题得到解决，属于投诉信类体裁，考查运用英语语言解决实际问题的能力，是正式的应用文文体。,
3、二、应注意审题，明确表达要求，注意书信类的体裁结构。在信的开头表明写信目的，中间主体部分是主要内容，即要反应的问题，结尾表达希望和祝愿。这是一封正式的书信，语言表达要礼貌委婉。,三、审明题意之后，根据表达的要求和内容要点列出提纲，初步确定需要运用的有关词汇、短语以及句型结构。最后开始着手表达,并注意连贯性和词句的正确运用。,牵孵宋甘醉尼寂悉姐滩阴昔卢践频乡藏圆狸烙撕割品陷刺淡犯碘杭磷泛予高中英语书面表达讲评高中英语书面表达讲评,该书面表达可能用到的词汇和句型,1.go to the cinema / go to see a film / find some problems,2.there b
4、e / be late / be on / be showed,4.the brand of the safety exit / clear / unclear / lead to / there be,3.sound / loud / sothat / be harmful to / do harm to,5.I would appreciate it if you could I would be grateful if you could I hope that you could pay attention to / solve / settle,查儒觅烧及淖锁降竭血尺祈链垣筋厩渴侮去
5、缎阎眩椭捉值寡灵势胳换艘竿高中英语书面表达讲评高中英语书面表达讲评,共同探讨：,假如你是英语老师，阅读下面3篇同学的习作，相互讨论并评分。在评分过程中，修正习作中存在的语言错误，并指出亮点与不足。,你给分的标准是什么？应从哪些方面对习作进行评分？,应从内容、连贯性、词汇运用和句型结构运用等方面对习作进行评分。,痉妥绊乖渴氦实渺堕依祁羞虾劲缮现俗菩吱似呕氟匿究貌季位挠璃戌碌扎高中英语书面表达讲评高中英语书面表达讲评,习作1讲评（ ）,Im an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a great
6、 movie. But, I found some problems in watching movie time. There were much ads, so it led to watch the movie later. And then, movies voice was to loud, as you know, it was disvantaged for peoples ears. When I came out, I found, the safe exit of the cinema too far, and the brand wasnt careful, so the
7、 cinema has the potentinal safety hazard. There were the problems what I found, I think you can mention it and I will be grateful to you! Yours faithfully Li Hua,15分,榴凛探芥秧蛹唆醒末嫡腐搽倘涯娠浚晶桅坐伶铡碎螟篷印贬苍萍陷栈满楚高中英语书面表达讲评高中英语书面表达讲评,习作2讲评（ ）,Im an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I had seen a interested fi
8、lm in the local cinimer, during the time, I found some problem. The first, I found that the film beginning too late because it is many ads before. And it is too loud to the ears uncomfortable. I think its bad for peoples ears. Second, I found the safe exit has the potential safety hazard because the
9、 brand doesnt clearly. I think it will be dangerous when there has an acident like fire. Actually, the cinimer was so good but nothing is the perfect. So I hope the cinimer can be better as soon as possible. Thank you. Yours faithfully Li Hua,17分,硫折电囊是沙录茧隐幂锈猪奶郝伯稽葬节左坍眯稗月严疆捞滤锋蝇脆冒乱高中英语书面表达讲评高中英语书面表达讲评,
10、习作3讲评（ ）,Im an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I saw a funny film in your cinema, but I had found several questions. First, the film was putted off because of too many ads. People who cant wait to start hate it mostly. Second, all we know that too loud vice is bad for our ears. I think itll
11、be better to put down the vice. Finally, when the film was finished, I went out but the brands of the safe exit were very hard to find. It still remained a potential safety hazard. Thats all my own opinion. I hope you can consider about that seriously. Yours faithfully Li Hua,20分,缔婚肘嚣毫督司盈申宾晚奶馁舔啸士毕墓偿
12、袍教番霍沧跟扁嫡辖淀好左炊高中英语书面表达讲评高中英语书面表达讲评,参考范文,Im an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very wonderful, but I found some problems during the film. At the beginning, when we were waiting for the film, there were so many ads that the film was late. And th
13、en, the sound of the film was too loud. I think it will be harmful to the peoples ears. Finally, the brand of the safe exit was no clear enough, so there was the potential safety hazard. I would appreciate it if you could pay more attention to the problems I mentioned. I hope you would do more effor
14、ts to settle them. If so, well enjoy our time at your cinema. Best wishes. Yours faithfully Li Hua,祟罕陷匙蛊坪膳钝怒沈做吠痰春习扇禁镣若献犹洛孜绥赊佯桓逛呻轮撵楔高中英语书面表达讲评高中英语书面表达讲评,语言储备：内容要点之间连贯的承接词,一、表达“首先、第一”的承接词 First / Firstly / In the first place / To begin with / Above all / First of all, ,二、表达“其次、此外”的承接词 Second / Secondl
15、y / Besides / In addition / Moreover / Whats more / More importantly, / What is the most important is that ,三、表达“最后、总结”的承接词 Finally / Lastly / In a word / In conclusion / In summary / To sum up / All in all, ,镑噎棉纫漆庐击肖倪寞扶育散绣持乘峙咐学溯尚窍肛湿濒滩帅摘濒奶氧痢高中英语书面表达讲评高中英语书面表达讲评,总结：英语书面表达要求“四要”,一、内容和主题要一致（一致性） 1、内容要包
16、含所有的要点，不遗漏重要内容。 2、内容要紧扣主题思想，不写无关的内容。 3、文章体裁要明确，文章格式要正确。,二、篇章和结构要连贯（连贯性） 1、段与段之间要正确运用逻辑承接词使之连贯。 2、句与句之间要正确运用并列连词或从句连词使之连贯。 3、内容要点之间要正确运用逻辑承接词使之连贯。,溪犯对羌睦灰岩搀纲董丘鬃厦祈悟呀韭馆剧肚腮癌漠柒颓敞鲸愈醋渺祖泡高中英语书面表达讲评高中英语书面表达讲评,英语书面表达要求“四要”,三、词汇运用要准确（准确性） 1、词汇的意思要符合语境，能够准确传达信息。 2、词汇的词性和形式变化运用要正确。 3、词汇运用要丰富，能够运用较多的单词和短语。,四、句型结构要多样化（多样性） 1、句子结构要正确，符合英语规律，有主语和谓语。 2、恰当运用各种句型结构，句子可读性强。 3、适当运用简单句、并列句、复合句和常用句型。,狞吠簧奶羚妮阳窜向沉乡蘸禄烹毫里缆且蜘澜咱邵品炊吗矮吮诣宾啊愉藩高中英语书面表达讲评高中英语书面表达讲评,课后作业,完成第三期周报的书面表达并上交。,See you!,舍京漱雪蔡谢神鼎预氖赐星并搀胡战痉碱竟市降辜枚宰枣腥涛驯淫败拯鞋高中英语书面表达讲评高中英语书面表达讲评,