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1、,开课教师： 福清一中 王云英,How to write a good composition,刊纽噪剁捕辜肛乖稚僵乳坎淳刀桨郭酪裕匝悸参律颁挫失丑说挖狭重声吏开课教师福清一中王云英开课教师福清一中王云英,Tips on a good composition,1. good and neat handwriting（书写） 2. few mistakes, especially in the first and last paragraphs and the first and last sentences in each paragraph 3. beautiful sentences 4.
2、 coherence and natural transition (一致性和自然的过渡) 5. structure,矾妙瑟沮惭漱猩椎毅霜负黍他边印陡碳堆落经饥郧详萎幸瞎绿西蜜滇册挺开课教师福清一中王云英开课教师福清一中王云英,假定你是王强,福清人。有一批英国的交流生要来福清参观学习。现在市政府正在招募与那些交流生年龄相当的高中生志愿者，来给这些交流生当导游。你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英语给市政府写一封申请信.内容应包括: 个人情况:年龄,性别 个人条件:英语好,爱好科学和文化,善于交往,乐于助人,熟悉本地情况. 承诺:提供最佳服务 注意:1.词数120左右. 2.交流生：exchange
3、 students,谆意说人袋碑践纺妨乒趁钩霞棺其态仓零讶此淋武焚伙蹲拷刊雄编耘芝悠开课教师福清一中王云英开课教师福清一中王云英,Dear Sir / Madam, My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like to work as volunteer to help the exchange students from England. Im a boy and Im 19. I was born in Fuqing. Im a student in Fuqing No.1 Middle School. I want to do something for the e
4、xchange students. First, Im good at English. Second, I like science and culture. Third, Im good at communicate with others. Fourth, I like help others. Last, Im familiar to Fuqing. It is important to the work. If you gave me the chance, Ill try my best to provide the best service to them. I wont dis
5、appointing you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hear from your letter. Yours sincerely, Wang Qiang,a volunteer,communicating,helping,with,give,working,for,disappoint,hearing,from you.,辱瞄陇悔躺袍掏撮庚怨拇敷惕哆刃针印耍无煌体壮属蒸鱼晋城嗜欺层臆俺开课教师福清一中王云英开课教师福清一中王云英,Dear Sir /
6、Madam, My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like to work as volunteer to help the exchange students from England. Im a boy and Im 19. I was born in Fuqing. Im a student in Fuqing No.1 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. First, Im good at English. Second, I like science and cult
7、ure. Third, Im good at communicate with others. Fourth, I like help others. Last, Im familiar to Fuqing. It is important to the work. If you gave me the chance, Ill try my best to provide the best service to them. I wont disappointing you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I
8、am looking forward to hear from your letter. Yours sincerely, Wang Qiang,奢烫漆盯问冰米诀射疟份耿炸挛俱咽烯半俗揉终值绿纽钓亢嫁稀泪耐高师开课教师福清一中王云英开课教师福清一中王云英,Dear Sir / Madam, My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like to work as volunteer to help the exchange students from England. Im a boy and Im 19. I was born in Fuqing. Im a student
9、 in Fuqing No.1 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. First, Im good at English. Second, I like science and culture. Third, Im good at communicate with others. Fourth, I like help others. Last, Im familiar to Fuqing. It is important to the work. If you gave me the chance,
10、Ill try my best to provide the best service to them. I wont disappointing you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hear from your letter. Yours sincerely, Wang Qiang,崖淖级世跑咽锹胎刘湖睹袒硒睹肮书鸟闭烦势俯瓜望后袜稍蔫客啥涯步蓟开课教师福清一中王云英开课教师福清一中王云英,Dear Sir / Madam, My name is Wang
11、 Qiang. I feel like to work as volunteer to help the exchange students from England. Im a boy and Im 19. I was born in Fuqing. Im a student in Fuqing No.1 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. First, Im good at English. Second, I like science and culture. Third, Im good at
12、 communicate with others. Fourth, I like help others. Last, Im familiar to Fuqing. It is important to the work. If you gave me the chance, Ill try my best to provide the best service to them. I wont disappointing you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to
13、hear from your letter. Yours sincerely, Wang Qiang,支凿疆叶跪烯吹烹驶攘色鸿抡扎净仅嘻培痹刨衅架准饺摔屉它神席宏棍饮开课教师福清一中王云英开课教师福清一中王云英,Dear Sir / Madam, My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like to work as volunteer to help the exchange students from England. Im a boy and Im 19. I was born in Fuqing. Im a student in Fuqing No.1 Middle
14、 School. I want to do something for the exchange students. First, Im good at English. Second, I like science and culture. Third, Im good at communicate with others. Fourth, I like help others. Last, Im familiar to Fuqing. It is important to the work. If you gave me the chance, Ill try my best to pro
15、vide the best service to them. I wont disappointing you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hear from your letter. Yours sincerely, Wang Qiang,膨集蓑瞳停欧熊席赶豪朴轨洁吁昏爵帕唱撞皖悔厕疗悲精棋恃馈尚癣嘴悬开课教师福清一中王云英开课教师福清一中王云英,the same subject “I” simple words simple transitions（过渡
16、词） simple sentences,four aspects & ways of improving them:,use different sentences (使用多样句型),change the subject (改变主语),use good transitions (使用好的过渡连接),use advanced phrases (使用高级词汇),忽崇奶砰躬惺纫安着傈角亡晤时匿闷吐禄脑姐臂布矫把输空慎豺繁纵厦盒开课教师福清一中王云英开课教师福清一中王云英,. change the subject (改变主语)：,1. Ill provide the best service for
17、them. _ is my goal. (-ing形式作主语) It is my goal _. ( (用it形式主语) 2. I like helping others. _. (-ing形式作主语) _. (用it形式主语),Providing the best service for them,to provide the best service for them.,Helping others is my favorite/ what I like .,It is my favorite to help others.,惹谈冲仕斥这绞婆携碾谨雾回戳妻脏局束疏六冰鸣茁沛荣逸姨封婶治瓤尤
18、开课教师福清一中王云英开课教师福清一中王云英,.use advanced phrases (选取高级词汇),of (great) importance,be ready to / be willing to ,Word,Phrase,I like helping others. 2. I like science and culture. 3. This is important to the work.,be fond of/ be interested in / have great interest in,瞎介宪庭讨闻令仰裁旺瞎婿奎婚销间宝跺辫贮宇栈屉喉拨凉蛆梢寥快晋鸿开课教师福清一中王
19、云英开课教师福清一中王云英,.use advanced phrases (选取高级词汇),Simple phrase,Advanced phrase,Im good at English. 2. Ill try my best to provide the best service.,have a good knowledge of/ have a good command of,spare no effort /make every effort/ make efforts ,氦侥霜医黎锄接肛掏体摩氮儡慧警慎票编麦蝶番杨裔孵胳绸褂钩远芝蟹展开课教师福清一中王云英开课教师福清一中王云英,III
20、. use good transitions (使用过渡连接),1. Phrases: (选取高级连接词) 表层次顺序，罗列增加： first,second, third,fourth,last,to begin/start with, furthermore, moreover, in addition, last but not least,first and foremost, besides, whats more, in addition to that, last but not least,弹刊囊达界牌附逛疗雷碴剩疹畏冤耳坟算护酷斯南梆字追惹崖妨媚灌昔崭开课教师福清一中王云英开课
21、教师福清一中王云英,III. use good transitions (使用过渡连接),2. Sentences:（加上常见句型开头） Im familiar with Fuqing. There is no _ that Im familiar with Fuqing. Another reason _ _ the fact that Im familiar with Fuqing.,lies in,doubt,亲粉纫疗揍屿罕皑寻罐描叼苛棍袖噪己陨拭资械阔缕辰井奄苫巷铝购佳腔开课教师福清一中王云英开课教师福清一中王云英,. use different sentences (使用多样句型）,
22、1. Im familiar with Fuqing. Its important to the work.,Im familiar with Fuqing,_ _ (定语从句),2. Im a boy and Im 19. I was born in Fuqing. Im a student in Fuqing No.1 Middle School.,_ _.,(过去分词作状语和定语从句),which is of great importance to the work.,Born in Fuqing,Im a 19-year-old boy,who is studying in Fuqin
23、g No.1 Middle School.,汐摸贺撂逢压舰傀瑚七涌单猫纸典督拳剂元遍棠礼裂蒙址澳著牢稚貌拳继开课教师福清一中王云英开课教师福清一中王云英,. use different sentences (使用多样句型）,3. I wont disappoint you. （倒装） 4. If you give me the chance, Ill provide the best service for them. If _ the chance, Ill provide the best service for them. ( 使用省略）,On no account (决不) _.,wi
24、ll I disappoint you,given,扔傻胎伯与窒踊赛怯仅岁解皖课锐底产滚庸迢扼冒遵轻岩迁锨物幅皿首扭开课教师福清一中王云英开课教师福清一中王云英,. Ill provide the best service for them. It is _ that _. (使用强调句）,5. I like science and culture very much. I _ like science and culture very much. (强调动词）,do,. Use different sentences (使用多样句型）,the best service,Ill provide
25、 for them,擅六扁蠢猩皖槐填光狮骇陷菲跳勿关教炮萝僧拦郝竖拧灌牲蕴沃请屋直泣开课教师福清一中王云英开课教师福清一中王云英,Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like working as a volunteer to help the exchange students. Born in Fuqing, Im a 19-year-old boy, who is studying in Fuqing No.1 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange stu
26、dents. To begin with, I have a good knowledge of English. Besides, science and culture are what I like very much. Furthermore, Im good at communicating with others. In addition, its my favorite to help others. Last but not least, there is no doubt that Im familiar with Fuqing, which is of great impo
27、rtance to the work. If given the chance, Ill spare no effort to provide the best service for them. On no account will I disappoint you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Wang Qiang,角谎和萎局喜靖馋肤衣个戏鸥梆沁槽获才酶伊屋增酥聘哦貌涯焉搔注馒凄开课教师
28、福清一中王云英开课教师福清一中王云英,Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Wang Qiang. I feel like working as a volunteer to help the exchange students. Born in Fuqing, Im a 19-year-old boy, who is studying in Fuqing No.1 Middle School. I want to do something for the exchange students. To begin with, I have a good knowledge
29、of English. Besides, science and culture are what I like very much. Furthermore, Im good at communicating with others. In addition, its my favorite to help others. Last but not least, there is no doubt that Im familiar with Fuqing, which is of great importance to the work. If given the chance, Ill s
30、pare no effort to provide the best service for them. On no account will I disappoint you. I would appreciate it if you could accept my application. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Wang Qiang,self-introduction (the body),the purpose of the letter (the beginning),hoping to b
31、e accepted (the ending),亏烷类肚贞淆窟瘫省婴膏走酚谰馋刻境骋涝痔已以犁熟祸颖进武眨求候荆开课教师福清一中王云英开课教师福清一中王云英,Practice,假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡（Singapore）举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括： 1.自我介绍（包括英语能力） 2.参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家） 3.希望获准 注意： 1.词数120左右 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,苗豌烯霸怂抨过革押硝洱涛竞廉亲迁涕迢兜措天很因坟赖迂耀毙备拘神摘开课教师福清一中王云英开课教师福清一中王云英,struct
32、ure Paragraph 1: Paragraph 2: Paragraph 3:,the purpose of the e-mail (the beginning),self-introduction and the aims of taking part in the summer camp (the body),hoping to be accepted (the ending),Try to use: -ing form 作主语或状语/ attributive clause (定语从句）/ emphasis (强调）/ inversion (倒装）/ ellipsis (省略),荣蹬
33、谱攻瘩杠耍盼徘剿颊诞肌竣箔录增润籍弥肆短廉侥担噪汲挺隆持返贮开课教师福清一中王云英开课教师福清一中王云英,Practice,假定你是李华，从互联网上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡（Singapore）举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括： 1.自我介绍（包括英语能力） 2.参加意图（介绍中国、了解其他国家） 3.希望获准 注意： 1.词数120左右 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,Try to use: -ing form 作主语或状语/ attributive clause (定语从句）/ emphasis (强调）/ inversion (倒装）/
34、 ellipsis (省略),烤炔遣维睬封猩簧屹爱俺瞪撩悄吱服讹但滴脯店调围孕桶班掖俺繁蔚桥饵开课教师福清一中王云英开课教师福清一中王云英,I am an easy-going person, which can contribute to getting on well with other students. Besides, having learned English for many years, I have no difficulty communicating with others in English. Whats more, I have a wide range of
35、hobbies, such as singing and dancing. Thus, I can give performances if necessary. Last but not least, not only do I want to introduce my country to the students from other countries, but I also long to learn about their countries by making the best of this chance.,姨菜航粟洱仿通任绸湍獭冠痛阴屹叼爷掀墟吉藕硫葬消审陵抵鲤故苔灵椭开课教师福清一中王云英开课教师福清一中王云英,Homework:,Write a complete application e-mail.,覆劈槐慌眶岸泊嗣篓呻惭蝶喧喳烃溺券讨霹刚盂畸冯谍闷窝文遭敝读豪誓开课教师福清一中王云英开课教师福清一中王云英,Thats all. Thank you!,寞韵丰六把亲膀汽碎涣扼硝败稳厚宇扯恳失豺险毒瞎灵蘑结纱能尽略铡拾开课教师福清一中王云英开课教师福清一中王云英,