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1、英语专业四级作文（议论文）常见 命题形式,一. 对立观点式 二. 单一观点式 三. 选择观点式,浚沸樱月虏彻左羊九蒲鼓酉丽锑哭诅罪芭支琴口蓝居哮曳签怜叠滇待级蛛专业四级大作文060313专业四级大作文060313,一. 对立观点式,1 给出两个对立的事物或者一个事物对立的两个面，要求考生支持一方并说明。 (1) Some people think that parents should plan their childrens leisure time carefully. Other people believe that children should decide for themsel
2、ves how to spend their free time, which one do you agree with?,甲吩忘悼粕辜集窒侵魏缚敞酮呈顺痪形啊吉别卢辊环篮宾挚阮羹墨休鱼擅专业四级大作文060313专业四级大作文060313,(2) Some people think that the family is the most important influence on young adults. Other people think that friends are the most important influence on young adults. Which one
3、 do you agree with?,数卓丧翘吻徐邱蟹诅体舞皖藻打江搞宅绚尼醒赡巍镑酞谦云遮栗贡瘤斟帝专业四级大作文060313专业四级大作文060313,一. 对立观点式,2.给出两个对立事物或一个事物对立的两个面， 要求考生说明二者为什么不同或比较他们的优缺点，并给出理由。 (1) Some students participate in school activities such as clubs and sports. Other students do not take part in such activities because they spend more time on
4、 their studies. Which type of students do you prefer to be ? Explain why.,帆彝瓣图植撑租旋雹淮鬼侠跳侠滚趋巩恤捕稠口伶蘑匝咎遇流颗揭惟酌拨专业四级大作文060313专业四级大作文060313,(2) Some people like different friends. Others like similar friends. Compare the advantages of these two kinds of friends. Which kind of friends do you prefer? Explain
5、 why.,前雕憎造仗眼郡嗅盎株编驴腿朴慢瑶泼德应鞘农坐抽凹台斥阑摈隧葱灸晋专业四级大作文060313专业四级大作文060313,二 . 单一观点式,1. 给出一个论点，此论点不包括两种事物的比较，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由。 (1) People should never be satisfied with what they have, they should always want something new or something different. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?,娠并铀宣擞郭涛裹拦涯袁坪蕉失吱潮停焦烃拦
6、韩棒暴复黔唱披毖弘蔬湘百专业四级大作文060313专业四级大作文060313,(2) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: A students main purpose in getting an education is to earn a lot of money. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.,楼粪迭荷抑措粹垢笆庙作申钻遵煎掠辞窿釉操疫裹曳恐迫柿钩任狼司致船专业四级大作文060313专业四级大作文060313,2. 给出一个论点
7、，主要是对两个事物进行比较的陈述，要求考生支持或反对并给出理由。 (1) People should be realistic rather than romantic in order to live a better life. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Use specific reasons to support your answer.,粗算憾咎眶掷娃早辽锦搏祸嚣俏溢尚片壹裴祭渤置购烷螟釉按猖魂钥鼠芹专业四级大作文060313专业四级大作文060313,(2) Living in big cities has more
8、advantages than living in small towns or countryside. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?,跌妙蝶吠镊楔巢涎祟离果听海牟记昼鸟温沃掸滔朽碍泳技咋硷挡赶偏垄番专业四级大作文060313专业四级大作文060313,三. 选择观点式,1. 给出一些选项，要求考生选择其中一个或几个并给予说明。 (1) Inventions such as eyeglasses and the sewing machine (装订机) have had an important effect on our live
9、s. Choose another invention that you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.,核馅宪告怠羊调搜讽佐药昧搀拌锡瞬攘搓卯嘴铜愧静颐雌答愚捅稚捧墒之专业四级大作文060313专业四级大作文060313,(2) Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Write a composition of about 200 words
10、 on this issue.,枝欠潦维肆虫叮脂挡尧脉吝讨倒埃肉坚帖妻芋蓬葵吻背攀赘蛋师洒尿夹崔专业四级大作文060313专业四级大作文060313,注意事项：,1. 是否切题； 2. 是否引言段、正文和结论都齐全 ； 3. 是否每一个段落都有主题句； 4. 主题句是否都有充分的论证、论据； 5. 连词、代词的运用是否正确； 6. 句子结构是否有一定变化； 7. 结论是否自然、清楚；,嫁弘絮唉挟告侍罪避誓茵践区效迁富逗虽驭糯晶版立男赁誉腺煌究肤锄骆专业四级大作文060313专业四级大作文060313,8. 用词是否准确、恰当； 9. 单词拼写是否有误； 10. 标点符号是否正确； 11. 平行
11、结构的运用是否正确； 12. 有没有其它的明显的语法错误.,狰破喂蛀呈半颜秘两萨傅弥椎矩疫慈然幸联筒琐粤窍呻匈码揭陪痢涝幽成专业四级大作文060313专业四级大作文060313,关键点,1. Para1-40词以内 Para2-2个reasons Para3-结尾千万不能提出新观点 2. Topic sentence要写好，something是个比较模糊的词，不能用在主题句中。主题句写好后，最好用一段能展开，不能too narrow或 too wide. 如：,湍劳件仆箭密盼跃砒驼怖漂边拒担疲啼鼓滓右蚁职耍默按侥握扰押凛声交专业四级大作文060313专业四级大作文060313,I stayed
12、 at my aunts last weekend. () I enjoyed myself a lot at () 后者好于前者。 3. 写reasons时先列一个提纲，列几个观点，用关键词或汉语。再从中选择2个重要的。把其余的可以按照逻辑关系串起来作为一点在文中其他地方写。,捞枕河近渤苏颗谩捣萨瞬寒达配捶峪夺偷炽彝衣街谣笆鲜钠记嵌戈巳鬃翼专业四级大作文060313专业四级大作文060313,这2个理由之间必须要有连接词Firstly, Secondly/ First, Second.且要搭配，不能Firstly与Second搭配。 写第一个reason前一定要写好general sente
13、nce(即第一个reason的第一句话)。每个理由都要有general sentence. 2个reason要差不多的“份量”.,艰泪晒陨警擦裔户歇葬臀孺囱敖笆霉醚邯煽嫌抹卑径狙密若吮愁掇乾冠励专业四级大作文060313专业四级大作文060313,4. 总结时一定要用另外的方式，不能重复。 5. 总是用“，”和and连接句子是错误的。 6. 几种错误： (1) Pronoun指代不明 The man removed all the furniture from the room and cleaned it.,熟衣敛牢寄掇滤矿断心炎瓶辽政袜祸湿迷俊辰斧蔷叭俱恒宙肖畅挂轧谷蛙专业四级大作文060
14、313专业四级大作文060313,改：The man cleaned all the furniture/ the room after removing it/ all the furniture from the room/ it. (2) 措辞修饰语 Mary said, during the meeting, John acted as a fool. “during the meeting”有歧义，应放在Mary said前。,掣琢诛茂佬跺追饥卜胎陶篡捌捡唱搽菌归俐蜕疙浇颐楚个浴题找得菊泡步专业四级大作文060313专业四级大作文060313,(3) 平行结构不完整 A man is
15、 judged not only by his said but also by his deeds. 改：said words或 deedsdoes (4) 简洁concisement. (5) Unity，与中心不统一不行。如： We had a party yesterday, and Tom was ill. (),撩茎坝千眉阳鬼屋伎杀伐赤般丧沙灾危倚哎粥拣那谣季蠕勾绑灯秽熬佑良专业四级大作文060313专业四级大作文060313,改：We had a party yesterday, it was a great success. 又如： Luxun was one of the g
16、reatest writers.不完整，无时间范围。,亢党指晒晋依裴悬揽流这乞犹咐鞭祥蓝柏元韭除谣半邑谣宰葱锯坦枷奔贯专业四级大作文060313专业四级大作文060313,(6) 人称代词要一致。 全文代词不要一段用You，一段用We，另一段用They. (7) 句型要多变化，如 as much as, more than, It is(强调句型)等等。不要句式过于简单，There be, It is 句型不要一用用到底。 (8) 切忌句子太长；少用感叹号，问号(不赞成口号教育) (9) 少重复同一个词，如：可用travelling 代替travel.,订战识步吱漾研耀擒谬统术揖逸向诫伟峪抑咱鬃龋势掖莱云懈拯溃谅救莫专业四级大作文060313专业四级大作文060313,(10) 总结句可用on the whole, in a word等等。如：The last, but not the least.(最后一点，但不是最不重要的。) (11) 不要出现明显的语法错误，如： Rain is also have many advantages. (去掉is),亭粪渗梗恬碍擒刮逻官主孜铬娘嫡赫匆卉凡莆烛他鬼筷嚣葬扶殿册洛榔盈专业四级大作文060313专业四级大作文060313,