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1、考研写作4,2020/10/6,2,2.2寓意说明+原因分析段,2006 It is blind worship that makes it possible to do such crazy/unreasonable things as the photos display. The main reason, I assume, would be the distorted education of the popular culture leading to the pervasiveness of the star-worshipping. As is shown in the stat
2、istics of a recent survey launched by a non-profit institution, the increase of teenagers someone is so prominent that the result caused by it may be concluded as follows.,1强调句说明寓意,插入,分词做定语,3数据论证,desire/aspirations of respecting,eagerness to respect,2过渡说明原因,2020/10/6,3,2.2寓意说明+原因分析段, It may mislead
3、adolescents to dream about an immediate success/triumph rather than to dedicate to their study. And it is of little surprise to find their disappointment at last. 107words,4结果推导,5进一步推导,形式主语句,2020/10/6,4,二、高分范文得分解密,2.2 寓意说明段+举例说明段 （1）五至六句(80-90词)：第一句说明寓意(承上启下)；第二句说明如下事例可以证明；第三四句一个事例及扩展；第五六句另一个扩展。 具体化
4、切忌以理说理。 （2）注意事项切忌例子私人化。 （3）扩展方式数据论证、借用常识、引用权威、因果论证、比较论证 例中人/例中事 behave(s)/occur(s) in the same way that 图中人/图中事 do(es) in the picture.,2020/10/6,5,2.3 寓意说明+举例说明段,1998 (P34) It seems reasonable when people laugh at the cartoon, but it would no longer be laughable when people find similar things takin
5、g place in our daily life.1Recently there is a trend of making promises in various fields of our society. From departments of government to common shopping centers, many businesses who supply products or offer services have made various promises to their customers or service receivers.2,分词作定语,定语从句,2
6、020/10/6,6,2.3 寓意说明+举例说明段,They assert their products to be of good quality or promise to offer excellent service.3As a matter of fact, many of these businesses claim in the same way that（比较） the hen in the above cartoon promises to lay eggs.4 of great importance/significance= important/significant o
7、f great/little possibility= possible/impossible of great help=helpful of poor/outstanding quality,of+n.=adj.,比较论证,2020/10/6,7,2.3 寓意说明+举例说明段,举例论证常用过渡句： Abundant of examples would demonstrate the phenomenon, while the following one, I suppose, would suffice. Here is an example. Take for an example/in
8、stance. (短语/that主语从句) provides us with an excellent example. Eg. Teenagers surfing on line provides us with an excellent example. That teenagers, in increasing numbers, surf on line provides us with an excellent example.,2020/10/6,8,2.4 寓意说明+利弊分析段,2002，2009，2010 积极中带有消极，消极中暗含积极 五至六句(80-90词)：第一句说明寓意(
9、承上启下)；第二句说明有利有弊；on one hand, 第三四句一个优点及扩展；on the other hand, 第五六句一个缺点及扩展。 优点/缺点=原因 扩展=举例/数据/权威/常识/结果(五种论证),论点必须清晰,2020/10/6,9,2.4 寓意说明+利弊分析段,2009 (P35) From the cartoon, we can conclude that the cartoonist wants to convey such a message: with the popularity of computers, people from all over the worl
10、d become nearer by using the internet to communicate with each other.1 Meanwhile, people also become far away from their friends.2 All of us accept the fact that the development of the internet brings lots of conveniences to our daily life, for instance, we can buy a book on the net instead of going
11、 to a bookstore.,套话一句引出“利”,rather than,2020/10/6,10,2.4 寓意说明+利弊分析段,Besides, we can communicate with our friends on the net without going out of home.3 But we cant ignore the other side of these: the time we spend with friends or family becomes less. And we hardly see them once in a week. It will mak
12、e us feel lonely if we continue to use the tool on the net to talk with friends instead of talking with them on the phone or going out with them.4 158words,2020/10/6,11,2.5 建议措施段,三至四句(50-55词)：第一句过渡词(accordingly, as is mentioned above插入)引出重复论点；第二句改善建议(消极意义)或提升方式(积极意义)；第三句表明期待结果。 改善建议常用表达方式： It is hig
13、h time that (did) It is imperative for that (should) (3) 提升方式常用表达方式： As enhancing the sense of , we would benefit more from ,2020/10/6,12,2.5 建议措施段,三至四句：第一句过渡词(accordingly, as is mentioned above插入)引出重复论点；第二句改善建议(消极意义)或提升方式(积极意义)；第三句表明期待结果。 (4) 表明期待结果常用表达方式： Only in this way/by doing/by exerting this
14、 can we both and embrace a brighter tomorrow.,2020/10/6,13,2.5 建议措施段,2003 (P36)消极寓义 Child education has become one of the most popular topics discussed not only by educational experts, but also by people in all walks of life.The failure of child education does more harm to the development of our soc
15、iety and our civilization than to the children themselves. Thus, its high time that parents, educators and the government made concerted efforts to put an end to this situation. 70words,重复观点,2020/10/6,14,2.5 建议措施段,2008 (P47紫)积极寓义 Accordingly, it is imperative for us to take some measures to enhance
16、the sense of teamwork in our society. We should bear in mind that teamwork is of great significance to both our society and ourselves. Every one should have the ability of teamwork. Only in this way can we achieve success and only in this way can our society become more harmonious to live in. 70word
17、s,both,2020/10/6,15,三、短文写作篇章分析,（1）写作三段论 首段图画描述段 中间段1寓意说明段+原因分析段 中间段2寓意说明段+举例说明段 中间段3寓意说明段+利弊分析段 尾段建议措施段 （2）篇章结构体现 段与段之间过渡第二段第一句寓意说明；第三段第一句重复观点 段内衔接各种连接词使用（P6）,消极寓意类,积极寓意类,必须使用！,利弊包含类,2020/10/6,16,三、短文写作步骤,审题积极还是消极 列提纲三段选择与句型填充（中文解决逻辑思路） 开始写组注意语法，书写工整 检查拼写、标点、语法、动词（唯一性原则）,2020/10/6,17,图画描述,There is a
18、 boiling hot pot, as is illustrated in the picture, with various ingredients of multi-cultures, such as famous figures home and abroad: Bi Sheng and Shakespeare, philosophical concepts: Confucianism and Taoism, performing art: Beijing Opera and Swan Lake, and the like. The caption under the picture
19、is that the cultural hot pot is both delicious and nutritious. 59words,插入, such as and the like,表语从句,2020/10/6,18,寓意说明,Of all the changes that have taken place in international culture during the past half a century, perhaps the most far-reaching, as is shown in the above picture, has been the sharp
20、 increase in culture blending. 38words On one hand, 文化融合带来的好处（在国内享受各国文化论证） On the other hand, 需要注意的方面（本土文化丧失论证） 尾段鼓励多元文化同时保护本土文化,借阅读句,2020/10/6,19,可用词汇,文化融合：cultural integration/blending, multi-culture, mosaic culture, pluralistic culture 本土文化：national culture, local culture 外国文化：foreign cultures 享受：enjoy, benefit from, make full use of, take advantage of 消失：disappear, perish, fade away,