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1、Section Writing 介绍某一地点的说明文写作技法指导 文体指导 1概念 ：描写或介绍某一地方的文章是说明文常见的形式之一，也是近几年高考书面表达命题的主要形式之一。2内容安排 ：对一个地点的描述首先对其进行总体简介，然后对其从以下几个方面展开描述。所处的位置，占据的面积，周边环境，交通状况，人口，历史，含有何种名胜古迹，以及本地所独具的特色等。最后，针对以上描述，结合写作要求进行结尾。3语言特征 ：地点介绍的文章容易写得呆板单调，让人读起来感到乏味。为避免这类情况，可适当地运用描写，增加文章的文采，使所写内容打动读者，达到最佳的表达效果。亮点句式 1Located in.， .is
2、 a city with a history of.2.has a population of.3.is a city with a population of.4Its like spring all the year round.5The average temperature ranges between 23 and 39.6Theplacesaround.arerichinnatural/travelling resources.7The city, known as.，attracts millions of visitors from all over the world.8Th
3、e climate differs sharply from one area to another.满分佳作构建 写作任务 假如你是校学生会主席李华， 你校的一位外教 Tom 想在你市寻找一套 80 平方米左右的公寓居住。几天前，你在四季花园小区内看到一处。 下面是小区位置及周边情况简图。请用英语给他写一封信，向他介绍一下情况。内容包括： 1.小区的地理位置； 2.小区的地理优势。第 1页注意： 1.词数 100 左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。四季花园： Seasonal Garden审题谋篇 体裁说明文话题介绍地点时态一般现在时为主人称第二人称为
4、主首段：引出话题结构中段：描述图中所呈现要点尾段：表达自己的愿望遣词造句 .对接单元词汇1occur发生；出现2crossing十字路口；人行横道3apparently显然地；显而易见地4in addition而且5make a life习惯于新的生活方式、工作等.巧用单元句式、语法(一 )完成句子1你写信说你想在我们城市租一套公寓。You wrote in your letter that you wanted to rent an apartment in our city.(宾语从句 )2最近我突然想到有一套80 平方米的公寓有可能适合你。Recently it occurred to
5、me that there is an 80- square- metre flat that might besuitable for you.(主语从句， it 形式主语 )3这就是我想把它推荐给你的原因。Thats why I would like to recommend it to you.(表语从句 )4大家认为这些生活设施能让你很快习惯于新的生活和工作方式。【导学号： 40342019】第 2页Its believed that these life facilities can let you make a life quickly.(主语从句， it形式主语 )5如果你的确对
6、这套公寓满意，我会为你安排好一切。If you do be satisfied with the apartment，I will arrange it for you.( 强调谓语 )(二 )句式升级6四季花园小区坐落在民族南街与修业路交汇处，是个很好的小区。(用过去分词作状语 )Seasonal Garden is located at the crossing of Minzu South street and Xiuye Road and it is a very good community. Located at the crossing of Minzu South street
7、 and Xiuye Road，Seasonal Garden is a very good community.【导学号： 40342019】7小区后是一处美丽的公园，你可以在一天的工作后到公园放松一下。(用倒装句和定语从句 )A beautiful park is behind the community and you can go and have a good relaxation after a days work. Behind the community is a beautiful park，where you can go and have a good relaxatio
8、n after a days work.妙笔成篇 【参考范文】Dear Tom，You wrote in your letter that you wanted to rent an apartment in our city.Recently it occurred to me that there is an 80-square- metre flat that might be suitable for you.Located at the crossing of Minzu South Street and Xiuye Road，Seasonal Garden is a very go
9、od community.Thats why I would like to recommend it to you.Around it there exists a supermarket，a central hospital，a changqingteng High School as well as a bank standing across the street.Its believed that these life facilities can let you make a life quickly.Apparently ，public transportation is also within your easy reach.In addition，behind the community is a beautiful park，where you can go and have a good relaxation after a days work.If you do be satisfied with the apartment，I will arrange it for you.第 3页Yours，Li Hua第 4页