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1、求助信,信件写作步骤 1、仔细审题，明确写作要求 一审文体： 二审时态、人称： 三审要点： 2、列出提纲，构建框架结构 - 框架 - 要点分布 - 逻辑关系 - 语言（词汇、语法） （动词、连接成分、可用句型）,格式正确，语言得体；,时态前后照应人称上下一致；,要点齐全，逻辑清晰,3、依据提纲，扩展成文 紧扣提示，适度发挥， 扩展成句，连句成文。 尽量使用较丰富的词汇和语法结构。 4、核查文章，适度修改。 格式正确 要点齐全 语言准确 衔接自然,2017-9-15,刘 晓,文体概述 求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信。通常包括三部分内容： 1. 表明写信目
2、的，请求帮助。 2. 要清晰陈述请求帮助的具体内容。 3. 希望得到帮助。注意语气委婉、真诚，并要向收信人表示感谢。,求助信,正文可按照以下三部分进行写作： Para 1 ：说明写信目的； Para 2 ：阐述求助原因+求助内容 Para 3：表达期望与感谢。,To show your purpose(2句) 问候+我要干啥,1. How is it going recently？Im writing this letter to you for help. 2. I hope my letter finds you well. I m writing to ask you to do me
3、a favor/give me a hand.,Para 1 Introduction,To show your problems(5-6句) 讲困难+需要的具体帮助,说明类： 1. I am encountering three problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with,;Whats more,;What troubles me most is 记叙类 1. (讲困难）I have trouble/difficulty/problems in doing sth. 或者 I find it hard /difficult to do sth
4、 , 或者 I have no idea of how to. 2. (有礼貌地求助）Faced with the above problems, I am anxious to get your help. 3. Would you please offer me some constructive guidance on? 或. I wonder if you can help me . 或. Would you be so kind to help me .,Para 2 Body,To show your hope (2句),1. I would be really grateful
5、if you could do me the favor. 2. Your generous help and immediate response are enthusiastically expected and shall be truly appreciated. Looking forward to your reply.,Para 3 Closing,【真题再现】 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外资公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Ms Jenkins写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行
6、文连贯。 _ (2016年全国卷I书面表达),【写作指导】 一、审题定调 本题要求写一封求助信。求助信主要是就某一问题向收信人求助。求助的对象可以是个人或机构。 求助信的人称以第一人称为主，时态以现在时为主，如果描述过去的情况要用一般过去时。求助信的语言应诚恳真挚，求助的目的应清晰明确。 二、谋篇布局 求助信的格式和其它的信件一样，通常包括称呼、正文、结束语和签名。内容主要包括自我介绍(如与收信人熟悉，可省去此项)、希望得到的帮助以及对收信人的感谢。,正文可按照以下三部分进行写作： Para 1 ：说明写信目的； Para 2 ：阐述求助原因+求助内容 (暑假想去一家外资公司兼职, 已写好申请
7、书和个人简历) (让外教帮助修改所附材料的文字和格式)； Para 3：表达感谢。,【参考范文】 Dear Ms Jenkins, Im Li Hua from your English writing class last term. Im writing to ask for your help. Im applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resu
8、me. However, I am not quite sure of the language and the format Ive used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but Id be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. You can find my application letter and resume in the attachment. Thank you for your kindn
9、ess! Yours, Li Hua,Dear Ms Jenkins , I hope this letter finds you well. Im Li Hua, a student from your class. With an application and a resume badly in need of improvement, Im writing with anxiety to seek help. In an effort to develop my independence and enrich my experience, Im determined to apply
10、for a part-time job at a foreign company this summer. I have already prepared an application and a resume. Nevertheless, a little unsure about it, I sincerely hope you can help me enhance it, which will help create a good impression. Therefore, Would you be so kind to help me with the attached mater
11、ials, such as their expressions and format? Your generous help and immediate response are enthusiastically expected and shall be truly appreciated. Yours, Li Hua,写作训练a： 假定你是李华，乘坐FL753航班抵达伦敦后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括： 1行程信息；2钱包特征；3联系方式。 注意：1. 词数100左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；,参考范文 Dear Sir/Madam， I am
12、 writing to report the loss of my wallet.On 1st August, 2019 I flew business class on your flight FL753 from China to London. I clearly remember it was with me immediately I boarded the plane. However，on arrival in London Heathrow Airport，I found it gone. I guess it must have slipped out of my pocke
13、t during the flight. Its a black leather one with around 200 dollars，my ID card，and two credit cards in it. Besides，it contains a family photo，my precious memory. As you can imagine，these matter a lot to me. Has anybody happened to find it? Please email me at . Thank you for your time and support. Yours sincerely， Li Hua,