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1、Guide in Writing,Yuanji Middle School Zhu Li March 29th, 2018,导致低分的原因,1. 句型结构混乱 2. 汉式英语 3. 缺乏高级词汇，句子单一 4. 表达不连贯。缺乏过渡语 .,How to write a good passage,审列加连美查,假如你是初中生王磊，你的美国笔友Grace想要知道你对网上交友的看法。请参考 表格所提供的信息并结合自己的观点给Grace 回一封电子邮件： 注意：1. 次数80-100词; 2. 请不要逐字翻译，课适当发挥; 参考词汇：get cheated,假如你是初中生王磊，你的美国笔友Grace想
2、要知道 你对网上交友的看法。请参考表格所提供的信息并 结合自己的观点给Grace 回一封电子邮件：,注意: 80-100词左右,主题,体裁,人称,结构,时态,字数,已知信息,未知信息,以一般现在时为主,第一步:审,第二步:列,1. List some key words and phrases:,make more friends communicate with open your mind a waste of time influence your study get cheated,Introduction Main body Conclusion,pros(赞成),cons（反对）,
3、my opnions,2.Write an outline,1.广交朋友 2.交流思想，开拓视野,-,1.浪费时间，影响学习。 2.可能上当受骗。,-,第三步:加,加首尾，使结构完整。 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构 开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。,Introduction:,1. Glad to receive your e-mail. You know the Internet is being used more widely than before, and you want to know my opinion upon making friends online. 2. 3.,
4、Conclusion,1.Each coin has two sides, so we must be careful when we use the Internet. 2. 3.,1.表示并列或递进: and, bothand, not onlybut also, neithernor; 2.表示选择: or, eitheror; 3.表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all, 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore 5.表示条件: if , unless 6.表示对比: instead, notbut, on t
5、he one handon the other hand; 7.表示解释: for example, such as, that is to say, in other words; 8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end; 9.表示强调: also, besides, whats more, actually, in fact, 10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, i
6、n a word, generally speaking,关 联 词,第四步:连,恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。,Glad to receive your e-mail. You know the Internet is being used more widely than before, and you want to know my opinion upon making friends online. On the one hand, some people stand by.because., and. On the other hand, some peop
7、le believe., As for me, I think.,第五步:美,美：写好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。,we should use the Internet correctly.,Each coin has two sides, so we must be careful when we use the Internet.,He helped an old man yesterday, the old man was lost.,He helped an old man who was lost yesterday.,开头句型,Itgoeswithoutsa
8、yingthat. Asthesaying goes that. Ithastobenoticedthat. Nothing is more important than the fact that.,结尾句型,I will conclude by saying. Therefore, we have the reason to believe that. It can be concluded from the discussion that From my point of view, it would be better if,第六步:查,查：检查 1 格式是否正确 2 词汇 是否用对
9、3是否符合英语习惯表达 4时态是否正确 5用主动语态好还是用被动语态好 6标点是否用对 7人称是否用对 8主谓是否一致 9.名词的单复数等,第一类（很好）：（25-21分）完全完成规定任务，要点全面，或发挥新意有亮点，语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。 第二类（好）：（20-16分）完成规定任务，涵盖基本要点，语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。 第三类（一般）：（15-11分）基本完成任务，写出一些内容，语言有一些错误，行文不够连贯。 第四类（较差）（10-6分）未能完成规定任务。只能写出个别要点，语言错误较多，未能清楚传达信息。 第五类（差)：（5-0分）未能完成规定任务，只能写出
10、一些有关的单词，语言错误很多，未能清楚传达信息。,评分原则和五个档次,2.The structure of the article,Summary,1. The six steps of writing an article: 审，列，加，连，美，查,在日常生活中，我们经常看到许多文明的行为，让人发自内心地为之点赞，但有时也会看到一些不文明的行为和一些不良现象。请你根据提示的要求，用英文写一篇80-100词以上的短文。 1.Do you think good manners is important in our society? 2.Tell us an experience you had about civilization； 3.What do you think of it. 注意：1. 文中不得出现真实姓名或地名；,Homework,Goodbye,