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1、English continuation writing 读后续写,We extend our warm welcome to the English teachers.,Smiling broadly, we give them a big applause and say hello to them.,general,specific,Step1 Thorough reading (Para.1),Character,Experiences,Feelings,I (28 years old),I had joined a dramatic producing company. I lost
2、 my job and went back home. I got a job as a recreation-room director.,grateful, bored, a sense of failure,It wasnt her ideal/dream job!,Given information,New information:,1 What was my dream? To be a dramatic star (to be a performer). 2 How did I feel at the moment? Frustrated, dissatisfied, restle
3、ss. 3 What did I do? Taught the kids music and drama Tried my luck as a performer myself Dressed up as a country girl and told ,I didnt give up my dream,Step1 Thorough reading (Para.2),Given information,New information:,drama,performer,Dress up as a country girl,dream,I strived for my dream.,I worke
4、d hard and sought every chance to achieve my dream,1 What happened one October afternoon? 2. What did Jim Walker ask ? He asked children to entertain the bankers. He also asked me to do the Minnie Pearl thing. 3 What happened after we finished the performance? The speaker hadnt come yet. 4. How did
5、I help him?,Theme:,stick to your dream, and youll succeed.,Step1 Thorough reading (Para.3-4),New information:,It will be a good chance for the author to achieve her dream .,Then I went out in front of the hundred or so men in the audience. How did I perform? How was the reaction from the audience? W
6、hy did I walk off the stage? Then I walked off the stage into the audience and a banker greeted me. What would the banker say and do? Would it be related to my job/dream? How would I respond? How about the result?,Stick to your dream, and youll succeed.,Step2 Creative conception(构思）,in a logical and
7、 reasonable way,Develop the plot by asking questions,5W+1H questions,Then I went out in front of the hundred or so men in the audience._ Then I walked off the stage into the audience and a banker greeted me._,Step3 Swift drafting (写草稿）,Use at least 5 of the following words: failure, job, dreams, cou
8、ntry girl, bankers Minnie Pearl, Jim Walker, speaker, performance,Q1：How did I perform? How did I feel before my performance? aspects: 1) legs/hands/heart/forehead/mouth/ears/eyes 2) actions Q2: How was the reaction from the audience?,Step3 Swift drafting (草稿）,Q1：How did I perform? 1. Introduce myse
9、lf 2. I took a deep breath and began telling them funny stories and jokes./ I told them a story of how a country girl was working hard to achieve her dream of being a performer in a funny way. 3. Encouraged by this, I even . Q2: How was the reaction from the audience? 1. All of them were laughing an
10、d applauding. 2. After I finished the stories, a storm of applause erupted from the audience. /the whole room roared into laughter.,Step3 Swift drafting (草稿）,Q1：How did I perform? 1. Introduce myself 2. I took a deep breath and began telling them funny stories and jokes. 3. Encouraged by this, I eve
11、n . Q2: How was the reaction from the audience? 1. All of them were laughing and applauding. 2. After I finished the stories, a storm of applause erupted from the audience. Q3：Why did I walk off the stage? 1. Jim Walker came and told me .,Step3 Swift drafting (草稿）,Then I went out in front of the hun
12、dred or so men in the audience. I introduced myself as a country girl before my performance. Then I started telling them many funny and interesting stories and jokes. Entertained by my performance, the bankers gave me big applause, each laughing and smiling. Encouraged by this, I even started singin
13、g and dancing while sharing more stories, which brought great joy to the party, the little room echoing laughter from all sides. After what seemed about fifteen minutes, Jim Walker signaled to me that the speaker had come.,Sample:,The result and the theme: Key words? A dramatic star, failure, never
14、give up your dream, success Q1: What would the banker say and do? Q2: Would it be related to my job/dream? Q3: How would I respond? How about the result?,Step3 Swift drafting (写草稿）,What would the banker say and do? 1. He told me he knew Harry Stone, the manager of the great country music station in
15、Nashville. 2. Later he recommended me to Harry Stone. 3. Harry Stone had me come up for an interview and offered me a good job.= He told me he had a friend who was the manager of Broadway Theater in need of a performer. He asked whether I was interested in it. 4. Theme：Stick to your dream and youll
16、succeed.,The result and the theme: Key words? A dramatic star, failure, never give up your dream, success Later I did get a good job in the music company where I could continue my dream as a dramatic star. This is the end of my “failure” and my start of another road. So never give up your dream beca
17、use success may lie somewhere ahead of you just for a stroke of luck. (chances favor those who are prepared.),Step3 Swift drafting (写草稿）,Then I walked off the stage into the audience, and a banker greeted me. Patting me on the shoulder, he told me with a broad smile that my performance was really im
18、pressive. After knowing my situation, he told me he could recommend me to a friend of his, who happened to be head of a music company. He kept his promise and later I did get a good job in the music company where I could continue my dream as a dramatic star. This is the end of my “failure” and my start of another road. So never give up your dream because success may lie somewhere ahead of you just for a stroke of luck.,Assignment,Step4: Careful polishing Step5: Neat copying,Hold on to your dreams and you will succeed!,