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1、布满创意的美国大学本科申请文书（essay ）范 文美国大学本科申请ESSAY的写作一直是申请者们关注的热门题目。美国大 学的申请ESSAY提供给申请者留下的思考空间非常广阔，基本上不会有什么限 制，ESSAY给了我们一个环境，那么怎么往“种”这朵“花”，那是你自己的事 情了。然而，很多学生依然拘泥于修饰，这可能跟小学以来养成写作习惯于赞美的 缘故，华而不实的居多，那么如何预备美国大学申请ESSAY?不妨先进行角色转换，假如自己是一个美国人，很好，美国人习惯对人进行赞美，但解决题目或者 进行叙事论述，他们确实喜欢的是直接，喜欢论据，例证！下面，让我们一起来欣赏一篇非常有创意的 ESSAY，OK
2、，LET' S GO!范文：A Boy ' s FirstsThe boy is such a com mon boy. He is so com mon that onlyacqua in ted frie nds can no tice him among the crowd; he is so com monthat he does not cha nge his girlfrie nd one time per mon th, just as those*s do; and he is so com mon that his daily life is no more
3、special tha nthose who liste n to rock n' roll, bet for soccer games and seldom clea ntheir rooms.However, the boy is somewhat special.He usually thinks that, his experie nee and pers onal achieveme nts. along with his own happ in ess and grieva nces, are eno ugh for him to be uniq ue, though he
4、 does not have a face as good-look ing as Brad Pitt or Keanu Reeves, or whoever.First AwardIt was such a surpris ing gift for a 12-year-old boy to know that he had won the first prize in the n atio nal mathematics competiti on. The boy clutched the certificati on and laughed like a sun-flower bloomi
5、 ng in a spri ng morning. He had spe nt three mon ths prepari ng for that competiti on and had lost5kgweight but he was very happy, as happy as you could imag ine. Enjoying the pace of en terpris ing, he bega n to believe “ No pain no gain ” that after noon.First SetbackHuddli ng up in the quilt cry
6、ing, the boy was in trospect ing himself.For his haughti ness after achiev ing the sec ond prize in the Nati onalPhysics Competiti on, he deserved the rank of last 5% in the final exam in ati on of 7thgrade. Wiping up the tears, he set himself a promise of being humble and sober. The boy kept the pr
7、omise and became a young man of great maturity.First cook ing“ Quite a tough work. ” The boy said to himself, smeari ng soap on a blister caused by the bur ning oil. But a small blister n ever could stop him from doing his“cooking research ” . The boy stood in front of thegas-stove aga in, hold ing
8、apa ncake turner in his left hand, he was trying to find out the correct time of add ing salt and the appropriate amount of other flavori ngs. After so many failures, he felt that it was not a * task of cook ing out palatable meals, nut a challe nge of surpass ing himself. Whe n the boy fin ally fin
9、i shed work ing one and a half hours later, he put a sweet smile on his dirty face. The boy wrote in his diary,“ keep work ingand you ' ll win. ”First LoveAt the age of 16, the boy fell in love with a smart girl. Eati ng ice-cream with the girl in the ice-cream bar at the street, walki ng on the
10、 boulevard hand in hand, cycli ng her home and kiss ing goodbye, he regarded love as the holy thi ng in his life. Thus, the boy dem on strates a love from heart; he cares every one n earby and wants them to be beatific with their families. As people say, an an gelic soul.First JobThe extremely hot s
11、ummer holiday of 16, the boy was excited whe n he got a job at the local train stati on as a ticket-taker. First worki ng day, the boy got up so early that whe n he arrived at the stati on, the previous ticket-taker was still on his work, in astonishment of the boy' sappeara nee. But the ticket-
12、taker did not know that, the boy was just so eager as to get on the job to show that he had grow n up.Soon a com mon college stude nt will he be. A com mon one that willbe assiduous in class and passi on ate in the basketball court; that will make every effort to run for the Chairma n of the Stude n
13、t Union but may still face failure; that is no more special tha n those who spe nd half a day in libraries and forget to go to dinner whe n do researches in labs. But somehow he will be a unique college stude nt, because he will have his own way of fulfilli ng his dreams.And as you may know, the boy
14、 is me.一口气看完了吗？那么我们来品一品它：一、标题：也许，这个标题不算非常特别，但是它引人注目，一个男孩的第一次，可能 我们想到更多的是一些“第一次”，联想到我们自己的“第一次”，爱好自然就产 生了 ！二、结构：结合了“第一次”的标题核心，下面分别以男孩生活、学习及工作中的各个第一次进行阐述，涉及的面比较全，包括感情，给人的感觉非常丰富且完整。三、措词：措词比较潇洒，拖泥带水，既看出一个青年人的活力，又从每个“一次”中发现这个BOY实在不是一般的BOY，他有着一种思想叫做执着与专一 ！四、思路：学习一一生活一一感情一一工作这看起来更像一个循环，从学习到工作，中间穿插着我们的日常生活和感情 生活，这就是一个完整的人，一个完整的体现！温馨提示：专业的事情，交给专业的机构来完成。10年来，监审留学一直致力于留学文书的写作服务，已经帮助过无数留学生申请到理想的大学，擅长美国，加拿大，英国和澳洲的个人陈述和推荐信写作。如果您有写作方面的需求 可以 联系QQ : 970865017，按时交稿，绝不拖延，再也不用发愁。一篇essay范文非常有创意，美国大学本科申请ESSAY的写作思维要开阔， 要创新，但是在实际写作中，我们中国的很多学生却是以过往的过眼云烟式的表 面化写作居多，A Boy ' s Firsts这篇ESSAY我们就看不到那些虚华的痕迹， 这值得我们鉴戒。