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1、Welcome To Our Class,How to describe a person,Writing,人物简介,（一）人物简介的写作步骤；(概,貌,育,平,评),概况）age, sex, birth-place, background 外貌）appearance ,character 教育）education 生平）big events /achievements in ones life ( in order of time ) 评价）evaluation,How do you do the Basic Writing ?,The suggested steps:,1. 审题: 确定文
2、体、人称和时态,2. 整合信息 :把所有内容整合成5句,3. 翻译句子：考虑语法结构,4.连句成篇,5. 检查,Step1；审题,人物介绍， 人称：采用第_人称 3.时态：以_为主。,三,一般过去时态,Step2；整合信息,编成五个句子,Step3；翻译句子,考虑时态语态句法,Have a try!,我们的数学老师老郭1972年出生于贵州省贵阳市的一个富庶的家庭，父亲对他要求严格。 郭老师平易近人，笑起来像个孩子。 1992年毕业于北京师范大学数学专业的郭老师将毕生精力都献给了他热爱的教育事业和学生，他的学生遍及世界各地。 广州市教育局多次授予老郭教育突出贡献奖 (the Outstandin
3、g Contribution to Education) 郭老师不仅是同事眼中最好的老师，他还一直深受学生们的尊敬和爱戴。,One possible version!,1. He/She was born in He/She was born into a poor/ rich family 2. his/her family was so poor that 3. his/ her father was very strict with him 4. spend his childhood in 5. live/lead a happy/hard life 6. at the age of,
4、1. Family background,概,出生在,对某人要求严格,1. beautiful, good looking, handsome, childlike 2. middle-aged, with long hair tall, short, slim diligent, hard-working, warm-hearted, be accessible to,2. appearance/ character,貌,平易近人的,3. Education background,1. graduate fromdepartment of university 2. when at coll
5、ege, he majored in 3.receive a masters/doctors degree 4.have a gift for go abroad for further study,育,主修,4. Big events in ones life,1.be interested in /be fond of 2. work hard at 3.devote his lifetime/himself to 4.win (won) a gold /silver/ bronze medal 5.be selected to/ become a member of 6. be awar
6、ded ,平,1. one of the best/ most important 2. be respected and loved by 3. speak/ think highly of 4. one of the most popular with 5.win the prize 6. make great contribution to,5.Evaluation,评,年龄、出生 1）二十岁的时候_， 2）于1987年2月12日生在广州一个贫穷的家庭 _， 2. 外貌、性格特征： 1）漂亮_， 2）1.80米高_, 3）勤奋的_ ，,beautiful/pretty/handsome/
7、good-looking,1.80 meters tall/ in height,diligent/ hardworking,at the age of 20,be born into a poor family in Guangzhou on February 12th, 1987,3. 教育： 1）努力学习_, 2）获得硕士学_， 3） 出国进一步学习 _， 4）毕业_ ， 5）主修_, 4. 经历： 1）致力于_， 2）有天赋_，,work hard at his studies,receive/get a masters degree,go abroad for further stu
8、dy,graduate from,major in,devote oneself to,have a gift/ talent for,5. 评价： 比赛中赢得第一名 _， 被视为_， 做出了贡献_， 为树立个好榜样 _， 对的评价很高_,be considered/regarded as,make great contributions to,set a good example to,speak/think highly of,win the first prize in the competition,A. 概况 : 钟南山年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一 1) , Zhong N
9、anshan is one of the greatest doctors in China. 2)Zhong Nanshan, , was born in Guangzhou in 1941. B.外貌,性格: 我的英语老师老师是个中年妇女，她长着两只大眼睛，圆脸。,* 语法，句法高分tips,用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺,My English teacher is a middle-aged woman .,巧用with做定语,Born in Guangzhou in 1941,one of the greatest doctors in China,with two big
10、eyes and a round face,C. 教育经历： 1） (主修理科专业）, he graduated from a famous University in the north and after 4 years, he went abroad for further studies. 2） (毕业于中山大学), she went on further education and received a doctors degree. D生平： 1） science (他不但对理科感兴趣), but also he has a gift for music. 2）He set a n
11、ew world record of swimming, （这就为中国队赢得了一枚金牌）.,用分词, 使文章精炼,用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章,Majoring in Science,Graduating from Zhongshan University,Not only is he interested in,which won a gold medal for China Team,E评价： 1）Lei Feng , (为我们树立了一个好榜样)so all the people (高度评价)him and all respected him . 2）Moyan is one
12、of the greatest novelists in China and will (被一直记住) a Nobel laureate in literature. 3）Li Shizhen (做出巨大贡献）Medical literature.,运用强调句式及一些动词、形容词等短语、词组,set a good example to us,spoke highly of,be always remembered as,made great contributions to,我们的数学老师老郭1972年出生于贵州省贵阳市的一个富庶的家庭，父亲对他要求严格。 郭老师平易近人，笑起来像个孩子。 1
13、992年毕业于北京师范大学数学专业的郭老师将毕生精力都献给了他热爱的教育事业和学生，他的学生遍及世界各地。 广州市教育局多次授予老郭教育突出贡献奖 (the Outstanding Contribution to Education) 郭老师不仅是同事眼中最好的老师，他还一直深受学生们的尊敬和爱戴。,再看老郭,Mr.Guo, our maths teacher, was born in a rich family in Guiyang City Guizhou Province, 1972,whoes father was strict with him. He is accessible t
14、o his students, always wearing a childlike smile. After graduating from Beijing Normal University 1992, Lao Guo, majoring in math, has devoted his whole life to teaching as well as his students, his students being all over the world. He was awarded the Outstanding Contribution to Education by Guangz
15、hou Bureau of Education several times. Not only is Mr.Guo thought highly of by his colleagues, he has always been respected and loved by his students.,翻译高手,Step4；联句成篇,注意过渡词的使用,besides, whats more, however, as a result, consequently, therefore,Mr.Guo, our maths teacher, was born to a rich family in G
16、uiyang City Guizhou Province, 1972,whoes father was strict with him. He is accessible to his students, always wearing a childlike smile. Having graduated from Beijing Normal University 1992 Lao Guo, majoring in math, has devoted his whole life to teaching as well as his students, therefore, students
17、 taught by him being all over the world. As a result of his hard work, Mr.Guo was awarded the Outstanding Contribution to Education by Guangzhou Bureau of Education several times. Naturally, Not only is Mr.Guo thought highly of by his colleagues, he has always been respected and loved by his students.,Step5；检查,是否恰好五句话？,是否包括所有内容？,pants纠错原则： 1)pattern 2)agreement 3)number 4)tense 5)spelling,Peer assessment,Sum up: contents included useful expressions techniques for writing ways of correction criteria for grading,Thank you!,