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1、扬州市中考研讨会专题复习课,Writing,扬中树人 常松,House,Shopping mall,检查口语,Hometown,Changes,7B2 Welcome to Sunshine Town There are lots of things to do in Sunshine Town. We want to tell you about life in this great new town. Would you like to live in a modern town? live in flats? go shopping? eat Chinese food? enjoy Be
2、ijing Opera? ,分析结构,Introduction,Main body,Location,Housing,Shopping,Eating,Amusement,Sunshine Town has changed a lot. The government has turned the place into a park. We have a large shopping mall and a theatre. We have open space and pretty gardens too. However, it is difficult to see some of my ol
3、d friends. They have moved to Beijing or other places, and I feel a bit lonely from time to time. Sometimes they come back to see me, and that makes me very happy.,Changes,Problems,分析结构,Sunshine Town has changed a lot.,However, it is difficult to see some of my old friends.,主题句,8B1 Changes to Sunshi
4、ne Town Reading,Suggestions,Main body,Learning aims:,学会作文审题，模仿教材中相关话题构建 文章结构。,2. 能够根据要求列出关键词，学会连词成句。,3. 通过添加主题句、适当的连接成分等学会 组句成篇。,集句成段,组段成篇,审清题意,连词成句,抓住要点,抄写规范,如何写作,这几年，扬州市一直在积极创建全国文明城市(National Civilized City)，每个人都积极参与了进来。假如你叫王鑫，作为中学生的你注意到城市在创建过程中可喜的变化，也看到了一些需要改进的地方。在此，你向谢市长写一封信反映这些情况并提出你的一些建议。,要求：1
5、) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2) 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥； 3) 100词左右(书信的开头与结尾不计入总词数）； 4) 不得使用真实姓名和校名等。,审清题意,弄清写作主题 弄清写作体裁 弄清写作对象 弄清写作人称 弄清写作字数 弄清写作结构 弄清写作时态 弄清写作信息 弄清写作补充,弄清写作要求,这几年，扬州市一直在积极创建全国文明城市 (National Civilized City)，每个人都积极参与 了进来。假如你叫王鑫，作为中学生的你注 意到城市在创建过程中可喜的变化，也看到 了一些需要改进的地方。 在此，你向谢市长 写一封信反映这些情况并提出你的一些建议。,要求
6、： 1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2) 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥； 3) 100词左右(书信的开头与结尾不计入总词数）； 4) 不得使用真实姓名和校名等。,字数,未知信息,结构,体裁,对象,人称,主题,时态,以一般现在时、现在完成时和一般将来时为主,List some keywords about changes. Phrases: _ _ 2. List some keywords about problems. Phrases: _ _ 3. List some keywords about suggestions. Phrases: _ _,抓住要点，列关键词,env
7、ironment, clean and tidy, ,too much traffic, traffic accidents, ,8A1 Study skills Main points and keywords,Make sentences with the keywords about changes. Sentences: _ _ 2. Make sentences with the keywords about problems. Sentences: _ _ 3. Make sentences with the keywords about suggestions. Sentence
8、s: _ _,连词成句，变换句式,The environment has become cleaner and tidier than before.,8A1 Study skills Main points and keywords,这几年，扬州市一直在积极创建全国文明城市(National Civilized City)，每个人都积极参与了进来。假如你叫王鑫，作为中学生的你注意到城市在创建过程中可喜的变化，也看到了一些需要改进的地方。在此，你向谢市长写一封信反映这些情况并提出你的一些建议。,要求：1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2) 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥； 3) 10
9、0词左右(书信的开头与结尾不计入总词数）； 4) 不得使用真实姓名和校名等。,Changes clean and tidy, plant more trees(7B5), actively take actions to protect wildlife(8A5) a new airport, in service, in 2012, more tall buildings, a new library, borrow books for free, protect ancient buildings, give seats to people in need(7B5) help the ol
10、d / disabled cross the road(7B5) visit the home for the elderly(7B5), be ready / willing to help others(8A1), Problems too much traffic, too much noise, drop litter carelessly (8A5), not wait in line at the bus stop, smoke in public places some broken roads, need to be repaired the elderly, feel a b
11、it lonely (8B1), few homes for the elderly few youth centers (7B2), less open space for people to relax (8B1),抓住要点，列关键词,这几年，扬州市一直在积极创建全国文明城市(National Civilized City)，每个人都积极参与了进来。假如你叫王鑫，作为中学生的你注意到城市在创建过程中可喜的变化，也看到了一些需要改进的地方。在此，你向谢市长写一封信反映这些情况并提出你的一些建议。,要求：1) 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2) 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥； 3)
12、100词左右(书信的开头与结尾不计入总词数）； 4) 不得使用真实姓名和校名等。,Im amazed that great changes have taken place in our city in the past few years. The government is devoting itself to improving peoples lives. More trees have been planted these years. And its said that an airport will be in service in 2012. Next year, gettin
13、g into or out of the city will become much easier. Many citizens know that its important to keep our city clean and tidy. Whats more, they are always ready to help people in need. However, there are lots of things that we need to improve. The streets near schools are always crowded when we come to s
14、chool and some people dont wait in line when they get on the bus. Besides, there will be more and more old people who need caring for. I think we can try to do something to make them better. In my opinion, firstly, we should encourage students to ride to school instead of going to school by car. Sec
15、ondly, some volunteers are needed to keep order at the bus stop. Thirdly, more homes for the elderly need to be built in the next few years. Of course, it will be much better if we think more of others.,范文展示,The structure of the article Introduction Main body Conclusion,Summary,组段成篇， 加主题句,审清题意， 构建框架
16、,连词成句，变换句式,抓住要点， 列关键词,Summary,集句成段，添连接词,抄写规范， 避免错误,Homework,After class, self-edit your first draft according to the table of the self-editing assessment.,Thank You!,购物中心 我的学校附近有一个新的购物中心；它于去年建成； 购物中心内有很多服装店，这对女孩们来说是太 好了；但是，为男孩们服务的商店不多； 3. 在顶楼有很多餐厅，在那里你可以品尝来自不同 国家的不同风味的食物；这个购物中心真是个有趣 的去处。,检查口语,7A5 Go
17、ing shopping Main task,住房 我与父母一起住在繁华街道的一座公寓里；公寓 在城市的南部； 2. 在我们的公寓里有一个大的客厅；晚上，我们在 那里看电视； 3. 我喜欢烹饪，经常在厨房帮妈妈做饭； 4. 我的卧室有一个阳台，我喜欢坐在那儿听音乐。,检查口语,7B1 Dream homes Reading,我的家乡 我住在一个小城市的附近；我的房子外便是公共 汽车站；乘公交车到市中心约需10分钟； 2. 在市中心有许多建筑，包括一个大型购物中心、 一个青年中心和一个博物馆，还有一个公园； 3. 青年中心是我最喜欢的地方，周末我经常和朋友 们去那里。,检查口语,7B2 Welc
18、ome to Sunshine Town Main task,变迁 阳光镇变化很大；政府已经将这个地方变成了一个 公园；我们有了一个大卖场和一个剧院，也有了开 阔的空地和美丽的花园； 2. 然而，要看到一些老朋友就有些困难了；他们已经 搬到了北京或其他地方，我时而感到有点寂寞； 3. 有时，他们会回来看我，那使我很高兴。,检查口语,8B1 Past and present Reading,Introduction worry about exams Main body be laughed at Conclusion,类似结构,9A3 Teenage problems Main task,ha
19、ve a lot of homework,Ways to deal with stress Many teenagers suffer from stress. Though their problems can make them worry, there are some ways to help them deal with stress. Firstly, a healthy diet, enough sleep and exercise are very important. How can we be happy if we are not fit? For schoolwork,
20、 it is helpful for students to make a list of the things they need to do and plan when to do them. In this way, they can organize their time better. If they have problems in their study, they can ask a teacher for advice. Students should pay no attention to people who laugh at them. Instead, they sh
21、ould think about the things they are good. Finally, students should also made enough time for their hobbies. Playing sport, reading and watching films can help them relax.,9A3 Teenage problems Study skills,Introduction,Main body,(Suggestions),(Problems),Changes clean and tidy, plant more trees(7B5),
22、 actively take actions to protect wildlife(8A5) a new airport, in service, in 2012, more tall buildings, a new library, borrow books for free, protect ancient buildings, give seats to people in need(7B5) help the old / disabled cross the road(7B5) visit the home for the elderly(7B5), be ready / will
23、ing to help others(8A1), Problems too much traffic, too much noise, drop litter carelessly (8A5), not wait in line at the bus stop, smoke in public places some broken roads, need to be repaired the elderly, feel a bit lonely (8B1), few homes for the elderly few youth centers (7B2), less open space f
24、or people to relax (8B1),抓住要点，列关键词,变换句式,Some people drop litter carelessly. We can see everywhere on a busy street.,it,the litter,Some people drop litter carelessly and we can see it everywhere on a busy street.,Some people drop litter so carelessly that we can see it everywhere on a busy street.,并列
25、句,复合句 结果状语从句, but now,Some people drop litter so carelessly that we can see it everywhere on a busy street. There is too much traffic on the roads and traffic accidents often happen. There are few homes for the elderly. The number of the elderly is getting larger and larger.,集句成段，组段成篇,However, there
26、 are still many problems., as a result,Whats worse,also,段落的结构 段落的要求,主题句 + 扩展句 + 连接成分,切合主题 + 语意连贯 + 内容完整,环境：plant more trees(7B5), clean up the park(7B5) actively take actions to protect wildlife(8A5) educate citizens not to drop litter carelessly 交通：repair the broken roads control the number of priv
27、ate cars not to cross the road carelessly encourage people to ride instead of driving 市民: give seats to people in need(7B5) help the old / disabled cross the road(7B5) visit the home for the elderly(7B5) be ready / willing to help others(8A1), be volunteers keep quiet / not to smoke in the public places care for the disabled, improve the lives of the poor 文化：build more youth centers protect more ancient buildings make all the children go to school,具体建议,